The life changing bet-MaNan ff CHP6 PG42 edited with pic please check

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"No, this cant happen, please tell me that you're lying, please tell me that it's just a joke."

"Oh Nandu, you're soo naive my darling! But no its not a joke, but the truth ! The ugly truth of your life life!" hahahah (he let out a evil laugh)

"Why, why are you doing this to me? What have i done wrong to you? Why did you do this you monster? Answer me..!!"

"BET... It was just a bloody bet! Or you think i will ever fall for a stupid, old fashioned commoner like you? In your dreams baby! Have you ever even seen your self in the mirror?? I bet not, cause then you might have just understood the difference between your class and mine!! Your just a bloody nobody for me. And trust me if it weren't for the bet, then i might have not even noticed your presence in this college cause you know afterall i have so many better, hot and sexy options waiting for me, but just because of this stupid bet i had to stay away from my sweethearts for so many days, but now no more as the bet is over and even my work with you! So goodbye forever MISS COMMONER!! ."

(and with this she fell down on her knees sobbing hard, right in the middle of nowhere. Her mind was clouded with mixed emotions - she was feeling betrayed cause it was for the first time she she had given her everything to a guy with open arms, she had trusted him, and all she got in return was betrayal! He played with her he used her for a damn bet! She was hurt thinking that her first love, her kiss, her first night, everything was stolen from this guy who intended to do nothing but use her, she was hurt beyond repair ! She was angry for letting herself drown in this emotion, for letting herself give to everything he asked for, for believing in him, for thinking that this man could love her the same way she did.

But no! She wasnt one of those stupid girls to just sit and cry for months and years for the same guy. She wasnt the one to show herself weak to gain sympathy. No she wasn't. And he didn't know that yet.)



"MR MANIK MALHOTRA ... Huh! What did you think? That I'm a weak fragile delicate doll who wont stand up for herself? Then let me tell you that you are so damn mistaken. You don't know who am i yet. I'm no commoner to simply take in your insult and walk away with it. You'll have to pay! You'll have to pay for every single tear I've shed, you'll have to pay for every single piece of my heart that you've shattered ! I knew you couldn't love me back the same way i did, but now I bet that no one can HATE you the same way i do! Coz i hate you from the bottom of my heart my dear monster! And i will hate you to the moon and back. Be ready to face your worst nightmares, i will make sure you will beg for your death but even death will refuse to come near you.
I will be your worst nightmare dressed as a daydream baby!

Enjoy your life as much as you can till I'm back! Cause after that it will be just you and me!"

(she said to herself in a determined tone full of hatred and anger visible in her eyes. )







So guys i dont know hows it. But its just a new story i thought to come up with. I was free but my laptop is not with me so i couldn't update my other ongoing story so thought to come up with a new one. I have updated this through my phone so forgive me for the errors.
And do give me your feedbacks.


Thank you

Apurva

my other ongoing work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cont soon
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I really am happy that you showed a strong Nandini, glad that she stood up for herself
I hate stories where she has no self respect

Great start 😉
Can't wait to se him burn and suffer
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nice start
u showed strong which was too different
continue soon
waiting for update
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Oh god I love Nandu! Please update soon and add me in your buddy list😃
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Please continue it!!!

I absolutely love stories that start with proper killing hatred!!
And the I love the line "coz I am your nightmare dressed like a daydream..." (And I know where u got it from... and I love that song!!)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really interesting..
Totally luvd it.
Cont soon dear.
Love...mini
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Waooo yr wht a story plzzz do pm me n plzzz post the nxt prt soon n tht too big one n ya i jst lv ur story... Waitng for nxt prt...
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Intresting start dea. ...
Continue soonnn
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Whn prologue is such awesome
Den d stry would be killer
Waiting for it plz pm mi m waiting

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