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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Toshna_1522


always my pleasure princess:)
aww so sweet of u to wait fr my cmnt:)
title is awsm...waiting fr d chap


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Posted: 10 years ago
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sooo here's you wait is over...
updating the first part in three parts...
do hit like button and do comment too...

PART 1A

Nandini's POV


Manik and me, we met in college, had an amazing love story (AS CVS are showing) and everyone was happy with our pair.. So after college we got married. Last month we completed two year of our marriage.!! I cant believe this is all actually happening.!!


Me and manik..


Just then i heard someone calling my name..


End of POV


Manik: NANDINI..!!!!


Nandini: haaa aayi..!!!


She goes to their bedroom, and sighs seeing the scene.


Manik was struggling with his tie.

Manik: nandini come na, u know na this tie and all..!!! Agggrrr

Nandini goes near to him stand in front of him, and started adjusting his tie.


Manik was doing his hair looking in mirror.


Nandini: pata nahi kya hota agar me tumhare sath na hoti to.?

And she was done with his tie so she was just started walking but manik pulled her back and she bangs on his chest.


Manik little angrily: dont u even say that again.

Nandini look at him and smile.


They both settled on dinning table, had their breakfast and while leaving manik dropped nandini to her chachi's home.


Today rishabh was coming from new york. He is fine now, in fact he went with dhruv and alia. Nandini firstly was not convinced for sending his brother with dhruv, because she knows there is a connection. and here she proved right, there was a connection. But now everything is fine, dhruv and rishabh are fine, now rishabh can speak and dhruv was not having that attacks. So for the treatment they went to new york, after manik and nandini's wedding dhruv, alia and rishabh went to newyork for treatment. After two years they are coming.


About others..

Mukti is married to nishant shikhavat, manik's business associate. He is having his own company and name for making it by his own. They are happy together. Its been one year of their marriage.

Dhruv and alia too got married with manik and nandini.

Cabir and navya too married. Now cabir is not gay, and not even love navya. But their relationship is beyond love which is not at all compared to love.


So here nandini murthy... Sorry nandini malhotra, having tea with her chacha chachi and amms. And manik came with rishabh.

Manik dropped alia and dhruv to their home and them came to nandini's home.


Manik: yelo yaha to sab hamare bina chai pi rahe he champ..!!

Chacha welcomes them: are beta..!!

Rishabh: haa jiju, ye log to mujhe bhul hi gaye..


All were having tears in their eyes because they heard rishabh's voice after so many years.!

Nandini came near to him, and placed his hands on his cheeks.

Nandini: rishu..

Rishabh: nandu diii..


And they both hugged each other crying badly.!!


Manik was just looking at them, he too got a tear in his eyes but he controlled.


Manik: are nandu, use andar to ane doo. Yahi pe ro logi kya.?


Everyone smiles listening to manik, they all settled down in living room, having usual chit chat.

Amms, chachi and nandini talking about random relatives, cooking and all, chacha manik and rishabh were talking about business.


Soon they all had their dinner. Manik was about to say something.


Nandini: manik kya me aj yahi ruk jau.?

Manik: but nandini me kaise..

Then he realise everyone was staring him, so he settled.

Manik: of course, tumhe puchne ki zaroorat nahi he.

Nandini jumps in joy, but manik was sad, as when he will get up there was no one who will kiss him, and wish him good morning.


Soom manik got up and bid everyone bye, and started walking off, nandini senses that something is wrong, she went after him. They stood near his car.


Nandini: manik...

Manik turn around: haa

Nandini coming near to him: kya hua.?

Manik sighs: chalo na ghar nandini, kal subah vapas aa jana..

Nandini smiled: manik, 2 saal se me rishu se nahi mili hu, 10 saal se uske muh se kuchh suna nahi he, aaj hum bahut sari baten karenge. To me ghar kaise aa jau, aur amms ko kitna bura lagega, aur me kal vapas aa hi rahi hu na.


Manik made a pout: tum sabke bare me sochti ho, bas mere bare me nahi.

Nandini encircled her arms around his neck: achha..!!

Manik nodded.

Nandini: too kya chahiye.?

Manik gave a famous smirk.

Nandini smiled and came near to his lips, and placed her lips on his lips, its started with simple kiss, but ended on passionate kiss. They gasps for breathe, so they broke the kiss..


Manik: god nandini, me kaise rahunga akela iss ke bad.??

Nandini: kal me aa jaungi, pakka i will not make u wait promise.


With this she peck on his lips. And said bye to him, he also said bye to her, and kissed her on her forehead.


