|LET THE MYSTERY UNLEASH| Part 2 (27th july) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Amazing job dear
This is so different
Its fresh and amzing plot
M just thinking abt the various things Manik cud b
Wild imaginations 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
its awesome yaar
plz do pm me whenever u update nxt
cont soon
eagerly waiting for it
dora1234 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Wow m loving the genre of ur story
Update is aaesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awesm dr.
bt plz giv long updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wow that was amazing dear.
Update soon.
And also plz pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Arey m curious
Update soon and longish one plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Update plj
Let the mystery unleash jaldi se
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Part 2

Please take me along as well'
'' yes us too"
one by one everyone began to plead
' I'm sorry but I can only take Nandini'
Nandini felt her father's hands on her shooulders. he roughly pushed her towards the stranger.'You take her! take her now'
'Appa! no '
'You take her now!'
'No! not-'
They heard a deep rumble and felt the floor trembling beneath their feet.
'only a few seconds left,' said the man.'hurry!'
"NANDINI' her appa screamed. 'YOU GO!'
'APPA! she cried. She turned to her mom. 'please..i can't"
The guy stretched forward and grasped hold of her hand.
He pulled her towards him, but she found herself instinctively squirming and twisting her hand to escape his tight grip.
'NO!' she screamed
The deep rumbling increased in volume, the floor shuddering,and cascades of dust and grit filled the air around them, tumbling down from above.
'That is it! the young man said. 'Time has come! NANDINI...I can save your life, just come with me'
She looked at him. It seemed madness that he could,but, somehow,she believed him
'Your parents want this too.' His eyes, so intense.
'Yes!' yelled her appa above the growing roar.
Then the floor suddenly fractured beneath their feet,revealing an ocean of roiling flames,like gazing down into hell itself. And the last thing she recalled was seeing people tumbling down through a large split in the stairwell's floor into the fire below



PRESENT

Nandini sat upright in her bed -gasping for breath,feeling her cheeks wet with tears.

The nightmare again

unable to go back to sleep, she clambered off the bed. she tiptoed across the archway , barefoot on the cold concrete floor, and sat down in one of the swivel chairs,tucking feet under her and sitting on them for warmth. She grabbed the mouse and opened a dialogue box. her fingernails clacked softly on the keyboard.

> Hey, Cabir !

> It is 2.37 am nandu.You cannot sleep?

>nightmares

> Are you recalling the..?

>plz stop it cabir..

She hadn't any real choice in that matter thats what Manik had said. Life or death. Take my hand or be mashed to pulp amid crumbling skyscraper. Great effing choice.

>you have my sympathy girl.

"thanks" she spoke softly into the desk mic- too lazy to tap out any more.

I miss you amma appa she said under her breath. Everything had changed so much in these years yet the turmoil going inside her remained the same

Outside..outside was new york. Streets she was getting to know so well. Even the people she had conversations with, people who were never going to remeber her: the french laundry lady, the Iranian man running the grocery store on the corner. Every time they spoke, it was, for them,the first time- a new face, a new customer to greet cheerily. But she already knew them,knew what they were about to say, how proud the french lady was of her son, how angry the Iranian man was with the terrorists for bombing his city.

She was lost in her thoughts until her trance was broken by a familiar voice

'honey you are awake at this hour..had the same nightmare yet again?"

Edited by pooh2015 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
it's thrilling yr...do send pm plzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cooki

it's thrilling yr...do send pm plzz...



Ty.. 😊
Sorry bt for now I wont be able to send pms

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