manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

U didnt pm me sakshi...koi nai..dnt worry...
God!! Nandini is damn mysterious!!
Cabir holding manik's neck n bashing him..heheh...alya n chocolates!! Mukti-stinky clothes...dhruv..good boy...
Manik is not able to stop himself from thinking bout nandu...awww...choo chweet!!
My main question on d chappy-WHO IS GAUTAM? Coz just aftr dhruv said abt gautam n fab 5 spoke abt his bday nandu ws angry..literally she wud erupt like a volcano anytym!!!
Manik innocently asking sorry ws sweet:). Fab 5 hug...aww...FFs keep me happy wid cabir's existence coz onscreen im missin him badly!!
Nandu agn sneaked frm gurukul...ams held manik's hand!! Ams knows evrythin!!! Shocker!!! But y...what punishment she's talking bout??? Gautam?? Is she related to him?? She always addresses as "mumbai wale"...n gautam is fab 5's frnd...is evrythin connected?? Galti karke blame dusro pe daalte hai...this is what nandu said to fab 5 na...
Orphanage...y does ams stop her frm goin there???
Precap-omg! Nandu slapped manik!!! Fab 5 back to mumbai!! Itni jaldi!! I didnt expect it so early!! But m happy...nandu bhi jaegi??
Gosh! Am havin loads of questions in my mind..
Sakshi plz update soon!!






hawww who said i didnt pm me...i did...check ur inbox yr...
u r my fav reader give bada wala feedback lol...no offence i love all my readers who give comments short or long
ahhahaa..ya i thought to portray evry character that y...
manik is a lover boy yr...how can he stop thinking about our nandu...
omg there is a blast of questions from ur side...ekksss...so much desperate to know..m loving it...
but it will be revealed soon dont worry...
u will get to know all ur answers...whther its gautam or something else...😆😆😆😆😆
i love ur feedback...
stay tuned to know more...n thanx for bada wala feedback
ur answes will be given to ur soon
will surely update it soon

n ha is bar will pm u 2 times so that ..u will be ping 2 times for my update hahhaahha

love
sakshi😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Hey

It's an amazing
Part
Nandu is
So mysterious
Now please continue soon
And thanks for pm
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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thnx for appriciating it soo much dear
stay tuned to know y nandu is so misterious...
will surely update it soon...
love
sakshi😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 86MISHA

awesome story

loved it
update soon
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thnx for appriciating it soo much
stay tuned
will surely update it soon...
love
sakshi😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!! what an amazing story...jus now i read all part in 1 go...i jus loved it each and every part...u penned it so beautifully...the way u write is jus outstanding..
m totally in love with ur ff..
must say that ur story is just mindblowing...i jus can't describe it in words..hats off 2 u dea
i have mo words...m totally speechless...pplss make manan cute n romantic scene...next part make it manan scene
n tnqu soo much for such a wonderful story...plsss update soon...cant wait more...
desperately waiting for next update..
KEEP WRITING
LOTS OF LOVE...TC
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

wow!! what an amazing story...jus now i read all part in 1 go...i jus loved it each and every part...u penned it so beautifully...the way u write is jus outstanding..
m totally in love with ur ff..
must say that ur story is just mindblowing...i jus can't describe it in words..hats off 2 u dea
i have mo words...m totally speechless...pplss make manan cute n romantic scene...next part make it manan scene
n tnqu soo much for such a wonderful story...plsss update soon...cant wait more...
desperately waiting for next update..
KEEP WRITING
LOTS OF LOVE...TC


thnx alot for appriciating my story
y said u have no words...still u described it very beautifully
thnx for the feedback that means a lot to me...
u love when u guyzz appriciate my ff...
will surely update it soon
stay tuned...to know more about my ff..
thnx for the feedback once again
love
sakshi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

hiii happy janmashtmi too all...u no y guyzz are sad coz of no manan..even m sad..but i was cofused to write this ff or not..when there is no manan but i have decided i will write it for love of our manan...for hmesha...


