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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Superb update
Manan part was superb
And last part the song and manan update was amazing
But fab4 and Abhi saw manan together
But actually abhi,cabir,dhruv already knew about manan and mukti also little bit likes nandini
But really how will mukti and aliya react
But the main problem is aliya what she will do
Hope she won't create any problem between manan
Loved the update
Update the next part soon

Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG...Awsum update...loved the way manik was teasing nandu manik and nandu's dance
You have pen down everything so amazingly..i mean really best updates...shocking...fab4 abhi ko pta chal gaya...but cabir dhruv and abhi to knws..mukti kinda like her...but hope aliya problems create na kare "
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Anu! Thanks for updates yaar woh b of 3 chapters! Wow 😳
Love MaNan scenes & Actually I'm fond of ur This FF! everyday, actually every 3-4 hours I refresh page of ur FF to find new update & whenever I find new my face always lit up like 1000 watt bulb! Thanks for this Yaar!

& As always I say u're a brilliant writer!
Ab 1 twist daal dia Fab4 Get to Know! Hahaha! Achaaa hai... Pata lag gaya! Hatts off to ur mind... 👏

I want u to take ur FF sooo long! & wish u all the best for that... Always satisfy with ur chapters & Plsss update soon n woh b badi wali Plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
You always write beautifully.
Your narration of each and every incident and emotion is so good that i actually can imagine everything happening.
Its is like i am watching a MaNan movie with just happiness, love, nd romance...which is all I want. This is one reason i never want this ff to end.
You wrote a song sequence which was again Amazing.
Your 99th post. So congratulations. May you writ 999 more.
Happy writing to u. Nd happy reading to us.
Your updates always make me smile nd blush.
Thankyou for writing this awesome story.
Lots of love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
U always write amazing 3 chapters to gather it was amazing

plz update 100th soon waiting to fab 4 and abhi reaction especially Aliya

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was amzing story to read u pinned very neatly love ot read it
manik was full mode to tese nandu in every word of her
nandu dance imaging manik bt he was really present
fab4 n abhi shd knw bt waiting hw they gng to react
continue soon stay blessed
keep writing keep smiling
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PART 100A :


Abhi,kabir and dhruv will be tensed seeing mukthi and alia expressions.

They slowly walk towards manan while they both stood looking them and then each other at every now and then.

Finally they all reach near manan and were standing opposite to them.

Everyone was looking manik while alia was busy staring nandini in anger.

Kabir and dhruv look each other and nod their heads as a no. No one was speaking and finally after a long time mukthi breaks the silence

MUKTHI : chel kya raha hain

Nandini looks down silently while manik was rubbing his chin and looking sideways.

MUKTHI : manik main kuch puchri hoon

KABIR : mukthi wo

MUKTHI : don't you dare to speak anything kabir

DHRUV : wo mukthi actually

MUKTHI : manik ke alawa koyi bi apna muh nahi kolega koyi bi nahi and looks kabir and dhruv angrily

Kabir and dhruv close their eyes and then look manan

MUKTHI : so mr manik malhotra kya aap please batha sakthe hain ki thodi der pehle aap dono ke beech kya hora tha

Manik takes a deep breath and then mukthi actually jo tum logon ne dekha matlab wo hug

MUKTHI : manik hamne sab dekha

Manik looks kabir and dhruv and then sab????

MUKTHI : tum logon ki dance se leke hug thak sab kuch

Manan close their eyes tightly and looks down.

Alia slowly goes near to nandini and stands in front her. Nandini had her eyes still closed but manik opens his eyes and gets worried seeing alia looking nandini with anger.

Except nandini all were looking alia. She suddenly raises her hand to slap nandini but manik holds her hand in time.

MANIK : alia kya karri ho

Nandini opens her eyes and understands that alia was going to slap her. She doesn't say anything and simply stares at alia.