And soon he left, nandini too went in, and started talking with rishabh.


nandini and rishabh were in her room, he was resting his head in her lap...


nandini: rishabh tujhe 2 saal koi pareshani to nahi hui na..? i mean u know na dhruv and you have a connection regarding that accident and...

rishabh interrupted her: dii... aap bhi na... I am fine now, and even dhruv is fine now. we both are normal now. aur mujhe koi bhi pareshani nahi hui. pata he un logo ne mujhe bilkul apne chhote bhai jaise rakha. alia di is really a sweetheart. wo to mujhe apna chhota bhai hi manti he. ap janti he na, harshad ke baad woh bhai behan k rishte pr vishwas hi nai karti. but she was really good with me. and dhruv... he too cares for me a lot.


nadini smiled, and rishabh looked at her.


rishabh: jaise aap aur manik jiju mere liye care karte ho.

nandini: achhaa...

rishabh: hmm. pata he dii. maine waha dekha ke alia dii, dhruv se kitna pyar karti he, you know unke har ek baat har ek cheez me dhruv k liye pyar dikhta he.

nandini smiled: hmm wo to dhruv bhi karta he alia se.

rishabh: dii... kya pyar itna beautiful hota he...???

nandini: haa bilkul... you know, pyar ek ek ehsaas he, ek feeling he, jo app ke bas me hi nahi hota. pyar bas ho jata he... ab tum mujhe aur apne jiju ko hi dekh lo. at start we two hate each other (remembers the spot girl moments), you know na i used to call him "MONSTER MANIK". but then things changed, and here, we are married, happily...

rishabh got up from her lap, place a cushion on his lap, put both hands on his cheeks: dii kya mujhe bhi koi pyar karega..?

nandini eyes got wide: rishu... you too small baby, for love, right now study is more important right..?

rishabh just nodded.

nandini: tumhe bhi pyar hoga.. tumhari life me bhi koi aayegi, but on right time, till then just wait hmm... now come sleep..


rishabh placed the pillow on bed and lay beside her.

rishabh: dii, app dono ki shadi ko 2 saal ho gaye he. aap kabhi fight nahi karte.?

nandini: fight...?? bahot hoti he... Aaj hi dekh lo, muh phula ke gaya he.

Rishabh: kyun.???

Nandini: because i didnt went with him, thats y.

Rishabh: par di jiju ne khud hi kaha k aap yaha ruk jao.

Nandini smiled: wo isliye kyunki, wo sab ko ye nahi dikhana chahte k he cant stay away. Aur phir sab the na tab. Chacha chachi, amms. Isliye.

Rishabh: hmmm ok... Vaise di ek que puchhu.?

Nandini: ha pucho..

Rushabh: dii what about baby.?

Nandini: who baby.?

Rishabh: are diii, ek chotu baby..!! Its been 2 years, ab to koi mujhe mamu bulaye.

Nandini blushed on his statement.

But she ignored it: rishabh abhi so jao tum. Good night.

Rishabh: okk good night.


Soon he slept, but nandini was still awake.


Nandini's POV..


Baby.???

Can we have a baby.? Is this right time.?

I mean i know 2 years are enough but pata hi nahi chala kab 2 saal ho gaye.

Am I ready for the baby.?

Is manik ready for the baby.?


Uff nandini stop thinking soo jao...


End of POV



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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1B

It was a new morning, a fresh start...


Manik was sleeping on his stomach on his bed, wearing a black vest and loose pants. He heard that his phone is continuously buzzing. He picked up the phone with sleepy eyes and placed it on his ears.


Manik: hello (sleepy tone)

Nandini: good morning baby..!!!

Manik smiled that she called on her time, he checked the watch and saw it was around 7:45.


Nandini disturbed his thoughts: manik, still sleeping..??

Manik taking a yaw: hmmm...

Nandini: manik get up, aur ha tumhari coffee rakhi he side table pe, breakfast bhi ban gaya he. And get up now, go to office..

Manik smiled that she is not around, but she will never leave a chance to take care of him.

Nandini again yelled: MANIK...


Manik came out of trance, and quickly sat on the bed.

Manik: ha ha uth gaya hu. Waise kab aa rahi ho ghar wapas.?

Nandini: tum office jaoge, phir recording pe jaoge, phir sham ko mujhe ghar pick karne aaoge, tabhi aa paungi na..

Manik: okkk, rat ko pick kar lunga. Waise bhi aaj thoda office late jaunga.

Nandini: kyun.?

