Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 78

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Smiley
So sorry...
Had my exams
So couldn't reply

The story is going on very well, must say
I mean, kitna kuch change ho gaya... Missing MaNan...
And then, Mandy, Nandu, Aryamann and Abhi taking revenge...

And and, the promo, god, cannot wait to see shocked and jealous Manik
Update soon
Edited by Roshni8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oho when are you gonna update it yaar?
Can't wait to read it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice..awesome promo
now i think nandini has to face fab5

update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice promo
N thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woww..amazing promo
Isko padhne ke baad to wait hi ni ho raha.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow interesting promo
Nhi huga ab 2 days ka wait
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
NXT DAY...

NANDINI POV...

i was sleepng peace fully bt due to sun rayz... aftr a long tym i was havng peace bcoz aftr so many dayz full 1year i was sleepng on my bed in my own house were my mom dad use to enjoy with me... i was thinkng these thingz or u can say rmmbrng dayz which were d bst dayz in my lyk bt jst thn a face rflct in frnt of my eyes n tears start rollng frm my eyes...
bt jst thn i heart a knock on the door... so soon i wipe my tears n ask who is it...???

baby opn the door mom said wo colg me hi hai princi se milne gyi hai vo mom ki achi frnd hai so she said k vo baat kre gi un se admisn k liye n v all jst have to go thier to show our faces n get sign. on some pprs. so b ready in 45 mints v r waitng said abhi n thn nandu said ohkk n he lft...

nandu soon get ready n four of thm had thier breakfast n lft to colg...

MANIK POV...

i slpt late nite bcoz i was with harshad in disco... bt my stupid frndz came at 8 only to wake me up n this stupid cabir throw watr n tht too colored one... v fight n thn all wnt to the colg...

IN COLG...

MANIK POV...

dont knw y bt today i was feelng very strange lyk something is gonna happn... frm lst nite i was thinkng abt tht girl... i was crshng myslf for gong to disc... bcoz at nite...

whn i n harshad were havng drink i saw a girl in cornr kissng a boy... bt while kissng a anothr guy came n slap tht girl... which means tht he was her bf... n she was dichng him... jst lyk her... n aftr rmmbrng her again i drank alot... n now again i was thinkng abt her dont knw y bt aftr 1yr... m rmmbrng her again...

some tym i really think k kaha ho gi vo...??? is she fine...??? i havnt seen her in hole 1yr... n i alwayz give a surity tht yes i haved moved on... bt some tym i really ques my slf tht do i really moved on...
my thoughts were brkn by croud... n thn i hear some girlz were talkng abt some boyz...

1girl - hy u saw thm thy were so hot yr...
2girl - bt i think one of thm is havng gf u c na how one of thm was holdng a girl in his arms... lucky she...

manik pov...

manik jst throw ur thoughts in dusbin n rmmbr u cant forgive her aftr wht she have done... jst think abt aliya n fab4 thts it... n now go inside n search a new bkra...

with tht he wnt inside n saw fab4...

aliya - guyzzz ab ajj bot bate kr rhe hai koi new gang ki i think koi new admins. aye hai...

cabir - so wait kis baat ki let's show thm thier real place...

with tht cabir call a boy n said him to snd tht gang in audi...
guy got scare n said ohkk...

guy search tht gang n saw a boy of tht gang he wnt towardz him n said fab5 callng thmmm...

the boy ask y thn he said my b ragng...

he laugh n said ohkkk v r comng n thn he which means mandy snd msg to abhi arymn n nandu to came in audi he is also gong thier...

in audi...

arymn was already thier... n mandy said...

MANDY - OHHH WAOOO YRRR ARYMN TUNE SUNNA HMARI RAGGNG HO RHI HAI YRR...

ARYMN - BT YRR YEH RAGGNG KRE GA KON MAI TO BOT EXITED HU...

MANDY - ARY SUNNA HAI KOI FAB 5 HAI VO KRE GE HAME RAG...

AYRMN - YR MZA AYE GA AJJ TK HM LOGO KI RAGGNG KRTE THY AJJ HM BHI DEKH TE HAI K INDIA ME RAGGNG KAISE HOTI HAI...

jst thn fab 5 entr...

CABIR - GUYZZZ C HMARE BKRE HMARA KITNA WAIT KR RHE HAI...

MANDY - YA RITE V WERE WAITNG FOR U ONLY CHLO JLDI SE BTAO KYA TASK KRNA HAI HAME...

MANIK - LISN TUMHARI STRM KYA HAI...

ARYMN - HM SIC. STUDNT HAI...

MUKTI THINK THY DIDNT KNW SINGNG SO SHE SAID OHKKK... TO AB TUM HME SONG GA KR SUNNAO...

N TUMHE KISI LDKI SE DANCE KRNA HO GA...

MANDY - OHKKK M READY... N WITH THT HE START SEARCHNG A GIRL N GIRLZ WERE SAYNG ME ME N ME... BT THN ALIYA SAID...

