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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-10 (B)
Nandani came home and directly went towards
Her room ...and lay down on the bed and crying

Nandani pov
God how am I going to live without manik...I can't live without him for two seconds and here
I have to live without him for two days ...No ...I can't do this ...I can't live without him ...aur manik manik ...mere bina kaise rahega ...God main kya karu ...kya

Manik reached home and ask the servants about nandani

Manik : Rony nandani mam aa gayi ?

Rony:ji saahab aa toh gayi ha ...vo apne kamre main hi ha

Manik : Thik ha

Manik comes to there and the scene was In front of him breaks his heart in pieces ...His jaan ...His shona...His life ...is crying ...the only thing he wants...he came towards her

Manik : Shona

Nandani looked at him her eyes is red due to
Constant crying ...she immediately hugged manik

Manik : Jaan...shhh...bas ...jaan

She is bitterly crying ...manik rubbed her back to make her calm ...to see his jaan in this condition
He also feel like cry but he have to be strong ...strong for her

Manik : Shona...relax main ...main hun ...naa ...tumhare saath ...please ...batao mujhe kya hua meri jaan ko

But she hugged him more tightly ...and kept sobbing. ...he hugged her back with equl favor and trying to calm her...after sometime her breath become normal and she broke the hug ...manik cupped her face and lovingly said

Manik : Shona please tell me what happened? Why are you crying jaan?

Nandani stammeringly said:m..a...ni...k ...I don't ...want ...to leave u...I...can't ...live ...without...u

She again hugged him ...manik rubbed her back to make her calm first ...after sometime manik broke the hug and said

Manik : Jaan look at me ...am not going anywhere ...I always be with you ...please just relax and tell me what happened?

He wipes her tears and hold her both hands

Nandani : voh ...maine presentation banayi thi ...

Manik : hmmm

Nandani : aaur...aur ...voh sabko bahot pasand bhi aayi ...par kunj chahta ha ki main hi isse represent karu ... vo ...voh chahta...ha main yeh ...presentation dun

Manik : toh jaan isme rone walli kya baat ha ...tumhe toh khush hona chahiye naa

Nandani : Manik yeh...yeh presentation Mumbai main nahi ...goa main ha ...aur voh...bhi do din ke liye ...I don't want to go ...I can't live without you ...I can't

She again hugged him and crying...manik hugged her back

Manik : Jaan listen to me ...tum sirf iss liye roh rahi thi

She confusingly nodded :hmmm

Manik : oh god jaan tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha ...please ab yeh rona band karo ...aur rahi baat mujhe jhod kar jaane ki ...toh uska solution bhi ha
Wait

Manik called cabir

Cabir : ha Manik bol

Manik : Cabir concert ke liye ha kar de

Cabir : par Manik nandani

Manik : arre don't worry nandani bhi hamare saath chal rahi ha

Cabir : okay toh main tickets book kara deta hun

Manik : hmmm

Manik cuts the call and saw nandani confusingly looked at him ...he smiled and kissed her forehead and lovingly said

Manik : Problem solve shona

She looked at him confusingly didn't understand anything

Manik : okay...okay don't give me these type of looks...I will tell you tumhe yaad ha aaj hamari mister singhania ke saath meeting thi

Nandani : hmm

He hugged her and said

Manik :toh unhone hame goa main concert karne ko kaha ...pehle toh hum mana kar rahe the ...par ab jab tumhe bhi jaana ha ...toh hamne ha kar di ...toh

Nandani smilingly said: matlab ki tum ...tum ...matlab ...main ...tumhare saath nahi tum mere saath goa jaa rahe ho haina

Manik : haa baba haa

She hugged him tightly and happily said:I love you...I love u...Love you sooO much

Manik : I love you too shona...now stop crying ...

Nandani : hmmm...Thank you sooO much Manik

Manik : No need jaan ...okay now come lets have dinner ...come

Manan feed each other lovingly and after that both came there room...manik's head on nandani's lap and nandani ruffle her fingers in his hairs ...he smiled and closed his eyes ...tear is flowing from his eyes

Nandani : Manik

Manik didn't said anything ...nandani again call him

Nandani : Manik kya hua?

Manik hugged her tummy tightly and said : Please nandani never cry ...I can't bear a single drop of tears in ur eyes ...to see you in that condition ...it feels like am a looser ...please jaan never cry ...ur tears breaks my heart in pieces jaan ...please

Nandani : am sorry manik...I ...I was scared...I can't live without you ...am sorry

Manik : Jaan no ...please don't say sorry ...I knew u can't live without me ...but please promise me ...u will never cry...please

Nandani : I promise

Both hugged each other both were crying ...both wants to feel each other ...manik broke the hug