Part 6

Ams-ab maine tumhe bata dia jo tumhe janna tha...ki nandu kaha jari hai..ab mujhe ye janna hai..ki tum ye q janna chahte the ki nandu kaha jari hai...q uska pichha krte hoo...

Manik panicked because of question because he don't have any ans..y he always wanna see her...y he always wanna know that where she went last night..y he was so curious to see a glamps of her...y he was feeling worried..when her hand got cut coz of glas...y he can see her crying...in afternoon..he got panicked listening to her sobs...

Ams-mein kuch pochh ri hu...

m-vo guruma..mein...vo...mein...

ams-dekoo..manik... nandu se dur raho...jo tum chah rhe hoo ya krna chah rhe hoo...vo nhi ho skta...mein apni nandu ko or dukhi nhi dekh skti...tum yaha music seekhne ae ho na...to vo hi karo...stay away from nandu...

m-mgr kyu...i mean..aise q kr rhe h ap...meinq use dukh dunga...mein to bas...

manic again loss of word...what to say...coz his inner feeling was saying he just wanna know about her...be with her...

when they heard a car break...both look at the direction...a lady in kanjiwaram pink saree...and a man in a business come there...

ams-chlo...dey both hide ..somewheere and that couple went inside the orphanage...

ams-ye kaun hai...

manic and ams again peep inside...children were playing..but nandini was no where seen...

lady(sheena)-hello bacho..tumhare sath yaha koi bada hai...

all nodded -haa didi...

man(yogesh)- bulao unh eek bar...

all the children run inside..nandini was in washroom..he came out...yes she was crying her eyes was red and swellon..she don't wanna cry in front of her kids...so went to washroom...

baby girl-didi didi...niche koi aya hai...chlo...

n-kaun aya hai...

they all come outside..saw sheena and yogesh was sitting on sofa...

n-yes...

couple stand up and they both greeted...

n-pls sit...rohit...pani lana...ap logo ko yaha pehle dekha nahi...

y-ji..hm yaha se nahi hai..hme pata laga ki yaha ek orphanage hai..or bht pyar bache hai yaha...

n smile and look at her kids..give them flying kiss...they all give her flying kiss...manik and ams was smiling at nandu and kids..

n-to ap yaha ...mi smjhi nhi...

s-actually...hm yaha ek baby adopt krne ae hai...

nandu who was smiling..her smile got vanished...even ams her smile got vanished...but manic was happy a girl is getting home...

nandu become hell angry but she don't wanna burst in fron of kids...rohit and sagar was there...who was also totally shoked...she signal them to tke kids inside...once the kids are gone

n-hm yaha bache adoption k liy nhi dete(calmly don't wanna burst out)

s-dekhiye...orphange mi to aisa hi hota hai...

n become angry but she is controllinh herseld...

ams-ayiappa...kuch karo...mein waha nahi ja skti..nandu if she lost her control on her angr...pta nahi kya kregi..

manic overheard it..but he was confused...y nandini don't want kids to get a proper home ,care and safety...

n-or orphanage mein hota hoga yaha nhi..so plsss...jaioye...she is hell controlling her angr...

y-dekhiye...i no...yaha bht formalities hoti hai..but trust us...we have our own business in Mumbai..we are one of the rich families...bache k ohm koi problem nhi ane denge...we will protect them...if u want money...u tell us...ucan pay u..as much as u want..we just want a baby

listening Mumbai..her temper rised..like they add fuel in fire...her eyes was blooed red in angr..

ams-mumbai...shit..ayippa ab kaunsmbhalega nandu ko..jenny kha hai...she quickly dailed jenny's no as tell her to come to orphanage now...yes jenny and ams were hiding from nandu..that ams know nandu usually come to orphanage...manik was hell confused..ab Mumbai se kya link h iske gusse ka...

m-p btaingi...ho kya rha hai...ye adopt krne deri...

they both heard nandu shouting on them...again look inside the house

n-get the hell out of here...rich...hoo..business.isliy u play with anyone's feelings...or ha ye bache bikau nahi hai..ye mere bache hai...m not here to sell kids...do u get thats...bache chaiy to khud k karo...

