MaNan FF - Tere Ishq Mein

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone, I'm here with my first FF on MaNan :)
Hopefully , you'll like it.
It's available on Wattpad also , with the same Title

Index will be hyperlinked, as updated :)
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Now let me introduce you all to the characters, their names are same as shown in the Show... But lil difference in roles...
- Nyonika's not negative.
- Cabir isn't gay
- Amms has a little negative role
- No Harshad... But yes Sohaaa is there as no fun without Soha😆


INTRODUCTION:

Manik Malhotra - The Hot dude of S.P.A.C.E. , Son of Nyonika Malhotra. He loves his mom the most, esp after his Dad's death. He loves his friends (Fab5) . Music is his life... Singing is his Passion...Adores his girlfriend Nandini moorthy, his Jaan, his Baby... Co-owner of Sayyara
Nyonika Malhotra- Trustee of S.P.A.C.E & Owner of Sayyara , her son is her life. Malik's happiness is most valuable to her. She always feels guilty for the past, when she never gave attention to Manik... But Manik's presence fades all the guilt she has...
Nandini Murthy - An orphan who lives with her Chacha Chachi and her grandma (Amms) her brother rishab and cousin Abhi ... She's a medical intern. She loves Music as it always keeps her connected to her Amma Appa... Navya & Fab 5 are her best friends...Manik, her boyfriend, her soulmate, her everything...
Abhimanyu - Nandini's cousin brother, he's cured from Cancer. He loves Nandini as a sister. Mukti's his girl He's a Caring person. He's a medical intern too by profession. Science student in S.P.A.C.E's science department.
Navya Naveli - Bubbly funny person. Nandini and Mukti are her besties. A classical singer by profession. Loves Cabir (CavYa aren't aware of their feelings for eachother)
Fab 5(Band) -
Manik's second family ❤️
Members:
Cabir - A fun loving friendly guy... Who has lost his mom and his dad got married again after divorcing his mom.. He likes Navya a lot. Fab5&Music is his love. He's an RJ by profession
Mukti - The strong&friendly from Fab5... Defines a strong independent girl perfectly. She's like a sister to Manik ,cuz both of them has no siblings. Loves Abhimanyu. She helps her dad in his business.
Dhruv - Cutest and sweetest member of Fab5. Manik's best Buddy. Taken by Aaliya Always caring. He's cured from those attacks. A photographer by profession.
Aaliya - Hottie of Fab5 & S.P.A.C.E. Loves her friends (Fab5&NavNi) , considers Cabir&Abhi as her bros. Once she had crush on Manik but later realized that Dhruv's her Love She's a fashion designer.
To Fab 5 Music is the heal to their past. A bitter past but their belief in Better future has made it possible for them to be a Band or more like a Family
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Will update the first chapter soon. Thanks
-Love x
Fizzah❤️



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Index:

  1. Introduction
  2. Prologue
  3. Life... is Beautiful❤️
  4. "...Because you're my Life❤️"
  5. The Talent Hunt
  6. Roothey hue ko manana❤️
  7. Celebrations - Part 1 ❤️
  8. Celebrations - Part 2A
  9. Celebrations - Part 2B
  10. My Drunk Princess

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys so I decided to release a short piece from the writing.. It's from the story but not the starting of the story...
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Prologue
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*Manik's POV
" I stood there shattered, seeing my star right in front of my eyes but...in a such condition... All the memories were flashing through my mind... Looking at my girl in that condition broke my heart into pieces...Ayiappa Can I have her back? Can I just go back to the past? 1hour ago... When I had her in my arms.. I wish so? "
POV ends..
Doctor to nurse: Nurse Dr.Nandini ko yahn kon laya hai?
Nurse: woh *Pointing toward Manik*
Dr: Mr. Manik Malhotra..She's in a critical condition right now.. We need to operate her ASAP.
M: Sure dr please save my Nandini... Please do your best...
Dr: Inke koi relatives hai? We need to get this form signed?
M: Nandini ka "Koi Relative Nahi" ... I'm there for her.. Lemme sign it.
Nyonika comes running...
Nyo: Manik beta what happened? Kia hua Nandini ko?
M *HugsNyoTightly* : Maa.. My Nandini...my jaan... Unke waja se suffer kar rahi hai..
Nyo: Dr ap apni best team ko contact kare n get Nandini cured soon? Hope you got it? *Soon*
Dr: Sure Mrs.Malhotra


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Thanks for taking out time to read it.. Hopefully you guys will like it.. Please give your reviews (Votes & Comments) Will update soon.. Love x
Edited by shiningstar-sam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing..
But plz don't make their story adhoori..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice prolonge
continue soon
hope nandu is fine
keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Life... is Beautiful❤️

Hey guys so finally I'll start off the main story...how it began...how did Nandini landed in hospital... To know more Stay Connected .
Love xx

