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PART 82 :

MANIK : tumhari anken kaam karri hain na

NANDINI : haan kyu

MANIK : nahi main yaha tumhare samne hoon aur tumhari nazre un diwaro par hain tho mujhe laga ki shayad tumhari anken kaam nahi karre hain

NANDINI : hogaya

MANIK : haan

Nandini gives him an angry look and again turns her face.

Manik slowly gets up and bends down towards her.

Nandini forgets everything and gets lost looking him.

He bends more and more close to her smiling. She doesn't say anything and just looks him lovingly

They were just inches apart now & she closes her eyes tightly feeling his hot breaths on her face.

He smiles and blows air on her face

NANDINI : manikkk

He smirks and moves back a little back and "open your eyes"

She slowly opens her eyes and sees him.

He holds a tiny paper with his two fingers and shows it to her. She looks it and then manik.

MANIK : it was stucked in your hair

Nandini doesn't say anything & looks down

MANIK : ek second

She looks into his eyes

MANIK : what were you thinking???

Nandini shrugs her shoulders and nothing

MANIK : nahi nahi you closed your eyes and that means you were you were

Nandini makes her eyes widened

MANIK : expecting a hmmm???

NANDINI : I don't know what you are talking about and pushes him back making him sit on the bench.

Manik smiles and "acha seriously"

NANDINI : haan

MANIK : lekin tumhare chehre ka rang tho kuch aur hi kehra hain

Nandini looks him and raising his eyebrows he asks "kyu"

Nandini turns her face and "kuch bi"

MANIK : if I had a mirror I would have showed your face in it nahi sach main tumhe khud patha cheltha ki

NANDINI : hoo please haa just stop it

MANIK : what

NANDINI : mujhe na tumse bath hi nahi karni hain

MANIK : acha kyu tumhe mere sath kuch aur karne ka man hain hmm

Nandini blushes and then tum na tum na

MANIK : haan haan uske baad kya

Nandini closes her eyes and "ayyappaa aap ne ise paida hi kyu kiya"

MANIK : uska jawab tumhe bahuth jald hi milega and winks

Nandini nods her head and saying "unbelievable " gets up and starts walking out.

MANIK : suno

She stops and her back was facing him. He slowly starts walking towards her and she just stands without turning back folding her hands on her chest.

He leans forward towards her ear making her feel very week &
"Maine kaha tha mujhe resist karna utna asan nahi hoga"

She couldn't say a word and just closes her eyes making her hands free.

He smiles and "control yourself FRIENDDD we just completed two hours and I don't want you to loose so early"

She opens her eyes and without looking him just runs out of the room. He smiles and rubbing his hand on his hairs "am really enjoying this friendship between us miss moorthy".

Nandu goes to washroom and washes her face. She stands in front of mirror and looks herself. His words starts ringing in her ears and she realises that he was true. Her face was looking complete red in colour. She touches her cheeks and smiles.

She just stands like that for sometime and then ayyappaa ye main kya karri hoon. Kyu main itna blush karri hoon. Maine khud usse kaha tha ki ham ache dosth banke rahenge lekin phir bi main kyu use apne paas pana chahthi hoon. Jab wo mere paas aara tha tho kyu mujhe laga ki wo and closes her eyes. Ye mere sath kya hora hain mujhe kuch samaj nahi ara hain.

Nandini moorthy control yourself and prove him that whatever he was saying is wrong.

She takes a deep breath and starts walking towards the class. She soon reaches near class and sees that all were already present in the class. She gets relieved and without looking manik goes and sits beside abhi.

Mukthi,alia and navya sat on one bench while manik,kabir and dhruv
Sat on another.

ABHI : kya hua jaan

NANDINI : kuch nahi

Manik doesn't look her and just goes on smiling knowing how her expressions would be while abhi was asking her that question.