manic shokedto listen to her...he become angy now..how can sh say have their own kids...may be they have some issues or something elese...manik s=go inside the house..

ams-manik...shit...ayiappa

m-nandini..how can u tlk to someone like that...ye unka personal matter hai...

n shok to see manic there...

n-tum yaha kya kr ri h..dekho I cant fight with u...jao yaha se...

m-no...frstly...they have a right to adopt a baby...

n-dey have but not from here...

m-y..y cant u see children happy..u don't u want to have asafe life...ye bache orphan hai...they have a right to have a family...

n-manik(shout on him)-dont u dare tocall them orphan...ye mere bache hai...ye orphan nhi hai...

m-nandini..try to understand..this is necessary for their future...

n-now I got it..ye log Mumbai se yaha kaisepahuche...tumne bulaya h na inhe...tumne dekha hoga..how can I b happy...with these childrenryt,..tumrich..spoil brats..cant see anyone happy in front of u...

m-anndini maine inhe nhi bulaya...but meri bt to smjho..ur children need a house...

n-dey have a house...

m-dey need family

n-m their family...

manic hold her arm tightly-kyu tum nhi smjh ri hoo..ek bache k liy family imp hoti h...

n-manik chodo mujhe...mere bacho k pas mein hu...

when a small come there-didi...

all of their attention towards a girl..

m(yo nandini)-mein batta hu whom they need...

manic goto a small girl kneel down in front of her-hi baby..tumhe mumma papa chaiy na...

girl look innocently at mani..

n-manik(shout) don't u dare to drag her...meeti ap andr jao

manic ignore

m-bolo na...u need a house and mumma papa na...

n-manik m sayinglast time...dont ask her such questions.

m-y...if she want a family..to tum q nhi jane ri use..mein isse bs ye hi pochh rha hu...(to meeti)bolo beta u need a family ryt...

when fab 4 arrive there they heard all their convo or nandini and manic..n was shoked to see manic like this..caring about someone..a baby...

n-manik..

nandini goto him make him make himstand and slap him hard .evryone was shoked..ams shoked because nandini say harsh words but didn't reacted this way ever fab 4 was shoked someone slapped manic..done one dare to say a word to him but nandini slapped him...-how dare u..to intrfare in my matters...get the hell out of here...chle jao yaha see..tumhare shakal nhi dekhni mujhe...kisi ki b nhi..out of my property now...

manic was shoked holding his cheek..but it not enough yet-y..q...ye bache hai..tum inke sath nhi khel skti..ye inki life a sawal hai...

n-ye mere bache hai.or inhe koi nhi chaiy...mein hu inke sath jao tum yaha se...or (to couple) ap log b ..mere bcho se koi aise behave krega mein sehn nhi krugi...i will not tolerate...tum lgoo ka kam hai..emotions..feelings...tum logo uski..kadar kaha hai..ae bada bache lene...get the hell out of here...

couple went...when jeeny come saw ams full in tears..she singal jeeny to goto her..as she cant goto her...jeeny went to nandini...who was hugging a small girl meeti...and fab 4 went to manic

c-manik chl yaha se...

manic look at nandini...

he turn when meeti say to nandini

m-didi...ye mumma papa kya hota hai...

manic turn in shok n look at meeti...evry other child was too there of the orphanage...manik thought small girl is asking who is mother n a father...

nandini was shoked to hear this...meethi again asked

m-didi bolo na ye mumma papa kya hota hai (shaking nandini)

nandini was loss of words don't no how to xplain to these children...

all children ask together-mumma papa kya hota didi...

manic was shoked too much what he has done how will nandini handle the situation..when jeeny signal rohit to take kids inside

rohit-chlo bacho..u no what mein sabke liy chocolates laya hoo room mein h..kaun pehle lega...