ALIA : manik hath chodo mera

MANIK : promise me that you won't do anything to her

Alia jerks his hand and looking nandini "kya kiya tumne"

MANIK : listen alia

Alia hits forehead of nandini and bolo kya kiya tumne haa koyi kala jadu kardiya kya manik par hmmm

MANIK : alia what are u saying

Nandini nods her head as no and alia jaise tum samjri ho vaisa kuch bi nahi hain

ALIA : acha tho mujhe samjao na phir kaisa hain

MANIK : alia tum

Alia slowly starts walking making nandini move backwards

ALIA : maine kuch din tumhe ignore kya kardiya tumne tho apna kaam hi pura kardiya kyun

ABHI : alia tum

ALIA : no one should speak a word and get that clear into your brains

Abhi looks manik angrily and nods his head as no

MUKTHI : alia dekh tu

ALIA : don't stop me mukthi not this time

MUKTHI : par alia

Alia raises her hand to stop and so miss nandini moorthy finally won the mission of traping the manik malhotra hain na

Nandini couldn't utter a word and was shivering

MANIK : alia stop all this nonsense

ALIA : THE MANIK MALHOTRA jiske liye FAB 5 apni zindagi hain aur jiske liye apne dostho se badkar kuch nahi hain aaj use apni best friend ki bathe nonsense lagri hain aur kyu because of u nandini only u

Manik holds alia and what's wrong with u alia ye kya bolthi jari ho I know Jo bi tum logon ne dekha uske baad you might be having so many questions par

ALIA : questions nahi manik jo bi hamne dekha uske baad puchne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hain its very clear that this bloddy girl has trapped you and made you fall for her

MANIK : alia aisa kuch nahi hain usne mujhe trap nahi kiya hain

ALIA : manik tumhe kuch samaj nahi ara hain main shuru se bolri thi ki ye ladki bahuth chalak hain par kisine meri bath nahi mani

MANIK : common alia ye tum

ALIA : manik main sach bolri hoon tum nahi samjre hoon ye ye tumhare sath dance karri thi baar baar tumhare paas ari thi aur wo kiss usine tumhe kiss kiya manik tumne nahi

Nandini had tears in her eyes and was just looking manik and alia with blurred eyes

MANIK : alia tum apne senses main nahi ho

ALIA : nahi manik tum apne senses main nahi ho

MANIK : kabir please take her away
Hum baad main bath karthe hain

Kabir tries to come forward but alai jerks manik and aaj mujhe koyi nahi rok saktha koyi bi nahi

MANIK : alia listen and tries to hold her but she pushes him and walks towards nandini

Abhi goes beside nandini and holding her dekho alia hum iske bare main baad main bath karthe hain and tries to move with nandini

ALIA : kaise kiya tumne nandini kaise

Abhi tries to go in front of alia but she pushes him too and while he was about to fall mukthi holds him
And makes him stand straight

MUKTHI : alia manthi hoon ki Jo kuch bi hamne dekha wo shocking tha par iske liye ham sirf nandini ko blame nahi kar sakthe

ALIA : kyu nahi mukthi kyu nahi jo kuch bi hua hain ya pichle kuch dino se hora hain uske liye sirf aur sirf nandini hi zimedar hain

MANIK : what

ALIA : pichle kuch dino main manik mai kaafi sare changes aye hain wo nandini ke bina class attend nahi kar tha hain wo nandini ke bina lunch nahi kartha hain wo nandini ke bina do minute bi nahi rehpatha hain aur Jo bi kartha hain sirf nandini ke sath kartha hain aur tum mujhe bathari ho ki mujhe isse akele blame nahi karna chahiye

MUKTHI : exactly mukthi Jo bi hua hain manik bi involved hain uss main

ALIA : tum samaj nahi rahi ho mukthi isne badi chalaki se apni plan ko exicute kiya hain thaki ham sab manik pe dought kare aur

MUKTHI : alia ye tu kya bolri hain tu kyu baar baar sirf nandini ko blame karri hain

Alia laughs leaving everyone shocked and slowly looking nandini mujhe laga kahi na kahi mukthi meri bath ko samjegi par nahi tune tho use bi apni tharaf karliya hain

MUKTHI : alia aisa nahi hain main bas ye

ALIA : chod mukthi mujhe samaj main agaya hain ki isne tum sabloko apni tharaf karliya hain

MUKTHI : alia hame bath ek topic pe karni hain lekin ham bath kar kisi aur hi topic pe hain

ALIA : congratulations miss nandini moorthy you made the most handsome hunk fall in your trap and not only that you even got succeeded in making his best friends fools lekin unfortunately main tumhare trap main nahi aayi

DHRUV : alia please

KABIR : you are talking bullshit

MUKTHI : please hosh main aa

Alia smiles and "I knew this would happen some day"

MANIK : guys ham baad main bath karenge she is not in her senses

DHRUV : alia tum please jake fresh ho jao

KABIR : ham thodi der baad iske bare main bath karenge

ALIA : I need an answer from you all

KABIR : alia maine kaha na

ALIA : yes or no bas itna bathana hai

DHRUV : alia tum

ALIA : aap logo mere side ho ya nandini ke

MANIK : ye kaisa sawal hain alia

DHRUV : ham kisike side pe bi kyu honge

MUKTHI : alia tu sach main pagal ho gayi hain

KABIR : ham kisi ke bi side main nahi hain alia

Alia once again turns to nandini and now this your biggest achievement right you started breaking FAB 5

