MANAN- SS ONE MISTAKE - LINK TO THREAD 2 ON PG1 & 147

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

ur theme is good

its different

its beautiful

its emotional

iam enjoying it

its totally up to you

becaause u know it better

loved the way u penned each n everything

waiting to c whr is nandini

what manik s gonna do after knowing that nandini is pregnant

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Nice update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

And manan ko jaldi mila do

Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

after reading this chapter i m sure of the fact he doesn't deserve nandini.he never loved her.she was just a habit for him and caretaker whose method of taking care he appreciated.bas.even after he clearly felt that there may be more of what he feels for nandini but no his ego,pride didn't let him explore it.so full of himself.so self centered!

he never once felt wrong about how much a huge crime he has committed but kept finding faults in nandini.what did he expect?that she would fall on his feet and beg him to keep her?that moron was sad cause nandini didn't take care of his needs.didn't pamper him!unbelievable!but he had taken all the steps to throw her out of his life.even those papers!he shattered,completely broke that girl but expected the same loving treatment!wow -__-

after he saw the signs he could have at least gone to her.try and talk to her since he felt so helpless and hurt.but no he is such a jerk that won't allow himself to be sad over her.and went to soha!chhi!

i hate soha but can't believe i m saying this ke this soha is 100 times better than this manik.she is so very right that no girl deserves to be treated like this.no girl deserves to be cheated by their husbands.

and manik chhi you expect your wife whose heart broke so brutally to behave well with you to shower love you when you were cheating on her ,making plans of getting rid of her and worst while she was in your life you were planning marrying someone else.couldn't even wait till she was out of your life.tbh nandini should never ever forgive such a disgusting person.and nandini deserves way better life partner than such a loser.

ik you'd have to reunite them at some point.but i request you please let manik feel 1000times mre hurt than nandini felt.and nandini ,please don't let nandini forgive manik for this.don't ever let her forget.even after they reunite please let manik and nandini both remember what a sinful thing manik did.make it a bittersweeet story cause after reading this chapter,knowing manik more,totally sweet,and unrealistically loving ending or reunion won't make sense.

simple thing is manik doesn't deserve any girl.specially not nandini and her child.

sorry for the long rant but manikk pissed me off big time.

oh and i think you should make it a ff but its your choice :)

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Saranya

@charanyaaj

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

No prob SS or FF as u wish. But pls updt soon

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beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
after reading this chapter i m sure of the fact he doesn't deserve nandini.he never loved her.she was just a habit for him and caretaker whose method of taking care he appreciated.bas.even after he clearly felt that there may be more of what he feels for nandini but no his ego,pride didn't let him explore it.so full of himself.so self centered!
he never once felt wrong about how much a huge crime he has committed but kept finding faults in nandini.what did he expect?that she would fall on his feet and beg him to keep her?that moron was sad cause nandini didn't take care of his needs.didn't pamper him!unbelievable!but he had taken all the steps to throw her out of his life.even those papers!he shattered,completely broke that girl but expected the same loving treatment!wow -__-

after he saw the signs he could have at least gone to her.try and talk to her since he felt so helpless and hurt.but no he is such a jerk that won't allow himself to be sad over her.and went to soha!chhi!

i hate soha but can't believe i m saying this ke this soha is 100 times better than this manik.she is so very right that no girl deserves to be treated like this.no girl deserves to be cheated by their husbands.

and manik chhi you expect your wife whose heart broke so brutally to behave well with you to shower love you when you were cheating on her ,making plans of getting rid of her and worst while she was in your life you were planning marrying someone else.couldn't even wait till she was out of your life.tbh nandini should never ever forgive such a disgusting person.and nandini deserves way better life partner than such a loser.

ik you'd have to reunite them at some point.but i request you please let manik feel 1000times mre hurt than nandini felt.and nandini ,please don't let nandini forgive manik for this.don't ever let her forget.even after they reunite please let manik and nandini both remember what a sinful thing manik did.make it a bittersweeet story cause after reading this chapter,knowing manik more,totally sweet,and unrealistically loving ending or reunion won't make sense.

simple thing is manik doesn't deserve any girl.specially not nandini and her child.

sorry for the long rant but manikk pissed me off big time.

oh and i think you should make it a ff but its your choice :)

Well said mate...

