Tu hi Junoon...Manan FF / note pg 6 & chapter 3 on page 5 26/8

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

PROLOGUE...

A girl in her late twenties... Sitting in front of the dressing table in the attire of a bride , looking stunning beautiful, in the room of a complete stranger. Red swollen eyes and the tears flowing from them was the clear indication of her devastated state . She was continuously staring at the kum kum on her forehead and the mangalsutra around her neck.

Her eyes then fell the bed through the mirror that was beautifully decorated with different flowers and rose petals were scattered all over the bed. This day was suppose to be the best day of her life . This night , as she thought would be the night of their union , where she would happily surrender herself to him as this could be the only thing she would give in reward to the person who considers her life... Her sun... Her moon... Her star... Her universe... In short for him , living meant only to live for her and indeed he lived for her only... This is suppose to be their day... Their night...!!!! ... But...!!!! Destiny played its own game...

Tears were not stopping to flow from her eyes and her heart beats were racing as a bullet train in the fear that what will happen the very next moment. She opened her palms in her lap and saw the mehandi...

"I love this mehandi in your hands...!! " his words echoed in her mind and she closed her eyes tightly in rode to bear the pain. Tears again rolled her cheeks and some landed on her palm.

"Don't cry angel...!!!! For me...!!! Please...!!!" Again his words echoed. She with jerk opened her eyes and got up from the chair of dressing table. She looked here there as if he is hidden somewhere and asking her not shed those pearls as it always use to stab his heart.

Coming to reality again , she let out a loud cry and just fell on her knees . Crying her heart out , she couldn't blame anyone also for her condition.

"Sorryyy... I am really sorryyy...!!! " this was all she could manage to say between her cries and remembered the day it all started...

The day that began with the Warning of almighty that nothing will remain the same and it actually never became the same...

Index below

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

What happened with the girl...??? Why her most beautiful day turned out to be the worst for her. When he loved him so much... Why aren't they together..??? Whom she is sorry to...???

Well many questions ... Answers will be revealed soon...!!!

Should this FF continue...??? Please comment your views , as only then this FF's future will be decided...!!

INDEX :-

prologue and chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 1A & 1B - page 2

Chapter 2 - page 4

Chapter 3 - page 5

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star_struck

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Posted: 10 years ago

I'm confused re..what happened..whom she got married to..was it because of him..or her own decision...update soon!!..

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cutypie04

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting prologue dea. ...

Curious to know what happens nxt

Update soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 10 years ago

really interesting prologue

please do continue

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1

"Get up you lazy head...!!!" He said.

"Ummm..." But she was not in the mood .

"Listen stop troubling me ok... I know these antics of yours.. you purposely do this." He retorted pulling off the duvet from her.

"Sone do please.. whole night I was waiting for you.." she replied in her sleepy tone pullling the duvet again in her .

Now this made him feel guilty. How could he forget that she must have been waiting for him. Like every night. It was his duty to make her drift into her sweet slumber. She didn't slept any single night seeing his face just before she closes her eyes and the first face to see when she opens them. He looked at her. She was sleeping so peacefully. He checked the time it was just 6 am. He smiled at her and covered her properly with the duvet and himself slid beside her putting one hand across her head. Feeling him close , she snuggled more into him and wrapped her left arm across his waist. He smiled at her action and kept his right arm over her . After giving a small kiss on her temple , he too closed his eyes.

After 1 hour he opened his eyes , he didn't realise he too took a nap while she was sleeping . He checked his watch and then very lovingly caressed her hair and kissed them. She moved a bit.

"Bachaa..!! Wake up now.. it's 7..!"

She faintly opened her eyes to see his face and he gave her the morning gift. His smile and his kiss over her eyes. Yes , her daily morning gift by him.

Once to wake her up he kissed her eyes and that was the best morning gift , she could ever receive from anyone. She never expressed how much she loved his way of waking her up , but she never used to open her eyes until he kissed them. Slowly , but he understood what she wishes for , and she was overwhelmed that he got to know this without even her saying.

Receiving her gift , she opened her eyes and wished him , "good morning..!!"

"Good morning my Angel...!!!" He wished her back.

She sat up , rubbing her eyes and asked , "where were you last night..??"

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twilightangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

awsum chapter...

but short one update soon...

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Hetal sadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update
Interesting story
Continue soon

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sameeksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Little confusing...
But quiet interesting.
Liked it.
Cont soon dear.
LOve...mini

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 1A

She sat up rubbing her eyes and asked him , "where were you last night..??"

He too sat up and pleadingly looked at her. "Wo I was with my friends partying whole night and came around 4.." He held his ears and continued , "promise it won't happen next time.. Pakka wala..!"

"Nooo... You will have to pay for it." She complained like a child and turned her face. He chuckled on her antics and replied , "aacha okk... Tell me what my princess demands for ." He pulled her towards himself.

"Aaj ka poora din and poori raat you have to be with be." She ordered him pointing her finger. He instantly kissed her finger and said "ok..done."

She smiled the fullest and hugged him and in between the hug she kissed his cheek which he returned while kissing her hair.

"Waise nandu.. poora din to theek hai.. par poori raat ..??? I mean what you wanna do with me the whole night Haan..?? Iraada kya hai..??" He said to her raising her one eye and having his famous smirk after she broke the hug.

Her mouth took the shape of big O and she blushed. Seeing her all red due to blush , he smiled and continued his teasing , "bolo... Tell me.. what will we do in night..??"

Seeing no escape from his teasing session , she got up to get down from bed but he pulled her back.

"You got your morning gift.. where's mine..??" He whispered in his husky voice near her lips.

"This is cheating , I want my gift." He again whispered after planting a small kiss on the corner of her lips. She shyly smiled and closed her eyes. And the next moment , she could feel his lips on her. Sucking it , biting it , he did whatever he wished to and she allowed him. Responding with equal intensity , she pushed him back a little and he rested his back on head board.

He held her by her waist from his right hand and cupped her cheek from the other. She was constantly moving her left hand on his hair and at times holding them in her fist and with other she held his shoulder. He sucked her both lips and then finally bit the lower lip which made him enter her mouth. He tasted every corner of it as if it's the first time.

Feeling out of breath , they broke apart but the moment had got into them. He kissed her neck and then bit it. She hissed in pain and tighten her already closed eyes and her hold on him. To sooth the pain , he immediately licked the biiten part and gave wet kisses over it.

He swiftly moved her and made her lie on bed and came on top on her. He moved from one side of the neck to the other planting kisses on her collarbone , on throat , on her cleavage and then came to the other side of the neck. He did the same there. First kissed it and bit it and finally to sooth the pain licked it and gave wet kisses.

Having enough of her face and neck , again sealed his lips with her. But just a minute after it , there was a lighting in the sky with a loud sound , which scared her and she just pulled herself apart and closed her eyes tightly .

He was surprised on her behaviour , "hey what happened ..?? Did I hurt you..? look at me ..!" But she didnt opened her eyes.

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