Kabir and dhruv see him and then

DHRUV : kya bath hain buddy bada muskurara hain

MANIK : nah nahi kuch nahi

KABIR : matlab pakka kuch hain

MANIK : chod na aur ye batha sir ab thak aye kyu nahi

DHRUV : patha nahi yar wo actually

One of their madam comes and informs that there sir would get late so they have to wait for him silently. all nod yes and start laughing loud as soon as she leaves.

KABIR : guys guys guys I have an idea you know wait karke bore hone se acha hain kuch interesting karthe hain kyu

All shout yesss

KABIR : mujhe tho dance karne ka bahuth man hain tho phir dance se related kuch game kela jaye

All again shout yeaaa

KABIR : okk we will quickly make chits with one guy and one girl name.

MANIK : and then????

KABIR : I'll pick one chit and whose ever names will be written on that they should dance together thats it

ALIA : but song???

KABIR : guys common we have great singers in our class dont we

All say yesss

They will soon make chits and navya signals kabir something. He understands and gives her a smile.

KABIR : so guys the lucky couple is

All shout isss?????

KABIR : Manik Malhotra and

MANIK : and?????

All girls eyes were closed and were just praying that the name should be hers.

Nandini was looking kabir and he looking back at her smiling shouts NANDINI MOORTHY.

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PART 83 :

NANDINI POV : ayyappaa dance wo bi manik ke sath aur wo bi sab ke samne main kya karo hum dono ne sath main ek baar bi dance nahi ki tho ayyooo

MANIK POV : goddd dance aur wo bi nandu ke sath nahiii yar main khud ko rok hi nahi paonga aur phir dance karne ke liye uske paas jana patha hain aur use choona bi patha hain

NANDINI POV : okk nandini relax agar wo samne akar dance ke liye puchtha hain tho thu sweetly use mana karde haan phir koyi problem nahi hogi

MANIK POV : mannn I can't do that I can't break the promise main uske paas jakar use uncomfortable feel nahi karvana chahtha hoon

NANDINI POV : par dance karne main konsi galath bath hain hum tho ab dosth hain na aur dosth ek dusre ke sath dance karthe hain tho phir main use mana karne ke bare main kyu sochri hoon offooo ayyappaaa teek hain main usse mana nahi karungi aur hum sath main dance bi karenge

MANIK POV : yaa hum sath main dance nahi karsakthe hain

KABIR : manik kya sochra yar ladki thodi pehle utkar dance karne ke liye ayega common man get up and ask her for a dance

All girls feel sad but alia just burns with jeoulousy.

KABIR : manikkk

MANIk : yaaa

KABIR : goo and ask her for a dance man

Manik gets up and goes beside kabir.

He looks nandini and she too looks him but immediately looks down smiling.

KABIR : what

MANIK : I was thinking you know ki sirf ek ladki ke mere sath dance karne se kya hoga

Along with nandini everyone looks him confused

KABIR : matlab

MANIK : matlab and smirks and then

He goes near mukthi & alia

"Bach ke zara zara, shaitaniyan meri"

He pulls them both out of their bench

"Oh ladies
Oh ladies"

He goes towards some other girls

"Kar ke zara zara beimaniyan meri"

He offers his hand formally and brings them out too

"Oh ladies
Oh ladies"

He bends towards nandu

"Karoon seena zori seena zori"

She looks him angrily & he winks

" tumhe hona ho manzoor"

He lays on bench in front of nandini

"Phir dil ki chori, dil ki chori"

He looks her & shrugging his shoulders

"Hai mera kya kusoor"

He jumps and goes towards girls

"Kya karoon Oh ladies!"

