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Hye readers i m new here and this is my fst post abt manan i was a silent reader whn suddenly this thought came in my mind hope u like it
Nandani's pov...
it was a sunday afternoon bt we all were in clg as always navya ws tensed nd praying to her mata rani tht no one catch us mukti nd alya were bzy in their fashion talk bt my eyes were searching for him as always he was late i was talking wth Navya whn suddenly my eyes fell on him there he was with dhruv and cabir dressed in white shirt wth blue denim looking handsome as always our eyes meet he smile looking at me nd i smiled back
Manik-my fst crush which turned into something deep wth time bt i m afraid wht will happen whn he will find abt my feelings for him will it affect my frnshp wth him wht if he does nt feel the Same for me i will be shattered i think this is the reason i was nt able to tell him abt my feelings...
Due to navya's continuous blabbing i came back from my eye lock with d love of my life, we decided to go back to our childhood nd planned to play hide nd seek fst it was cabir's turn he started counting nd we all elope to hide in a safe place
I choose our old store room to hide bcoz it was safe nd no one comes there
Aftr 5 min store room door opened With a thud i closed my eyes feeling sad that i got caught soo easily
Manik entered inside followed by cabir and there was a diff shine in MANIK's eyes i got confused
cabir winked at manik nd said it was a due in him nd he left closing door behind him
Manik- sooo finally we r alone.
Me - huhhh
Manik - i sooo wanted to say this frm a long time bt u were always with that madhubala
(saying this he came close to me i steped backwards, soon i was traped bitween wall nd him his body was covering me like a shield protecting me frm the outside world i was lost in his eyes
he held my waist with his one hand nd his other gand was bzy caressing my cheeks)
Manik - u knw u look soo cute with this blush
( and thats whn i noticed i was blushing)
Me - Manik wht r u doing.
Manik - wht do u think ( he leans forward eyeing my lips)
Me - someone will come.
Manik - u think i care .
Me - bttt...
( my words stuck in my mouth bcoz he crushed his lips on mine my eyes wide opened it takes me a few seconds nd i responded with equal pleasure
it turn out to be a passionate kiss sooon our tongues with fighting with each other
he tasted eack nd every corner of my mouth
after sometime which feels like eternity we broke the kiss gasping for oxygen
Manik - I LOVE U NANDU
( He said as soon as he regained his breathe)
Manik - i love u frm the day i fst saw u in clg bt i was afraid tht wht will u think abt me i don't wanted to lose ur frndshp bt nw i can't control my feeling nd i wanted to confesses thats why i made this plan if clg on sunday (i was in tears by nw)
Me - i love u tooo..
( i tiptoed nd kissed him nd poured all my love in tht kiss
we broke the kiss due to knock on the door my our lovely cupid cabiraaa
nd we smiled looking at each other)
THE END

Spare me for this crap nd sorry for the mistakes cmnt nd tell hw it is
Manan lover jagpreet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iloveSTARS143

Even though short..Its tooo cute.. You can write more OS's..😃😃


Thankuu dear
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