MaNan SS: The way you heal me

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi all, i'm Akshara . this is my first MaNan SS .
do read and leave ur feedbacks so that i can improve . hope its not that bad 😕🤔
MaNan SS : The way you
heal me
(based on the friendship day epi of kyy. after the fight )
manik was very upset and hurt. he never felt so bad , but today.. he was broken . his wounds were so deep . he made his way towards the terrace . he stood in a corner with his gaze fixed on a far place lost in thoughts , serching for peace .
his phone began to ring. flashing nandini's name and their pic . he didn't bothered to pic it, he ignored . but again and again.. nw it was becoming irresistable. he knew his girl well. she never stops until she gets what she wants . atlast he answered the call. without letting him utter a spell she said : kyya huaa? tum teek ho na? wer r u manik ?
now he had totally lost his control, he shouted in rage : " i hav lost it all.. everything's gone. !! " and cut the call
she felt the pain in his voice. she knew no matter what he says what he now wants was someone to heal his broken soul. to give him strength. and no one could do it better than her. she rushed to him.
she saw him standing in a corner of terrace . she ran and hugged him from back. as soon as he felt her touch, he turned to face her.
manik : nandini, please leave me alone. just go away ..
nandini: even you know how badly you need me by your side ryt now. then why are you doing this to urself? am not leaving u alone. never !
manik : plz ryt now am out of my mind and i hav no control on myself. aur tumhe patha hai aise me i cnt afford on hurting you at any cost. so plz..
nandini: oh really? how could u expect me to go away ? hav you ever left me alone on my darkest times? you were there like my shadow . and jab khud ki baath aayi toh u r asking me to go !!
toh sunlo, it's a NOOO ! i am not going.
rahi baath mujhe hurt karne ki toh , u won't bt still dnt u forget my punch ( she gives a naughty smirk ) tum toh kyaa tumhare monster ko bhi moon me land karwa degi meri punch (she says proudly )
(flashback: her first punch)
unknowingly manik smiles and then hugs her.
(bg music : jaise mera tu )
now they are sitting with hands entwined and her head resting on his shoulders.
manik: aren't u mad at me for still keeping secrets with u and even now not sharing the reason ?
(nandu tapped her head in a childish manner and her lips formed a "o" )
nandu: so am supposed to be in my mini monster mode ryt nw. how stupid of me ! ok so yes am angry .. (she made a cute angry pout tilting her face a bit crossing her hands on chest and her cheeks a lil more flushed , her hair flying in accordance with the air )
she looked so cute that manik was enchanted by her innocence. he also childishly hold his ears and asked SORRY !!
in a flick of moment she broke out into a giggle. she side hugged him and kissed on his cheeks saying : arey mere monster,, me kyu ghussa hogi tumse? infact am happy, ki tumne itna socha toh sahi and moreover iss baar tumne na koi thod phod kiya aur nahi ghusse me apne aapko hurt kiya ..
manik : still.. tumhe nhi jaan na the reason . y didn't u asked even once?
nandini: coz I LOVE YOU !!
(bg music : shaayad yahi hai pyaar )
manik, i trust u more than myself. aur mujhe patha hai jab tym aayega tum khud aake saare baath mujhe bataoge . till then i'll wait. ok and she blinks her eyes in confirmation .
meanwhile manik gazes her intensely amused by the depth of her love and trust on him .
then nandu gifts him with a band in which "FAB5 and MANAN " are engraved with a infinite sign.
manik: yh MaNan and sign that's all i got it.. par yh fab5 isme.. tumne gift kiya .. i mean..
nandu :haan isliye kyuki if i am ur heartbeats i knw they are ur breath . so hw could i snatch ur breaths from you.. isliye dosti aur pyaar FOREVER !!
he feels so lucky to have her in his life. he is surprised by the way she manages to heal his broken soul his damaged feelings !
(bg music : hasi )
he swirls her in the air and lands on a bonecrush hug . as foreheads met ,
manik : you know what , i always wanted to tell you,
YOU ARE THE BEST THING EVER HAPPENED TO ME . I LOVE YOU NANDINI ..HAMESHA !!
nadini : HAMESHA ..!!

so this is it guyz. i have kept it short and simple. now will be waiting for ur reviews. and do tell if i should continue writing . thank you for reading !😊

story 2 : THE PERFECT IMPERFECTIONS on PAGE 3 .

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its a great start...

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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

its a great start...

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lovely start

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