2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 48

Breath taking update.

I got scared on aliya arrival.

But i hope she dnt mess with their lives specially when love is blooming in between them.

Finally a kiss,😛

A soulful kiss. They shared it with so passion. Wow
Like how they both are so silent which is not their character "Tom & Jerry"

SO now romance wale updates, eagerly waiting for them.

awesome dear...the way she was teaching him values of life ,chase dreams ,sharing each others dream ,to be happy in life under any circumstances ...👏👏👏 she is his saviour in meeting ...alya don't come in btw manan now

Superb mindblowing update
Manan kiss so passionate
N blissful

Update soon

It was fabulous... I too wanted manan's first kiss to b special...I think it can't b more special than this...can see some changes in manik's behavior... As he was silent when talking about alya...their kiss was really beautiful... And nandu s always manik's lucky charm...no one can change this...very excited to read the next part...very nice and lovely update...continue soon...

Awesome

This was more than up to mark...
Ut was perfect...
Not at all boring...
So finally aliya ko akal aa hi gye..
I love the way nandini make make realise her mistake and teach him the way to correct...
Their kiss was the best kiss i have ever read...
Indeed bliss it was...
Their pov's are beautiful..
My fab line where manik said ki he accept her as his WIFE..
U know after reading these update of their past..i m little confuse connecting their past and present..as their past that mean present updates r beautiful so all of sudden aisa kya ho gya ki they want divorce and manik is also not ready to accept their baby in beginning...
U r making too much suspense..
Thanx for an early update..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini

awww😛 DEAr really loved d update to d core😊 it was indeed beautiful yet emotional😭 really loved their naughty HIT MISS in bathroom😆😛 bt very dissapointed with aliya's return really liked d way nandu saved manik's dad dream n teach another lesson of life to him😊 it was emotional lke hell when nandu was narrating d story of her childhood n he was listening😛 really loved d way dy were conversing n giving answers of each n every que clearly removing their miss understandings😃 followed by a SOUL SEARING KISS😳 it was really double cherry on d cake loved it to d core☺️ really loved manik's POV plzz update itx nxt chp soon will b w8ting for d nxt one😊

AWESOME UPDATE
LIKE THE BEST TILL NOW
CONTINUE SOON

You are a one very strong writer.