Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 64

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Beautiful update dear..
Aww...cute little hide n seek romance in bus..
Finally back to home...
Cockroch..manik ko pata tha..bechare nandini se apne wish pure karva le..
Their little romance at night was beautiful..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Samyukta_p

Lovely update ...

Manik neh nandu ko majbur kardiya woh video k liye
Kitna chalakh hai manik...aur bichari nandu fas gai
Update soon
Love
Samyukta


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Hawww such a cute story this is... And choo cute our manan are... Please keepthem like this.. And please pm me from next part..


thqqq so much for lykng dr
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fafali

Haye ur story is aaawwweeesssooommm i read all chaps in one go. u r amezing writer


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: diyamanan

WATING FOR NXT

AND
EID KI MUBARKE


apko bhi dr.
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Posted: 9 years ago




put ur tshu pprs with u may b u need it...
guyz i knw many of u have lost ur intrst in my story sry for tht...

hope u will lyk it...

Goodbyes are not forever.
Goodbyes are not the end.
They simply mean I'll miss you
Until we meet again!

aftr 7 mnths pprs r on the way of +2...

manik was going to his class whn he lisn nandu voice frm store room n want he saw was lyk he is dead...

nandu n abhi kissng eachodr... n thn nandu said sry plzzz dont get angry... mujhe us k pas jana pda u knw na yehi tha hmara plan...

abhi - bt tujhe kya jrurt thi uske sath itna tym spnd krne ki mera dil to kr raha tha k mai uski jaan hi le lu...
jst wait n watch hm dono kya hal kre ge us ka...

nandu - dont worry ab vo mere jal mai fs gya hai so dont worry sb vaisa hi ho ga jaisa hmne socha tha...n hug him...

manik was all in tears...

he jst get hit with door by which nandu broke the hug n saw manik standng thier in tears...

nandu was shocked seeng him thier n ran towardz him bt he push her n wnt home in his car...

nandu too follow him... n manik wnt to his room... n nandu too...

nandu - manik lisn meri baat suno...

manik start brokng all the thingz on flor... n broke all mirror thingzzz too...

nandu goes to manik n try to hold his hand n said manik ek bar meri baat suno... bt manik jrk his hand off n push her hard tht she feel on brokn glass n her handz start bleedng bt not givng thm damn attntion she again goes to manik...

bt manik again push her n her head got hurt with a table cornr n thn manik said...

JST GET LOST FRM HERE BEFORE I THROW U OUT WITH MY HANDZ... JST LEAVE MY HOUSE... N NVR EVR SHOW ME UR FACE... MAI KAISE SMJ NHI PAYA THT U N THT JRK ABHI R PLANNG AGAINST ME... MAI TUMSE ITNA PYAR KRTA THA BT WHT U DID... U BROKE MY HEART... I JST HATE THT DAY WHN I MET U WHN I STARTED LYKNG U...
U DONT DESVR TO GET LV TBHI TO TUHARE MOM DAD ALSO LFT U...

this line make nandini all shock... brokn... she was cryng madly...
manik hold her arms n throw her out frm his room n nandu all in tears goes frm thier...

nandu pov...

m the rsn y mom dad lft me n now manik i dont desrv lv...

nandu all in tears wnt to her villa... ( Guyz nandu is vry rich her parents were vry rich same lyk mlhotra's...)

the watchman was shock to c nandu cndition... as nandu was all in blood her handz n head both were bleedng...

nandu goes to her room (As srvnts were still thier...)

nandu throw all thingz on floor... n start shoutng on god... tht y he did this to her y alwayz her... 1st mom dad n now manik...

she too said tht manik was rite mai lv desrv hi nhi krti tbhi sb mujhe chod kr jate hai...
n she faint... bcoz of losng blood...

maid came thier bcoz of sound of brokn thingz... n c nandu on floor... she call dr. n too nandini principal who was nandu's massi ( Ishita use to call nandini princi as her sister bcoz thy were bstfrnd frm childhood...)
(nandu princi is Mehka... n ishita n raman were nandu parents )

soon dr. came n do dressng n give some injction n med... n thn said to mehka to take care of her... n give med on tym...

mehka said ohkk... n some tears also came frm her eyes... n said to herslf...

sry d ma apki beti ka dhyan nhi rkh payi m really sry bt ab aisa nhi ho ga ab yeh hmesha happy rhe gi n ab yeh mere sath rhe gi... n ajj se mai es ki mom hu na ki massi...

nandu aftr 2hrs opn her eyes slowly... n thn saw mehka sittng with her... she jst hug her n start sayng maine mmy papa ko mara hai mujhse koi pyar nhi krta sb mujhe chod kr chle jate hai...she said all this while cryng...

mehka too start cryng n thn said no mom or dad apke pass hai n ab se tum meri beti ho n mai tumhari mom hu or mai tumse bot pyar krti hu...

mehka didnt ask her wht happn with her as she knw she will not tell her...

mehka - ajj se tum yaha nhi rho gi... bs apne pprs do +2 k n thn u r gong to US again...

nandu didnt say anythng as she too wanna go far away frm manik...

on odr side...
niyo came home n saw manik full brokn n in tears...
n thn she ask manik wht happn n thn manik said all the thingz which he saw...

niyo was not belvng n wanna go to c nandu too bt manik give her his sver sayng tht she will nvr evr meet nandini again... or else he will leave his house... n niyo has to lisn him as she cant lost his son...

nxt day...

nandu was in scl as it was the lst day she wanna c manik n also wanna tell abhi tht she is gong back to US aftr the exams...

in class manik entr in full attitude...

n goes near aliya n said...

ALIYA I WANNA TELL U SOME THING...

aliya - YA SAY NA...

manik WILL U B MY GF...
( he was watchng nandini while sayng all this... )

aliya - YES... N KISS HIS CHEEKS...

nandu was havng tears bt soon she wipe thm n pov...

manik u didnt trst me not my lv so frm now ill nvr cry for u... u broke my heart n u blame me for my mom dad... ill nvr forgive u for this... u broke my heart into pieces...
manik this is last tym u r watchng me cryng for u...

writr pov...

soon thier pprs came aftr givng pprs nandu wnt to US... n abhi too wnt to his home town... n bcoz of this muku was vry angry n brokn bcoz abhi didnt think abt her... n she now dont belve in lv jst bcoz abhi lft n ya in these 7 yrs thy share a cute lip kiss...

manik n aliya was in rlsn now...
muku,cabir n dhruv miss nandu as she was now good frnd thm n before leavng she met thm lst tym bt didnt tell thm tht she is leavng to US...

muku cabir n dhruv didnt knw tht were nandu is n whn she lft...
n harshad n manik were bst frnd rmmbr tht...

plewww so long fingrs r painng yr... or nhi likh skti mai thoda trs kr lena mujh pr n sry for emotional update n agr jada psnd na aya ho to sry or sad seen nhi dal skti mai... n ya now my story will start aftr one year...so stay trun...

lv
SMILEY...'
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update
Itna kch jo gea manan ke saath
Nandu ne abhi ko kiss q kiya
Akhir usne aisa kiya q eager to know d reason
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
A bit confusing update!
But I guess with coming chapters things will get revealed
looking forward to next one
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please please please 1000time please thoda jaldi update dedo and thoda lamba please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar tumne toh puri storyline hi change kar di..
But koi ni dekhte hai what u have stored for us...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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