ROOMMATES ** FAB 6 **FF part 1on pg1 -17/08

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ROOMMATES is a journey of 6 friends, all of different shades and colors. Mukti, alya, Nandini, Dhruv, Manik and cabir not only share the same flat but also share their lives with each other. All of them have come to Mumbai with a reason of their own. And when destiny brings them together, it becomes a mad man's world to live in! Each day brings about a new set of fun-filled expeditions for them. No matter how bad the situation is they always stand by each other. The life in this house is no less than a roller coaster ride of emotions. These 6 individuals have now found family away from family. From here begins a journey of evolving relationships, changing dreams, heartbreaks, countless moments of pain and joy. But most of all an unending journey of lifelong friendship.




The plot of ROOMMATES is vaguely derived from the popular Marathi show . it features six friends 3 boys & 3 girls belonging to middle-class family and their ups & downs in day-to-day life creating a comedy of events in while doing so.


Characters

Dhruv"Scholar" vedant - A very scholarly intellectual who works in the IT corporate sector and has migrated from Pune. Unkown to others, he has a mentally ill sister in there, for whom he cares a lot. He is the 'Wikipedia' of the house. He is very strict about manners, money and discipline.

Manik Malhotra (MM), - A boy from a rich business family but has fled from there for the sake of music. He aspires to be a great singer and music composer one day,and to show his father the real worth of music. Manik is as proud as a peacock, and has a sarcastic sense of humour but is willing to undertake any task for his friends.

Cabir Dhawan - An unemployed youth and the rural face of Maharashtra. He works for a party organiser to earn his livelihood. Navya is the love of his life. She is Gujarati.He always takes small amounts of loans from his friends and never repays them back. He speaks poor english.

Alya Saxena - Yet another friend who is originally from Goa. She works in the fashion industry. She is very innocent and behaves childish due to which she becomes a laughing matter for many times. However, alya has an inferiority complex and her parents don't believe in her ambition.
Mukti vardhan - A girl who has left her house to work in the glamorous film industry. She is a very open-minded girl and is quite confident about herself. She depicts an independent twenty first century city girl. While she appears to be strong and confident on the outside, inside, she grieves about the way she and her sisters were neglected by her chauvinistic father.

Nandini Sharma(Murthy) - A young housewife who comes to stay with this group after getting exposed to the fact that her husband has married her only for getting money from his father. In reality, he loves someone else. With this, her newly married life ends, with the starting of this journey. She hails from Mangalore.

Raghav sharma, Nandini's estranged husband. He is blackmailed by his father into marrying Nandini, though he has a live in relationship with Nisha. Raghav is a selfish, greedy, money minded, irresponsible and an inconsiderate person who does not care about family, in contrast to Dhruv/ manik.

Nandini believes that manik will come back to her, but her roommates loathe and disdain him. Nevertheless, they still tolerate his antics. Raghav fears cabir the most, as he once beat him up and hung him upside down a ceiling fan, when raghav berates Nandini.
Navya naveli : A sweet, innocent Gujarati girl. Cabir's live interest. His English. Mukti dislike her.

Guys, I wrote it previously..bit due to loosing interest and finding tough to write with many characters. So here it is..hope u like it. Plzz do comment and hit the like button.
Soon will continue with my ff...need some time..and surely will give a long update
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Wonderful concept interesting characters looking forward to the story and their frienship, thier upside down life style everything... A very great choice to write... awesome it is going to be...