He makes mukti & alia turn around

"O o Kya karoon oh ladies"

He looks at nandini and smiling

"Main hoon aadat se majboor"

He makes others girls too turn around

"Main hoon aadat se majboor
Main hoon aadat se majboor"

Nandini boils with anger and starts walking towards door but manik comes in her way and

"Aankhon ke neeche se kaajal chura loon main"

She tries to move but he places his hand in front of her

"Aisi safai hai meri"

She pushes him back but he starts walking towards her

"Entry hai phoonk si, exit toofan hai"

She leans back to bench and he stands very close to her

"Yeh muh dikhai hai meri
Kholun har tijori har tijori"

She nods her head and looks him seriously he smiles at her &
Haan main toh hoon mashoor

He moves back and makes a turn

"Phir dil ki chori, dil ki chori hai mera kya kusoor"

He takes navya with him and dances with everyone

"Kya karoon oh ladies"

He calls all girls to join them and

"Oo kya karoon oh ladies
Main hoon aadat se majboor"

All girls go mad and start dancing along with him

"Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor"

NANDINI : main kaha iske sath dance karne ke bare main sochri thi aur ye kaha

" huzoor huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor"

Nandini simply runs out of room and manik without noticing it dances with mukthi and alia

"Main hoon aadat se majboor
Main hoon aadat se majboor"

All girls shout wooo and alia and mukthi hugs him from side.

Kabir and dhruv bang their heads to wall while abhi was just fuming in anger seeing all this.

Manik turns to see nandini but finds her no where.

All girls go to their places and sit smiling.

Manik too walks towards abhi & nandini kaha hain????

Abhi looks him angrily and not knowing what to do manik turns and looks kabir and dhruv. They both too look him seriously without blinking their eyes.

MANIK : what????

NAVYA : manik tum pagal ho kya

MANIk : kya hua

NAVYA : aur kya hone ko baki reh gaya hain jo kuch bi hona tha wo tho hogaya na

MANIK : arrey tum kya bolri ho aur tum sab mujhe aise kyu dekhre ho

KABIR : aise na dekhe tho aur kya kare puppy de tujhe haa bol

MANIK : ye kya bolra tu

NAVYA : manik ye tumne kya kiya kyu tumne nandini ke sath dance nahi kiya

MANIK : navya main tho

KABIR : tu apna dimag bechke aya kya

MANIk : kabir

DHRUV : tu nandini ko chod kar kisi aur ke sath dance kaise kar sakta hain

MANIK : buddy

NAVYA : kisi ek ke sath nahi balki sari aur ladkiyon ke sath

MANIK : arrey meri bath tho suno

ABHI : kya sune wo tere sath milke dance karne ke bare main sochri thi aur thu uske sath dance karni ki wajah

MANIK : ek second wo mere sath milke dance karne ke bare main sochri thi matlab

ABHI : matlab kya she was waiting for you to ask her for a dance par

MANIK : she wanted me to ask her for a dance????

DHRUV : haan manik of course

MANIK : usne khud ye kaha ki wo mere sath dance karna chahthi thi?

Kavya,dhruv and abhi shout "haan haan haan"

Manik rubs his hairs with his hand and smiles hugely.

ABHI : what tuje hasi aari hain???

Manik just smiles and runs out saying "main abi aaya"
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PART 84 :

Mukthi and alai were busy in their own world so didn't knew why manik ran out of the class.

ALIA : guys manik ko kya hua

KABIR : abi thak kuch nahi hua hai par jaldi hi kuch hoga

MANIK : kyaaa

DHRUV : kuch nahi mukthi usse koyi kaam yaad agaya hoga chodo na jaldi hi vapas ayega

MUKTHI : hmmm

Manik goes down running like mad talking to himself.

"Usse mere sath dance karne main koyi problem nahi tha shittt yar main bi kitna pagal hoon kaha main ye sochra tha ki wo comfortable nahi hogi aur kaha wo mere sath goddd am sure bahuth gusse main hogi and smiles thinking that she might be burning with jeoulousy too"

He was busy in his own world thinking about nandini and his thoughts will get disturbed due to loud voice of laughing. He comes out of his world and immediately burns with anger seeing the view in front of him.

Nandini was laughing loud holding her stomach along with a boy. He was looking quite good and manik knew him too since he was senior to manik. Nandini stood leaning to wall and that guy was little far from her smiling along with her.

Nandini suddenly looks manik and her angry mode once again gets on. Manik too was very angry and was looking her seriously. She said that guy bye and before manik could reach her she directly went inside the washroom.

