MaNan! Yearning for you! Chapter 10b on pg 46..! Check the banner -pg1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!! Kavya here!! Suddenly out of nowhere an idea popped in my head to write about MaNan as they are truly pure and my fav couple 😃

Prologue:
Nandini Murthy and Manik Malhotra are bestfriends since 12.They were so close that everybody thought they were dating! Their morning would start by texting each other in Facebook and night would end the same! Nandini was simple yet elegantly beautiful and what to say about The Manik Malhotra,he was evry girls dream boy even at the age of 12!! But he had a huge crush on his classmate Aliya the fashionista of school.Only Nandini knew about it.She fixed him with Aliya and it turned out to be that Aliya also had a crush on Manik and both got into a relationship!

After 2 years it turned out to be that Nandini left Manik and went away from his life forever! Why was that? Well Manik thought it was a really stupid idea! But Nandini being right in her own way left him.

What was the reason for Nandini's sudden moving out of his life? Though they were bestfriends they had some feelings for each other deep down inside. Both unaware of it!

To find out more about them please comment should i start the story or not?


INDEX
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Character Sketch-pg1
Chapter 1 -pg2 Chapter 2-pg2
Fab5 outfit-pg4
Chapter 2b-pg4
Chapter 3-pg5
Chapter 4-pg7
Chapter 5-pg9
Chapter 6-pg14
Chapter 7-pg17
Chapter 8-pg21
Chapter 9-pg29
Chapter 10a-pg38
Chapter 10b-pg46

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Posted: 10 years ago
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this looks really intersting
plzzz do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Story is gonna take a 5 year leap.
Character Sketch:

Manik Malhotra:
He wasn't a male model but he should have been. The lush, mother lode-hair he groomed so carefully had a rippling quality, a sign of his rude health.The aquiline nose he sported complemented his prominent cheekbones. Handsome in an understated way, his basalt jaw and Spartan shoulders spoke of strength. He possessed a latent, leonine power and always walked with purpose and authority.Almond shaped eyes, they could shine as bright as the evening stars when they were a-light with joy. At other times, they could resemble two liquid-pools of flashing fire. Flamboyant of character, the room always filled with his sonorous, rumbling voice. Clothes of Zara, watch of Rado with the most branded items a mans wardrobe could get.

Nandini Murthy:
Her hair was midnight black which tumbled upon her shoulders.Strawberry sweet lips which were blossom soft with a bubbly outlook and a cheerful character. Aura of positiveness around and wore kidult clothes in an offbeat way.She had a shapely figure wasp waisted , imp-thin, glossy skin and slender eyebrows with pouty lips.When she broke into a smile, her beguiling, oyster-white teeth lit up the room. It could jolt you like an electric current when that megawatt smile gave you her full attention.

Cabir Dhawan:
He was a cool kid.Having an aura of a badass yet polite.Cracking jokes in a sarcastic way which was almost impossible for you to get.His eyes which always had a cover of Ray ban shades,hair with a shade of gold and brown.

Mukti Vardhan:
Energetic, sometimes a boisterous girl with interest in games and sports rather than barbies.Eyes with a black smokey makeup,hair brunette with highlights of red.Clothes like goths but a sweet innocent girl with the lack of love in her life.

Dhruv Vedhant:Calm and composed with a sweet guy aura carrying his attitude. Sharp pointy hair covering the forehead.Jaw tightend.Less speaking the "good guy".

Alya Saxena:Boasting full of attitude carrying an aura of a sexy fashionista.Slim waistline,long legs and what not.Brown long hair curled at the end. Jimmy choo heels,Gucci bag with designer dresses and Mac makeup. One word? "Barbie".

Abhimanyu Murthy:The smiley.When god created him he didn't give a tad bit of sadness.Always like a parachute: flying until it comes to an end.Jovial with a smile of 32 teeths always attached.Popular business tycoon of Singapore only at the age of 20.Dress up like a gentleman and with an attitude the same.

Navya Naveli:The black and white madhubala with a touch of hollywood.The beauty with a soft heart Long hair till mid waist,bangles,naive and mature.

I guess it enough for today!!
Love Kavya.
Edited by parthholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am going to just ask will it be a Story where Nandini pines After Manik and has no Love life at all?
I just hate the fact that Girls just have to be single while the Boys Are able to Date One Girl After another
If Boys Date than Girls can as well
I like the Way You write, thankfully it's completely in English so I won't have any problems understanding it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@chair1992. No Nandini will not pine for Manik only.She will also have a Bf which will be show later in the story!!
And thanks for commenting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Can you Pm me for the updates? This one seems interesting.
Thank goodness that Nandini would also be having a boyfriend and wouldn't just flee around Manik for attention. I so hate those type of fictions. Glad that you cleared it out in the starting only.
Do inform me about the updates, I feel that it is going to be one good heck of a story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nandu have bf,,,,,,,,,,,super...we r waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1:

"Please 5 more minutes" squealed a sleepy Nandini.
"No get up right now" shouted Navya,her best friend in U.S.
"We are gonna miss our flight to India" Navya again shouted, but it seemed all it was going into deaf ears!!. Left with no choice she went to the bathroom and..
"Navya what the freaking hell was that? Is that a way to wake somebody up?".Shouted an angry Nandini,who was completely drenched in freezing cold water.
"Get ready in 10 or we gonna miss our flight and no stupid antics now.Saying she left the room closing the door behind her.
Nandini got up went to the washroom took a shower,came out and wore a crop top,jeans and a hoody and to give it a complete look a littile bit lip gloss and mascara with hair left open, when her sight fall over a photo frame which had her and her bf's photo Aryaman who cheated her,
"Stupid a**" thats what she could think. Tore the photo and left locking her bedroom door of the rented apartment.

Nandini's outfit: http://s3.favim.com/orig/150213/beautiful-cardigan-crop-top-curled-hair-Favim.com-2473833.jpg
Navya's outfit:
http://www.inspirationluv.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/Top-Summer-Outfit-Ideas-For-2015-19.jpg

Finding Navya already waiting for her dressed in a floral dress with a denim jacket,hair tied in a high ponytail with sunglasses.

"Someone's looking beautiful",commented Nandini.
"And seems like someones looking sexy with a hoody", replied Navya.

Both came out of the apartment handing the keys to the owner just when Nandini shouted "my bracelet!! Wait I"ll be right back" saying this she took the keys and ran inside the apartment and got back within no minute with her bracelet and they set out for the Airport.

I know it was a bit crappy but i had to give this update for a intro.Do like and comment long long ones!! Let me know did you like it or not!! I'll be posting chapter 2 later today if i get enough time!!
Okay thanks bye
Kavya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a nice first chapter, liked the friendship between Nandini and Navya
Her ex was a cheater 😡

Chapters like these are important, they make the Story Go on

If You want to post a link of their clothes than poSt it at the end of the chapter, it looks weird in the middle (just a Suggestion)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chair1992

It was a nice first chapter, liked the friendship between Nandini and Navya
Her ex was a cheater 😡

Chapters like these are important, they make the Story Go on

If You want to post a link of their clothes than poSt it at the end of the chapter, it looks weird in the middle (just a Suggestion)



Thanks @chair1992!! Lmao! I firstly typed the links in the beginning okay and then at the middle when i posted it *facepalm* it looked really weird!! Hehehe!! I'll post the links at the end from now!! Thanks for helping me out

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