MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
When r u going to update dear update fast plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
A big,big n big sorry ... I knw ki i told u ki i was going to update till night bt i couldn't as i had to attend a party wid my mumma n i returned late night.. I was so tired that i directly went to sleep...
Sorry for not keeping my words m really sorry.. Kaan pakarkey sorry..
Now let me start the story.. Enjoy reading;

Chapter-5(B)
As soon as fab5 left the villa nandu woke up...
She came downstairs to see her bhai.. N here he was in the hall talking wid his manager abt the arrangement of rooms.. She came n hug him frm behind.. After breaking the hug..
Rohan: Uth gayi meri choti..
Nandu: Hmmm. Bhai its 1 in the afternoon aur aapne mujhe aab tak nahi uthaayaa..
Rohan: I thought my choti must be tired after this long journey isseliye sochaa ki let u sleep..
Nandu: Accha bhai,aaj aap ka meeting thaa na .. Kaisa raha??
Rohan: The deal is on.. Aur woh log aaj saam ko hi rehne aa rahey hain..
Nandu: Congrats bhai...
Rohan: Accha u must be hungry right.. Chalo lets hv breakfast..
Nandu: Bhai.. I guess its time for lunch..
Rohan: Oh yaa..
Nandu: Bhai aap chalo .. Main fresh hokar aati hun...
After hvinh lunch rohan went to office for some work n nandu went to her room n started to watch movie..
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Evening time;
Rohan returned home as fab5 were coming..
Nandu was so much bzy in watching movie that she didn't realize that her bhai was bck n its time for the band to come..
Here downstairs fab5 reached with their luggage.. Rohan welcomed them.. All of them were sitting in the hall.. They were jst talking something regarding the album..
Finally nandu finished her movie .. She realized the time n thought her bhai must hv returned so she came downstairs.. Fab5 were facing their bck.. Navya n pari also came wid them.. Nandu was not able to she anyone face.. Actually she didn't realize that the band hv come.. So without noticing she started to shout..
Nandu: Aap vi naa bhai.. U r bck aur mujhe bulaayaa vi nahi..
Saying this she finally reached near everyone.. She was wearing a loose tee n black shorts wid her hair tied in pony.. They all were shocked to see her n same goes wid nandu.. Finally her bhai spoke..
Rohan: So let me introduce u to each other..
Choti they r fab5 n they r the band wid whom we r going to work n guyz she is my little sister.. He was abt to tell her name when cabir said" Nandini"..
Rohan: Do u knw her?? ( in a surprised tone)
Nandu: Actually bhai main mumbai main space academy mein padhti thi naa n they also study their .. So its kinda we knw each other bt its not that we r frnds.. Bas ek dusre ko jaantey hain..
Saying this she spoke to fab 5..
Nandu: Nice meeting u once again.. Hope u guyz will enjoy here.. Saying this she left for her room..
Finally fab5 also headed towards their room n as everyone requirement they all got a separate room... Look the destiny plans.. Manik got the room opposute to nandini' s room..
Nandini banged the door of her room.. Now she let out her emotions which she controlled down stairs.. She started to throw the things here n there... She started to talk to herself." Kyun kyun ho raha hain yeh sap.. Kyun woh baar baar mere saamne aa raha thaa.. Sab kuvh toh 4 saal pehle hi khatam ho gaya thaa naa toh y?? Aur ek hi ghar main ek mahinaa uss insaan k saath.. Y this destiny is playing such games wid me.?? Aaiappaa aap par sey toh mera varosaa ussi din uthgaya thaa jis din aap ney mujhsey meraa sab kuch chin liya thaa.. Toh aap sey roh main kuch complaints vi nahi karungi.. Its all my fate.. I knw aur main meri fate se ladungi .. Main iss tarah se haar nahi maan sakti.. Toh kya ki i would hv to face him daily .. I won't let him affect me.. Bohot muskil se samhaalaa hain khudko.. Ab yaha se piche nahi dekhna hain.. Kavi nahi.. Saying this she composed herself..
Meanwhile in manik room.. He was also talking to himself " ye destiny vi kya khel khelrahi hain mere saath . jis past ko vul kar main itni aagey badh chukaa hu kyun woh phirse mere saamne aa gayi ... Kyun?? No main ussey meri life affect karney nahi dunga.. I will complete this contract chahey uskey liye mujhey ussey har din face karna padey.. Main itna vi kamjor nahi hu.. No.. Not at all.. Saying this he also compose himself..
Everyone get freshed n came downstairs for dinner at it was night..
All of them were on the dinning table.. There was complete silence.. Finally a voice of a guy came frm behind..
Guy: Sorry sorry... I knw tu kal raat ko ghar aayi thi aur main ab tujhse milne aaraha hu.. Actually i was stuck wid my wrks.. M really sorry baby doll..
Nandu: Tu toh mujhse baat hi mat kar..
Guy: Aarey m really sorry naa.. Tu kahe toh i will do sit ups..
Chalo i will start.. He started to do.. 1...2...3...4...5...6..7...
Nandu: Accha accha bas vi kar ho gaya..
Saying this she hugged him..during the hug she said" I missed u maddy".. He also said" I missed u to baby doll"... After a while they broke the hug n he greeted rohan..
Maddy: Hey bhai.. How u doing??
Rohan: All gud.. Tum vi choti ghar par naa ho toh aatey hi nahi ho.. Arret u should come to meet me at least..
Maddy: Bhai u knw na these business wrks.. Time hi nahi milta..
He then noticed fab 5
Maddy: U r fab 5 right??
Cabir: Yaa.. We r here for a project n will be staying here for 1 month..
Maddy: Oh.. Then let me introduce myself...
Hello guyz its me Madhyam Singhaniyaa.. Nandini's bestfrnd.. U can call me maddy.. Aur don't worry hamaari mulaakaat hoti rahey gi.. Saying this he also join them for dinner.. He sat beside nandu..
Maddy: Arrey wah baby doll sarey hi khaaney mere pasand ka.. Tujhe pata thaa kya that i will ne comimg for dinner..
Nandu: Aisa kuch nahi hain.. Aur yeh aaj ka menu bhai ney set kiya hain mainey nahi..
Maddy: Oh... Accha as u knw ki jab main ya tu kisi trip par sey waapas aatey hain to we go to pub for party.. Toh go n get ready..
Nandu: Bhai.. Shall i go??
Rohan: Tum mujhse kab se permission lene lagi.. Go ahead..
Nandu: Thanx bhai..
Maddy: Guyz if u wanna come then u can also join.. It will be fun.
All of them agreed except manik..
Cabir: Chal na yaar manik ... We will h fun..
Manik: No yaar tum sab jaao.. Mera mood nahi hain.
Mukti: common manik..
Nandu: aab uska mood nahi hain toh don't force him..
Manik: M in.. Chalo lets go..
Maddy: Okay then.. Change will be waiting for all of u downstairs.. Jaldi karna...
Everyone went towards their room to change...
Precap: Jealous manik...

