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Chapter 15

Sunday was one day that Manik reserved for himself. He partied almost everyday or correct would be every night but on Sundays he preferred to stay at home giving time to himself or go to Cabir's place and chill out , play PS (play stations) or watched sports whether be it cricket , football or any other sport .

Cabir was the only person in this city Manik could rely and count on and spent his time with , as both were best friends from past 10 years. They were fortunate enough to get placed in the same company but didn't shared flat as their family used to visit them on and off.

As his Sunday routine Manik was lazy enough to go on with his daily works. As already he was disturbed by the nightmare , he was not finding anything worth entertaining.

He somehow got through his morning tasks and got ready to go to Cabir's place as for first he had to get his car and second he did not wanted to stay alone.
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Far around 8 kms , at Nandini's place , she was all busy doing her morning tasks which included a good half an hour prayer as she does not gets time everyday to say long prayers and Radha busy in other works ( radha ; her maid who is a young girl just started to go to college but also does household works for Nandini as she considers Nandini as her guardian angel and Nandini to considers her as younger sister ) smiling at her seeing how cutely she murmured something with her eyes shut and hands joint.

After a good breakfast , Nandini left her place and after around 35 minutes she was outside the nursing home.

"Hii ..!! Dr. Verma..??" Nandini enquired from the reception. "Appointment.?" Asked the receptionist. "Nahi appointment nahi hai but aap unhe Bol digiye that Nandini is here , I will wait till she gets free." Nandini replied.


Receptionist nodded her head and dialled the extension and after few seconds of call she again turned towards Nandini and informed her what the doctor said , "She is with patient and after that there is one more patient , Dr. Verma said ki wo aapse free ho kar hi Milna chahti hain." .

Nandini smiled at the receptionist and said thank you after which she went to the waiting area for her turn.
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It was around 12 noon when Cabir's sleep was disturbed by the continuous ringing of the door bell and some bangs on the door in between the bells.

"What the hell" ..!! He said irritatingly and slowly got up from the bed to open the door still keeping his eyes shut.

He just somehow managed to open the door and without looking went back and landed on the couch.

Manik who was already standing there outside his door from past half an hour was already irritated and Cabir made him more. Manik walked in and after locking the door took out a chilled water bottle from the refrigerator and poured it whole on Cabir. "What the ...!!!"

He woke up with a jerk and was about to abbuse when he saw Manik standing there and then he just controlled his tongue.
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"Manik what is wrong with you..?? Aise koi kisi ko uthata hai Kya..?" Cabir asked him wiping his face. "Kisi ka to pata nahi tu aise hi uthta hai that I know.. Main pichle aadhe ghante se door bell ring kar raha hoon , knock kar raha hoon , call kar raha but no response. And when you open you don't even bother to see who it is." Saying this

Manik threw himself on the bean bag. "Wo I thought maid hogi so ... Anyways leave that tu itni Subah ..?? What's wrong..?" Cabir asked him yawning and stretching his hands in air. "Really Cabir ..??? Subah..?? It's noon..!!" Saying this he threw a small table clock kept there on Cabir which he luckily grabbed. "Watch out yaar..?? Wanna kill me..??" Cabir said keeping aside the clock and Manik just ignored his statement and rested his head back on bean bag closing his eyes.

Cabir noticed this behaviour of his and sensed something is bothering him. "Manik ." He called out softly and Manik looked at him and with eyes asked what. "What's bothering you Manik...? Kya hua.?? Itna pareshaan kyun hai..?" Cabir asked him.

This was not new for him. He knew that Cabir knew him very well but Manik didn't said anything and just once looked at Cabir and then turned his face aside looking out of the window.

Cabir understood what was bothering him. He too got worried initially but then stood up and went towards him and pulled him up with all his strength. The two hugged each other.

Cabir patted his back and Manik from few seconds just rested his head there and closed his eye. This was a thing which Manik was needing terribly at that time.

"Don't worry..!! Hum sab hain na.. Relax ..!!" Cabir said patting his back and they broke the hug. Cabir noticed the moisture in Manik's eyes but didn't said anything.

Cabir was too on the verge of crying but he just somehow composed himself and in a cheerful sound said "aacha chal tere is dukhi se chehre par main kuch khushi Lekar aata hoon."

Manik too composed himself and asked him what. "Guess who's back..??"

Cabir said in a very enthusiastic tone spreading his hands as if he knew Manik knows the answer. But Manik was all clueless.