MANIK : enough is enough alia stop blaming her for everything

ALIA : main ek baar nahi sow baar bolungi hamare beech Jo kuch bi issues hain wo sab nandini ki vajah se hain aur sirf nandini ki hi vajah se hain

MANIK : aliaaa

Nandini starts crying loudly manik runs towards her and holds her shoulders

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : main bahuth buri ho

Manik nods his head as no and wipes her tears

NANDINI : manik am sorry mujhe FAB 5 ko thodne ka irada nahi tha

ALIA : stop acting nandini

She nods her head and again cries

MANIK : stop alia please

NANDINI : am not good manik am not good

MANIK : nandini aisa nahi hain

KABIR : nandini please stop crying

DHRUV : hame patha hain ki tum kaisi ho

MUKTHI : nandini you are not that bad so please

NANDINI : manik main janthi hoon ki FAB 5 tumhare liye kitna important hain

MANIK : nandini mujhe patha hain

NANDINI : I know ki you can handle anything but not breaking of FAB 5

MANIK : nandini FAB 5 nahi tutega

NANDINI : lekin agar main tumse door nahi jaongi tho jaldi FAB 5 tut jayega

MANIK : please don't say that

KABIR : ye kaisi bathe karri hain tu

DHRUV : dekho nandini tum aisa nahi bol sakthi

NANDINI : manik I can't see you breaking and cries loudly

MANIK : nandini please stop crying and mujhe kuch nahi hoga thodi si misunderstandings hain jaldi sab teek ho jayega

NANDINI : manik tum janthe ho na maine koyi plan nahi banaya tha tum logon ko fasane ke liye

MANIK : main sab jantha hoon nandini please tum un sari bathon ko dil pe math lo

NANDINI : mujhe nahi patha tha ki meri vajah tum in sab se door rehre the

MANIK : nandini please tum kya bolri ho

NANDINI : main bahuth buri hoon manik bahuth buri and closes her eyes tightly crying

MANIK : nandini please and goes on wiping her tears

She opens her eyes and am sorry manik am sorry.

Manik nods his head and before he could say or do something she runs out crying

MUKTHI : nandiniii

ABHI : jaan

DHRUV : nandiniii

MANIK : goddd and punches the wall

ALIA : manik tum kyu aise behave karre ho acha hua wo cheli gayi aur please tum phirse uske paas math Jana

MANIK : just shut up alia or else I will and closes his eyes tightly

ALIA : kyu manik kyu kyu wo tumhe itna affect karthi hain kyu uske liye tum itna pareshan hothe ho kyu manik kyu kya lagthi hain wo tumhari haan bolo and holds him

Manik jerks her and shouts "meri sab kuch lagthi hain wo alia meri sab kuch"

Alia and mukthi get hell shocked seeing him and even though kabir and dhruv knew that she was very important to him they too got surprised seeing his new revealed avatar Abhi too get shocked but then feels happy that she means a lot to him.

Manik gives an angry look to alia and leave from there without saying anything.

He searches for nandini everywhere but doesnt find her. It was 9 and class was about to start except alia all meet him and ask about nandini

MANIK : shayad gar cheli gayi hogi i'll go and check in her house

ABHI : main bi sath cheltha hoon

KABIR : ham phir ek baar yaha school main check karthe hain

DHRUV : haan

MUKTHI : main hamare friends se puchthi hoon ki kayi unhone nandini ko kayi dekha hain

Manik doesn't reply and simply runs down. Abhi runs behind him.

They reach near gate but watchman stops them. Manik holds his collar but abhi calms him down and handles the situation. They both soon reach her house but abhi asks manik to stay outside since nandini mom would get worried seeing him manik agrees and stays outside. Abhi goes inside and gets to know that she was not present in the house. He simply walks out and says the same to manik.

MANIK : I can feel her wo yehi kahi hain

ABHI : agar wo yahi hothi tho aunty jhut kyu bolthi

MANIK : I don't know par

ABHI : don't worry she will be fine

MANIK : tu please kya yahi rukega in case agar wo yaha ayegi tho

ABHI : haan teek hain and why don't you check in your house

MANIK : mere gar pe

ABHI : haan she said me that she feels relaxed in your house so may be

Manik without listening anything further runs shouting okk okkk

Abhi goes inside and making an excuse settles himself on the couch searching for her.