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Part 1 At apartment, Everyone is just chilling around Cabir: Yeh Mukti lab ayegi...mujhe bhook lagi hai..aur mujhe kuch khana.. Manik: Mr.payturam..kitna khayga...abhi toh yeh (packet of wafer) thous thous ke khaya.. Alya:(throws pillow at cabir) unfortunately I agree with Manik.. Dhruv: Voh sab thik hai..par Mukti ko bhaut der hogi hai.. While Mukti arrives, Mukti: Hello people... Dhruv: Mukti kaha thi tu?? Cabir: Ha ..moti mujhe kitne bhook lagi hai pata..abhi toh mere muh se pet ke chuhey..bhara aaj jayege... Mukti: Chup bey...guyzz..i have suprise for u...tandada...(Nandini arrives) Dhruv: Yeh kon hai.. Alya: Oh..ur sister (Mukti nods in no) ur co-actor Mukti: No guys..she r new roommate. Manik arrives Manik: Whose new mad? In our world..(he looks at nandini) Nandini eyes widen after seeing him Manik: Tum.. Alya: U know each other ...wow.. Manik: She's a thief... Everyone (except Mukti): What? Nandini: (nods no) Mukti: Manik mind ur tongue...kuch bhi mat bak.. Manik: Arey in morning..she tried to steal my wallet.. Nandini:(tears welling up) nahi..(pleading) voh nichey gir Gaya tha.. Manik: Oh really... Nandini: Plzz believe me.. Mukti: Shut up..ha Manik..and btw she doesn't have shelter..so she'll be staying here.. Manik: No..way Mukti...i can't stand a thief.. Mukti: Enough ha Manik... Dhruv: What makes u call her thief..? Flashback At railway station, Nandini and Manik collide with each other..without noticing Manik walks further...Nandini realizes he dropped his wallet..at same Manik realizes his he dropped his wallet..he turns back and finds nandini picking it up.. Manik: Hey..chor..voh mera.. Nandini: (gets up) Manik:(gets lost in her) her beautiful doe eyes..a perfect pouty lips and her milky skin..and that sindoor makes her more beautiful...wait sindoor...Manik she's married..stop thinking Nandini: Apka walle... Manik: I know tum kahogi...i fell down..and blah blah..i know ...such kinds of very..well...tum chori kar rahi thi na... Nandini: Nahi...no..voh actually Manik: Oh plzz.. Flashback end Alya: U r married.. Cabir: License galey main nahi dikh raha..(sarcastic) Dhruv: If u r married toh..where's your husband?? .. Nandini looks at Mukti Mukti: Guyzz..actually.. Manik: Tu uski PA hai..ya lawyer udke behalf par bolegi..let her speak.. Nandini: Voh mere shaadi ko just 1week hogaye hai..as soon as I returned after my pakphera...raghav ke kaam Ke vajah se we left very soon nxt day..when I reached here I was happy everything seemed perfect..and at station I collided with this person Manik: Manik..Manik Malhotra..mm Nandini: Ya ..Manik..after that when I reached at his place..i found a girl over there...he introduced her as love of his life..he married me only due to to his parents will...and then I walked out...and I met Mukti..and I m here Manik: See she's married..so she can't stay..Mr.khadoos khurana won't allow her here..so bye.. Mukti: Manik..u .. After long time quarrelling between them Dhruv: Errr...stop it u both...it's my place..so I'll decide.. Manik: Before u decide Mr.dhruv ..we pay u ..so better think abt it..(looking at nandini) we should not suffer from any kind of problem.. Mukti: And yes, (emotional blackmail) bas itna sochna..itne raat KO ek aakeli ladki ..khuli tijori Ki tarah hoti hai.. Manik: Yeh...cheating..ur blackmailing him... While cabir and alya r enjoying it Cabir: (brings some shev) wanna had?? Dhruv: Have!! Cabir: That..one Alya and cabir start eating..Nandini is standing there still.. Alya: U can have..inka drama chalta rahega..chill Manik: Aur vesey bhi..mukti..it's 5:00pm ..koi raat nahi hui hai.. Dhruv: Stop..she can stay..that's final... Manik: Dhruv..(Mukti shows him thumb down) Manik leaves the house stomping door.. Dhruv: Agar door ko kuch Hua... Manik:(shouts) pata hai.. Sam's Katta..(a place all these roommates chill..and their foodplaza..) Sam: Arey Manik bhai... Manik: Sam jaa...abhi paise nahi..hai Sam: Konse..paise..main thodi bheek mag raha Hu.. Manik: Voh tera udhar chuka degey... Sam: Okay bro..aa..aye..(shouts at a beggar)dhur Ho.. Beggar: Bhaut bhook lagi hai sahab..kuch hoga toh do.. Sam: Maine dharmshala khuli Ki hai..bhag... Manik gets an idea.. While upstairs As soon as Manik leaves Mukti: Chal I'll show u our place.. She shows her whole house.. Alya: And this is our bedroom Nandini: Tum sab saath sotey Ho.. Mukti: Nahi...voh 3idiots bahar...aur hum yaha.. Alya: Arey apni bag toh rakho Cabir: No one..is bhagoing with it Dhruv: Running away!! Alya: Yeh wala cupboard humara hai..and yeh wala unka... Cabir: Voh sab chodo ladies...mujhe bhook lagi..jaldi kuch bano...ya phir aaj Sam ka Karta zindabad Nandini: If u don't mind I'll cook.. Cabir: Hum khane se matlab hai bas... Mukti: How's the place?? Nandini: Aachi hai per thodi messes hai.. They all burst into laughter Nandini finishes cooking Nandini: Foods ready... Dhruv: Wow..it smells yummy...lets start Nandini: Voh tumhara friend Manik is not here...lets wait for him.. Alya: Y do u care?? Pagal hai voh..aa jayega Nandini: Humare family main we all eat together...so.. Manik arrives.. Manik: Let me introduce u to my friend Mr.Dhanraj Mukti: Yeh toh Sam ke kattey