He frowned his head and thought for few seconds but couldn't get the answer. He looked at Cabir and he in return gave him "dude-you -know-the-answer-man" look...!!

But when Manik still couldn't get it , Cabir shouted "arre idiot ... DHRUVVV..!!! Dhruv is back..." And those words were enough for Manik to regain his lost smile. His face glowed up like 400 wt bulb and smiled from moon and back. "Really ...!!! Buddy is back...!! "

Manik was all excited hearing his buddy ; his childhood friend Dhurv returning back to India after 5 long years.


This news was enough for Manik to forget his nightmare. Cabir noticed his excitement and changed expressions and silently thanked god for it. Cabir knew that it was not just a nightmare but a deepest wound which was on his soul that was still not healed after soo long .

Manik was deeply affected from it and it was something no one had the courage to talk about.

Edited by Ragingleo - 10 years ago
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Chapter 16



"Hello doctor..!" Nandini greeted Dr. Verma as she entered her cabin and she too greeted her with a wide smile.

Doctor :- "How are you Nandini.?"

Nadnini replied with a sigh :- "Symptoms rising again doctor." .
Hearing her doctor became serious.
Doctor :- "Nandini why don't you listen to me. How many times I have asked you to get operated but you don't listen."

Nandini :- "doctor ; you know why I don't want to get operated ; abhi at least I am surviving , operation ke baad there are only 30% chances of my survival. I don't want to take the risk."

Doctor :- "but Nandini it's becoming serious day by day. Operation nahi hua to any day it can be fatal , at least there are some chances of survival after operation.

Nandini just smiled at the doctor and finally Dr gave up. She knew Nandini would not agree as she is trying to convince her from past 1 year yet Nandini doesn't changes her mind and neither doctor gives up convincing her.

After few minutes of talk , doctor called a nurse to help her. Nandini underwent some tests and taking the new prescription left for her place.

In the car she recalled the day which changed her view towards everything.
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Flashback.. About 1 year ago :-

Nandini was driving back home quite early as there was no work and Vaibhav asked her to leave if she wants.

While driving suddenly she started having a severe headache. At first she ignored it but it kept on increasing and her vision started becoming blur replacing it with darkness.

She lost the control of her car and it bumped into the pillar of a flyover causing dislocation of her shoulder and some injuries in head.

While her treatment it was discovered that nerves of her brain are somehow compressed which does not allows blood to reach her brain in the required amount causing her a severe headache ; nausea ; black out and other problems.

Doctors advised her to undergo an operation that would help to make the blood circulation proper but the chances of survival after the operation were just 30% .

Doctors and her family insisted her alot for the operation but she was stubborn enough to deny every request and not undergo any surgery knowing the fact that any day of her life can be the last day if she gets a severe attack ; but Nandini did not bothered about it.

She was warned not to be around loud places or in loud music and should just not take a pinch of stress as that would be really dangerous.
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She reached home after taking her medicines and got busy in other stuffs she wished to do.

At the other end at Cabir's place ; the duo was having fun by teasing each other ; chasing each other like Tom and jerry and other boys stuff. The day ended for both of them which till now did not included each others thought... but for how long.??
Edited by Ragingleo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice 😊😊😊 but no manan😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update waiting for the suspense to unveil!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was really nice dear😊
but what is manik's nightmare??...what is bothering him so much??
and i m really scared for nandini...they both really need each other to live a better life...😊
i hope it happens soon😊
thanx for the pm dear
update soon
tc😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww 😭 it was really emtional n scary update man what manik is hiding?? Which nightmare 😲 on d other nandini to is surviving with a big pain 😕 bth need each other bt still are unaware of it!!! plzzz update it nxt chp soon will b w8ting for it n sorry for late reply yr 😊
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Chapter 17

Monday morning :-
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It was the same usual Monday morning when people were gearing themselves up to reach office after the weekend.

Same was the case with Manik and Nandini . Both were busy in their own world ; one in his dream world as still he was sleeping , and the other in her real own world were she was preparing breakfast. Both did not knew that they are going to witness a new day of their lives.

The past Saturday night had changed their lives forever but they haf no idea about it. Although there was nothing special about that night , nothing happened as such but still that NOTHING was enough for them to give a twist in their lives.
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As per the daily routine , Manik reached late. He was on call while coming towards his bay and Nandini was making an exit at the same time giving all her attention to her mobile screen.