Nandani : main bahot buri hu naa ...I always trouble u

Manik : No shona u r very good ...u never trouble me ...tum jaante ho ...when I was 10...mom dad ka divorce ho gaya ...aur phir I have to live with nyonika...u knew nandani jab main use uss jerk ke saath dekha ...I felt like to kill myself...but I can't do anything ...tumhe pata ha fab5 hi meri family ban gayi...par hamesha kuch... kuch...khali lagta tha ...tumhe pata ha sab ke parents apne bacho ko pyar karte the ...par mere parents ke paas kabhi mere liye time hi nahi tha ...hamara rishta sirf give and take ka tha ...I was so alone Nandani ...so alone

He is bitterly crying ...nandani wiped his tears:Manik

Manik : No nandani ...I ...I want to confess ...tumhe pata ha main hasta tha par...par voh smile kabhi real nahi hoti thi ...koi nahi dekh paya ...mere friends bhi nahi ...sabko lagta tha ki main thik hu...par main thik nahi tha ...aur phir tum mere life main aaye ...tumne mujhe pyar karna sikhaya...tumne mujhe voh family di jiske liye main hamesha tadapta rehta tha ...tum meri jindagi ho Nandani ...tum nahi ...toh Main bhi nahi

Nandani : Manik look at me ...main hamesha tumhare saath rahungi ...

Manik : HAMESHA

Nandani : HAMESHA

Manan hugged each other but nandani Knew manik is still not fine ...she cupped his face and kissed his forehead ...he smiled a bit and looked at her
She sang

Batein yeh kabhi na tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir ha ji raha

(She cupped his face and kissed his forehead)

Jaye tu kahin bhi , yeh sochna
Koi tere khatir ha, ji raha

(She kissed his eyes and wipes his tears and
Ask him through eyes not to cry...he smiled)

Tu jahan jaye , mehfuz ho
Tu jahan jaye, mehfuz ho
Dil mera mange , bas ye dua

(She hugged him and kissed his heart)

Batein ye kabhi na, tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir , ha ji raha
Jaye tu kahi bhi , yeh sochna
Koi tere khatir ha ji raha

(She takes him to the balcony and asks him cheer up)

Humdard hai, Humdum bhi hai
Tu sath hai toh zindagi

(She hold his hands and kissed them)

Tu jo kabhi dur rahe
Ye hamse ho jaye ajnabi

(She has tears in her eyes but manik wipes her tears and kissed her forehead ...she smiled)

Tujse mahobat karte hain jo
Tujhse mahobat karte ha jo
Kaise kare ham usko bayan

(Both hugged each other and try to remove the pain)

Batein yeh kabhi na ,tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir ha ji raha
Jaye tu kahi bhi, yeh sochna
Koi tere khatir ha ji raha

She ended the song and looked at him lovingly

Nandani : I love you

Manik : I love you too shona...Thank you for coming in my life ...Thank you sooO much
For being my family


Kitna aasan hota ha yeh kehna
Ki hum aapse pyar karte ha...par us pyar
Ko nibhana utna hi mushkil ...jo pyar
Ko nibhate ha vahi sache pyar ka matlab
Samajhte ha

Love is not about wealth...desires...looks
It's all about what you feel ...a feeling that comes
From ur heart...a feeling of to be there
With each other in every problem...u
Just wanted him to be safe
Always...And
MANAN IS HAMESHA


So how's it
I hope you guys like it
And one more thing there
Is a turning point came in
My story and after that u will
Get to knew how much strong
Is true love
So if u like it
Do comment on it
And silent readers
Agar meri story achi
Lage toh jarrur
Comment karna
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
let me read first

unres
read it.

awesome...

their relation is so pure...

loved manik's confession😭😭

the song was amazing...

continue soon...

nandu kitni choti si par kitni badi baat par royi...


LOVE
SANJANA
Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing ..

mesmerizing ...

thr lunch time was good ..
nandani n kunj bond is good ...
cabir timing is always superb ...

manik confession was so heart touching the pain of loneliness n crave for love was so clear u penned it so good ...

I must say u r a brilliant writer diya ..
stay blessed ..
cont soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm n update!!!!
Loved to see how caring manik is he came with lunch had lunch with
Her made sure that she had her lunch...uff how can someone be so adorable!!!
N nandini toh can't stay away from him for even a moment ...started to cry on the thought of staying away from him for two days!!
So glad that they re going to goa n looking forwards to this change which is gonna come up..
Edited by kishubedi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...such a cute romantic update...
He went all the way to her office saathblunch karne ke liye
He is going Goa with her and fab5 yayyy
Looking forward to goa...wooohooo
Manan are back !!
They are so cute together !
Thanks so much Diya !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hayee !! Update !! Plz next time pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved the update so much...
manan no matter what will always stay together...glad they didn't have to stay without each other for 2 days...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing superb update
Manan goa trip
m very excited for the trip



Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ir story definately reflects true luv
Excited for the goa track
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I luv it..

itsss awesome. ...
I really like it ...itsss soo nice to read...


keep updating like this. ..

update soon. ...
waiting
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ...

thanks for this beautiful update..
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Thankso...

Loadsss off love...

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