wala bekari hai... Manik:( acts like Mukti) Mukti..how dare u?? His not thief..oops.beggar but my friend.. Dhruv: Manik tu pagal Ho Gaya hai kya..bhej ussey.. Manik: Agar..mukti Ki friend rahe Sakti hai..toh yeh bhi yahi rahega.. Mukti: Fine... Cabir: Manik lets khatey hai..yaar.. Manik: Okay..lets have it... Nandini: Jo bhi ghar Mila voh bana dala.. Manik: What..u wasted ur whole grocery.. Nandini: No.. They all love and relish food Dhruv: Kitne Dino baad ghar ke khane jaisa lag raha hai... Nandini smiles Beggar: Keep on eating...and does not stop... Cabir: Manik..tera dost aaj hi sab khatam kardega... Nxt day, Everyone wakes up and finds house clean..and everything stelled at their place.. Dhruv:omg..yeh mera ghar hai... Alya: Seriously I never knew it's so beautiful.. Everyone gets ready lazily..(as it's Sunday) Nandini: Breakfast is ready...voh main aaj idli prepare Ki hai... Cabir: Chalega... Dhruv: Dhodega... Cabir: Manik tera dost kahi nahi dhikhe nahi der raha Manik: Ussey kuch urgent kaam ..tha..varna logo Ki Tarah (looks at nandini) Alya: Chalo...breakfast ready hai.. All of them finish breakfast.. Manik is searching for his watch.. Manik: Dhruv ...meri watch dekhi hai.. After lot of searching.. Alya: Manik yahi hogi.. Manik: I know kiske pass hogi..(walks towards Nandini) meri watch Nandini: Mujhe nahi pata kaha hai.. Manik: Oh plzz.. Manik accuses her with lot of accusations.. Mukti: Manik stop it now..agar voh chori karti toh..y she would have stayed back.. Nandini brings her bag.. Nandini: (tears rolling down from her eyes) tumhe lagta hai na main chor Hu...toh lets prove it know..here's my bag check it..no...(her purse falls down ) ...seriously u think I'll steal ur watch...first thing Mr.Malhotra (snapping fingers ) I don't like watches...aaj tak jitne bhi watches as a gift mujhe mil hai..i gave it someone..or kept with me...and u think I m thief...ek din mujhe raastey par 100 Miley they...i returned it police station...u idiot..and u think..i stole ur watch..(weeping) Dhruv: Agar voh keh rahi hai..usne nahi churaya..toh na sahi... Manik: What makes u believe her?? They again start quarrelling.. Manik on one side and Fab4on other.. Nandini takes her bag..and slowly moves out.. Alya: Shit..voh chali Gaye.. Everyone moves out and finds her missing Mukti: U r such a dog Manik... At night, Manik arrives home.. Manik: Hello friends...(waving his hands so that everyone notices his watch) But no one pays heed to him.. Manik: Dude it party ..time lets celebrate.. Cabir:tu pagaaa.. ..shit u find ur clock.. Dhruv: Found..hota hai voh..and watch... Mukti: Mil Gaya na... Dhruv: Kaha se Mila.. Manik: Voh police station main Mila ..here is the reason for celebration...(he brings Nandini with him) Alya and Mukti instantly hug her... Alya: U r back... Mukti: Thank u Manik...we missed u.. Dhruv: Tumhe kaha mile... Flashback At police station.. Manik: Excuse me sir... Police officer: Yes...r u caught in some illegal party.. Manik: No..no..actually meri watch kho gayi hai.. Police officer: Kab khoyi... Manik: Aaj subah..it was expensive Police officer (removes some articles): Yeh hai kya.. Manik: Yes..thank u so much sir... Police officer: Yeh raha apka chor... (he is none other than same beggar ..whom Manik bought) Flashback end Mukti: Dekha...Maine kaha..tha na u can't recognize people... Manik: Kab kaha... Cabir: But where did she got u?? They all nod their head Cabir:( shouts) bol..toh Manik: Mujhe pata tha ...yeh sirf fo jagah per milegi..1)railway station 2)bus stop...and found her..at railway station Mukti: Tu iske saath chali aye. (asking Nandini) Manik: Nahi yaar..maan hi nahi rahi thi..phir kya..maine chaku(knife) rakhi..i dragged her here.. Everyone look at him as if they saw a ghost. . ... Manik: Main kuch bhi khe duga aur tum maan logey...actually Flashback At station.. Manik: Plzz..i m really sorry..plzz ghar chalo.. Nandini: No way.. Manik: Fine..and he leaves Tc(ticket checker): Excuse..me..ticket.. Nandini: (scared) ticket nahi hai...purse ghar par rahe gayi.. Tc: Toh aap ghar par kyu nahi hai...chali yeh Nandini: Kaha.. Tc: Jail...station..jab apke ghar waley aayege..apki bel karne.. Nandini: Mera koi nahi hai..yaha.. Manik: Jaan how can u say that...i know..we fought...but ..sir here's r platform ticket.. Nandini(looks at his hand which holding her from shoulder) Tc: Beti ..apne pati se naraz nahi Hua kartey..sabke couples main fights..hoti u should not leave ur house like that...u know..u r made for each other Manik:(whispers in her ear) u decide..ghar ya jail... Flashback end Manik : And here we r.. Cabir: So party time... Dhruv: What party?? Alya: Addition of new member in girls gang.. Manik:haha... Dhruv: Before that..let me clear something to you Nandini nods.. Dhruv: Conditions for staying at my place..1)no alchols and no smoking..