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Sukanyadhar12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the pm. May gods bless you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear...
Update was superb.. fab..
when manik handle media aur reports ko nandini ke bare m batata hai... i like that part very much...
they both knew how to console each other...
Hasi is my fav song...finally nandini sing for manik ...too good...
wow goa trip... ice cream scene and manan romancec was amazing...
continue soon... um waiting...
thanks for pm..
well done dear... keep it up...
keep smiling...
lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update
Love when manik support nandu
and handle her so nicely
Like she was 5 yer old
Love both the update very much
Please give some manan romance
Update soon
take care Dear😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Awesome Update
Love when manik support nandu
and handle her so nicely
Like she was 5 yer old
Love both the update very much
Please give some manan romance
Update soon
take care Dear😊




Thanx.. dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsm updates
u r really amzing
and fast writer
loved the chs
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the pm. May gods bless you. 😊


Thanx...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii mehak
When are you going to update
Already missing you and update too
Do fast na
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hiii mehak
When are you going to update
Already missing you and update too
Do fast na
Take care stay blessed


hey dear i will update in 1 hour
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tas456

Awesome dear

Very impatient for their goa trip and lots and lots of romance😉
Tqvm for the pm dear
Take care and always keep smiling


Thamx. Dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago


Tum Hi Ho

Part : 52

Nandini : i m so tired (sitting on couch)

Manik comes to her back n start doing massage n nandini hold his hand

Nandini : come here sit with me tum apni health ki bilkul care nhi krte aur khte ho ki main care nhi krti
Tum bhi thak gye hoge na

Manik : i m not feeling tired
I m okay (again start doing massage..)

Nandini look at him n smiles n close her eyes n enjoying manik massage

Bg song

Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Next mrng
Manik gets up n nandini is sleeping in her arms n he feels that nandini is warm
Manik thinks oh my god nandini ko toh bhut fever ho rha hai
He get up n covers nandini with blanket n off the ac n calls docs
After sometime nandini get up n shocked to see 4 doc. Standing in front of her
N manik also standing with them

Nandini : manik...
Yeh sb kya hai

(Nandini try to get up but manik comes n again ly her down )

Manik : don't get up
Do rest u having fever

Nandini : pr manik
Why u call so many doc.

Manik : i don't know about doc of this place
So i called 4 best doc for u

Nandini : manik..
It's just viral

Manik : nandini.. relax

Doc check nandini n give her medicine

Doc. : she will be f9 in 2 3 hours

Manik : thank u doc.

Nandini : manik
I m so sorry ab meri vja se humre sare pln spoil ho gye hum yha ae aur main bimar padh gye

Manik : nandini..
Enjoyment se jada yr health is more imp. Aur hum ek aur din yha ruk jaenge
So just chill okay
(Kiss on her chicks)

Somebody knock the door n say room service

Manik say come in

He comes with breakfast

Nandini get up n manik feeding nandini

Nandini : u also eat na

Manik : okay

They both finish the breakfast

Manik : nandini now take some rest okay

Nandini : but manik i want to go out

Manik : okay we can go to pool site n u put yr leg in water

Nandini : okay manik done

They reaches at pool site n nandini sit n put her legs in water

Nandini : manik u also sit with me na

Manik start singing a song looking into nandini eyes n sit with her

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara

(Nandini hold his arm n manik touch her face n move her hair)

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara
Suno na sangmarmar ki yeh minaare

(Manik put his head on her lap n hold her hand n put on his heart)

Bin tere maddham maddham
bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan
Jab se mile tum humein
Aanchal se tere bandhe
Dil ud raha hai

(Manik get up n nandini also manik hold nandini n comes in bed room )

Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

Manik put nandini on bed

Manik : nandini..
Ab toh rest krlo

Nandini : okay first i want to hug u

Manik comes n hug her

After sometime

Nandini : manik ab toh main bilkul thik hn
Chalo na khi bhr ghum kr ate hai

Manik : no nandini we will not go today
Agr fir se tumhari tbiyt khrb ho gye toh

Nandini : manik main bore ho chuki rest karke karke
Pichle ek saal se rest hi kr rhi hn

Manik : i m wid u na nandini
Sirf ek hi toh din ki bt hai

Manik play romantic movie n than movie is finish n manik gave medicine to nandini n they have dinner n after that they sleep

Next mrng

Manik get up n gets ready becoz he have go to for recording
Nandini also get up

Nandini : manik u r ready

Manik : hmm...