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One fine morning ...
*Nyonika...she might look like a person who doesn't believe in God... But she does...*
Morning time...it's time for Nyo to pray.. To pray to her God..everyday, for giving her a son who's blessing in disguise. For blessing her with a beautiful life... At the same time talking to Mr.Malhotra's photo which has been framed in their Hall. Telling him how much he's being missed...talking to his photo frame like as if She's talking to her husband sitting beside her in person ... That's a main part of her Early Morning Routine.
*DoorBell ring*
Nyo to servant : Wait me kholti hun I know who it is...
*Nyo's POV*
Yes, Now that's what I was waiting for. Jo aaj tak miss nae hua so aaj kse... But haha Aese kese ho sakta hai. My darling is here... I'm sure she must've got late due to traffic
*POV Ends*
Nyo opens the door
Someone's at the door with a White Ross bouquet covering her face
Nyo: Umm soo aaj late ho gayi toh trying to butter me Haan?
A beautiful face behind the bouquet appeared... With a Cute naughty smile on her face... Nandini held her ears and said sorry through gestures.
Nyo: Haha it's absolutely fine beta. Now go your responsibility is waiting for you in the room.
Nan: Oooh yes I'm already late. And Ye apke liye
*Hands over the bouquet to Nyo*
Nandini runs upstairs... To see her Sunshine... Yes her Sunshine... A person without whom her day never starts...
Nandini goes inside the room.

*Nandini's POV*

Thanks god, he's still asleep. Warna mujhe laga aaj to S.P.A.C.E. jane se pehle yahan meri class lage gi. Ohh look at him❤️ Ayiiappa why's he soo cute and adorable? Kaise uthaun me ise...? Nandini no control warna Manik ko handle krna mushkil ho jae ga
*POV Ends*
In the bed, her sunshine is sleeping like a baby.
*Nandini opens up the curtains.*
Nandini: Good Morning My Monstu. Wake up. It's 9 Already we're getting late. Come on. See I'm waiting for you since long.
*plants a kiss on his cheeks*
Manik pulls her on the bed, by grabbing her hand.
Nan: Manik tum jage hue ho? Naughty boy *playfully hits his chest*
Manik: Acha me naughty? Aur madam aap? One hour late? One Hour! Pata bhi hai one hour se soney ki acting krna kitna mushkil hai? Haan?
Nandini stares at Manik,But he still hasn't realized what he just said.
Nan: haha Achaaa? So Mr. Malhotra... Aap subha subha soney ki "Acting" kr rahe they?
M: *Ohhh crap! Ye kia Bol dia maine?* Umm Nandu jaan... Wo kia hai na I was tired since last night islye kuch bhi bola jaa raha Hun. N now since my baby is here toh I'm totally fresh now. *Winks At Nandini*
Nandini takes a pillow and start hitting Manik.
N: Manik tum na... Bht shararti ho gaye ho..aunty needs to control you know
Manik sits straight with bed's headboard... Making Nandini sit in his lap
M: Acha? Tum ho na mujhe control krne ke liye... Aur waise bhi tumhe dekh ke khud he mind me Ideas aate hai...Sooo...Blame yourself for it *Winks*
N: Manik choro mujhe maa ajae gi n now it's late...have you seen the time?
M: Tumse nazar hatey tab time dekhun na... Aur waise bhi meri mom h Wo unko pata h ke waise b you'll be her future daughter in law na
Nandini *holds the watch in front of Manik* : Seee it's 9:30.. Half hour hai bs... Manik quickly leave me now...
M: Oh really do you think so? And Madam late tum ayi so that's your mistake not mine... So baby you should make up for your mistake...
N *POV* : Hahah ye kia kam punishment hai monster ko subha subha ...AyiiAppa how? Like how does he manage that? Subha subha romance ka bhoot sawar h *POV Ends*
Okay Manik tell me now Kia karun... Punishment btao meri...
M: okay I need my morning dose... *In A naughty tone*
N: wwwhaaat... Morning dose?
Manik points towards his lips *Pouts*
N: Umm Manik...?
M: Haan Baby? *GetsCloserToNandini*
N: Maaa aap yahan? *Shocked*
M: Haan maa wo hum aa hi rahe they
*Manik looks back* No one's there
Nandini gets off from the bed ...
N: it's so easy to fool you.. Hain na Bay-Bee? *Winks*
Runs sway
M: Nan..Nandini...Nandu...? *CallsHerName* Chali gayi...
*Manik's POV*
Wow... Like W-O-W...? Nandini mujhe fool bna ke bhaag gayi... Mujhe? Bhalai ka toh koi zamana nae raha *In a dramatic tone*
Huh but Miss Murthy you'll have to pay for it...
*POV Ends
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Ok guys I think that's it for today. Sorry if I disappointed you all. Please cmnt what you think about it. And Suggestions are most welcome. Vote & Share. Love xx

Edited by shiningstar-sam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc update dr..i loved it. update next part soon..waiting;-)
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The Talent Hunt

*Recap: MaNan & Cabir leaves for the Auditorium.*
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Principle & Nyonika were waiting in the Audi , for all contestants to gather, along with Mr.Khurrana and His daughter Soha.
Nyo: There they are..
P: Yes Manik & Cabir go join the rest of Fab5 members and Nandini go join Navya , you both are performing first.
N: Okay sir
M *Through Gestures* All the best love.
Nandini smiles.
Performance starts
Haaan aaa ooo...
*Nandini sings Hasi ban gaye , Navya plays the sitar & gives her background singing support..*
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Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
(Nandini smiles remembering all the lovely moments she has spent with Manik)
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan (looks at Manik)
Meri zameen ban gaye