Manik is not angry because he lost someone close to him, but because she ceased giving him royal treatment after dropping off that bomb on her... Wow!! What a chauvinist this Manik is!! After shattering her to smithereens he still expects her dote on him??? I wonder what would have he asked her if she were still home : "Nandini why don't you cook for me, wait for me, pamper me, dote on me AND even continue sleeping with me like before, like nothing has happened till our divorce get finalized ?? ..Pathetic is an understatement for him..

And his ego!!! Gosh he can quell the voice of his conscience to get rid of Nandini but Nandini cannot cling to her self respect and give him a silent treatment!!! Such an inflated sense of self importance this jerk has!!!

I don't hate Soha here... even if she were not a bitch and even if her true color was not revealed this early, I wouldn't have hated her... If a guy like Manik gives her a free pass to his life with a scant regard to a loving and dignified wife at home, it is husband like him that is to be blamed more than the other woman like Soha...Besides why does the other woman has to bear all the brunt??? How can man be scot free or blameless if he encourages the other woman and hands her the rein of his life??? Also, Soha had not asked him to leave his wife and marry her...He did so on his own- that too after knowing her just for a couple of weeks???... How can Manik stoop so low???? I liked Soha for giving it back to him in his own coin...

If Manan are still the end game, it should be after a lot of repentance and redemption. .. forgiveness earned properly, not granted just because the woman in question was too lenient, had too big a heart, yielded under the societal pressures OR the guy was too good looking and cute : thus simply irresistible. What guarantee is there that he would not cheat on her again with some other woman if Nandini decides to forgive him and go back in his life taking on a 24x7 job of being a glorified caretaker. Nandini's lifetime stance should be: forgiven to raise the child as a family but never ever forgotten as a woman who had to undergo emotional and mental turmoil during the most beautiful yet difficult phase of her life...She should be the one dictating the terms and conditions of Manik's position in the life of her child and herself...

But on the second thoughts why should she suffer for her entire life for no fault of hers???

I actually want Nandini to move on with a guy who loves her to moon and back, respects her and loves her for who she is as well as her child as his own... Nandini can give Manik visiting rights to her child and JUST that.. Manik should wallow in regret, shame and self-pity for the rest of his life... Even the child in question doesn't deserve to be brought up around such a pathetic excuse of a human being..

Besides, if the likes of Soha can have THE Manik Malhotra running the after them, the likes of Nandini (who is a million times better than any Soha could ever be) should have men; million times better than Manik eager to love her and treat her in all the regal glory...In the meantime I would like to see Nandini getting independent. ..

Loved how he got so many shocks in one day... First Nandini left him without a word, secondly Soha deceived him so badly.. not that I have any sympathy for this jerk , thirdly he got to know Nandini was pregnant... He deserves all he has got so far and even more!!!

And I applaud Nandini : Of course it isn't her who should be shedding tears anymore... It should be Manik... I'm sure Nandini is more than capable of raising her child beautifully - with or without any male support, let alone Manik's..

Edited by bitasta - 10 years ago

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

It depends in your story line dear...
Please give us a story we can cherish forever...
As this story have plot of broken Manik and nandini...
This can b f gud length enuf...

So please update and don't end it..
We will love you and your work...
Ff is my suggestion

God bless uhhh
Regards and love

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Shahnazzie101

@Shahnazzie101

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

I would like you to make it ff buh still it's your wish whatever you want

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

i think ss is the best way to go...

your story has a lot of scope in terms of a ss

if made into a ff the story might not be "one mistake" because as the story progresses manik and nandu are both going to make one mistake or another...

keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for your update...