Nandini get up n kiss on his forehead n wish him all the best

Manik : thank u my doll

Nandini : agr manik meri tbiyt thik hoti i also come with u

Manik : it's okay nandini
I will be come 8 pm
By that time watch movies n plz take lunch on time n i order the breakfast bs ata hi hoga

Nandini : okay baba
Tum breakfast toh karke jao

Manik : main raste main kha lunga
Bye (peck her lips by taking her for side hug)

Nandini : bye (nandini also peck his lips)

Manik : medicine jarur time pr le lena n koe bhi problem ho just immediately calls me

Nandini : okay
Ab jao u r getting late

Manik goes n nandini sit on bed n say ab main pure din kya karu n than she smiles n say manik u will never forget this night .

At 8 pm

Manik comes in room n switch on the light n suprised to see that room is so beautifully decorated with red rose n red balloon n manik eyes were finding his princess nandini

Nandini come out from washroom in red short dress (midi) n it is backless



N manik is suprised to see her n thinks how can somebody looks so beautifull

Part : 52

(Nandini go to his back n hold him tightly n sing n his ear n than she bite his earlobe )
Suno Na
Kahe Kya Suno Na
Dil Mera Suno Na
Suno Zara

(Than she make turn manik n hug him tightly now from front)
Teri Bahon Mein
Mujhe Rehna Hai Raat Bhar
Teri Bahon Mein Hogi Subah

(Manik break the hug touch his face with her face n looking into her eyes n moving his hand on her back)
Be Intehaan
Be Intehaan
Yun Pyaar Kar
Yun Pyaar Kar
Be Intehaan

Dekha Karun
Sari Umar. Sari Umar

(Manik kiss on her forehead n than on eyes of nandini )
Teri Nishaan
Be Intehaan
Koi Kasar Na Rahe
Meri Khabar Na Rahe
Choo Le Mujhe Is Kadar
Be Intehaan

(Nandini comes outside n manik also come after her n hold her from back n start kissing on her neck holding her very tightly)
Jab Saanson Mein Teri Saanseein Ghuli To
Phir Sulagne Lage
Eshaas Mere Mujhse Kehne Lage
Haan
Bahn Mein Teri Aake Jahan Do Yun Simatne Lage
Sailaab Jaise Koi Behene Lage

(Nandini move little bit forward n manik hold her hand kiss on her n by kissing he comes to her shoulder n again kiss on her neck )
Khoya Hun Mein Aagosh Mein
Tu Bhi Kahan Abb Hosh Mein
Makh Mali Raat Ki
Ho Na Subah
Be Intehaan, Be Intehaan
Yun Pyaar Kar
Be Intehaan

(Rain started n nandini leaves manik n start enjoying rain)
Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm

(Manik hold her waist n nandini turn around n come close to his lips holding his face)
Gusthakiya Kuch Tum Karo
Kuch Hum Kare Is Tarah
Hmm Sharma Ke Do Saaye Hai Jo
Muh Pher Le Humse Yahan
Haaan Choo To Liye Hai Yeh Jism Tune
Rooh Bhi Tu Chum Le
Eshaas Bheege Bheege Kyun Hai Mere

(Nandini fuses her lips with her n start kissing him widely n manik too respond in same manner n his hand were moving all allover her body shamelessly n nandini raffling his hair n pulling more n more closer to herself )
Haan Yun Chur Hoke
Majbor Hoke Katra Katra Kahe
Eshaas Bheege Bheege Kyun Hai Mere

Do Bekhabar Bheege Badan
Ho Besabar Bheege Badan
Lete Rahe Raat Bhar Angdaiya

(Manik break the kiss in need of oxgyen n both breathing heavily they rested their forehead on eachother but the next act of nandini made him shocked she again fuses her lips with him n showing that how she want him.. how much she feeling hungry for him... it's now she want to cross all the limit n than manik also start kissing her madly n in b/w the kiss his hand travel toward back of her dress n tear the strip of her dress )
Be Intehaan, Be Intehaan
Yun Pyaar Kar, Yun Pyaar Kar
Be Intehaan
Dekha Karun
Saari Umar Tere Nishan

