MaNan FF- Bleeding Heart- Thread2Pg146/ Chapter16 Page139 (03/04/16)

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

My heart goes out to Manik .</3
I feel so bad for him .
Though he was highly wrong in not trusting Nandini but she has Karan .
And he'll be all alone after the mess is solved .
I feel so bad for him . :(
Why Varsha ! I so hate her . -_-

I don't know how Manan would be the end game
But kudos to the way you write .
So amazingly written .
God bless

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

Thanks for the pm
Loved it
N it was awesome as usual
Really like nandus n Karan bond
Feel bad for manik but it's his fault only
I hope his life gets sorted out as well
N Varsha gets exposed as soon as possible

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alisha_ash

@alisha_ash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

I have lots to say about this story but right now I don't have tym so yaa I will write for sure pps give me some tym tab tak I will say ki u r the bestests I still can't define ir story n ur writing's in a word so ya just wanna tell u one most imp thing is ki I ALWAYS CRY IN THE END ... I FEEL SO BAD AFTER READING MANAN FACING SO MUCH OF TROUBLE. .. believe u always make me cry n see now also in my morning by 5:09 I m crying reading ur beautiful update..

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Hi,

I did like your story a lot and trust me you had done a very good work, really good writing and everything seemed spot on...

I had a couple of things to speak about this chapters 1st part, but i think i'll keep it to myself for now and wait for your next update... It has nothing to do with the dream you had written infact that was quite nicely drafted... I had questions about something else, but will wait till your next update...😊..

Take care.

Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago

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twilightangel

@twilightangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#665

Nice update

again dead end

update soon...

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vanivartika

@vanivartika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#666

so much pain yaar

cant c manik in this much pain

cant

so pain full

heart dying with this pain

pls kill him ... relive his pain plsss

pls ...u make me cry n cry only

his illusion ..o god

pls kill him

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alind713

@alind713

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Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Awesome updates
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please update it soon

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Awesome update
The trio trying to go step by step to find the culprit
Manik hallucinating...
Varsha having doubts that manik came to know abt her
Damm karan is soo caring
Even his dad... Loved karan's dad and Nandu's talk...
Another dead end...
I hope they find a clue soon
Thnkz 4 the pm

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munarabeya18

@munarabeya18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#669

i m really dishearted.It seems it is a love story between karan and nandini,the true love.There is no manik.Now I regret why i started reading this ff.In full ff i can only see karan and nandini's love.Tumna manik or nandini ka baby ko bhi mardala.Ab karan and nandini ki baby ko itna high light karahaho.pepole want manan romance and family not karan and nandini ka romance.You said that it is different concept.actually u r right because this is love story between karan and nandini not manan. 😡