MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai) - Page 53

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Posted: 9 years ago


Dear...thanks for pm.

Awesome awesome update. .

Very very interesting. .

Manik eg..her..

Now looking for the next what is the plan. .

Please update soon. .

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
jst luved it...
plz continue asap...
& thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow finally cabir nandini ko le aaya ja manik ne plan kiya nandu ka surprise
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CHAPTER 13

Nandini was moving inside the dark when she felt a touch on her shoulder, due to which she shouts.

But, next moment the face she sees bring peace to her. She instantly hugs the person . the person was none other than manik.

The hugs takes him aback for a moment. But, he hugs her back too. Suddenly, he feels something wet on his chest and when he looks down to nandini he saw her sniffing. He instantly freaked out.

He breaks the hug and cupping her face asks"nanny kya hua why r u crying...shh...stop crying..chup"

He tries his level best to control her but she was crying non-stop. Manik's tenxion was increasing with each passing second.

Finally, nandini stopped srying and sniffing said stammeringly"tum mujhse aaj puri raat ek baar bhi theek se baat nahi ki ... have I done something wrong manik toh I m really sorry...par aje se mujhse baat kaena mat band karna.."

She said all this in babyish tone and manik somehow controlled himself from not kissing her. He held her hand and said"nanny mai iss puri world me sirf ek insaan hai jisse naraz nahi ho sakta aur who hot um..abhi stop crying mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai"

Nandini gave a confused look but brfore she could ask something manik dragged her along with him. After a bit of distance, nandini looked in front and the view was mesmerizing.

She walked a little ahead on the seashore and she could surely tell that it was still not fully leveled, but it was far more beautiful then a perfect seashore she had ever seen in her entire life.

She was lost in ooking at the place while manik was lost in adoring her, he was capturing every single bit of reaction of her. He was looking at her as if she would vanish as soon as he removes his gaze.

Nandini felt a gush of wind on her face feeling manik's intense piercing gaze on her. It unknowingly passed a shiver down her spine. She looked back at manik who as looking at her intently.

As soon as there eyes met they got lost in each other's eyes. Manik was lost in her big, beautiful doey eyes, which were like open book to him and where he could see a whole of world over filled with love and only loe, while nandini was lost in those dark , chocolaty orbs which were ever so enchating, it always casted a spell on her.

They remained like this for few moment, nandini was the one to break the eye lock, she look away feeling shy with a sly smile on her face. Manik smiled on her innocene and moved closer to her. Nandini's heartbeat started accelerating like formula one car , his each step was making her heartbeat wilder and wilder.

Manik reached dangerously closed to her and held her hands in his, he said with a bit of guilt in his voice"nandini I wanted this moment to be really, really special but when u suddenly asked me then I had no chice and in so less time I was able to arrange this imperfect setting, please for.."

His sentence were left unfinished when he felt her fingers on is dry lips. She removed her finger seeing his perplexed expression and said"manik tumhe pata hai ki iss jagah ki sabse khass baat kya hai"

Manik said "kya??"

Nandini looked at him and then looked around the place and said"khassh baat hai iska imperfection...this imperfect setting is the most perfect setting in the world coz it tells ur desperation very well"

Manik looked at her loving he went closer to. Now, her back was touching his masculine body, he bent down to her lips and said"and so, today this imperfect man, wants to tell his perfect girl something that he has been dying to tell her since ages"

Nandini again feels a cold sensation in her spine, she turns her head towards him, due to which there lips were just inches apart, manik turns her around and holdind her from her waist h yanks her closer and say"janti ho nandini jab se maine tumhe dekha tab se mere dil me ghanti bajne start ho gayi...jo aaj tak baj rahi hai..janti ho inko mai PYAAR KI GHNTI bulata hu kyuki inhi ki wajah se mujhe iss beautiful feeling ka ehsaas hua"

Nandini looked in his eyes instantly and again get drowns in them hearing the word"pyaar" manik continues"pata hai jab se tumhe dekha tab se na bhook lagti hai na pyas bas har waqt tumhare khayalo mei khoya reh ta hu...jab tum abord me thi I used to talk to ur photos and pics and unhi se mai ek painter ban gaya"

Nandini look st him assumed and manik holds her hand and takes her toward another side of the seashore, as soon as nandini's eyes fell on the art piece in front of her she gets spellbound...she couldn't utter anything...there were hundereds of her portraits present over with different expression sometime smiling, sometime pouting and every god damn expression in the world.

Manik takes her near to a painting and says"yeh meri pehli painting hai jo maine tumhare liye banai thi...it's not that good but hope u like it, he removes the cloth from the painting and nandini get surprised on seeing a ditto potait of her on the paper.

