II - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Link to Chapter 40 - PG 148] 29 AUG

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priya

@priya_sejwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1031

Amazing update... lovEly manan scenes

Karvachauth aww manik n his father r soo sweet...they both made sargi for nandu ..ver nyc loved this part

Manik preparing everything so nicely...n tht gift was so beautiful... awsummm

U wrote this ff very beautifully... i love each n every bit of it...fantastic

Thank uh for pm

Update soon

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Fatima

@Fatima_mir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1032

Ommmggg...I'm word less seriouslyyy...

Dudeee u have done an amazing job as always...

I can't tell how much I love your updates... I wish to get a dito of the manik malhotra in your story... 😃

I loveee how he always says .."kuch ager reh gya to tell wo bhi le aunga.."

U actually make me cry sometimes... Thinking how can someone be sooo perfect...

U know what I can't even say that I liked this line or that cauz I loveddd each and everyyy word and lineee...

Aww that lehnga..jewellery.. Every thing is so beautiful and perfeccttt...

Video to nhi chalryyy...

Itna bhara comment ..wow pata bhi nhi chala..

Do repy to my comment :)

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1033

Hey...wow...so beautifulll...m going all mad reading the update...such a thoughtful, cute, emotional, tradional...n of course love filled update...👏

Their never ending love for each other...which jst seems to gt deeeper wid each update of urs...I mean by the way of ur portrayal it can b felt...

U fill ur update wid sooo many awww moments...dat I jst keep on awwwing all through the update...he got so much food for her...how thoughtful n caring...their conversations that u describe r sooo deeply emotional...the way they were talking abt Manik being selfless, dat was so nice..." Acchayi dikhana buri baat nahi hai baby per acchayi ko agar dikhaker kiya jaye toh woh ehsaan ki shakal leleti hai. Aur main kisiper per ehsaan jatana nahi chahta." This line just touched my heart...awesome...

Ohk Karwachauth...I thot der wud b an argument betn MaNan, whr Nandu wud try to convince Manik for observing the past n Manik wont allow, but perfectly Nandu convinced him widout argument... I felt so bad wn Nandu missed her MIL...

Bt Awww...Manik n his dad...that was such a cute gesture, they joine hands n made Sargi for Nandu...truly dis type of love is so magical...Dat moment described by u was pure bliss...

Awesome...Magical...Bliss...Plzzz cont soon...tc😉

Edited by dhrits_24 - 10 years ago

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1034

Amazing update

And manik is so loving and caring husband

Awesome update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1035

This just beautiful...loved the inclusion of the pix and how caring he is of her.. as always, a really good and happy update, love it...

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Friendsforever9

@Friendsforever9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1036

Hey ur update is just superb

I just luv it

Sry for asking

As I m new in this forum will u plss tell me how will I get to knw about ur 3rd threat

Sry for inconvenience

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mananpaniii

@mananpaniii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1037

what a lovely update...👏...no words to say...😊😊

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Ashmita18

@Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1038

All this karwachauth thing was just sooo BEAUTIFUL... manik first not accepting to celebrate this festival because nandini would have to keep a fast with no water and food which was impossible for manik to agree with but then nandini's simple pleas made him change his decision... he who can even make the impossible possible on nandini's one order, how can he refuse her such a simple and innocent pleas... and then manik forgetting his sleep was set to prepare sargi for his beloved... for he knows that nandini too wishes to get a sargi from he mother in law but then knowing who it is she wouldn't ask for it... but then manik he can do anything and everything to make her special day all the more special... he and his dad together prepared sargi for their bacha just to make her happy... these two men can go to any extent just give nandini all the world's happiness... and soo the father is all engrossed in a recipe book instructing his son who doesn't even know a thing about cooking how to prepare sargi and giving instructions according to nandini's likes and dislikes... nandini felt herself to be the luckiest girl in the universe to have them but the two men felt themselves more luck to have this angel, this baby in their lives... overwhelmed by their such attempt nandini just couldn't help herself from crying and hugged manik... and the words said by Mr. Malhotra for nandini were sooo genuine and loving... loved the whole family convo... then at dining table manik feeding nandini and threatening her to finish all of it... how much can he love her... there's no answers to that... their love is beyond any measure... it's till eternity where there is no end... and then manik buying every possible Indian traditional ornament and such an ethereal lehenga for nandini... it was just FLAWLESS... I'm dumbstruck... such an amazing and SUPER AWESOME update... uh have magic in your hands... Uh writer sooo beautifully... I'm dumbfounded by your creativity and innovation... just commendable... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue real soon... will be waiting eagerly for your posts... keep up the wonderful work... best wishes to uh... HATS OFF... :) :D