Here kabir and dhruv search for her and not knowing what to do leave from school along with mukthi taking permission and directly go to manik house.

They see manik lying on floor crying holding his cell close to his heart. FAB 3 go and hug him and make him calm down

Time passes and it was 6 in the evening. Even though trying hard no one could find anything about her. Manik became restless and was moving here and there worried.

MOORTHY MANSION :

Abhi fell asleep on couch itself. Nandini slowly come and sees him.

NANDINI MOM : beta kyu mujhse jhut bulvaya

Manik calls nandini's house number at the same time and accidentally abhi accepts the call in sleep and manik hears nandu voice.

NANDINI : maa woh and cries

MANIK : nandini!!!!

NANDINI MOM : beta thu suba se gar pe hi aur abhi yahi tera wait karra hain lekin tu ek baar bi usse bahar ake nahi mili

NANDINI : maa please aap mujhse kuch math puchiye

NANDINI MOM : kaise nahi puchu beta janthi hu ki tu apne dosthon ko ignore karri hain suba se kitne sare call aye hain lekin tune ek bi call ka jawab nahi diya hain aur sirf rori jari hain

NANDINI : maa jab ham kisi ko kushi nahi de sakthe na tho unke dhuk ke karan bi nahi bana chahiye

NANDINI MOM : beta thu

NANDINI : maa please abhi ko utake gar bej dijiye and leaves from there

NANDINI MOM : nandiniii

She hides behind a pillar and asks her mom to wake him up.

Nandini mom wakes him up and he notices the cell and takes it.

ABHI : hellooo

MANIK : abhi

ABHI : manikkk

MANIK : abhi wo abhi

ABHI : manik kya hua manik manik hellooo and cutting call gets up with jerk

Nandini runs down and kya hua manik ko kya hua

ABHI : nandini tum yaha

NANDINI : pehle batao manik ko kya hua

ABHI : patha nahi kuch kehne ki koshish karra tha par

She holds his hand and runs out without saying anything. They soon reach malhotra mansion. They both enter into house and find it dark.

NANDINI : manik!!!! manik!!!! manik!!!!!

ABHI : jaan dhyan se andehra hain

She slowly goes inside and now was in centre of the house. Suddenly a light falls on her face and she immediately hides her face with her palm due to light.

She hears a voice which was not at all a unknown one.

NANDINI : manikkk...!!!!!

Nandiniii!!!!!!!!!!!!

She slowly removes her hands and looks around but finds him no where.

"since the day you came into my life you made everything better and you are the reason why even at the saddest part of my life I smile"

"The moment you came into my life my pains changed into smile and now I have to appreciate my life just because your in it. I don't want to know what could my life be with out you and I just feel like I'll die if I loose you"

"I need you to know that I'll never want to let go of you and me. I need you to trust me when things does seems tough between us and want you know that the only thing I need is you with me"

Lights falls on manik and he slowly starts walking towards her. She looks him without blinking her eyes and he soon comes and stands in front her.

He cups her face and

"You just don't have a clue how happy I am that you are part of my life and I don't need anything more except having you beside me"

She smiles and places her hands on his while he continues I never told you before that you are an awesome girl and I feel really lucky to have you in my life.

"Today I want to tell you that the memories we spent together are the best moments of my life. I'll always be prepared for those moments without caring what it could cost me, it'll all have a meaning if it consist to be and remain by your side"

Tears roll from her eyes and he gently wipes them.

Every tear of yours kills me from inside.

Do you want to kill me every second with your tears???

She nods no and he smiles at her.

"Baby you light up my life like stars light up the sky"

"I am nothing without you and can never be anything without you"

He slowly moves back and sits on his knees holding her hands.

"You can never make me sad nor can be the reason behind my sadness"

"You can just make me smile and only smile"

"You never came in between me and my friends and can never even come in future"

"What ever you may consider yourself either good or bad it doesn't really mater to me because I know what you are"

She just stays numb not knowing how to react.

He closes his eyes and taking a deep breath and slowly opens his eyes and looks her.

"Miss nandini moorthy you are my life, you are my everything and I can't live without you"

She smiles and happy tears roll down.

She sits on her knees and kisses his hands.

He smiles and continues i know that you are very disturbed but trust me I'll will soon make everything ok

She nods her head as yes

He continues "never ever not even for once think about leaving me"

She blinks her eyes assuring him that she will not.