(Manik does a face palm) Mukti: What?? Nandini: I don't.. Dhruv: Just conditions..2) about rent u have to pay it on 3rd of every month..3) u r new member over here...u have submit ur deposit..that's 3000/- ..tum abhi aue Ho..toh by tomorrow arrange it.. Nandini nods yes.. Dhruv: Tum tumhare husband se maang Sakti ..no issue..kya naam Manik: Raghav!!! Nandini eyes well up..she starts sobbing.. Manik: Hey tu roh kyu rahi ho(nandini looks at him)...i mean tum roh kyu rahi Ho.. Cabir: Okay..kk hum raghav ka naam nahi lagey... Nandini: Wipes of her tear.. Manik: Tumhari akho me kya water tanker hai kya...jo kabhi leak Ho jata hai.. Dhruv: Aaj Ki court verdict finishes over here... Nxt day..(late morning) Cabir: Getting boring.. Alya: Getting bored... Manik: Chalo cricket kehlete hai.. Mukti: U guys leave..I'll take nap.. Cabir: What..oh freak ..nappy... Mukti:(grinning) nap...matlab soney jaa rahi Hu.. Cabir: I know...main tumhe test kar raha tha.. Manik: Chalo(deepika's tone from Chennai express) They all go down... Mukti gets busy in her sleep They leave .. Nandini gets bore and thinks of cleaning mess.. Dhruv: Shit..oh my god..is this my place.. Nandini: I just ...jus.. Dhruv: U r superb dude.. Mukti:(comes rubbing her eyes) chilla kyu raha.. Dhruv: Mukti ..kuch Sikh..ghar dekh..i mean seriously nandini tumne is apartment ko ghar bana Diya.. Nandini smiles.. Alya: Shit..she can smile..i thought u can only cry...(all of them burst into laughter) Nandini: It's tea time..wanna have tea.. Alya: Manik ko bulao.. Nandini: Matlab.. Alya: It's manik's and cabir's turn today to make food..so. Nandini: I mean kya main banau...I love cooking.. Cabir:(who was standing at door listening their conversation) sishter(sister) chai bana do Phil hal.. Mukti: Ha yaar... Nandini: Okay.. Nandini is preparing tea...while pouring tea ...she breaks a tea cup. Same time Manik arrives after finishing his game.. And he hears of something breaking.. Manik: Kya Hua.. Nandini:(turns towards and is scared of him a bit ) voh...voh..actu..actually voh.. Manik: Cup phut Gaya..wait main utha deta Hu..( he is about to bend).. Nandini: Wait main karti Hu.. Manik: Arey main karta Hu...tum aaget maat badna..tumne chappal nahi phene..u would get hurt..(concern) Nandini: Tumne bhi gloves nahi phene... Manik tries to sweep pieces by his bat..Nandini gives him stern look.. Manik: Okay..(he passes her broom ) She's sweeping Manik sit beside and holding his bat guarding it..she smiles ..he smiles too back.. They clean it and she passes tea to everyone. In kitchen Manik is fetching to eat something..Nandini arrives Nandini: Kya dhund rahe Ho.. Manik: Shit u scared me...actually I m hungry.. Nandini: Tea ready hai.. I am about prepare food..can u wait for a while.. Manik: But it's my and cabir's turn to prepare.. Nandini: Voh sab keh rahtey hai..ur. bad cook...so they want to try something new.. Manik: What..esas kisne kaha...? Nandini: Wait..i m joking..yeh lo..(handover him a cup of tea) Manik: Tum bhi lo..(he prepares a cup for her) Sipping tea.. Manik: Tum ne iss main..ghar ka masala..dala hai..right.. Nandini: Yep..yoh mere ghar..amms..kabhi bhar se tea masala nahi lati thi..she use to prepare it herself and she passed her recipe to me.. Manik: (sipping tea) my mom use to..seriously ghar ke chai Ki yaad aye.. Nandini:don't mind if I ask u..tumhare mom toh yahi Mumbai main rahi thi..phir..tum Manik: Actually..I love my mom alot..and my passion for my music is also that strong..Mr.Raj Malhotra . KO aye sab crap lagta hai..he hates music..i hate him for that..so I can't stand by him..i left my place.. Nandini: Mom ke barey Main nahi socha.. Manik: Actually..unki life abhi sorted out hogayi...roz ke dad-son ke fights se Mukti mil gayi..i visit her ..jab Mr. Malhotra is not at home..(he keeps both the cups on basin ..nandini stands leaning on kitchen slab..watching him cleaning cups) Manik: Thanks for tea and talks...(winks at her) Nandini goes in bedroom and finds Mukti searching something.. Nandini: Mukti kya dhund rahe Ho.. Mukti: Arey aaj Dhruv ko payment karna hai... Nandini:oh(Nandini thinks about how she'll pay him) Mukti: Finally..(she gets her credit card ')..ab jaldi ja kar paise lati Hu...main jab star ban jaugi tab iss..dhruv ke muh per yese yese(snapping and acting ) muh per phek ke marugi..(they have a laugh) Nandini: Aur..alya.. Mukti: Alya...