BABY😭 😭 😭 WHAT DID U JST ASK?? U WANNA KILL US.. I SO WANTED UR ff..COZ AS THE SHOW IS ENDING ...UR STORY,, UR WRITING CAN ONLY MAKE OUR manan alive..hw can u think of ending such a beautiful story.. THE DREAMLAND OF OUR MANAN.. NO NO U CNTT .,.U JST CNT DO THAT BTO US ESPECIALLY ME.. U WANNA KILL ME?? PLZZZ MY ⭐️⭐️⭐️ WRITER PLZZ DNT END IT..PLZZ PROMISE me TUM AISA SOCHOGE VI NEHI??😭 😭 😭
nw chap-37
my most fvr8 part..
"I can just grow old being in this position. Such a beautiful evening. Mrs. Malhotra your prettiness is growing two - fold with every blink of my eye. Whats the secret hmm? She blushed profusely at his compliment and replied; skimming her delicate fingers over his phiz Umm!! Its purely the effect of your love Mr. Malhotra."
"Being the naughty soul that he is; he gave her a smirk and again took her lips for a kiss to which she replied with equal fervor. They pulled apart heaving and gasping and after taming her raced heartbeats and deep breaths; she sat upright and asked" Manik chalo utho! Agar hum 5 minute aur lete rahey toh mere lips swell hojaenge tumhare kisses se aur mujhe Cabir ke sweet taunts sunne padenge."
He smiled sheepishly on her accusation; which was a very truth in itself; and replied, raising his spine off the bed to sit beside her and nuzzling his face in flexure of her neck As always I am not at fault. Tum ho hi itni addictive and moreish ki it requires all my strength to control but still I fail miserably. Saying this he again moved closer to her li"
"She bid everyone bye; except Manik; and neither did he say that to her because in their relation; the word 'bye' din't exist. They were not soul and body for just saying; they actually were and until and unless death knocks; bye wasn't of any use to them."
1st of all thnqqq soo veryy muchh 4 a long long update
ur 1st part the way u penned the description of the evening is very beautiful..nd their ironic romancend romantic talks,,i jst blushing nd saying aww!!! hw cute nd lovely
then the evening convo.. i was wondering about the campaign u write it.. bt i think it will b for 7 days bt no its for 14days.. why why?WWHHYYY???the convo of manan the way they gonna miss.each other.the talks u wrote is so beautiful..i cnt stop my tears falling 4m my eyes while reading MANAN's convo.. jst loved it.. u wrote it so beautifuly..
the way Manik expressing his feelings n need 4 nandini to cabir.. that why i jst love manbir..
the way he make sure nothing will harm his world his wife,his jaan nd baby😊 nandini,,the shopping.. nd moreover their naughty talks nd emotional,nd lovely talks at n8 is so adorable...
loved each nd every part of this chap..the way u enjoy it to write..we r enjoyingg mmillioonnss millioonss more while reading
ur writing is something which has a very special place in my heart.. plzz dnt stop writing.. nd
dnt stop this so beautiful,charismatic,meaningful, lovingly sweet.cute,thoughtful,taughtable love story.. its a dreamland 4 me whenever i start walking in this dreamland..its mesmerized me,,choked me with joy nd contentment of love..👏 ..hats off to uu...
lovee uuu... nd if u love me then dnt even think of ending this ff,,,😆😆
Edited by SIAZAHEED.1 - 10 years ago
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