He further continues "no matter how many hurdles may come in our way we will stay together and will face them together"

She nods her head as yes

Manik holds her hands and promise me that you will never leave me

She smiles and "I promise you Mr Manik Malhotra I will never ever leave you not even in your dreams"

He smiles and kisses her hands.

She looks him lovingly and "thank you so much manik"

He smiles and quickly getting up makes her stand.

She gets lost in him and he asks her to smile placing his hands across his lips.

She smiles a little and he again makes a face making his eyes wide and asking her to smile more. She immediately laughs loud seeing his expression and suddenly rose petals fall on her.

She looks up and smiles. She turns around feeling the rose petals and he smiles adoring her. She suddenly stops and looks him.

MANIK : thank you angel for coming into my life.

She smiles and moving suddenly hugs him tight with great force. He smiles and hugging her back turns around lifting her up.

They slowly break the hug and look each other smiling.

NANDINI : aaj tumhe ek offer dena chahthi hoon

MANIK : kaisa offer

NANDINI : jo kuch bi mangna hain manglo main tumhe mana nahi karungi

MANIK : ooo kuch bi haaa

NANDINI : haan kuch bi

MANIK : sochlo baad main mana karogi tho shayad

NANDINI : main bilkul mana nahi karungi

MANIK : main kuch bi mang saktha hoon haa kuch bi and raises his eyebrow

NANDINI : janthi hoon

MANIK : teek hain phir thayar ho jao

NANDINI : ummm

MANIK : mujhe na wooo

NANDINI : kyaa

MANIK : arrey sochra hoon ruko na

NANDINI : teek hain

MANIK : nahi aise nahi thoda vakth do main baad main batha tha hoon

NANDINI : teek hain

MANIK : acha suno wooo

NANDINI : mmm

MANIK : main sochra tha ki

NANDINI : ki

MANIK : sube se ek dusre se door the

NANDINI : tho

MANIK : tho and leans forward

NANDINI : mr malhotra

MANIK : jee miss moorthy

NANDINI : main kahi nahi jane vali hoon tho Philal ke liye zara khud pe control rakiye

MANIK : achaaa tho matlab thodi der baad agar khud ko control na karu thooo

She smiles and blushes

He rubs his nose with hers and places his forehead on hers.They both smile and close their eyes.
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PART 100B :

KABIR : cough cough guys I know yaha andera hain aur tum log hame nahi dekh sakthe ho

DHRUV : par tum logon par light hain aur isliye hum tumhe dekh sakthe hain

Nandini blushes and moves back slowly.

KABIR : manik kya ham lights on kar sakthe hain ya ab bi

Manik smiles and haan wo ramu kaka zara lights on kar dijiye

Light gets on and nandini sees FAB 4 standing beside abhi. She gets tensed and looks manik. He holds her hand and takes her near them.

Mukthi and alia stand in between kabir and dhruv while abhi was standing beside kabir.

Manik goes little close and stand before mukthi and alia.

I know you might be having so many questions in your mind right now after seeing everything and listening to whatever I said.

MUKTHI : so are you gonna answer them all

MANIK : yes of course

Mukthi looks nandini who was looking ground silently.

MANIK : mukthi

She turns and looks manik.

MANIK : maine jo kuch bi kaha uska ek ek lawz sach hain and I really mean it

Mukthi blinks her eyes.

MANIK : main suba hi sab batha detha agar and looks alia and then kair jo hua so hua aur ab main hamare beech kisi bi misunderstanding ko ane nahi dena chahtha.

MUKTHI : same here manik ham bi sab sought out karna chahthe hain

MANIK : I guess tum logon ne notice tho kiya hi hoga ki pichle kuch dino se main aur nandini mostly sath main hi rehre hain

MUKTHI : haan

MANIK : its because we both like each other

MUKTHI : aur tu ye hame ab bathara hain

MANIK : I know mukthi mujhe ye pehle batha dena chahiye tha par

MUKTHI : par kya manik agar suba ham logon ne tumhe dance hall main nahi dekha hotha tho shayad tum hame kabi kuch bathathe hi nahi

MANIK : aisi bath nahi hain mukthi main tum logon ko bathene vala tha lekin usse pehle ye sab hogaya aur

MUKTHI : stop lieing manik

MANIK : main sach bolra hoon mukthi aur agar mujhe tum logon se sab chupana hi tha tho shayad main ab bi tum logon ko ye sab nahi batha tha

Mukthi doesn't say anything and remains silent

MANIK : aliaaa

She was just listening everything and was not saying a single word.