(*imagine Mukti narrating and alya acting)..arey uske pass paise nahi hogey..phir..ab voh jayegi.. Apne boss ke pass jayegi.. Alya: Sir..voh kuch paise chahiye na.. Sir: Arey 2week pehley..he toh payment Hua tha.. Alya:emergency sir..aap nxt payment se Kat Dena plz.. Sir: Okay..fine.. Alya: Thank you..sir. Mukti: Samjhi..chalo I'll leave (Nandini starts searching money ' she finds only 2000/- in her bag) Nandini:(herself) ab kya karu... Manik enters.. Manik: What's up? ...sry agar Maine disturb kiya.. Nandini:no!! No!! She leaves.. In evening, Dhruv:(settles him on chair..and keeps a box on table) bhaiooo..and unki behno..(grabbing attention) so lets began with hafta(ransoms).. Mukti: (putting money in box) yeh ley.. Alya:(smiling) my share.. Manik: Yeh ley...(adding money to box) Cabir:(holding his money) sahab paisey nahi hai... Dhruv:(slams his hand on table) kya paise nahi hai... Cabir: Maa..bimar hai..behen Ki shaadi hai.. (Mukti,alya ,Manik and nandini were laughing..manik was looking at nandini with corner of his eyes) Dhruv: Mere kaaliya..paise idhar la(snatching it from him and puts in box) Cabir:(grumbling walks by and sits beside Manik) Manik: U know what Dhruv...tujhe IT company main nahi ek bank main kaam karna chahiye.. Alya: Like seriously... Mukti: Arey Manik..agar voh vaha kaam Karta toh bank hi doob jati... Alya: What??? Mukti: Alya..wait let me explain..dhruv vaha kaam Karta toh..collection ke saarey paise..dhruv apne jeeb main rakhta..aur bank main paise na honey ke ka run bank paani main doob jati...(claps ..so that everyone laughs).. Manik and cabir :(look at each other ) ha..ha..ha.(mockingly) Dhruv: Kuch dhang ka joke marti..chalo..nxt(making registry in dairy) Nandini: Actually..(everyone look at her)mere pass sirf do hi hazar rupee hai(only2000/-) .. Dhruv: Sirf 3000/-only..no penny less than it or more than it.. Alya: Dhruv..kaise laygi..abhi keliye..lele..she'll give afterwards.. Dhruv is about to speak Manik: But mujhe nahi lagta..iske pass sirf 2000/-hai.. Nandini: I'm not lying..seriously nahi hai.. Mukti: Manik don't start it again..swear I'll kill u.. Cabir: I think..(Manik glares at him) .(cabir keeps finger on his lips) Manik: Arey just look..she has travelled from Bangalore..kuch toh paise hogey.. Nandini: Sach main nahi hai... Cabir: Nahi hogey..agar voh keh rahi hai.. Nandini:(nods in yes) Manik: I don't believe... Nandini: Fine...main prove kar Sakti Hu..(she walks and brings her purse and starts counting cash)1,2,2500/-...3000/-(everyone turns upto her) wait..(she counts but it's still 3000/-) Manik: I told u.. Cabir: I know Manik it was manik's right.. Manik: I knew Manik was right... Cabir: That one.. Dhruv: Ab hai toh..bhar do..(she pays him) Girls her hug her Mukti: Finally u r here...with us..(Nandini is about to ask)..par ha..maine paise nahi diye.. Alya: Me too.. Everyone walks out.. Manik:(Nandini is standing facing him back) btw tea was awesome..par har time..for ur marvellous tea I can't afford to pay 1000/- for each cup..(nandini immediately turns..manik winks at her and leaves) To be continued.. Hey guys..if u like plzz do comment and don't..but still comment..by giving ur feedback Part 1 At apartment, Everyone is just chilling around Cabir: Yeh Mukti lab ayegi...mujhe bhook lagi hai..aur mujhe kuch khana.. Manik: Mr.payturam..kitna khayga...abhi toh yeh (packet of wafer) thous thous ke khaya.. Alya:(throws pillow at cabir) unfortunately I agree with Manik.. Dhruv: Voh sab thik hai..par Mukti ko bhaut der hogi hai.. While Mukti arrives, Mukti: Hello people... Dhruv: Mukti kaha thi tu?? Cabir: Ha ..moti mujhe kitne bhook lagi hai pata..abhi toh mere muh se pet ke chuhey..bhara aaj jayege... Mukti: Chup bey...guyzz..i have suprise for u...tandada...(Nandini arrives) Dhruv: Yeh kon hai.. Alya: Oh..ur sister (Mukti nods in no) ur co-actor Mukti: No guys..she r new roommate. Manik arrives Manik: Whose new mad? In our world..(he looks at nandini) Nandini eyes widen after seeing him Manik: Tum.. Alya: U know each other ...wow.. Manik: She's a thief... Everyone (except Mukti): What? Nandini: (nods no) Mukti: Manik mind ur tongue...kuch bhi mat bak.. Manik: Arey in morning..she tried to steal my wallet.. Nandini:(tears welling up) nahi..(pleading) voh nichey gir Gaya tha.. Manik: Oh really... Nandini: Plzz believe me.. Mukti: Shut up..ha Manik..and btw she doesn't have shelter..so she'll be staying here.. Manik: No..way Mukti...i can't stand a thief.. Mukti: Enough ha Manik... Dhruv: What makes u call her thief..? Flashback At railway station, Nandini and Manik collide with each other..without noticing Manik walks further...Nandini realizes he dropped his wallet..at same Manik realizes his he dropped his wallet..he turns back and finds nandini picking it up.. Manik: Hey..chor..voh mera.. Nandini: (gets up) Manik:(gets lost in her) her beautiful doe eyes..a perfect pouty lips and her milky skin..and that sindoor makes her more beautiful...wait sindoor...Manik she's married..stop thinking Nandini: Apka walle... Manik: I know tum kahogi...i fell down..and blah blah..i know ...such kinds of very..well...tum chori kar rahi thi na... Nandini: Nahi...no..voh actually Manik: Oh plzz.. Flashback end Alya: U r married.. Cabir: License galey main nahi dikh raha..