manan dark ff:u r mine,only mine!!!note on pg 40 - Page 12

Originally posted by: HTA111

Omg that was mindboggling wonderful update

Manik is totally crazy for her even killed his friends to be with her and he just can't lose her it make him mad and a totally different person he just wants loves from her as may be his childhood memories were harsh and it make him broken

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

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Originally posted by: cutypie04

Wow interesting update dea. ...

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thanksss...i'll update soon!!

Intrestg story. ...pls continue soon.& pm me pls

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Oh god what

A story

Its too different

from other

Thanks for

Writing it

I really like it

God it's so interesting

I mean I really want

to knew what happen

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Next part asap

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Originally posted by: Deepasara

Intrestg story. ...pls continue soon.& pm me pls

thankxxx...ill cont.soon...i'll pm u for sure!!!

Amazing one
Thts a totally DIFFIRENT concept in the forum
Would love to read more

Nice .. when will u update next part ??? Cntiune soon ... :-)

Please yer...apna fan ko it na tarpana ache bat nahe ha. Hum kab sa wait kar raheho. 😭

*U R MINE,ALL MINE*

Chapter 1b

Nandini's p.o.v

Why??why always me??did I do anything wrong that I m suffering so much!!i just feel like killing myself...i don't want to suffer,I had enough of this!!!i don't want to see his face again...I saw there was sharp knife near me...manik had thrown it there...my hands were trying to get the knife...but I was not been able to...so, I crawled on the floor...and luckily,the knife reached my hand...i cutted the ropes...I knew manik'll come to me,if he thinks that I'll try to kill myself...i grabed the vase from the side table and threw it on the floor...and started smashing things that were on the room...

Manik's p.o.v

I was taking food and clothes for her...when suddenly, I could hear sounds of breaking and throwing things...what is she trying to do now?? An unknown fear crept in my mind..is she trying to commit suicide??noo...noo..noo...she wont do that...I know she wont,she loves me!!!but what is she???

I went upstairs...and directly unlocked the door and saw her...pacing around the room...I was relieved seeing her that she is fine...yes,she is not fine but she is fine in my words...

Nandini's p.o.v

I saw him...and I started acting like I m feeling devastated...i knew he would panick like this and come running to me like a maniac...I expected it...but I didn't expect the worry that was written in his face actually...i am overthinking maybe!!!nandini!!!stop yourself...you cant fall weak!!i mentally patted myself!!

He came towards me and directly took me to a bone crushing hug!!i was shocked by his sudden move...I thought maybe he ll question me like how I got rid of the ropes??but that didn't came up...

Manik:nandini,r u okay??

I came into reality...when he spoke...i was stunned by my own act that I was letting him hug me...and I jerked him away from me!!!

Nandini:manik,why r u doing these to me??

Manik:what have I done now???

Nandini:cant you just stop youself from showing fake love and concern towards me??(I spoke rudely)

Manik:(he kneeled down infront of me)nandini this is not fake!!!!my love is genuine and true...maybe I realized it later...but pls accept me...!! Because I m nothing without u...

He took my hands and kissed on the knuckles...

I jerked my hand away from his hand...

Nandini:manik why r u stuck with me???just let go off me!!!

Manik:I wont...nandini...till my last breath...

Nandnini:then,u r only the one responsible for what I m going to do now!!

I looked for the knife which I had thrown earlier...and I spotted it lying in the floor,little far away from me...but he traced my eyes!!!

I hurriedly ran towards the place where the knife was lying!!and I was about to grab the knife when suddenly a pair of hands caught me by my waist...and carried me in his shoulders...I was yelling and crying at the same time!!

Manik:stop yelling,nandini!!ur cries cant be heard here!!

He was actually yelling at me, like I am his prey and he would eat me up!!

He throwed onto the bed!!

He came towards me...and with each passing second,he was opening one of his shirt buttons...I was scared..i started to crawl back in fear...when suddenly,I realized that my back hitted on the wall,and now there is no escape from the wildbeast...

I frightenedly closed my eyes not knowing what is coming next...

Manik:nandini,look at me(he said sternly)

I opened slowly!!

He putted my chin up...

He directly fused his lips with mine and started kissing me...his whole body was rubbing with mine!!!he was sucking and biting my lips..he pulled me more closer to him!!and he swiftly went inside my mouth and started moulding his lips with mine!!i was trying to push him away from me but he was so hard...he started to explore my mouth deeply...he was giving too much force in my lips...and he started to dominate me with his tongue...i left a moan as I was having lack of oxygen...and he irritately broke the kiss...

I instantly breath imeediately...

Manik:this kiss is because to remind you that how many a times u do something which makes me angry,u'll be punished hard very hard...and also to remind u that u r mine,all mine!!

Tears started streaming from my eyes...i don't know why all this happens to me only!!i was cursing my badluck...but manik didn't care!!

He picked up his shirt..and worn it...

Nandini:manik,u cheated me on that day!!!(I said sobbingly)

I said as I was too hurt from inside...i don't know what led me but I did go down the memory lane which left me shattered...

He looked at me for a moment...maybe he was confused...what was I trying to tell??

Manik:(I know,I was at fault,but cant we have a fresh start(he said softly)

Nandini:we cant!!!manik!!!do u even remember what you did to me??

He looked down at guilt...

Manik:but nandini,do u remember we were perfect...all said,we are made for each other,we are meant to be...

Nandini:we were,manik!!we were!!

My tears started to flow from my eyes...I had so much in myself...

I was crying!!!he still effect me,the way he used to effect me before!!

I am fed up!!!fed up of myself!!!

Manik:pls...nandini...don't cry like this!!!i know,I had hurt u,and I had hurt u to a great extent!!cant we just forget the past and begin from the beginning...!!!from the very first day,I proposed u at college...he asked with a ray of hope sparkling in his eyes...

I controlled myself from throwing out all my emotions...I rubbed the tears off my eyes!!

Nandini:I know what u mean by love???love is having a girlfriend to show off and on the other hand,having night stands with random girls..cheating the girlfriend who loved u immensely,isn't it???i said angrily..

Manik:it is not like that...yes I admit that what I did was wrong!!cheating on my love of my life was wrong!!but I did realized it...and I apologise for that!!!

Nandini:a small realization and apology is not enough to remove the pain which you had caused to me!!

Manik:I beg u,nandini!!i beg u...(tears started to well up in his eyes)I have changed...changed for good...

Nandnini:this is what u r change..torturing me more is a change!!(I yelled)

Manik:just stop it,nandini!!i had enough of this!!(he shouted at me in top of his voice)

He slapped me hard on my face..my whole cheek turned red,red due to the force he hitted me on my cheek...

Nandini:thanks...manik for reminding me that people like u cant be good...maybe,I was expecting too much from u...that u may have changed...(I said angrily and sobbingly too)...

I m sorry for the super late update!!So done with chapter 1b...and guys thanks for showering with so much of comments and 100+ likes in the 1^st chapter itself...that is something which makes me happy...and keep liking and loving my story...thank u guys...and ofcorse don't foget to hit the like buttons...and silent readers pls...like it...atleast...it motivates me llot...and ofcoarse comment lamba wala karna to get a lamba wala update nxt time!!!chota doge to chota hi milega...

Now,#ok thanks bye!!

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