MANIK : mujhe nahi patha ki tumhe nandini se kya problem hain aur kyu suba tumne uss tharah se react kiya

She looks him and he continues alia main kuch bi sehen kar saktha hoon par nandini ke kilaf ek lavz bi nahi

She doesn't say anything.

MANIK : aaj suba jis tharah se maine tum par chilaya uske liye main sorry nahi bolunga

She just stands listening to him while he continues tum galath thi alia aur jaise tum samajri hoon vaisa kuch nahi hain nandini bahuth achi hain aur usne mujhe ya hamare friends ko trap nahi kiya hain

She looks nandini and again him

"Alia nandini kabi bi hamare beech nahi aa sakthi hain wo tho khud mujhe samjathi rehthi hain ki mujhe tum logon ke sath zyada vakth bithana chahiye tho phir wo kaise hamari dosthi ko tutne degi"

He goes and holds her hands

"Alia main nandini ke bina jee nahi saktha hoon"

She sees him with tears

"Kya tum mujhpe vishwas karti hoo"

She nods yes

"Tho phir please please apne dimak se ye thought nikaldo ki nandini ki vajah se ek din FAB 5 tut jayegi"

ALIA : main koshish karungi manik

Manik nods his head and kya tum mere liye ek baar sirf ek baar nandini ko ek mouka de sakthi ho apni dosth ban neka

She looks nandini and then mujhe thoda vakth do manik please

"Manik smiles slightly & teek hain"

He moves back slowly and stands beside nandini.

"Guys nandini FAB 5 ka hissa kabi nahi ban sakthi hain kyu ki wo khud bi aisa kabi nahi chahegi"

Saying this he looks her who was already looking her. She smiles at him and he too gives her a smile.

He holds her hand and "vaise bi nandini moorthy sirf aur sirf manik malhotra ka hissa ban sakthi hain"

She smiles hugely and blushes.

MUKTHI : manik ye sab kab hua kaise hua matlab

Manik smiles and looking nandini "kab hua kaise hua wo tho mujhe bi nahi patha bas ho gaya"

Manan have a cute eye lock.

MANIK : so guys I said everything aur agar ab bi tum logon ko kuch puchna hain tho you can

MUKTHI : nahi

KABIR : kuch puchne ko hain hi nahi

DHRUV : haan

Every one looks alia but she doesn't say anything and simply looks ground.

MANIK : tho kya aap log nandini ko accept karoge

MUKTHI : agar main na kahu tho

Manik becomes sad and looks down. Nandini lifts their hands and places her another hand too on it and then "tho ham intezar karenge"

Manik looks her and she blinks her eyes as assurance. He smiles at her and blinks his eyes.

Mukthi comes close to nandini and manan leave their hands.

MUKTHI : manik pehle bi muskurata tha lekin jo khushi uski chehre pe ab jalak rahi hain wo maine aaj se pehle kabi nahi dekhi hain

Manik smiles and looks nandini.

MUKTHI : mujhe nahi patha ki tumne kya kiya hain par haan acha laga dekh kar ki manik tumhari vajah se khush hain

Nandini smiles and looks manik

MUKTHI : mujhe manik ki khushi chahiye aur agar uski khushi ki vajah tum ho tho main tumhe ussi khushi ke sath apna na chathi hoon

Manan smile looking each other and then look mukthi.

Mukthi nods her head smiling and looking nandini opens her arms asking for a hug. Nandini smiles and immediately hugs her.

Manik smiles seeing both of them and gets relaxed.

Mukthi and nandini slowly break the hug and smile looking each other

NANDINI : thank u

MUKTHI : zyada formal ban neki zarurath nahi hain

Nandini smiles and then looks alia who was looking them. She slowly walks towards alia and am sorry for hurting you alia I didn't really mean to do that. I promise you that I will soon clear all your misunderstandings about me.

Nandini slowly turns back

ALIA : nandini

All get tensed expect nandini. She slowly turns towards alia and haan

ALIA : janthi hoon main thab se kyu chup thi

Nandini nods her head as no

ALIA : manik ne jo kuch bi tumse kaha use sune ke baad mai kuch bol hi nahi payi

Nandini listens to her silently

ALIA : maine kabi nahi socha tha ki manik kisi ladki se ye sab kahega main tho jab yaha aayi thi thab bi tum pe bahuth gussa thi aur jab tum andar chelke ari thi thab bi main tumhe rokna chahthi thi par mukthi ne mujhe pakad liya

Nandini looks down

ALIA : mujhe laga ki shayad manik tumhara asli chehra samaj nahi para hain aur isliye tumhare paas and stops

Nandini looks her and she slowly again continues lekin aaj jab manik ko wo sab kehthe hue suna thab mujhe realise hua ki tum uske liye kya ho

Nandini smiles slightly

ALIA : mujhe manik ki bathon main sirf aur sirf sachayi nazar ayi

Manik smiles and goes and stands beside nandini.

