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Posted: 10 years ago
It's gonna be tought fr manik
Continue soon
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Bang on confrontation. ..👏👏👏. Very good nandni. ...I like her this brave girl. 😛. Answer ...
No trust. Yes manik need this answer. .now he actually know what he did. .. a sin in the name of love. ..very good, nice, beautifully described by our dear author😛👏⭐️.I just loved it. ..she is not girl who accept his words apologies. ..he did sin in the name of love. ..bang on...👏👍🏼.keep up. ..thanks for sharing. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Hola people... sorry for not posting at usual time...office and work kept me busy... hope you like this...from next update I promise to write lamba... do shower your love to me...


Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 72


Every action has an equal and opposite reaction... And now Manik knew this perfectly fits him.. He was a boy who knew who to love others as he loved his DJ and his friends.. He was a boy who had a scarred heart which refused to heal and and he wore a hard shell to protect his heart.. And he was also the boy who found his healer in a girl who just loved him with all her heart and yet this boy threw it all away because the shell he was wearing as protection got into his blood..


Nandini's words echoed in his ears as he stood frozen.. "I love you Manik but i don't trust you.." he had both happiness and sadness as she loved him but she didn't believe his love.. with tears swelling his eyes manik turned around and ran to nandini "what should i do nandini for you to trust me.." manik was crying leaving Dj, abhi and cabir surprised.. they have never seen manik cry and beg for forgiveness but today he was standing there in front of her and asking for her forgiveness... 'nandini i am ready to do whatever you say but trust me nandini i have changed.. changed for you..changed for us.." manik tried to cup her face with is hands but she looked at the other side..


"nandini.." DJ finally spoke "manik is right beta..he has really changed..I think you should forgive him..." nandini looked at DJ all shocked and asked "DJ i know you love manik he is your grandson but keep yourself in my place and please tell me if you can forgive manik.." Hearing this DJ stood speechless as she knew nandini was right... "i am the one who had loved and lost.. i am the one who still feel the pain and will always feel the pain.. I respect you very much DJ but please don't don't ask me to do this.." nandini folded her hands in front of DJ and was crying.. DJ held her hands and hugged her.. nandini was sobbing and saying "go away manik..go away manik.."


cabir and abhi looked at each and other decided to take manik away.. cabir came and pulled manik away.. manik was not ready to leave.. "cabir.." he shouted.. "manik... try and understand the situation yaar.." cabir said.."abhi tu chal yahan se..." and he dragged him away...once manik left the room abhi came and sat next to nandini "nandini relax manik is gone.." "what? he left.. i knew he would.." nandini said as she looked around.. "haan.. arre tumne hi kaha na chale jao woh aur ab you are saying he's gone.." abhi said laughing...


"abhi.." dj gave him a glare.. "why are you laughing.. is this the situation..." DJ and nandini looked at abhi.. "DJ first she says manik go away and now he's gone she waants him back.. nandini what's up.." abhi was laughing.. DJ was smiling and nandini made an angry face... abhi smiled and sat near her "nandini even a sinner gets one chance and i know manik did bad very bad but manik deserves a chance.." abhi said.. "nandini he is sorry and he accepts his biggest and it can't get better than this so please think once and try and forgive manik.. i am not asking you to forgive him right now but nandini try and look at the truth and love in his eyes.. feel his tears.." abhi said patting nandini's head..


meanwhile cabir and manik drove to malhotra mansion.. manik came out of the car all broken and walked to his room all hurt and lost.. he slumped on his bed and closed his eyes and a few tears escaped his eyes.. cabir was standing near him and it pained him to see the ever invincible manik malhotra lost and he couldn't let him loose.. all his life manik gave everything to his friends..stood up for them..he was their shield but today for today for the first time he wanted something for himself and he wanted it badly..


manik felt cold..he felt breathless..he loved nandini and he was not running away from the truth now but he had done enough damage; he also knew that.. "what is nandini is never able to forgive me?" manik's heart sank as this thought crossed his mind.. he sat down in jerk and wiped tears.. cabir sat down next to him and said "manik.." that as enough for manik to loose himself.. he hugged cabir and cried.. "how could i do this cabir.. how could i hurt her.." manik was sobbing like a kid.. "i don't deserve her cabir..she is right..she would never forgive me.. i lost her.." manik tears and pain just seem endless..


finally cabir spoke "manik get a grip of your emotions.. you can't loose yourself like this.." "What do you want me to do cabir..didn't you see how angry she is?" Manik got up and started pacing.. "excatly.." cabir said "she is angry manik and rightfully.. but the biggest thing is that you accepted your mistake and now you have to work on make it right.." hearing this manik sat on couch listening to cabir.. "manik she's hurt..be her healer..she said she doesn't trust you then make her trust you.." cabir's words made manik hopeful again.. "manik she is nandini the girl with the purest heart and that heart has only love for you.. and if you try her anger will melt.." Manik smiled hearing this and thought "yes my nandini has the purest heart.."


He looked at cabir and gave his signature smirk and said "get ready nandini murthy to be charmed by manik malhotra.." and he ran out.. cabir sighed and said to himself "lo ho gaya.. now he will go overboard.." and smiled...


It was late in the night and Nandini was sleeping peacefully.. manik slowly sneaked into the room and a sweet smile came on his face as he saw her.. he walked upto her and kissed her forehead and slept next to her hugging her and whispered "I am not running away this time nandini..bring on your anger miss murthy i am ready.." he kissed her cheek and slept...


End of part 72..

ciao..love..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey! I just started reading your ff today!
Everybody was telling me to read this and now I know why!
And man! I didn't move an inch since I started! I read all the 72 parts in one go! I still couldn't get enough of it!
First, daring Nandini was nice!
And Dracula and Laddoo part was so cute man!
And then the Love part started, I actually thought Manik wasn't going to avenge but alas!
I cried and cried seeing her in pain! He was also in pain but his ego was bigger!
I've never cried so much reading an ff, even if I did, it would be only one or two chapters but this! Man! I cries harder reading about her pain!
I hated it when he again started being with Alya in front of Nandu! So much pain!
And Nandu became DJ's assistant and Manik's manager!
She threw water on him! Hahahahaha
Manik can't even get up without drinking tea made by her!
I got so involved in your story that I lost track of time!
DJ-cabir-Dhruv-Abhi did right to try to bring Manik back on the right track!
But as it is said, you don't understand the value of something unless you are on the verge of losing it.
And the same thing happened here!
I can't wait to see how Manik will get his Nandu's trust!
It will be a very difficult job but he will do it!
Do continue soon!
Please PM me if it isn't a problem :)
Loads and loads of Love, Pari :)
Edited by DWJensenackles - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved it
finally manik on tract to get her trust
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now what is manik upto and nandini had right thing i dont want her to forget manik easily he should bear the consiquenses for what he has done
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww superb update
lovd cabir dialogue he ll go ovrbrd now haha:-P
likd manik attitude:-D
brng it on wow
fab update
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update and damm cute too..
Love the way abhi tease her when nandini ask that manik has gone..hehe.
So finally cabir ne apne cupidgiri start kar de..
Manik is back on his naughty mood and determined to bring his nandini in his life..
Awesome..
Update soon.
Love...mini

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