children run inside followed by rohit n sagar

nandni was sitting on her kness was hell shoked..when jeeny hug her..n look at her...n cry like anything-anty...dekha apne...pehli br unhone pochha b to kya pochha...kya bolu unhe..kya hota hai mumma kaha...kaun hote hai mumma papa...(hug her tightly)..manik was guilty he cant see her crying..he make her stand and nandini look angrily at him..n slap him again hold his collar fab 4 and everyone in room was shoked again-how dare u...jo ques mein unse chhupa ri ti..how dare u to ask them again...sahi kaha tha maine..tum rich spoil brats ko koi kadar nhi hoti kisi ki feeling ki(she was shouting like maniac)..ab bolo kya jawab du bolo bolo do u have ans...manik don't have any ans he look down...he don't have any...

n-bolo mr. Manik malhotra..kya olu unhe..kya hote hai..mom...jo hme janam deti hai...papa ko hme smbhalte hai..chlna sekhate hai...vo mom dad..jo inhe jba chhod gaye...jab unhone apni ache b nhi kholi ti..ye bolu...bolo...she push him back...leaving his collar...

manic don't have ans...looking down in guilt..

n-tumhara kya bigadta hai..emotions k khelo or chle jao...kaise hm smbhalte hai apne apko..hm jante hai..tumhe koi frk nhi pdhta..chle jao yaha manic..get lost from here...or ek request or...age se mere orphanage ne kisi parent ko mt bhejna adoption k liy

manic look at her nodded no nandini maine nhi bheja unhe

giving him disgust look she run inside ...

ams comes inside once nandini is gone-ap log jaiye yaha (to fab 5)..mi nyonika malhotra se bt kr lungi...ki mein training k liy free nehi hu.ap log mum...mum...mumbai wapas jaiye(she stammers even taking name of mumabi)

even look down say sory for what they have done ...where manic was stil looking at the direction where nandini left...

d-manik chl...hme pakcing krni h...

m(he wasn't listening he was thinking abt nandini ..how muchpain was there in her eyes...her heart her eyes she is full of pain...aisa kya hua hai jo ye aise)

cabir shok hi-manik...

m look at him

c-chl...

manic-mujhe nandini se bt krni h

mu-nhi..tu chl rha h..bht tamasah ho gaya hai...

they all drag him out..ams followed them to gurukul..

they all did packing...but manic was lost..fab 4 look at him aliya was in tears since the orpahange seen thinking about babies ...how innocently they asked nandini..dhruv was consoling her..mu., c when to him ..he thought he is lost..how can someone use harsh words for him...slap him..but manic was thinking how will she handle kids now...what will she ans them he was feeling guilty...

c, mu-chle manik...

manic nodded..they all took guruma's ashirwad...manik said soryy for what he did..guruma nodded...manik was looking at each n evry corner of gurukul...on terrace where she got glimpse of nandini...on dinning table...where...give them deadly glare...n she was in tears for some reason...in corridor..where she told themnot to mess with her...

they come towards the entrance sit in car..when saw nandni coming...fab 5 look at nandini..she look at them...manik..look at her eyes..her eyes was swollen and red due to crying ..ne move towards her to say sory...when she went to guruma without listening to him

n-ams...vo ..mein ye kah riti..mein aj smriti k ghr rukugi...uski tabiat thk nhi h ..subh jaldi ajaungi (actually she wanna stay in orphanage )..

guruma nodded..nandini went inside..without turning back...manik close his eyes...sit in car..and fab 5 start their journey back to Mumbai...

precap- manik and nandini face off in mumbai

guyzz please hit like and give feedback about the update n if want pm for further updates...do send me buddy request...

love

sakshi😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
so much happened ???

waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum update...
looking forward to know what happened in nandini's life that she is so much shattered...what is connection of mumbai in her life...
and y she hides from everyone that she goes to orphanage...
y she is hating manik...
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
very sentimental chapter
dam i had tears in my eyes
ohh god 😭😭😭
poor nandu...
manik y dnt u understand when to react and how to react and whr to react !!

btw sakshi,
i like dis story ...
dnt keep saying read if u want or ignore...
i dnt ignore wat i like...i like this story :) :) :)
update next part soon ! :)

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