Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nandini wnt to store room...
n manik too came thier n lock the door aftr camng inside...

nandu - yeh kya kr rhe ho tum...??

manik - lockng the door so tht no one can distrb us...

nandu - manik lisn koi ah jae ga or kya soche ga agr hme dekh liya...

manik go close to her n said as if i care... or ab tumhe pnishmnt mile gi mujhe thpd marne ki...

nandu - or maine tumhe thpd kb mara...

manik - in class baby itni jldi bhul gyi...

nandu - oh tht slap... to tumhari himt kaise hui mera hath pkd ne ki u r strangr for me...

manik - oh to mai strangr hu... ( Manik was vry close to nandini lips )

nandu - jst crsh her lips with manik... thy were jst kissng to each othr badly n wildly...

aftr smtym nandu broke the kiss n said yes u r strangr...

manik - oh to tum strangr ko hath nhi pkde de skti bt use kiss kr skti ho huh...

nandu - yes bcoz i hv full rite to kiss this strangr...

manik - n y u slap me thn...

nandu - manik stop actng yeh tumhe bhi pta hai k maine koi thpd nhi mara tumhe... n tht slap sound came frm my cell n maine jst act kiya tha thpd marne ka...

manik - n tum mujhe thpd mar bhi nhi skti bcoz u knw thn k tumhe kya krna pdta uski jga...

nandu jst blush...

nandu thn said ohkk my would b husband n my cute fiance ab bohot baat ho gyi tumhare frndz tumhara wait kr rhe ho ge so jao abb... n lisn aliya se dur rahna kuch jada hi krti hai tumhare sath... n lisn scl k baad mera wait mt krna niyo mom ne mere liye alg car bheji hai ohkk so hm ghr hi mile ge dirct...

n ab acha sa bhara dhund lo apne dosto ko smbhalne k liye n ya mai vahi bathu gi jaha bathi thi...
or class me behave krna...

manik was jzt watchng her... n nandu thn notic tht manik was not speckng so she trn to see him bt manik jst crsh her lips... n kiss passtionately... n aftr brokng the kiss said baby i missed u so much...

manik thn give a tight hug n thn nandu said i miss u too my prince charmng... lv u bye now...

manik wnt to the class room n c tht nandu wad not thier... he was abt to out frm the class whn cabir call him n said

ary manik kya ho gya tu chla kyu gya n thpd zor se lga kya n start laughng... n manik give n angry look to him...

nandu jst thn came to the class n aftr lisnng to cabir she too start laughng loudly... manik too see her n seeng her smilng too smile bt jst thn hide rmmbrng cabir was thier...

aliya came thier n put her hand on manik cheks n ask manik tum thik ho na pain to nhi ho raha hai...

nandu seeng aliya hand on his prince charmng cheks get full red in angr... manik seeng this soon remove aliya hand n said ha thik hai liya...

cabir ask vase uski himg kaise hii tujhe thpd marne ki esy to ab hm mza chkhaye ge...

manik jst thn rmmbr nandu dhmki... ( NANDU - AGR MERE SATH KOI BHI PNGA LIYA NA THN U R OUT FRM OUR ROOM N FIR NIYO MOM BHI KUCH NHI KR PAYE GI RMMBR THT )

manik jst thn no... ( loudly )

manik said mera mtlb k hm nhi mai chkhayu ga mza use tum nhi... yeh mera mamla hai or mai khud dekh lu ga...

cabir 1st said no.. bt aftr manik again said tht he will hndl her so he agree bcoz he knw manik can hndl it...

aftr some time phy teachr came n take evry one in ground...

teachr said boyz n girlz to play basket ball in teams like girlz in one team n boyz in one team

aliya make sm bhana n sit undr tree bcoz she dont wanna play undr sun...

game strt..
girlz put two balls in basket as in grlz team two grlz were xprt in his game one was nandu n 2nd was muku...

manik too put two ball in basket n game was for 5 ball...

some how both teams put thier 4 balls n now the match was on final round... hehehhe...

( Now u have to guess kon jite ga nd kon nhi )

precap - manan romnce... n fight too

hope u like it n ya nandu prents r no more n niyo is gud in my story... n nandini dont want tht fab 5 get to knw abt thier rlsn bcoz thy will said its too fst... or u can say she think tht people will give -ve comnts thts y she is not tellng abt her rltn to any one... n niyo too think the same... so manik has to acpt thier rqst... both mothr n daughtr in law lv each othr alot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved ur surprise dear...
Want more now😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: parthsha

Loved ur surprise dear...

Want more now😛


Thq for lvng my surprise..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
wow awsm loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc cncpt... Bt tll me one thng... Mnk is in school nd deay aee aleeady engaged???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asangel

Nyc cncpt... Bt tll me one thng... Mnk is in school nd deay aee aleeady engaged???


Ya dr. I knw meri story thodi nhi bt jada hi ajib hai bt thy r madly in lv so thy have already decided to get marry with each othr bt dont worry thier r many suspnce waitng...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice yaar
matlab kya kahoon
lovely
cute
nice
and continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Hey .. I like it yar! Abhi dono chap . Pade ! .. Awsum .. Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
yipppeee u strtd to write new story...ohhh wowww thanqu thanqu thanqu sooo much...
i jus loved it yr...what to say ..i have no words ...m speechless..its jus breath taking story
while reading only one word came from my mouth jus wow...

u knw wot u rocked it...hats off 2 u
manan scene is pure blisss...i love to read more dea ..so plsss update soon
thanks for the wonderful story..n also thanks for the PM
continue ASAP ...desperately waiting
KEEP WRITING
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey nice update
imy guess is right tht they knw each other whch is near in story
bt loved the suprise
cant wait for next update
continue soon
early waiting

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