Manik: wo kal buddy & alia bhi aaye he, usse thik se baat nahi hui, soo, fab 5 is meeting @10 may be. So in noon I'll go..

Nandini: haa thik he, aur ha please lunch kar lena.

Manik: haa nandu, kar lunga. Chalo now bye.

Nandini yelled: manik..

Manik: hmm..??

Nandini: woo abhi nashta kar lena.

Manik: ha thik he, rakhu me.?

Nandini: manik..

Manik: haa nandini...(little irritated)

Nandini: woo meri taraf se dhruv aur alia se hii kehna.

Manik: okk aur kuch.

Nandini: nahi bas..

Manik: okk


He was about to cut the call, but listen nandini again shouted his name.


Manik(little angrily): ab kya nandini.?

Nandini(hesitated): wooo I Love You.

Manik smiled: I love You too..

Nandini: now bye, bahot time pass karte ho manik tum.

And she cut the call, manik was just smiling at her cute gesture.



Manik got ready wearing a casual tshirt, with his jacket and blue denim. He went straight to their meeting place, which was mukti's house terrace. All were there, alia was sitting on a chair with dhruv beside him, cabir was on his drums and mukti was sitting on the floor. Manik entered.


Mukti: aaj bhi late.? I mean seriously, tum hamesha late kaise ho jate ho.

Manik: are yar mukti, office ki files dekh raha tha.

Cabir: office ki file dekh raha tha ya phir nandini ko.

Mukti and cabir high five in the air.

Manik: shut up cabir, nandini apne ghar pe he. Wo kal rishabh aaya is liye.

Dhruv: isliye buddy late ho gaya hoga. Uthaya nahi hoga kisi ne.


Manik remembered their morning conversation and smiled.


Manik: buddy kaisa he be yar tu..

And went to him, takes him in a bone crushing hug.

Manik(still hugging): i missed u yrr..

Dhruv: i too missed you.


Alia and mukti too hugged each other, and they all shared fab 5 hug.


All now settled down on their chairs.


Manik: soo mukti, where is nishant.?

Mukti: wo office gaye he, you know na work.

She made a pout.

Manik caresses her hair: i know.

Dhruv: guys, me and alia want to tell you something. (He said in a serious tone)

Cabir: koi mar gaya kya dhruv.?

Alia: stop joking all the time cabir.

Cabir: ok ok sorry.


Alia and dhruv looked at each other.

Alia: guys, I am pregnant..


All were just stood there like a statue, dhruv and alia were just looking at three of them.


Dhruv: guys.. Aren't you happy.?

Mukti(serious tone): happy.??? Are very very happy dhruv(in excitement she jumps on alia and hugged her)


Dhruv: are mukti, she is pregnant, dhire se.


Manik: congrats buddy,( he hugged dhruv) congrats alia ( he hugged alia)


cabir: wohhoo, little princess will have now a little princess...

dhruv hits cabir's shoulders.


alia: okk guys, please dont get too much hopes...

she stood on her place.

alia: maine sirf abhi ghar pr hi test kiya he. dhruv i hope u remember hame aaj noon me doctor k pas jana he.

dhruv encircled his arms around her shoulders: ofcourse alia. i remember. and tum khadi kyun hui, beth jao chalo.

alia: dhruv kab se bethi hi thi me.

dhruv: phir bhi betho tum.

alia sits down.

dhruv sits on his knees in front of alia.

dhruv: alia, this is our baby, aur me nahi chahta k kuch bhi galat ho, isiliye please apne aap ka khayal rakho, and ye heels abse mat pehnana.

alia: dhruv i know, even i dont want anything wrong, but abhi ham sure nahi he, we'll tak to doctor, then lets see.

dhruv nodds in no: nahii phir bhi...

alia sighs and nodded in yes.


this was all noticed by manik.


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PART 1C

manik's POV


how sweet they are looking, 3 years back, i didnt thought that they will stay this much happy, i didnt knew that dhruv can take this much responsibilities. he will become "PAPA".

woowww... how amazing feeling it will be...

kya me aur nandini..?

i dont know, mujhe nahi lagta she is ready..

but i also want this feeling, i also want to take care of her, like dhruv..

am I being jealous from dhruv..?

ofcourse koi bhi jealous hoga... this feeling...


his thoughts were interrupted by mukti


mukti: MANIK..?? kaha kho gaya..??

manik: aaa woo kuch nahi bas aise hi...

cabir: waise tum kabse family plan kar rahe ho..?

manik was about to say something but alia interrupted in between.

