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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ananya0908n

oh god!!!!

you are out of this world!!!
I am telling you you have got a brilliant mind!!
where from you get this ideas!!!
amazing!!!
just awesome
loved it
continue soon
waiting eagerly




Aww Thanku
I love u yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Addrita.Jesin

I just cant even dream of it..!!
Its superbly written..and awesome thinking..!!
Ur ideas are always unique, but this one..i v no word for it..its just awesome..
Another thing, its dark but its MaNan ff na..so its going to be more awesome..as after a dark night, a bright morning will come for sure..

And about the slave idea..though i just hate slavery and cried my heart out when i read uncle toms cabin..but i wd seriously want to read this kinda story with new thought..

And a request..plz end it with a good note..as none of us want to show a dangerous future..



Thanks !
I will give it happy ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
I love your writing it is just awesome and my best one is fake girlfriend lets see how is this one hoping for wonderful ff 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Hey I must say concept if different and i love to read dark Ff so looking forward for it update soon . I also kike ur other ff update them too as I cant wait seriously im so impatient :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Hey Riya...new and very interesting concept ...both prologue and chapter 1 are beautifully written...
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Chapter 1 is awesome Riya.
The world after 100 years... Great idea
But feelin' bad for Nandini AND CASIO TOO...😭
And the rules in the world after 100 years, really strange

Cont Soon dea

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Hey Riya..
Remember me...😉
Bigg Fan of urs🤗
just loved ur idea...
continue soon dear..
missing ur updates alot.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
eChapter 2




(Nandini's POV)

Around 3 Lakhs girl was siting in the huge hall waiting or their wonders to happen . There were 100 halls full of teens of age 18.All turned adult this year.

'The book of knowledge' which came to existence in 2023 said that the Master have right to do anything with her or his slave. There were only 2 lady as a Master rest were Men.

The youngest was of 22 years. His accent was British and his name was 'MANIK MALHOTRA'. People says after his father's death he took the business and became Master at his 17s.He have 300 his own slave where as rest are of his father's. No one speaks about any Master's nature cause they all are same. DARK

Everyone was chatting but I was thinking of the plan to run away.
"Good Afternoon Girls!" Max the host of the event said.
"I wish u guys luck for Ur upcoming future. Let's start the event now. I would love to invite First Batch to come on the stage.
1: Mr. Kinger
2: Mr.Malhotra
3: Mr. Batoon
... "
Everyone stood up seeing the First Batch (Batches were decided by their income) master approaching the stage. They sat their on couch. And everyone sat down. They had one table Infront of them it had one tablet which I heard contained every information of the girls or guys. One wine glass. And one buzzer for the microphone to start working.

"I would love to ask the girls who came from Western Land to stand up and hold the camera's in their hands" half of the girls stood. I glanced back their eyes were red and puffy. I m lucky I never left my family like them as they left me. But still it was hard for me too. I was too from Western Land but I was orphan and there will be another announcement for us. The first buzzer from the stage grabbed my attention back there.

"Lola" Mr. Missile said and the girl named Lola walked to the side stage to register her name.

Again the buzzer buzzed and the girls started moving towards the stage. There were many girls left and finally their chance came to end. Now they would be standing Infront of other Batches.

The girls left after all these Batches chose one are used to work in the management office. I would prefer that rather than being slave.

After some more groups Max announced.
"The Blossom Orphanage's girls please stand with the camera's in their hands" I took camera and kept it Infront of my face. The camera was directly attached to the tablet of master. I prayed that I should leave alone.


(NO ONE'S POV)
As soon as girls stood up the buzzer was pressed. Nandini looked at front finding Mr. Malhotra taking his microphone.
"Nandini "he said and Nandini held her breathe. She looked at him who was straightly staring at her. She shook her head and let the long tear roll down. She somehow carried her feet towards the side stage to register her name.
" What's Ur name? "the man asked. Didn't he heard now?
" Nandini Murthy" she answered. He wrote it down and glanced at the lady behind her.
The lady behind her held her hand firmly and dragged her out to the room. NANDINI entered and fond many people crying their. She looked around finding someone familiar but no one!! She looked out and fond two guards standing there. She took her hands on her neck and started chocking. Everyone looked at her shocked and one of them went out to call guard.
"W... a... Ter" she said in between her acting and the guard rushed out for grabbing.
"Do... C... tor" she again said and the other guard looked around. She joined her hands pleading and he too rushed. She straighten herself and rushed out before anyone can hold her. Someone yelled from behind she kept on running. She was running from her upcoming future and faith which no one can change.

"I m soo good in dramatics and that Mr. Rebor made me fill in that subject. He should have seen my acting now "She muttered to herself running.

She rushed towards something and finding something which can save her. But no! No one can save her or any girl or guy in this world.She finally came to end of the campus area. She can't go from the gate cause of guard. She stretched her arms to reach the wall and to climb up the boundary but before she could do anything the non contact force was Gravitational Force pulled her down with rushed force.

She stumbled down and sobbed lightly on her faith. She again got up ignoring pain on her buttocks and arms.

She never wished to live life like this still she knew that this was coming from her childhood.She again tried to get up and again tried climbing up the wall.

But this time contact force pulled her and she recognized who it was. She finally felt defeated by her faith.

She signed and said"Please leave me " and in her answer everyone laughed.

She knew this would be her upcoming response. She signed highly and took deep breathe."Please" she again pleaded and again got same laugh. She was dragged to one of empty room and was blindfolded. Her wrists and legs were tied and the cloth was kept inside her mouth. She was in pain. She was crying. But no one was here to listen her.

She want someone to be here to listen to her. But now she is more danger as 'The book of knowledge' says that one who runs away from his or her Master will never get freedom and will be rewarded with the pain. After the men or women turns 40s they r granted freedom if they worked good through out their slave life. But one mistake can just betray them from their freedom and Nandini know she did that mistake.



Heyya people. How r u all?? Good?
And I expect more comments than before.
Tell me how the chapter is?
Next chapter will have Manik and Nandini meet.


And one more thing I really sung one song on utube and I really wish u guys to listen.
Toh just let me know how it is?
Link Is in second post down. If possible check out :)



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Edited by fireflies_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
It was superb ...but plz try to update .. soon ...
Waiting eargerly for next part ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
wow story set in future its seems dark and interesting. Looking forward to next part

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