manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016

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Maramkhan

@Maramkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Read all parts on one and I'm out of words.like hiw can a person write so beautiful. Your words has magic girl. It touches directly heart. Please update soon can't wait .I just wanna na what happened? Who's that guy ? Just wanna see manan together forever

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manikmalhotra2

@manikmalhotra2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

It's awesome .. fantastic... mind blowing. .. outstanding

You nailed it girl ... your story is so full of emotions ... love ... pain ... sorrow .. Tashan ... loneliness. ..friendship

I love it ... Hats off to u ... for writing such a complicated love story .. bcz it's really hard .. and in your story every emotion is perfectly and beautifully penned down

Manik is really a true lover ... He had been slapped e times by Nandini ... He is willing to soothe her pain

And Nandini ... I just fell like crying her .. even not knowing her past ... but still you penned it so beautifully that it feels like it us happening in real in front of our eyes

And poor Manik whatever he does ... Nandini always suspect him and misunderstood him and blame him ...

You story also has suspense ... Nandini's past ... A big question mark??... Manik's brother ... who ???

But still love your story for much ❤️

And THANKS A TON FOR THE PM BCZ OF YOUR PM I ABLE TO READ SUCH AN INCREDIBLE STORY ... OR I WOULD HAVE MISSED ... ITS ONLY BCZ OF YOUR PM THAT I AM READING IT IN A GO ... SO THANKS ONCE AGAIN😊

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Wow...so much action, he got closer to him and then the bombshell at the end, still kind of confused but can't wait for you to solve the mystery soon-great job...

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Danny92

@Danny92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Nice update emotional tha

Nandu is such a venerable state she is losing her control nd cryng like anything nd went out frm house nd went to beach she hugged manik nd cryied

Manik gets panic when she faints wat is her past eager to know

Who is the person abhi warned in the CLG to stay away frm his nd y nandu tryng to end her life nd that person is maniks brother so many questions answer thm soonnn

Watng fr nxt update

Continue sooonn

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k1nz

@k1nz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Awesome! ...thanx for the update

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

awesome update...

loved it...so much twists and turns...

aryaman is manik's brother...

nandu is again misjudging manik...thinking aryaman sent manik...

want to know more about what happened between nandu and aaryaman...

can't wait to see what happened next...keep up the good work and continue soon...

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tas456

@tas456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Awesome update

Pls update the next one soon

Take care and God bless

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

Awesome
Amazing
Superb
Emotional update
Wo person manik ka bhai hai...ab toh nandu aur hate kregi manik se...kon hai wo person jldi reveal kro...nandu ka past bhi
Nandu kitni pain mein hai...aliya mukti bhi apne aap ko control nhi kr payi...
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon

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shruti_soniii

@shruti_soniii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

no plzzz... continue...

I love ur story...
its just fab...

nd plzzz disclose the mystery soon...

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#430

it was heart wrenching ..
rula diya yaar ..

I love it ..
manik n nandani beach part was nice ..
without knowing she express her pain to pain ..
who is that person ..
cont soon.

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