alia: ha manik, tumhari shadi ko bhi 2 years ho gaye he, i think now you should try..


manik: okkk okk hang on hang on... look guys, even me and nandini, didnt discussed about family planning. hamne kabhi iss bare me socha hi nahi. you know two years went like two minutes. but yess i also want to be a father, lets see, i'll talk to her about it and then we'll try..


all smiled...


alia: mukti what about you..? its been 1 year... have you tried.?

mukti: i dont think so that nishant is ready, we have talked about it, he said he is not really busy, then if i'll be pregnant, and he'll not give proper time to me and baby. so we decided first let him do his work, we'll think for it after one or two years.


all nodded.


dhruv was about to ask someone, but cabir stopped him.


cabir: now dont ask me the same question.

manik: but kyun, tumhari aur navya ki shadi ko to 3 years ho gaye he..

cabir: i know but i dont think that we can make it... soo stop thinking about it... and lets practise.


all nodded, dhruv and alia started their luvvy duvvy talk and mukti went to kitchen to take some snacks. manik was sitting beside cabir.


manik placed his hand on his back: soo whats up with madhubala..?

cabir sighs: aur kya.. music school. u know na, without "SHAMIYANA", she is incomplete.

manik: hmm...

cabir: you say what about nandini.?

manik: nothing, she is at her home, having good time with her brother.

cabir: so you guys didnt discussed family planning.?

manik: nahi yaar... neither she nor me... you know this idea didnt come up...

cabir: you dont want to be a father.?

manik: what..??? ofcourse i want to be... its just that i dont think that she is ready..

cabir: ohkk..

manik: tu bata..?? you dont want to be a father.?

cabir looked at him but didnt answer.

manik understood.

manik: cabir, navya se ek baar baat to karo. tum log 3 saal se sath ho, shadi ki he so why not getting intimate, what's the problem..?

cabir: manik yaar tu samj nahi raha he. hum log sath rehna chahte the, and for that, for this fake society, we got married. but i dont think we love each other, yes we took care of each other, we do everything what couple do, but except "SEX"

manik: but why not..?? tujhe kya kabhi excitement nahi hoti..?? usse dekhke..?? u are not gay now, u know that right... you know me to jab bhi nandini ko rat ko dekhta hu, i got exited.

cabir waves his head in disbelief.

manik: what.. yahh seriously.. dont you get excited.?

cabir(hesitated): of course hota he... but i control, i know she dont want it.

manik: you dont know anything, girls always want it. its just that they dont make first move, its a boy, who always takes first move, then see how wild they can go...


manik remembered his and nandini's love making.


cabir: we didnt discussed it...

manik: me nandini se bolu k navya se baat kare..?

cabir: noo noo, i'll do it myself..

manik: thats great...

they got up from the seat. manik was adjusting his sleeves.

cabir (wearing a sunglass): waise aisa kya pehnati he nandini raat ko, k you got excited, mujhe bhi to bata taki me bhi navya ko tips dedu...

manik whispers in his ears: nothing...


cabir gave him a wicked smile: sale tu kabhi nahi sudhrega...

manik: me badalna chahta bhi nahi...


they both laughed and fab 5 had their FAB 5 moment again.



soo here I am finished writing my 1st part, its a very long update soo please please do comment lambawala...

and yes silent readers dont feel shy to like or comment on the story, feel free...

and yes whoever want my story to be posted on the social networking sites soo please pm me...

without it, please, it takes lot of effort to write the ff, and if u post i dnt have any problem, but you should have that much manners to ask...


soo do hit like button and do comment too...



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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Awesome update 👍🏼
beautifully written 👏
Loved it ❤️
Cont Soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
😆 interesting storyline...story...
.really thinking how will they talk about the matter...
hope u will update soonnn...⭐️👏😳👏😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

Awesome update👍🏼

beautifully written👏
Loved it❤️
Cont Soon 😊


Thank you so muchh..!!!
Will continue..!!!
Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: komalpopli

😆
interesting storyline...story...

.really thinking how will they talk about the matter...
hope u will update soonnn...😛


Thank you.!!! 😊
Yeah will update soon..!!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
I dont know if you guys noticed or not..!!!
Even I also noticed it jist now.!!!
That with the 1st part I BECOME A SENIOR MEMBER..!!!! 😃 😃
👏 👏
Woohooo..!!! Party timee..!!!
Come on come on hurry up..!!!
Read it fast and shower me with lots of comments.!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ab sirf continue soon se kam nahi chalega.!!!
U hve to congratulate me for becoming senior member.!!!
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