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@zooni.shah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Oh god! who could it be here

I don't know what was I thinking and who was I talking to but there was someone outside who was observing my eccentric and over the top behaviour of mine.

My brain is literally not working right now, Next thing u made me cry by this... My breath was stuck in my throat at the thought of them loosing the baby. But as soon as the doc cleared it i was relieved, Things are really getting rude and difficult...Her mood swings and Manik being at the blame okay after the whole chaos for the first time am feeling bad for him...Heck of emotions u showed.. And yeah u deserve an award u made me cry... i wish i could meet uh and give something... Am still in a shock am just not over the things going on...

The last chapter was hot i was like uff... But yeah this one shocked my nervesthe way Nandus mom slapped Manik and said she wants him out of her daughters life i was like No shit...

Breathtaking chapter sweet heart...

Will be waiting for the weekend...

Take care

Love

Aqsa

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Take a bow gal ... U captured it very nicely ... Just awesome
Each and every emotion at the right place
Nandu and Maniks worry of loosing the baby ... The reactions
Then manik and Nandu s mom convo ... He was standing like a mountain ...
Then nandu s first reaction that baby is okay ... And in the end the frustration that came out ... The anger the blame game btw both ... Just superb
Hope it's her grandpa who saw all that ... Nd who will get some sense in those two ... Manik should now not move away ...
See thats what you do always hahah make us crazy thinking what will happen next ... Nd poor us, we start running our imaginations in all directions lol
Update soon

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Hadjer13

@Hadjer13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Amazing update ..

The fear of manik lose his nandu and the baby u described it very well

And sometime i really like the stubborn of manik like he was't ready to live her

And our nandu and her mood...

What the pregancy do hehehe😆

Cont soon😉

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Alishakhna1998

@Alishakhna1998

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Posted: 10 years ago

#254

An amazing update

But i didn't except that kind of behaviour from nandini

It was just too rude to balme manik for everything

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for new update

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

First off all thanks for very fast and long update. 👏. I like the chapter.. name as always. What a roller-coaster day in their life. ..I can feel all the emotions they got through😭. Both are right into their place. I'm amazed by your writing skills dear.👏⭐️. You pinned download everything in as realistic ways as it should be. Let's see what future store for them. THANKS for sharing this wonderful story. 😛.

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

awesome update

loved it

manik is very caring

thanks for the PM😊

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

superb update dea...

continue soonnn

tnx fr d pm

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Hey dear..I am Geet...Just got to know abt ur story today morning only and here i am after reading all the chaptets in one go and craving for more...you simply fantastic dear..love ur story to the core..MaNan relationship in this story is typical MaNanlicious...perfect..My babies are so in love yet so stubborn...want to read more ,i know u just updated the latest chapter but still want to read more...so plz try to continue soon...Take care

Geet