O...
aa...
*Performance ends*
Everyone claps for NavNi and gives them Standing Ovation
Mr.K to Nyo: This girl...she has some magic in her voice... It seems like she was born to sing. I'm really proud to see this
Nyo: Thankyou Mr.Khurrana & So is Space proud of Nandini.
Manik stood there clapping for his girl and having tears in his eyes, seeing Nandini sing after going through too much hard times in her life.
Manik had a *Proud Smile* on his face.
Fab5 *Gestures* to NavNi: Awesomeee
NavNi hugs.
Nandini goes and hugs Manik tightly.
Nan: Manik is se phle tum kuch bolo... I wanna thank you for bringing back music to my life...
M: Thankyou for coming to my life and Thanks for the song it was... I don't know how to describe how I felt after listening to that...
Mukti: Arhmmm waise Bhai (Manik) Ab next performance humara hai... And Nandini you totally Nailed it!
Nan *Hugs Mukti* Thanks and All the best you guys will rock it anyway!

*Announcement *
And now we would like to call S.P.A.C.E. Ki Shaan Fab5 to come here and Perform. So give a huge round of applause for *FaaabFiveee*
*Ends*
* Performance starts *
Manik - lead singer/ guitarist
Mukti is with her electric guitar
Aliya's on the keyboard & Dhruv's with his acoustic guitar..
While Cabir gives them low drumming background along with singing
They perform on *Meherbaani*

Hai saaz tu, tera tarz main
Tu hai dava aur marz main
Dildaar tu.. khudgarz main
Hai geet tu, tere lafz main
Tu hai duaa aur farz main (Manik)
Aazad tu aur karz main (Cabir)
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Hai shaam tu, taareef main
Tu chain hai, taqleef main
Tujhse mila to paa liya
Har cheez main... (Manik)
Hai khwab tu taabeer main
Maana tujhe taqdeer mein
Tera hua is bheed main, is bheed main (Manik & Cabir)
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Hai teri meherbani
Ke andheron se hum muqar gaye
Hai teri meherbani
Ke bin jaane hi hum sanwar gaye
(x2) (Manik)

Hai tu hi toh hai wafa
Tu baarish meri, savera mera
Main tera hum raasta
Hai kasti teri kinara mera (x2) (Manik Cabir & Dhruv)

Hai Teri Meherbani
Ke andheron se hum muqar gaye
Hai teri meherbaani
Ke bin jaane hi hum sawar gaye (Manik)
* Performance ends*
Soha: Wowww that was superb *Nandini gives a Jealous look & Cabir notices this*
Mr.K: As expected Classy and Fabulous. I'm already telling you these two groups will make S.P.A.C.E. Proud. I'm selecting these two groups from now only...
Nyo: Thankyou soo much Mr. Khurrana I'm glad you liked it.
Fab4 & Manik are soo happy hearing these compliments but Manik's ears are in search for another voice... He wanted to see Nandini's reaction but since it was Fab5 performance so the fans have crowded there...Compliments and Good wishes were heard from fans.
Fab5 : Thankyou... Thankyou guys.
Navya comes and hugs Cabir in joy...*Cabir Blushes & This is noticed by Fab4*
N: Eee tum logon ne toh kamal...actually Dhammalll kar dia.
DhruLya: Awww thanks Navyaa...
Manik *Still looking for Nandini * : Thanks Navya
Cabir: Thanks Naviii... Tum dono ne bhi kamal kia...
On hearing the word "Dono" Manik's attention is now towards Fab4&Navya
C: Acha waise Naviii...humari doosri superstar kidhr hai?
N: Nandini? Pata Nahi abhi to yahin thi humare sath he... Pata nae ... Crowded bht hai yahan so maybe kahin bech me she's stuck?
Manik gets upset after hearing this

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Hope you all are enjoying this story...if not then Please don't hesitate and put up your ideas, share them with me. I'm little confused with Abhi's entry... I'm sure u guys want his entry soon ...Yes or No? Please do tell me. Thankyou. Vote&Comment
Love xx
Edited by shiningstar-sam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the updates!!
Great work :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey just came across this FF
Its awesome

The prologue has actually scared me and M curious to know what happened
But coming to ur updates, LOL... Manik was acting to sleep for an hour
And then she makes a fool out of him

Then their performance was good as well
MeHerbaani... My favourite song
And Nandu jealous of Soha...

Cont Soon and PM me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Hey just came across this FF

Its awesome

The prologue has actually scared me and M curious to know what happened
But coming to ur updates, LOL... Manik was acting to sleep for an hour
And then she makes a fool out of him

Then their performance was good as well
MeHerbaani... My favourite song
And Nandu jealous of Soha...

Cont Soon and PM me if possible

Thankyouuu sweetie, will surely PM you. :)
Much more to come ;) Stay Connected <3

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