MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai) - Page 38

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter dear..
Fabulous
Specially loved the boy friend n girl friend part..
Arya karan n nandu were too good
Manik n nandu rocked n evryone shocked
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update nd thanks fr the pm
Manik nd nandini were super the bf gf thng that was sooo nice
Sooo new entries r her cousins they hav a great bondng with nandu I thnk
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its awesome ...amazing ... fabulous
Are both the characters that u introduced positive???

And ya really laughing like hell ... seriously very good ... MaNan ...girlfriend ... Boyfriend ...hahahha😆

Love it

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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update..
2 new entries.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha..gf n bf..
awesome update!!
I liked the update!!

Manan were too much..😆cdn stop laughng!!
Seriously..it was just awesome!!
Keep updating!!
God bless uh!
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Posted: 9 years ago
read all chapters in one go... very nice story.
Manan madly in love with each other but I like the way Manik wants to take it slow. He wants to make Nandini comfortable with him and so became friends with her first.Nice!!!

lets see how the new entries shape up manan story

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Posted: 9 years ago
read all chapters together
they're amazing

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Originally posted by: radhikar3

Cute update..

2 new entries.. 😆
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Originally posted by: Raksha.Sareen

Hahaha..gf n bf..

awesome update!!
I liked the update!!

Manan were too much..😆cdn stop laughng!!
Seriously..it was just awesome!!
Keep updating!!
God bless uh!

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 11 A


Nandini was getting ready for the dinner. She was wearing a red anarkali and was having a 32 volt flashing smile on her face, remembering today's events.

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After breaking the hug, all went to canteen and were chilling out discussing on random topics.

When suddenly, nandini noticed something which made her an angry tigress and she pounced upon her brothers and started beating them black and blue.

All get confused seeing this. Manik gets up from his place and somehow controls his angry tigress who keeps struggling to move out from his tight grip to continue her beating task.

Nandini (struggling to free from his tight grip)- manik leave me ..I will kill these two.

Manik- nanny calm down pehle batao toh hua kya.

Nandini looks at him and then spits fire from her eyes towards her brothers. Then, it strikes her brothers that they forgot to tell the most important thin g for which they had came.

But, it was too late before they could do or say something nandini caught their right hands and showed to all.

First, everyone was confused, but then there confusion changes into shock and shock changes into angriness.

Everyone together says" freko's tum domo ki ENGAGEMENT ho gayi aur hame bataya bhi nahi"

Aryaman opened his mouth to tell something but before that a huge wave of punches, slaps and what noit lands on him. Obiously, karan and his engagement gift from his dear frnds and sister.

Karan in between the beating session says"sorry guys..sorry..ouch..yaar..manik dheera maar..lagti hai..uff...sorry na ham batane wale the...oww...lag rahi hai yaar"

All stop the punching sssion and manbik says"batane wale the ..kab"he give a hard punch in there stomacjh and continues"jab tumhari shaddi ke pacch sal ho jate aur tum apne baccho ki fauj le ke ate tab.."

Aryaman says rubbing his hand""sorry na who mind se slip ho gaya tha"

Somehow, they all pacify except there cute sister, jo muh fulae bathi thi.

She turns her back towards all and says"u both r very bad. Matlab mai sirf abroad kya gayi ab dono ne toh engagement kar li aur sayad agar mujhe apki ring nahi dikhti toh ab dono toh bhul bhi gaye hote ki hamara behan ko bhi yeh janne ka haq hai...I hate u both" she crosses her arms around her body and makes a cute pout.

Aryaman and karan look towards each other and share a"we-r-so-gone-dude"look and look toward other with a "kuch-toh-karo"look but, they get a"sorry-yaar-even-we-r-helpless"look.

Both sigh and give a"pata-hai-u-also-can't do-anything-since-angry-nandini-is-easy-but-upset-nandu-is-really-hard"wala look and get"really"look.

Suddenly, something clicks manik,s head as he can't see his princess sad.so, he messages to everyone,including arya and karan.

Manik-guys,get ready we have a performance RIGHT NOW to impresss someone.

All look at him and he winks at them on which he gets a thumbs-up and wink back.

Cabir to navya(in her ear)-yaar yeh manik koi chance nahi chorta mnandini ko impress aur uspe line marne ke liya na

Navya- arre use choro tum khud ko dekho who jo karta hai who kata hai par tum..tum toh har larki ko line marte ho

Cabir leans closer and says"har kisi ko nahi sirf mere dil pe raaz karne wali meri madhubala ko"

Navya blushes and cabir leans to kiss her par kuch hota use pehle"buzzz"

It iriks cabir to the core he says"kiski samat ayi hai jo who mere time me inter fare kar raha hai"navya giggles.

Cabir looks in his phone and sees a bucket of msgs from his frnds.

Dhruv-saale..canteen me hai..kuch toh saram kar

Mukti-haww...jo dusro ko no romance calisa padhwata hai who khud hi...very bad..very bad..

Abhi-get a room man

Alya-awe..navya u look so cute while blushing

Manik- camine plan par concentrate kar

He looks at his frnds with a "do-i-give-a-damn-to-this"look, while gets him "u-need-to"look and suddenly a blush creeps on cavya's faces, which like once in a blue the ever so teaser was blushing, which obio manik was enjoying to hell.

He msgs him"omg cabir tu madhubala se jada beeter lagta hai blush karte hua;)"

Par never underestimate our dear cabira he msgs back"kam se kam me apni wali ke sath kar rahu jo mere pass hai teri wali toh..." And waves his hand I a dur hai wale expression, which gets him"shut-up"look.

Again,gewtting serious all get on there work to manofy nandini and when she was busy in her so-called"muh-fulana session "all quietly sneak out as she was too oblivious of all that happened.

Now, not getting any reaction from others she looks back only to fdind not only the table but the canteen empty too.

This increases her anger and she looks up and says"aiyo ayappa kisi ko toh mere fikr hi nahi hai!!huh,!!mujhe akele chor ke chale haye..ab, mai kya kar rahi hu nandu tu bhi chal"

And she start moving towards the door but, a sound stops her...

TO BE CONTINUED

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