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SIAZAHEED.1

@SIAZAHEED.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1039

heeiii honey!!
here i m to comment on the most awaited nd most precious
part of mine

ChAp-39

mmm.hmm
1stly..thnqq thnqq nd more more n mannyy maannyy moorr thnqquusss
4 the karwachauth sequence
...😆❤️😆❤️😆

then it its is ur 1st video then its so beautifully nd perfectly made by u...
as expect my star ⭐️ writer is a perfectionist,,,so it has to be bestest,,
loved the video n each nd evey jewellery jst so perfect..
the lehenga woowww!! awsmm,,, gorgeous.. no suitiblke word in my dictionary nw..

nw time to tell about my fvr8 dialouges,,nd parts my lovey duvey writer,,

you are beautiful Nandini. Very very very much. She blushed the darkest shade of red and then like a Baby; snuggled and buried herself in his chest and intoned babyishly I Love You Sho Much Papa! Sho Much! Vely vely much! Ussey bhi zyada! Sabse zyada!
His heart melted at its place like wax at her antic; as always happens; and he smiled which stretched from ear to ear on feeling her doodle what she said on his heart and replied, pulling her closer Aww! Inna Sara pyaar? She mummed a sugary hmm against his neck which made him kiss her cheek tightly and then he said; joining his forehead with hers
"My Baby! Chotu chotu baby! I Love You too. You have no idea how badly I missed your babyness. Your this chocolaty sweetness. Next time se na I won't let you go anywhere. Aur agar jana hoga na toh I will come along. This was the first and last time. It feels worse than hell to stay away from you. My Choco Pie! Saying this,...the rest kiss part also.

the way he served her dinner.. the way he made her eat nd the confession about the charity,, so wonderfuly,, unbelievbly sweet ly nd beautifully written by uu
my honey bee!!1👏👏👏👏👏

when i read this part i was so so very happy n jumping..
Woh Beta! Actually Kal karwachauth hai. Aur kiunke Nandini ne mujhse ek baari kaha tha ke ussey yeh festival bohot pasand hai toh main sochrahi thi ke kiun na iss bar manaya jaye. Tum punjabi ho aur yeh festival bhi punjabi hai; toh kiun na Nandini ka pehla karwachauth manayein? Maine toh last year hi sochker rakha tha but badluck dekho; uss time hum busy hogaye. Listening to Karwachauth; Nandini's body language became excited
jst like me..
love the letter !!

I am downstairs and 101% fine so erase those creases on my chotu forehead and come to me fast. Waiting.

Your Manik
this dialogue is my fab becoz i loved only this choco named "FeRrErO RoChEr"nd cny resist myself to have it..
Chalo be a good baccha and rona nahi. Give me my ferrero rocher wali smile.

love the way Manik nd Mr.malhotra took care of their DoLl..love her..
"kash ReAl LiFe vi asahi hota"👏👏👏
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love the mehendi cere mony npart,, bt no😉teasing session accept kichten wala.. forget to tell uu that jst love the back bone crashing hug.. jst give a ChErrY ON TOP OF THE SCENE

Manik said Aise kya dekhrahi ho? Tumhe bhi toh adornments dene hai. Ussi ke liye lejaraha hoon. May I Chachi?

THEIR LAST PART DIALOGUES R SO CHOCHLATETY ND LOVELY..

WeLl LiKe I aLwAyS sAyS"tHnX 4 tHiS SO bEaUtIfUl,RoMaNtIc,MeAnInGfUl,LoVeAbLe,SwEeT,CuTe, ThOuGhTfUl,ChAriSmAtIc,SuPEnTaBuLoSly mInDbLoGlInGlY ExPrEsSeD 😆❤️"dReAmLaND nD dReAmY LoVeStOrY.."❤️😊