Both did not noticed the other and were about to bang into each other when both suddenly stopped just an inch apart saving themselves. Just as they saw each other , both started recalling the moments of Saturday night when they were together.

For the first time in their lives they both felt awkward in front of each other. Though it was a feeling of awkwardness , but their was a feeling between the two , which earlier both never had. They themselves were surprised to feel such thing.

For few minutes they were standing there without speaking anything. Manik was the first to break the silence by wishing her good morning in a low yet soft tone full of hesitation and fumbling.

Nandini's response was nothing different. Her return morning wish too was full of hesitation and shyness. This awkwardness was broken by a call on Manik's cell.

Both excused themselves and made way to where they were actually heading to before this. Nandini was going to canteen and Manik was on call but their minds were occupied on the sudden changed behaviour they experienced just now in themselves.


"What is wrong with me..?? Why was I feeling so awkward .?" Manik murmured to himself.
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In the canteen , Nandini was sipping coffee and thinking the same , "why did I reacted that way..? He has never affected me so why know..? Why was i so awkward..?"

These thoughts were running in her mind making her all frustrated. She was holding a paper cup which had coffee which she was continuously pressing in her frustration and finally as it always happens with her when her anger and frustration makes her land up in trouble ; all the hot coffee was on her right hand.


"Shittt..!!" She exclaimed out of pain and started jerking her hand. As it was early morning no one from staff was there except the canteen people. She was jerking her hand continuously and finally grabbed some tissues to wipe it off.

A canteen person saw this and told her to keep her hand under cold water and she did that. He bought some ice cubes and she applied it on her hand but the coffee was way much hotter. It showed its effect and her right hand was clearly seen to be turned into red having the burn sensations.


This was not new to her. After what she experienced from Harshad and Soha , she was never the same. The anger which was never around her , now was always inside her , resulting into harms she made to herself bearing all the pain ; physical and emotional.
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Despite of all the pain she moved back to her bay and started off with her work. She was unable to do any work from her right hand so she utilised her left hand for doing her work.

All of them gathered in the conference room after an hour for a quick meeting. Nandini was flipping papers with her left hand and also writing if any point was required. Manik , who sitting beside Vaibhav noticed this unusual behaviour of hers.

He frowned to understand what was she actually upto doing all things from her left hand as he couldn't notice her other hand having burn sensations. He looked at her and she was busy flipping the papers in order to find one.

She looked irritated , mainly because of pain and secondly she was being unable to do her work properly. At that very insistence , he wanted to ask her the reason for this weird thing that she was doing but that was not the correct place to ask and he was certainly not the one to ask. But he was eager to know why is she behaving like this.

He at that very point murmured "looks like people want to learn multitasking" , loud enough to be heard by Vaibhav which was actaully his motive , Because Vaibhav was the only one always concerned about her as she was too young and secondly he knew no one else in the office actually bother about her giving the fact how she was.

Vaibhav heard his comment and looked at the side where Manik was looking. Vaibhav knew that not many people were fond of Nandini so Manik's statement was nothing new to him.

He too found it weird when he saw her doing all the work from her left hand. "Nandini ; are you ok.?" Vaibhav asked .

She immediately looked up and saw Manik staring at her which again made her bit uncomfortable. She then looked at Vaibhav who was waiting for an answer.

"Haan I'm fine." She replied with a faint smile. "Then what's wrong with your hand.?" Vaibhav said pointing to her right hand. She again looked at Manik who was still staring her.

"Wo morning mein coffee gir gayi thi to .." Nandini replied looking at Vaibhav but stealing glances of Manik at the same time. "Did you get any ointment ?" Vaibhav asked her . "Not yet" she replied. "Infirmary mein first aid hoga take it from there." He told her and she nodded.

They all started off with the meeting but Manik's attention was grabbed by Nandini. He could see that she was in pain but was not letting it show to anyone. Soon the meeting was over and everyone was back to there work.
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Nandini was somehow managing to do her work in-spite of the pain. Although she nodded at Vaibhav's statement to get the ointment but actually she did not bothered to get it and apply it on her hand.

She left her desk to talk to the other employe for a minute and when she returned she found an anti-burn ointment kept on her desk. She was surprised to see it there.

A frown appeared on her forehead. Little did she know her colleagues , no one would take the pain to get that ointment for her. She was trying to think who kept it when unknowingly a name uttered out from her mouth. "Manik..?"
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update... love Manik 's concern.. continue soon

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