(N than without breaking the kiss he take her in his arm n take her to room n than he put on the bed n come at top of her
n fuses her lips again n his travel to shoulder n remove her dress n than he kiss on shoulder than he get up.. n remove his cloth also than again ly on her n kiss her every inch of face than shoulder n his hand are busy squeezing her upper sentive part n than he come down kiss n bite there n nandini again n again moaning his name... than they change their postion now nandini come top of him n kiss him all over his body than again manik flip there position n come down by kissing n giving her love bite on every part of upper body he leaving his mark all over her body he kiss her b/w the tigh by rubbing his hand there to make her go fully crazy.n nandini caressing his hair n moaning his name.. n than he come toward her face now also he is rubbing her there n than he says "baby.. it will hurt..u.. but i will be gentle.. u trust me.. na.."

"Manik i trust u.. "nandini said n in sec. He entered iniside her slowly..n nandini shouts in pain n tear comes out from but manik drink her tear n than fuses his lips with her.. to make by suppressing her scream.. than the pain of nandini turns in pleasure n than after sometime nandini is top of manik her head on his chest n hand encircling her neck n manik hand are on her back... "u okay... na... baby.. "
"I m feeling so complete after this.. iloveu.. i love u.. "nandini lovingly n hold become more tight

"I love to.. my doll "manik said pecking her hair than they drifted in sleep after sometime
(Teri Nishaan
Be Intehaan
Koi Kasar Na Rahe
Meri Khabar Na Rahe
Choo Le Mujhe Is Kadar
Be Intehaan)


Morng
nandini wake up n she is in manik arm n manik is still sleeping n she kiss on manik cheeks n again comes into his arms n she is fully naked n she get up covering her body with blanket n try move but manik hold her hand n than nandini fall on manik

Nandini : manik kya kar rhai ho

Manik : kya kr rha hun matlb
Apni wife ke sth romance kr rha ho aur kya

Nandini blushes

Nandini : pr manik..

Manik : pr vr kuch nhi

Manik put his finger on her lips n come above her n start coming close to her lips but somebody knocks the door

Manik get up n nandini also

Manik : ghr main navya preshn krti hai aur yha room service

Nandini smiles n go into washroom n manik open the door
Servant kept the breakfast n goes n nandini come out from the washroom in beautiful white dress

Nandini : u also go n be fresh

Manik come close to nandini n hold her waist

Nandini : not again manik
Agr aisa hi rha toh hum khi bhr bhi nhi ja paenge

Manik : i don't care
(Coming close to her lips )

Again somebody knocks the door

Manik : not again

Nandini laugh n pull manik cheeks

Nandini : manik...
U r so cute

Manik goes to washroom with towel n nandini open the door

After sometime they reaches to goa beach

Nandini : chlo na manik ice cream khate hai

Manik : okay ..

They both go to ice cream stall
Manik order ice ream

(both start eating ice cream n nandini looking at manik )
Haan aa.. o..
Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe
Beinteha pyaar doon

(Nandini come close to manik n lick the ice cream of manik both r looking into eachother eyes)
Saari hadein maine meri
Ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa
Awaargi ban gaye

(Manik hold nandini hand with having ice cream n he also eat her ice cream n thrown away his cream both start eating from one ice cream )
Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

(They reaches at the beach )
Haan aa.. o..

(Nandini start throwing water on manik n manik stopping her but she is not stopping so he hold nandini n throw her in water n nandini hold his hand n pull him also in water )
Kya khoob rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko khuda

(Both start playing in water n running behind eachother they are enjoying a lot)
Hasratein ab meri
Tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri
Aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

(After sometime they r setting at corner of beach nandini setting holding manik arm n nandini hand on his chest they r veiwing sunset)
Oo.. aa..
Aa.. aa.. oo..



So here is next part hope u all like it it is full of romance n next part will be again emotinal one... something will happen wid them at goa..that will change their whole life n guyz... plz. do comment silent reader plz...
keep smiling
love mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago

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