(sarcastic) Dhruv: If u r married toh..where's your husband?? .. Nandini looks at Mukti Mukti: Guyzz..actually.. Manik: Tu uski PA hai..ya lawyer udke behalf par bolegi..let her speak.. Nandini: Voh mere shaadi ko just 1week hogaye hai..as soon as I returned after my pakphera...raghav ke kaam Ke vajah se we left very soon nxt day..when I reached here I was happy everything seemed perfect..and at station I collided with this person Manik: Manik..Manik Malhotra..mm Nandini: Ya ..Manik..after that when I reached at his place..i found a girl over there...he introduced her as love of his life..he married me only due to to his parents will...and then I walked out...and I met Mukti..and I m here Manik: See she's married..so she can't stay..Mr.khadoos khurana won't allow her here..so bye.. Mukti: Manik..u .. After long time quarrelling between them Dhruv: Errr...stop it u both...it's my place..so I'll decide.. Manik: Before u decide Mr.dhruv ..we pay u ..so better think abt it..(looking at nandini) we should not suffer from any kind of problem.. Mukti: And yes, (emotional blackmail) bas itna sochna..itne raat KO ek aakeli ladki ..khuli tijori Ki tarah hoti hai.. Manik: Yeh...cheating..ur blackmailing him... While cabir and alya r enjoying it Cabir: (brings some shev) wanna had?? Dhruv: Have!! Cabir: That..one Alya and cabir start eating..Nandini is standing there still.. Alya: U can have..inka drama chalta rahega..chill Manik: Aur vesey bhi..mukti..it's 5:00pm ..koi raat nahi hui hai.. Dhruv: Stop..she can stay..that's final... Manik: Dhruv..(Mukti shows him thumb down) Manik leaves the house stomping door.. Dhruv: Agar door ko kuch Hua... Manik:(shouts) pata hai.. Sam's Katta..(a place all these roommates chill..and their foodplaza..) Sam: Arey Manik bhai... Manik: Sam jaa...abhi paise nahi..hai Sam: Konse..paise..main thodi bheek mag raha Hu.. Manik: Voh tera udhar chuka degey... Sam: Okay bro..aa..aye..(shouts at a beggar)dhur Ho.. Beggar: Bhaut bhook lagi hai sahab..kuch hoga toh do.. Sam: Maine dharmshala khuli Ki hai..bhag... Manik gets an idea.. While upstairs As soon as Manik leaves Mukti: Chal I'll show u our place.. She shows her whole house.. Alya: And this is our bedroom Nandini: Tum sab saath sotey Ho.. Mukti: Nahi...voh 3idiots bahar...aur hum yaha.. Alya: Arey apni bag toh rakho Cabir: No one..is bhagoing with it Dhruv: Running away!! Alya: Yeh wala cupboard humara hai..and yeh wala unka... Cabir: Voh sab chodo ladies...mujhe bhook lagi..jaldi kuch bano...ya phir aaj Sam ka Karta zindabad Nandini: If u don't mind I'll cook.. Cabir: Hum khane se matlab hai bas... Mukti: How's the place?? Nandini: Aachi hai per thodi messes hai.. They all burst into laughter Nandini finishes cooking Nandini: Foods ready... Dhruv: Wow..it smells yummy...lets start Nandini: Voh tumhara friend Manik is not here...lets wait for him.. Alya: Y do u care?? Pagal hai voh..aa jayega Nandini: Humare family main we all eat together...so.. Manik arrives.. Manik: Let me introduce u to my friend Mr.Dhanraj Mukti: Yeh toh Sam ke kattey wala bekari hai... Manik:( acts like Mukti) Mukti..how dare u?? His not thief..oops.beggar but my friend.. Dhruv: Manik tu pagal Ho Gaya hai kya..bhej ussey.. Manik: Agar..mukti Ki friend rahe Sakti hai..toh yeh bhi yahi rahega.. Mukti: Fine... Cabir: Manik lets khatey hai..yaar.. Manik: Okay..lets have it... Nandini: Jo bhi ghar Mila voh bana dala.. Manik: What..u wasted ur whole grocery.. Nandini: No.. They all love and relish food Dhruv: Kitne Dino baad ghar ke khane jaisa lag raha hai... Nandini smiles Beggar: Keep on eating...and does not stop... Cabir: Manik..tera dost aaj hi sab khatam kardega... Nxt day, Everyone wakes up and finds house clean..and everything stelled at their place.. Dhruv:omg..yeh mera ghar hai... Alya: Seriously I never knew it's so beautiful.. Everyone gets ready lazily..(as it's Sunday) Nandini: Breakfast is ready...voh main aaj idli prepare Ki hai... Cabir: Chalega... Dhruv: Dhodega... Cabir: Manik tera dost kahi nahi dhikhe nahi der raha Manik: Ussey kuch urgent kaam ..tha..varna logo Ki Tarah (looks at nandini) Alya: Chalo...breakfast ready hai.. All of them finish breakfast.. Manik is searching for his watch.. Manik: Dhruv ...meri watch dekhi hai.. After lot of searching.. Alya: Manik yahi hogi.. Manik: I know kiske pass hogi..