Uff.. Finally done.. Kaisa laga do comment n press like button yaar... N yaa comment lambaa honaa chahiye...

Signing off by MYRAH( Myruh)..


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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update dear
nandu was totally different
love there bond
fab5 r cmg to stay wth villa for 1 month
waiting for faceoff of manan agin
hw it is gng to be
early waiting
continue soon
stay blessed
keep smiling

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Both manik nd nandini r blaming there fate fr facing each other
Maddy is nandinis best frnd coolll
Wat so happend in past please revel that
Ur gng gud with the story
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
U know i waited till midnight for ur update anyways it was superb
Bhai behen bonding is vry nice
Really love new nandu
Maddy is good afterall he is the one who will make manik jealous
Superb
Cont soon
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update! N was a pleasent surprise never expected Maddy to be a part of the story but really curious what might have happend in the past...
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Posted: 9 years ago

love there bond of nandu and Rohan
fab5 r cmg to stay wth villa for 1 month
waiting for jalurse Manik

continue soon
stay blessed

TNS for Pm👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
super update
maddy is nandus best friend
manan can't stay away from each other so
both r complaining like kids about their destiny
rohan and nandus bond is good
waiting for jealous manik
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimanan

U know i waited till midnight for ur update anyways it was superb
Bhai behen bonding is vry nice
Really love new nandu
Maddy is good afterall he is the one who will make manik jealous
Superb
Cont soon
Lots of love


M really sorry for making u wait... So so so sorry..
This won't happen frm next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz cont soon...plz try to give more manan scenes...means their patch up with lots of emotion

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