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I salute you for your writing skills. You are really good at expressing drama, love scenes, fun parts like in this story- manvi's character, in tum mile the childish character of nandini. But you are best at expressing emotions. The feelings and emotions of maan you put in your story is commendable. I could literally feel the wetness of teardrop on manik' chest as nandini shed it or be it the last scene where he didn't forget to play a role of father even after having intimate moments with his wife. See these minute things are what are needed in shows and directors lack them. You should pursue professional script writing.
Shiv Shakti