Manik starts waiting for her outside the washroom. Though he was burning in anger he waits patiently for about 15 minutes. He continuously looks at the washroom door but finds no sign of her.

Here inside the washroom nandini simply stands blabbering about manik. She sees time and thinking that he might have left to class decides to go out. She slowly walks near door and opens it.

Manik who stood leaning to wall gets straighten and looks her. She too looks him but then again closes the door again

MANIK : what the hell ye samajthi kya hain apne apko

NANDINI : ye ab thak kada hain I can't believe this

MANIK : bahuth hogaya agar aise hi kada rahunga na tho wo bahar nikalne vali hi nahi hain

NANDINI : kade rehnedo aise hi main bi dekhthi hoon kitna der kada rahega

Manik looks around and finds no one so he slowly walks towards washroom. Nandini was leaning to the washroom door and was thinking whether to go out or not.

Manik knocks the door and waits for her to open it.

NANDINI : ayyappaa I just hope ki its not him no no nooo

Manik once again knocks the door.

She closes her eyes and taking a long breath slowly turns and opens the door a little bit so that she could see the face of the person. She sees his face and immediately tries to close it but manik keeps his hand on door and tries to open it. She was very small so couldn't hold the door for long and loosing his control he pushes door with great force due to which she looses her balance and was about to fall but manik goes inside and holds her both the hands with his stopping her from falling.

They share an eye lock and nandini soon comes into her senses and by standing straight jerks his hands. She simply tries to move out looking him but manik giving her a smirk simply turns and closes the door.

He turns towards nandini and stands floding his hands around his chest.

NANDINI : get the hell out of my way

MANIK : kyu bahar tumhara koyi intezar karra hain ummm and raises his eyebrows

Nandini turns her face and starts waking inside. He too followers her and

MANIK : tum uske sath kar kya rahithi

She stays silent and stands in front of mirror facing her back to him.

MANIK : tumhe class se bahar aneko bola kisne

She doesn't reply him.

MANIK : main tumse kuch puchra hoon

She slowly turns back and looks him.

MANIK : ye look kya deri ho

She still doesn't stay anything and just stands looking him.

He raises his eyebrows and asks "what"

She gives a sarcastic smile and slaps him not hard but not that light too.

He touches his cheek and "what the bloody hell"

NANDINI : tum bees tees ladkiyon ke sath milke nacho aur main sirf ek ladke se milke bath bi nahi kar sakthi

Manik gives her a look and then slaps her in the same way like she did.

She opens her mouth holding her cheek and looks him angrily.

MANIK : tum uske sath bath nahi karri thi tum uske sath milke pagal ki tharah hasri thi aur mujhe bees tees ladkiyon ke sath milke nachne main koyi interest nahi hain tho and before he could complete his sentence again gets a slap.

NANDINI : agar interest nahi hain tho tum unke sath milkar dance kyu karre the

Now manik gives her a slap and "tumhari vajah se"

She slaps him again and "Maine tumhe un sab ke sath milke nachne ko nahi kaha"

He nods his head and slapping her "par tumne mujhe tumhare paas ane se mana kiya tha"

She turns her head and doesn't say anything. He looks her and then turns his face too getting angry.

She sees him looking another side and simply gives him another slap.

Manik turns towards her & what the

NANDINI : uska matlab ye nahi hai ki tum baki sari ladkiyon ke paas jao and turns her face

Manik closes his eyes and then mujhe laga ki shayad sab ke samne hamare sath dance karne se tum comfortable feel nahi karogi aur maine tumhe promise bi kiya tha and stops.

Nandini looks him and was already melted listening his words.