(walks towards Nandini) meri watch Nandini: Mujhe nahi pata kaha hai.. Manik: Oh plzz.. Manik accuses her with lot of accusations.. Mukti: Manik stop it now..agar voh chori karti toh..y she would have stayed back.. Nandini brings her bag.. Nandini: (tears rolling down from her eyes) tumhe lagta hai na main chor Hu...toh lets prove it know..here's my bag check it..no...(her purse falls down ) ...seriously u think I'll steal ur watch...first thing Mr.Malhotra (snapping fingers ) I don't like watches...aaj tak jitne bhi watches as a gift mujhe mil hai..i gave it someone..or kept with me...and u think I m thief...ek din mujhe raastey par 100 Miley they...i returned it police station...u idiot..and u think..i stole ur watch..(weeping) Dhruv: Agar voh keh rahi hai..usne nahi churaya..toh na sahi... Manik: What makes u believe her?? They again start quarrelling.. Manik on one side and Fab4on other.. Nandini takes her bag..and slowly moves out.. Alya: Shit..voh chali Gaye.. Everyone moves out and finds her missing Mukti: U r such a dog Manik... At night, Manik arrives home.. Manik: Hello friends...(waving his hands so that everyone notices his watch) But no one pays heed to him.. Manik: Dude it party ..time lets celebrate.. Cabir:tu pagaaa.. ..shit u find ur clock.. Dhruv: Found..hota hai voh..and watch... Mukti: Mil Gaya na... Dhruv: Kaha se Mila.. Manik: Voh police station main Mila ..here is the reason for celebration...(he brings Nandini with him) Alya and Mukti instantly hug her... Alya: U r back... Mukti: Thank u Manik...we missed u.. Dhruv: Tumhe kaha mile... Flashback At police station.. Manik: Excuse me sir... Police officer: Yes...r u caught in some illegal party.. Manik: No..no..actually meri watch kho gayi hai.. Police officer: Kab khoyi... Manik: Aaj subah..it was expensive Police officer (removes some articles): Yeh hai kya.. Manik: Yes..thank u so much sir... Police officer: Yeh raha apka chor... (he is none other than same beggar ..whom Manik bought) Flashback end Mukti: Dekha...Maine kaha..tha na u can't recognize people... Manik: Kab kaha... Cabir: But where did she got u?? They all nod their head Cabir:( shouts) bol..toh Manik: Mujhe pata tha ...yeh sirf fo jagah per milegi..1)railway station 2)bus stop...and found her..at railway station Mukti: Tu iske saath chali aye. (asking Nandini) Manik: Nahi yaar..maan hi nahi rahi thi..phir kya..maine chaku(knife) rakhi..i dragged her here.. Everyone look at him as if they saw a ghost. . ... Manik: Main kuch bhi khe duga aur tum maan logey...actually Flashback At station.. Manik: Plzz..i m really sorry..plzz ghar chalo.. Nandini: No way.. Manik: Fine..and he leaves Tc(ticket checker): Excuse..me..ticket.. Nandini: (scared) ticket nahi hai...purse ghar par rahe gayi.. Tc: Toh aap ghar par kyu nahi hai...chali yeh Nandini: Kaha.. Tc: Jail...station..jab apke ghar waley aayege..apki bel karne.. Nandini: Mera koi nahi hai..yaha.. Manik: Jaan how can u say that...i know..we fought...but ..sir here's r platform ticket.. Nandini(looks at his hand which holding her from shoulder) Tc: Beti ..apne pati se naraz nahi Hua kartey..sabke couples main fights..hoti u should not leave ur house like that...u know..u r made for each other Manik:(whispers in her ear) u decide..ghar ya jail... Flashback end Manik : And here we r.. Cabir: So party time... Dhruv: What party?? Alya: Addition of new member in girls gang.. Manik:haha... Dhruv: Before that..let me clear something to you Nandini nods.. Dhruv: Conditions for staying at my place..1)no alchols and no smoking..(Manik does a face palm) Mukti: What?? Nandini: I don't.. Dhruv: Just conditions..2) about rent u have to pay it on 3rd of every month..3) u r new member over here...u have submit ur deposit..that's 3000/- ..tum abhi aue Ho..toh by tomorrow arrange it.. Nandini nods yes.. Dhruv: Tum tumhare husband se maang Sakti ..no issue..kya naam Manik: Raghav!!! Nandini eyes well up..she starts sobbing.. Manik: Hey tu roh kyu rahi ho(nandini looks at him)...i mean tum roh kyu rahi Ho.. Cabir: Okay..kk hum raghav ka naam nahi lagey... Nandini: Wipes of her tear.. Manik: Tumhari akho me kya water tanker hai kya...jo kabhi leak Ho jata hai.. Dhruv: Aaj Ki court verdict finishes over here... Nxt day..(late morning) Cabir: Getting boring.. Alya: Getting bored... Manik: Chalo cricket kehlete hai.. Mukti: U guys leave..I'll take nap.. Cabir: What..oh freak ..nappy... Mukti:(grinning) nap...matlab soney jaa rahi Hu.. Cabir: I know...main tumhe test kar raha tha.. Manik: Chalo(deepika's tone from Chennai express) They all go down... Mukti gets busy in her sleep They leave .. Nandini gets bore and thinks of cleaning mess.. Dhruv: Shit..oh my god..is this my place.. Nandini: I just ...jus.. Dhruv: U r superb dude.. Mukti:(comes rubbing her eyes) chilla kyu raha.. Dhruv: Mukti ..kuch Sikh..ghar dekh..i mean seriously nandini tumne is apartment ko ghar bana Diya.. Nandini smiles.. Alya: Shit..she can smile..i thought u can only cry...