THREAD 2 FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE. PART 119 - PAGE 146 - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishyy

Wohooo my gal is rocking ... 100 parts awesome yayyy and many more 100's to come to you
With every part this story is becoming interesting
Like all I'm eager to secret to be out BUT only because I want to see tashan of Manik that he will show Sid... Hahaha and how sid will patao his bro in law ... U have to show that plzzz muaah :*

thanku so much tishu :* I'm coming on that only..but slowly slowly bcz I donot want to do any mistake.. bcz it can spoil our story.. have patience bs :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey yaar hats off to ur writing i ll love athrav ultimate muah band kr diya manan ka hahahahaha
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks yaar I got ur thread .
your ff is amazing.
full of all shades drama fun emotions.
amazing .
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm officially a big fan of Atharv now :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww my love..
keep writing keep rocking..
love u loads!
& I need love thoda zyada..
kissie
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART- 102

Nandani walk inside ishika room saw atharv sitting on his stomach thinking abt sumthing..

Nandani- now what happened to u??
Atharv- im getting bored!! What to do..
Nandani- hmm wbt video games??
Atharv- bcm happy) bingo!!
He jump out from bed nd bring out video game from his bag.. nd connect it with tv..
They both.sat infront of tv nd took there respective remote controls of video game..
Nandani- this tym I'll beat ur high scores!!
Atharv- challenge accepted Massi but if u lost.. U pay my pizza bill..
Nandani- done nd they both start playing..
2hr passed..
Manik was sitting in nandani wondering where she could be.. He come out from her room.. Nd walk inside ishika room saw nandani busy playing video game with atharv.
Manik- here im dying to spent some tym with her nd look at her madam video game khel ri hai abhi btata hu.. He walk.inside room nd poke on her shoulder.. But she didn't realise!!
Manik thought now what to do..his,eyes fall on feather who was lying on floor .. He smirks nd took feather from floor Nd sat behind nandani..
Nd rub it in her ears.. Nandani felt ticklish she look at him nd eyed him not to disturb her...but manik being stubborn manik didnt listen to her nd again rub feather in her ear.. To irritate her..
Nandani- manik!! Plz let mee concentrate on video game..
Manik- who stop u play!!
Nandani- im telling u donot disturb ok
Atharv- massi im going to win!!
Nd he win..the game
Nandani- mouth left open..all bcz of u manik I lost..
Atharv - start to dance I won now be ready to pay my pizza bill
Nandani- made a face) god manik now I lost bet..
Manik- ok he pull her cheek.. I will pay his bill.. Whats the problem in that..
Nandani- I never lost any bet..
Manik - lier u lost bet from mee remember
Atharv- what bet??
Manik- gol gappa competition..
Atharv- what she lost in bet??
Manik- herself!! He said in low volume.. While looking at nandani
Nandani- look at him with big eyes..)
Atharv- what??
Nandani- nothing.. she pinched on manik arm nd drag him out from room..to her room..tum pagl ho gye ho Manik abhi wo sun leta,to..kya effect padta uspe? waise bhi bacho wali harkte nhi hai uski!!
Manik- I didn't said anything wrong..u lost ur self to mee !!
Nandani- look down at floor..
Manik hold her face bring his lips close to her.. But atharv enter in her room so they both straighten there selve nd move away from each other...
Atharv- gave them confuse look) what u both r doing??
Nandani- we ar talking.. tu bta tujhe kya hua??
Atharv- ahhan massi talking or doing sumthing else??
Nandani- embarass) ek word or bola to i'll lock,u in store room..!! Lizards or cockroaches ko puchna fr what were they doing there!!
Atharv- scared) sorry massi.. I came here to give manik bhaiya pizza bill.. He sad with sad face!!
Manik- Nandani ur scaring him.. Cntrol.. He hug atharv..
Nandani- gave him angry look
Manik- look at atharv) ur massi is sadu
(nandani twisted her lips) forgive,u came with mee I knw abt a mall in shimla which is famous for it game zone u want to go there??
Atharv- bcm excited yes( then pointed at nandani )wbt her??
Manik- u go finish ur pizza nd get ready I'll bring her!!
Atharv- ok he happily hug him nd ran out from her room..
Manik- look at nandani
Nandani- im sadu??
Manik- no!! I was joking!!
Nandani- no u were not joking u said im sadu.. Ur sweet dish hold dish all dishes canceled..
Manik- common nandani I was trying to cheer him up..
Nandani- walk away from there in anger..but manik pull her back..
Manik- look at ur face it turn hot red if I put ice cube on ur face it would melt in a sec.. Nandani turn her face other syd looking at floor.
Manik- bura lga!!
Nandani- node her head in yes but still not looking at him..
Manik- kiss her cheek ur my chotu baby.. Then how can I call u sadu!!
Nandani- look at him with amused look on her face.. ) nd slap on his hand) stop buttering..
Manik- im not buttering u..
Nandani- achha?? ok still u won't get any of ur dish for next ummm (think for a min) for next one whole week what say?? She said with grin in her smile..
Manik- shocked) one week.. No (he shake his head in no) how can u do this to mee for such a small thing..i said na im sorry..!! No
Nandani- with big smile on her lips) yes
Manik- no
Manik continue.. Yr this is not fair how can I survive then..
Nandani- pehle sochna chahiye tha..
Manik- so this is ur final decision??
Nandani- yes!!
Manik- ok then let see who is going to win..
Nandani- ok.. Now go get ready.. U promised him na u'll take him out na now go.. She push him out of room..
Manik- ur not coming??
Nandani- offcourse im coming.. Ready to hojau..nd u also go.nd get ready bye bye she tried to shut door
Manik- ok listen
Nandani- baad mai (she forcibly closed the door nd sigh..

Precap - same


Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congratulations for 101 parts

Its was excellent superb fantastic update

Loved it when a 8 years old is trying to blackmail Nandu and look in manik face all shocked and choking

Aww he did 100 sit ups for her as a punishment he can do anything for her as he cant see her ignoring him the way he wants to fulfill all her wishes for wedding

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya

aww my love..
keep writing keep rocking..
love u loads!
& I need love thoda zyada..
kissie

jyada Sara love after marriage :p haha,luv u 2 :*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

thanks yaar I got ur thread .
your ff is amazing.
full of all shades drama fun emotions.
amazing .

thanku dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love your story! Manik is indeed madly in love with Nandini! 😊

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