NANDINI : agli baar aise kaam karke vapas kisi bahana lekar mere paas math ana

Manik opens his eyes and looks her
She turns her face and

NANDINI : wooo wo ladka hamara senior hain jab main gusse main bahar nikli tho use takra gayi main vaha se jane vali thi par uski gf ake use kuch sunake gayi aur uske jane ke baad wo uski gf ka nakal utharne laga aur main hasthe hasthe wahi kadi rahi

Manik smiles a little bit and then gusse main bahar nikli matlab tum gussa kyu thi

Nandini turns her face & looks him
And he continues nahi matlab main tho sirf dance karra tha aur as far as I remember tumne mujhe tumhare paas ane se mana kiya tha baki sari ladkiyon ki nahi tho phir tum gussa kyu thi main tho bas apna promise nibara tha na hmmm

Nandu nods her head & "unbelievable"

MANIK : exactly its unbelievable that you can actually kill me out of your jeoulousy

NANDINI : jeolous aur main

MANIK : haan jeoulous aur tum

NANDINI : nonsense

MANIK : I can clearly see that

Nandini turns her face and slowly taking water in her hands sprinkles it on his face

MANIK : what are you doing

NANDINI : though you feel that you can see everything clearly I feel that you need to clean your eyes for better vision so helping you out in that and sprinkles more water

MANIK : nandiniii stop it

NANDINI : nooo and sprinkles again

He too takes water in his hands and starts sprinkling on her

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : tumhe bi apni anken clean karne ki zarurath hain for a clear vision you know and sprinkles more water

NANDINI : manikkk

They both get mad sprinkling water on each other and suddenly while trying to stop her manik holds her hands and twists them together making her turn facing her back towards him.

NANDINI : manikkk and tries to move but due to water on floor gets slipped and was about to fall but manik holds her waist and once again stops her from falling.

She stands straight and turns towards him. His hands were still placed on her waist and both were lost in each other. She slowly leans forward looking him.

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : I want to say something

NANDINI : what

MANIK : I respect your feelings and don't want to hurt you.

She looks into his eyes and he continues nandini chahe kuch bi ho par hum hamari sari zindagi ache dosth bankar rahenge

She blinks her eyes as an yes

MANIK : nandini main apni limits kabi bi cross nahi karunga

NANDINI : main janthi hoon

MANIK : lekin shayad zyade din apne apko tumse door nahi rok payunga

NANDINI : manik

MANIK : meri bath puri nahi huyi I know ki I promised you that I will control myself and am still sticked to that promise but if u remember I said you that i would not do anything until and unless you don't want me to take any step.

NANDINI : haan

MANIK : so miss moorthy I won't come close to you or neither touch you only until you too would behave yourself and control yourself

NANDINI : Matlab

MANIK : matlab ki whenever you loose your senses and make a move getting close to me you know move like touching me and

Nandini looks down blushing

MANIK : yaa I guess u got me so until that I am gonna control myself and once if you come close to me then it would not be my mistake and am not gona be responsible for the consequences after that.

Nandini was about to say something but manik cuts off her in middle and aur haan thab meri promise bi nahi tutegi kyuki you will be the one taking the first step ahead giving me a hint that we can move a step ahead in our relationship.

Nandini smiles and turns her face.

MANIK : vaise iska matlab ye nahi hain ki jo bi humne decide kiya tha wo nahi hoga

Nandini looks him confused and he continues hum ek dusre ko janenge aur pehchanenge bi hmmm

Nandini nods her head as yes

MANIK : soo miss moorthy control yourself very well around me or else you gonna regret it badly

NANDINI : Mr malhotra first you control yourself and now leave me

Manik smirks and points her to look down. She looks down and sees that his hands were not on her waist. She closes her eyes and shit

MANIK : ehem ehem

Nandini looks him and "when I say something I mean it and winks"

NANDINI : your wait of getting close to me will never end

Manik smiles and "let's see"

NANDINI : yaaa

MANIK : chele ya phir

NANDINI : clean your face first and gives him tissue papers

MANIK : tumhe bi iski zarurath hain and gives her tissues

They both clean their faces and go out.
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tysm fr this lovely n awsum three updts...
i love it vry mch...n ur stry is nice...
waiting fr nxt..cont soon...
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Full of romance...
loved it
cont soon
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These updates took my heart away!! Eagerly waiting for other parts :)
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Awesome update
Superb update
Amazing update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Omg this was so good! Continue soon please!

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