MANAN- SS ONE MISTAKE - LINK TO THREAD 2 ON PG1 & 147

First Previous

Page

105

Next Last

Frequent Posters

priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

nice update nanud ignores him

manik cant take it bt he behaves normal

chudali soha entry in happy family

wt gng to happen next update

continue soon

Quote

Sunsatiya

@Sunsatiya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Its perfect... bas... its plz dont make her...abla nari types... plzzz make her strong enough... nd.. plz do post regularly... plzzz nd this update is perfect... nd... even update the next part as soon as possible for u... plzzz waiting for it

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chaz

@chaz

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome work mate...please continue sooonish...n I suggest to yes convert this TS into a Beautiful FF or SS..whatever suits you..you ve got skills. Enhance it..all d very best for further updates..loadsa love n luck..
And pleasee send me PM if Possible.. take care! :) 😉 😊

Quote

Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Manik is a cheater here, having a mistress while being married?
I am happy that she refused to cry over him anymore
He broke her trust because he cheated (physically/emotionally)
I can't see her trusting him ever again (realistically speaking)

Nandini is his wife and not his caretaker
She did so much and this is what he does?

I Hope that she has a hot guy as well
There is No reason for her to stay faithfull when he is cheating

Quote

Anushi

@anushi3012

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

So much emotion in both chapters!!

And Manik, I wanted to kill him, but I was so happy that Nandini did not broke down in front of him!!

👏 The way you described her actions and her strength- Hats off!!

So the witch is named Soha!!

Well we will see how their 'relationshit' will be!!

Eagerly waiting how Nandini will react to the divorce paper and I guess she is pregnant.

Please update quickly and if possible pm me for next update

keep it up

Quote

beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

When such stories are written, women are usually depicted as weaklings and too forgiving. Cheating husband or boyfriends get their way back too easily.. something i really despise to read or even imagine..

Thank u for your portrayal of Nandini here : no matter how much it hurts, a girl or woman who get cheated in a relationship has to move on... thank u for making Nandini realize it soonish... Guys like Manik ( in this ff) don't deserve any sort of emotions from quintessente of woman like Nandini. All they deserve is ignorance and indifference. .. thank u for making Nandini give him the same...

She ain't a bloody nanny or a glorified caretaker. ... I just want to see how long will Manik live in Soha's la la land... He needs to crash down on the ground of reality soon..I agree when some other reader said that Nandini deserves the best, not a coward and a cheater like Manik..

I do not know how do you plan to end it but if Manan are the end game make Manik move heavens and hell to get Nandini back in his life... Afterall karma is a bitch... And if Nandini is actually preggers, he should beg to be with the child... a cheating father can't be a good role model to bring up a child -- something Nandini would need to drill in his thick head too.. Or better still let Nandini walk far away from his life without a word and let him know about her pregnancy then... God I'm feeling so bad for Nandini here...

Please update soon.. Perhaps you should not stop at three chapters. It would be a good idea to convert it into a FF..

Congrats for wonderful story... God bless..

Edited by bitasta - 10 years ago

Quote

sona15

@sona15

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Oh god u are killing me please please please please update soon that stupid soha I hate her

Quote

Angel

@asangel

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Nyc updt ...SOHA!!!like seriusly ...
Esa hi hna chahye mnk ke sth...i wsh ki nandni mnk jo bna btaye ghr hi chdjr chli jaye...dn he gt to knw wt he lost...

Quote

S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

While looking around I came across this! I find it quite interesting! Continue soon as I'm eagerly waiting what will happen next!
you really wrote it beautifully!