Manik affectionly touhes the painting and say"tumhe pata hai jab amine ne mama -papa ko yeh bataya toh they started teasing me and gave all kind of names like majnu, romeo , and what not...but maine kabhi un par dhyaan nahi diya..."

Nandini looks at him and from her eyes ask kyu..to which manik leaves her hand and walks backward looking at her. Hde reaches in middle of the sore, and secretively presses few buttons on his phone, as soon as he presses a huge sower of flowers welcomes nandini.

Nandini feels the rose petals falling on her and swirls around. Suddenly, manik shouts nandini due to which she looks at him.

Manik stretches his hand up in the air and then ahouts in the highest voice possible"BECAUSE I...LOVE.." he look at her and pointing towards her he kneels down on his kness and then again shouts"YOU...NANDINI"

Nandini's joy knows no bound..she runs towards him and she too kneel down in front of him, she cupps his face with one hand and slids the other hand around his neck and then places her gentle lips on his hard ones..

FIRST KISS.. it was there first kiss ever...a kiss of sign of love..a kiss of togetherness..a kis of joy..a kiss of forever..a kiss of promise of being together till eternity. The kiss which started slow, with there lips moving in sync turned into a passionate one. Though nandini had started the kiss, manik took the lead.

She let her dominate. He bit her lower lip so it became blood red and nandini gasped and parted her lips taking which manik slid his tounge inside her mout. He was tasting every damn possible corner in her mouth. Tasting her haney sweet flavoured mouth. They were lost in passion.

After what seemed like eternity both broke the kiss and kept there heads together with closed eyes and with a satisfactory smile on there lips.

After sometime

Manan were lying on th grass. Actually, manik was lying on the sand while nandini's chest was kept on his chest. She was enjoying the melody of his heartbeat with closed eyes.

Suddenly, manik asked her"nandini" she just hmm..he continued"maine toh apne dil ki baat bold i but u havn;t said still it ur tun now.."

Nandini blushed on this and said in a shy tone"manik ek larki ke liye yeh lafj kehna bahut muskil hota hai"

Manik smirked on this and decided to tease her..he said dramatically"accha ek larki ke liye yeh lafz kehna assan nahi hota par kiisss karna assan hota hai,haan?"

Nandini turned scarlett on the mention on kiss and she turned and hid her face in his chest to with manik laughed. Manik said after sometime,"accha baba take ur time...mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai..mere liye toh bas tumhe apne pas rakhna hi sab se bari khushi hai..i don't want or wish anything more from god now.

Nandini looked at him lovingly.she said"mai toh yeh soch kar hairan hu manik ki akhir maine pichle janam mei aisa kya kaam kiya tha jo mujhe tum mile.."
manik smiled at this and said" tumne nahi I m lucky to have u nandini in my life,,,my angel..my nanny"

Nandini hugs him softly to which he reprociates

After sometime, manik tells her that they had to leave since, he had promised uncle to drop her safely.

The journey was never before. Manik in the way told her about the involvement to everyone in the plan and about cabir's reqst and his dissapprearence. They shared beautiful talks and silence.

Finaly, nandini's come came. Manik stopped the car. Nandini smiled at him and said"bye"

But, manik held her hand and said"arre yeh kaisa rukha sukha bye hai..i want my proper bye"

Saying he forwards his face with close eyes and nandini remember he day when he had kissed her cheek as a proper bye. She gtoo quickly kii his cheek . mani opens his eye and says"arre yeh toh frnd swala bye tha mujhe girlfriend-boyfriend wala bye cahiye. He again forwards his face.

Nandini blushes on hearing hima and somehow controlling her blush pecks his leave and leaves saying"abhi ke liye yahhi kafi hai..now nye"

Manik sighs off and drive home.

Nandini reaches her room quotely not wanting to diturb her sleeping parents.

Manik too come in his room quietly to let his parents sleep peacefully.

They both fell on there bed with a satisfactory and smile and thinking about each other sleeps off to welcome a fresh moring of there lives.

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READ TILL END PLZZ

Looo ho gaya manik ka confession

Nandu confession on the way

Anyway, this turned out quite long and as promised mananholacious.

Now I would post nxt part when I get 10 pages of comment

Or no story

So tatabyr

A happy new year 2016

Stay blessed

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Chapter 14 coming soon

Edited by diyamanan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
NAUTANKI
A/W
THANKS FOR COMMENT
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update nd thanks for the pm
Finally confession happened but only maniks but no worries that was beautiful
Imperfections make it beautiful that was super
Waiting fr nandus confession
Continue sooonnn
Wish u a very happy nd prosperous new year 2016
Edited by Danny92 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update full of manan ..liked our manan they r best
ty for pm..loved the confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. Loved the confession part alot. Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. Tack care. Keep smiling 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Take care
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww it was the cutest confession. ..
I really liked the portrait idea...
So waiting for nandus confession. ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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