ALIA : lekin mujhe abi bi tumpe shaq hain

Manik was about to say something but nandini holds his hand and stops him.

ALIA : main chahthi hoon ki tum bi mujhe manik ki tharah yakin dilao ki uske bina tum bi jee nahi sakthi hoo

Nandini smiles and looks manik who was looking her

ALIA : kya tum kar sakthi ho

Nandini entwines her fingers with his and haan

ALIA : teek hain

KABIR : ok so now everything is clear I guess

DHRUV : yeaaa

Abhi was silently watching everything and manik notices him

MANIK : sun tu ye math samaj na ki ham ab dosth ban sakthe hain

ABHI : kon main

MANIK : tujhe dekhe bolra hoon tho obviously tu hi hoga na

ABHI : whatever man vaise bi tujhse dosthi karne main mujhe bi koyi interest nahi hain

MANIK : great then

ABHI : jaan gar chele

NANDINI : wo abhi

MANIK : ek minute and places his hand around nandini's shoulder

Nandini looks him confused

MANIK : ab sabko patha hain tho thu meri ladki ko jaan bolna bandh kar

Nandini smiles and turns her face blushing

ABHI : bilkul nahi main bachpan se jaan ko jaan bulatha hoon tho abi bi jaan ko jaan hi bulaonga

MANIK : nahi tum nahi bulaoge

ABHI : main bulaonga

All laugh seeing both of them.

Manik pouts and turns his face

Nandini sees him and manik kya hua

MANIK : wo tumhe jaan nahi bula saktha and again turns his face

Nandini smiles and cupping his face "bale hi wo mujhe naam se jaan bulaye par main asal main hoon tho sirf tumhari hi jaan na"

Manik smiles hugely and haan

Suddenly some noice comes from door and everyone looks at door.

MANIK : dad

Nandini immediately removes her hands from him and stands little bit far.

MOHAN : sorryyy

KABIR : uncle aap vaha kya karre hain yaha ayiyena

MOHAN : haan and slowly walks towards them

Nandini feels very embarrassed and was looking here and there

Manik moves closer to her and kyaa hua

NANDINI : arey stay away papa kya sochenge

MANIK : kuch nahi sochenge relax

She again moves far from him

MANIK : arreyyy

Mohan reaches near them and sry disturb kiya kya

MANIK : nahi dad

MOHAN : kya hua beta tu itna kyu gabrari hain

NANDINI : kuch nahi wo bas

MANIK : madam sochri hain ki ap hame aise dekhe kya sochenge

MOHAN : kuch nahi

Manik moves beside her and hitting her shoulder slightly dekha maine kaha na

Nandini looks him seriously and moves away

MANIK : arrey tum ye baar baar door kyu jari ho and pulls her close holding her hand

All laugh seeing them

MANIK : papa wo abhi hain apki beti ka dosth aur mera dushman

MOHAN : hello beta

ABHI : hello uncle

NANDINI : manik papa hain chodo

MANIK : papa sab janthe hain chill

Nandini makes her eyes widened and shouts kyaaa

MOHAN : sry beta maine tum dono ki sari conversation sunli thodi der pehle

MANIK : hooo tho aap thab hi agaye the

Nandini looks down feeling nervous

MOHAN : haan wo and looks nandini.

MANIK : hello madam dad bahuth pehle se sab janthe hain tho tumhe bilkul nervous hone ki zarurath nahi hain

NANDINI : pehle se matlab

MOHAN : manik tu bi na

MANIK : kyaa dad ab maine kya kiya

Mohan slowly walks towards nandini and kisses her forehead.