(all of them burst into laughter) Nandini: It's tea time..wanna have tea.. Alya: Manik ko bulao.. Nandini: Matlab.. Alya: It's manik's and cabir's turn today to make food..so. Nandini: I mean kya main banau...I love cooking.. Cabir:(who was standing at door listening their conversation) sishter(sister) chai bana do Phil hal.. Mukti: Ha yaar... Nandini: Okay.. Nandini is preparing tea...while pouring tea ...she breaks a tea cup. Same time Manik arrives after finishing his game.. And he hears of something breaking.. Manik: Kya Hua.. Nandini:(turns towards and is scared of him a bit ) voh...voh..actu..actually voh.. Manik: Cup phut Gaya..wait main utha deta Hu..( he is about to bend).. Nandini: Wait main karti Hu.. Manik: Arey main karta Hu...tum aaget maat badna..tumne chappal nahi phene..u would get hurt..(concern) Nandini: Tumne bhi gloves nahi phene... Manik tries to sweep pieces by his bat..Nandini gives him stern look.. Manik: Okay..(he passes her broom ) She's sweeping Manik sit beside and holding his bat guarding it..she smiles ..he smiles too back.. They clean it and she passes tea to everyone. In kitchen Manik is fetching to eat something..Nandini arrives Nandini: Kya dhund rahe Ho.. Manik: Shit u scared me...actually I m hungry.. Nandini: Tea ready hai.. I am about prepare food..can u wait for a while.. Manik: But it's my and cabir's turn to prepare.. Nandini: Voh sab keh rahtey hai..ur. bad cook...so they want to try something new.. Manik: What..esas kisne kaha...? Nandini: Wait..i m joking..yeh lo..(handover him a cup of tea) Manik: Tum bhi lo..(he prepares a cup for her) Sipping tea.. Manik: Tum ne iss main..ghar ka masala..dala hai..right.. Nandini: Yep..yoh mere ghar..amms..kabhi bhar se tea masala nahi lati thi..she use to prepare it herself and she passed her recipe to me.. Manik: (sipping tea) my mom use to..seriously ghar ke chai Ki yaad aye.. Nandini:don't mind if I ask u..tumhare mom toh yahi Mumbai main rahi thi..phir..tum Manik: Actually..I love my mom alot..and my passion for my music is also that strong..Mr.Raj Malhotra . KO aye sab crap lagta hai..he hates music..i hate him for that..so I can't stand by him..i left my place.. Nandini: Mom ke barey Main nahi socha.. Manik: Actually..unki life abhi sorted out hogayi...roz ke dad-son ke fights se Mukti mil gayi..i visit her ..jab Mr. Malhotra is not at home..(he keeps both the cups on basin ..nandini stands leaning on kitchen slab..watching him cleaning cups) Manik: Thanks for tea and talks...(winks at her) Nandini goes in bedroom and finds Mukti searching something.. Nandini: Mukti kya dhund rahe Ho.. Mukti: Arey aaj Dhruv ko payment karna hai... Nandini:oh(Nandini thinks about how she'll pay him) Mukti: Finally..(she gets her credit card ')..ab jaldi ja kar paise lati Hu...main jab star ban jaugi tab iss..dhruv ke muh per yese yese(snapping and acting ) muh per phek ke marugi..(they have a laugh) Nandini: Aur..alya.. Mukti: Alya...(*imagine Mukti narrating and alya acting)..arey uske pass paise nahi hogey..phir..ab voh jayegi.. Apne boss ke pass jayegi.. Alya: Sir..voh kuch paise chahiye na.. Sir: Arey 2week pehley..he toh payment Hua tha.. Alya:emergency sir..aap nxt payment se Kat Dena plz.. Sir: Okay..fine.. Alya: Thank you..sir. Mukti: Samjhi..chalo I'll leave (Nandini starts searching money ' she finds only 2000/- in her bag) Nandini:(herself) ab kya karu... Manik enters.. Manik: What's up? ...sry agar Maine disturb kiya.. Nandini:no!! No!! She leaves.. In evening, Dhruv:(settles him on chair..and keeps a box on table) bhaiooo..and unki behno..(grabbing attention) so lets began with hafta(ransoms)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love it year
too good nice update and pls continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
It's just awesome. . mind blowing. . plz next part update. .. fast.. I am waiting for your updates. ..
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#9
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
awesome update.. plsss continue soon.. mene pehle bhi padi thi ye story.. itss just superb.. luv it.. plsss plss update fast.. eagerly waiting.. vaise concept is beautiful... :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-D ;-) :-) :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D

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