ALIYA - HYY JST WAIT A MINT HMARI BAAT PURI NHI HUYI... TUMHE LDKI SE DANCE KRNA HAI LEKIN AGR KISI BHI GIRL NE TUMHARE SATH DANCE KIYA SHE HAVE TO FACE FAB5...

N THN MANDY NOTIC EVRY GIRL WAS TAKNG BACKWRD STP... JST THN AUDI DOOR GET OPN N A GIRL SAID...

"MAI DANCE KRU GI..."
"MERE BABY K SATH..."

ARYMN SHOUT YEHH BABY FINALY U R HERE...

mandy goes toward her as it was audi so lights were vry dim... so no one was able to c her face... jst whn a spot light came ovr thm...

fab5 shock...

manik was hell shock to c the girl... n jst a word which came frm his mouth was...

"NANDINI"...

cabir muku n dhruv jst ran towardz her n hug her tightly n start askng ques... WHERE WERE U...??
Y DIDNT U CALL US...???
NOT EVN FOR ONCE U MISSED US...???

NANDU - guyzzz guyzzz jst lisn na m so sry vo mujhe achank US jana pda bcoz of my mom... she wanted me to go US bcoz vaha dad ki tbiyt khrab ho gyi thi n mom was able to go bcoz she is a princi na thts y... so vaha ja kr thoda bsy ho gyi so... m sryyy bt mai a gyi hu na so jst happy... na n ya met...

Thm He is mandy n he is arymn... n vo she pointed a guy standng behind her Abhi hope u all rmmbr him...

now it was muku trn to get a shock... is he back...??? no he cant...!!!!

muku lft frm thier without sayng anything...

n thn cabir ask vase nandu yeh hai kon...

nandu - yeh arymn he is my csn... n abhi ka tum sb ko pta hai he is my swt bro... n yeh mandy... HE IS MY BOYFRND...(she said lookng towardz manik n now for the frst tym she saw manik...)


manik pov...

mom, dad, csn bro... abhi mera swt bhai... these wordz were romng in his ears he was hell confuse tht frm were her mom dad came n this csn bro... n abhi again bhai kitna jhut bolti hai yeh bt agr abhi bhai hai thn y she kissed her...
n mandy is her bf... she had moved on bt how can she do tht...

Y NOT MANIK AGR YEH TUJHE DHOKA DE SKTI HAI JISE YEH BHAI BOL SKTI HAI OR USE KISS BHI KR SKTI HAI TO BF BNANA KONSA BDI BAAT HAI... AISI HO GI YEH MAINE KBHI BHI NHI SOCHA GA SUCH A PLAYER...

"A PLAYER WHO JST KNW HOW TO PLAY WITH SOME ONE HEART"

END OF THE POV...

mandy came towardz nandu n hld her frm waist n said sry guyzz bt i cant dance n sing bcoz my baby is not well... subha se yeh colg ayi hai n she didnt have her lunch so 1st i have to make her eat somethng...

by this thy 4lft...

manik also lft frm thier in angr whn he saw mandy's hand on nandu waist...

(GUYZ THY FOUR HAVE A NAME OF THIER GRUP WHICH IS 4STONES)

SO 4STONE WERE IN CANTEEN THN DHRUV CAME TO THM N SAID...

nandu ajj harshad k ghr party hai
so tum sb bhi ana vase to cabir ane vala tha bulane bt vo med. room jana pda manik ko leh kr...

nandu - manik ko leh kr... kya huya use...??? (she ask him standng with a jrk...)

dhruv - kuch nhi vo washroom gya tha n he punch mirrior... due to his angr ab pta nhi kis baat ka gussa a gya use...
dont worry he will b fine...

mandy hold nandu hand to cntrol her n dhruv lft frm thier...

abhi - nandu hme yaha apna missn comp. krna hai...

rmmbr tht...


PRECAP - manan spration rsn will b rval n who lisn 4stone talks... will tht prsn hlp 4stone or will b against thmm...


phewww kitna likhma pda mujhe figers a painng chlo ab comnt kro...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update dear
nandu was really missing her parents n manik
she still think of him
manik was too distubed he is having radom feelings
ragging aryamann n maddy was eary waiting to do task
fab5 was too shock to see nandu infrnt of them
manik was numb to react
nandu was happy to see them there love
when she maddy to them as bf manik was too shock his heart nt feeling bt his mind overloading him tht she can do anything which he was misunderstanding
nandu was too shock to knw abt manik condition
waiting fr next update
continue soon
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all u r❤️ such a awesome writer. You gave us twist n turns , that make your story so entertaining👏. I just loved it from my heart. I like the way u potrays the Nandini now. Everything was soo good and full of suspense. I Like the way Mandy is confident. They r on a mission. 😳But still Nandini have some feelings for him.😳 So manik punched again. I jst cherish the old memories with that. I love the way fab 3 welcomes Nandini. But mukhbhi ka bhi misunderstanding door kar do. Awesome n fabulous update. Waiting for your update eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz cont soon...want to know what will happen next

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