She looks him and he smiles at her

MOHAN : kya koyi beti apne papa ko dekh kar nervous hothi hai kya

Nandini smiles and nods as no

MOHAN : tumhe awkward feel karne ki koyi zarurath nahi hain vaise hi raho jaise hamesha rehthi hoon

Nandini hugs him and thank you papa

MUKTHI : tho uncle ko bi pehle se patha tha

KABIR : haan

MANIK : arey ab wo sab chodo aur chelo mujhe bahuth bhuk lagri hain suba se kuch nahi kaya hain

Nandini breaks the hug and ,teek hain chelo

DHRUV : ek minute manik vaise tujhe kaise patha chela ki nandini apne gar par hi hain

ABHI : haan main tho bul hi gaya jaan thu gar main kya kari thi aur kab ayi

MANIK : madam sube se gar par hi thi

ABHI : lekin aunty ne tho mujhe

MANIK : isine aunty se jhut bul vaya

ABHI : jaan thune

NANDINI : sryyy

KABIR : lekin manik tujhe ye sab patha kaise chela

MANIK : maine iske gar ke number par call kiya aur shayad galthi se kisini utadi thabi ye aunty ke sath bath karri thi aur maine inki sari conversation sun li

ABHI : ohhh tho isliye phone pe tum

MANIK : haan main jantha tha ki ye bahar nahi ayegi isliye mujhe isse darane ke liye call par aisa and stops looking nandini who was seriously looking him

MANIK : kyaaa

NANDINI : patha bi hain main kitna dar gayi thi

MANIK : aur tumhe patha bi hain ki tumhe sube se na dekh kar main kitna pareshan ho gaya tha

All look at them with awww and fell happy for them

NANDINI : tumse bath karna hi bekar hain and starts walking towards upwards

MANIK : gussa mujhe tumpe hona chahiye

She doesn't say anything and simply continues to walk

MANIK : suno tumne bi suba se kuch nahi kaya hain pehle kana kathe hain uske baad tumhe jo karna hain karlo

She simply runs up and soon disappears

MANIK : madam ke tever bi na

All laugh loudly making him more irritated

MANIK : whattt

MUKTHI : tujhe aise dekhe bada maza ara hain

MANIK : haan haan wo tho dikh hi raha hain

Again everyone laughs and manik notices alia smiling a little bit. He too feels happy and guys tum log yaha neche kalo main uske liye kana upar leke jatha hoon

MUKTHI : usse neche bulana sath main kayenge

MANIK : tujhe kya lagtha hain wo mere kehne se jhat se man jayegi hmmm

Mukthi smiles and he continues mere liye agar wo ab kana kayegi na tho wohi zyada hain

MOHAN : chel jaa der karega tho aur naraz ho jayegi

MANIK : haan phir muh pulake bait jayegi

MOHAN : chup kar

MANIK : haan haan aap tho apni beti ki hi side loge

DHRUV : chel ab jaa

MANIK : acha teek hain byyy

MUKTHI : thu kana kilake neche ayega na

MANIK : aaa wooo

KABIR : arrey mukthi manik jaldi kaise vapas aa saktha hain wo

DHRUV : haan tum ne dekha na Nandini naraz hoke gayi hain

KABIR : tho manik ko usse behlana hoga phuslana hoga aur agar thab bi na mane tho kuch aur bi karna hoga tho

MANIK : guys guys guys wo gusse main hain tho wo jaldi se nahi manegi

KABIR : haan haan ham wohi tho kehre the

MOHAN : beta tum log kafi thake hue bi lagre ho tum log kana kake gar chele Jana aur kal tho phir sab school main milengi hi na

MANIK : haan haan

MUKTHI : chel teek hain phir tu ja nandini ke paas byyy

MANIK : haan byyy

Kabir comes and hugs manik.

KABIR : bahuth khush hu tere liye

Manik smiles and rubs his back

KABIR : vaise bada kismath vala hain yar tu uncle khud tujhe nandini ke paas bejra hain uske sath milke

Manik slowly hits his stomach and breaks the hug

MANIK : byyy

Dhruv too comes and hugs manik

DHRUV : am really proud of u buddy aaj jo tune kiya na wo bilkul sahi hain

MANIK : thnx buddy

They break the hug and bid byy

Manik looks alia and byyy

ALIA : byyy

Manik looks abhi and main usse gar drop kar dunga

ABHI : haan aur main aunty se bath karlunga

MANIK : ok guys byyy and goes upstairs saying servant to bring food to his room


Yippieee finally done with the 100 part so now jaldi jaldi comment and tell me how it is aur haan please lamba comment karna haa because I loooveee longgg commentttsss...
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awesome updates dear jst loved it
firstly aliya was blaming nandu
nandu was to upset tht she is reason fr breaking fab5
manik knw tht she is at hme ly he can fell her
u pinned very beautifull of every word of manik
fianlly all aceepted her
continue soon
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