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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Naj91

Hey congratulations for 100 parts. U r an amazing writer. I love your story. Keep writing 😊

thanku so much :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

Congosss Masooomiii for completing 100 parts!!
Long journey han!!
Congos babe!!! So happy for u :)
And yes this was as usual a great update!!

thanku manu :* luv u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Nice update. Hai mai marjawa nandini ki puri family kinni sweet hai.

hehe thanku :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sparth

ur stry is really awsm dear...I cant sleep without reading ur stry CONGRATS FOR 100TH PART...I like alvira manik bonding...I would like if u reaveal roshni's secret also..sid's possessive is awsm...manan moments r out of world...i cant find one word for appreciating u...plz continue ur work...it feels really happy reading ur ff...and ya plz update ur other ff also it is also nice...

thanku so much.. yes I'm coming on that part only soon u guys,will get revelation update :) it makes mee happy u guys bcm happy after reading this story.. it actually encourage mee to write more nd more :) thanku
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unnatishukla241

Congrats for 100 chapters

And thankyou for writing a wonderful story for us

thanku so much dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kukkuresh

roshni aur maniks secret should be reviled

u'll soon get revelation track
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya

Heartiest congo for completing 100 parts of ur FF ruchu.. u r d 1st one in dis forum who crossed 100 chapters.. no one did till now..
many more to come..
love u loads..
keep rocking babu..

I was looking for u only where ar,u missing?? thanku,niyo.. luv u :) so basically u don't want mee to end this story?? :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashviklover

woohooo congratsMasoomi for 100 parts😊

thanku so,much dear ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wohooo my gal is rocking ... 100 parts awesome yayyy and many more 100's to come to you
With every part this story is becoming interesting
Like all I'm eager to secret to be out BUT only because I want to see tashan of Manik that he will show Sid... Hahaha and how sid will patao his bro in law ... U have to show that plzzz muaah :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART- 101

Nandani folded her arms around her chest.. nd look at atharv..who was trying to call his friend Jenny!!

Nandani-,why u,want,to call her,??
Manik- common nandani uski friend hai..he want to talk to her...why ur trying to make issue of such a small thing!!
Nandani-,u plz shut ur mouth im talking to him pointed her finger on Atharv...
Atharv-,i was trying to call her bcz I want to knw,what she want in gft!
Nandani- smirks achha!! I had never seen u getting so much concerned,for ur any other friends!!
Manik-yeah its good to knw what ur friend exactly want in gift!!
Nandani- can u plz keep quiet..
Atharv- god massi u r so dumb!! She is my special friend understood.. He winked at her..
Nandani- shocked) what u just said im dumb!!???
Manik- brust into laughter..
Nandani put his finger in hot milk..
Manik- ouchhh!! Nandani..
Nandani- good now keep ur mouth shut..
Manik Gave her angry glare..
Nandani-to atharv) what do u mean by special friend??? Can u plz explain..this to mee?
Atharv- god Massi she is my gf.. Now u understood??
Nandani- confused) u mean she is girl nd ur friend in that sense she is ur girlfriend??
Atharv- hold his head) noo!!
Nandani- then??
Manik- he is trying to say she is his girlfriend.. Read between in the lines.. Friend kum girlfriend jyada.. Lyk ur special to mee!!! Right dude (to atharv)
Atharv- right dude!!
Nandani- shocked!! U mean to say she is ur girlfriend???
Atharv- yes massi.. I want to impress her isliye I want to buy gft for her.. Manik bhaiya ne bhi to apko ptane k liye gft diya hoga na!!!
Manik- choked.!! What!!!
Nandani- ek thapad padega na sara gf ka bhoot uttar jayga god ur just 8 yr old nd ur saying u had a girlfriend..
Atharv- god Massi mere age pr mat jao I knw everything.. Aap. Bde log kya krte ho'!
Nandani- embarrass shocked)what?? She turn red..
Manik - start coughing loudly!!!
Nandani- pat on his back to calm him down...!!
Manik- was breathing heavily!! He was not been able to say a single word.
Nandani help him to drink water...
Nandani- angry) didi ko ane do I'll tell her everything...
Atharv- petrified) thinking now. His mom will scold him) he held nandani hand..plz massi don't tell mom abt jenny.. She will beat mee.
Nandani- u deserve it..
Atharv- ok then I will tell mom also that I saw u with manik bhaiya.. U were kissing him..
Nandani- eyes pop out..
Manik- what!! (He was shocked) when??
Atharv- few min back when u were in her room..she was kissing u on cheeks
Manik- what!!!
Atharv- then on eyes!!
Manik embarss infront of 8 year kid..
Manik- ok ok enough..
Nandani gave him angry glare..
Nandani- to Manik) see I told u.. But u never listen to mee.. Now see what happened!!
Manik- i
Nandani- shut up manik!!
Atharv- sat on chair) waise I wont tell it to mom if u don't tell abt jenny...he smirks..
Nandani- she slap on his head)ar u trying to blackmail mee..?? Go,to ur room!!! Nd sit there..
Atharv- sadly) ok massi but u won't tell this to mom na,??
Nandani-,fumbles,i will think,abt it later now go.
Atharv- ok he left in ishika room.
Nandani- then turn to Manik.who was sitting there lyk prey. ) nd u don't even try to talk to mee!! Samjhe!!
Manik- but I did nthing.. Fr mujhe punishment kyu??
Nandani- bcz only bcz of u today he is blackmailing mee!! She left in,her room all angry nd shut her door on manik face..
Manik-god now what to do he ran his fingers in his hairs...
After an hour..
Nandani was sitting all angry in her room manik peeped inside her room nd stand infront of her..
Nandani completely ignored him.. Nd manik can't bare that he sat infront of her hold her hands..nandani pull out her hand from his hold..
Nandani-i said na don't touch mee!!
Manik- but u said don't talk to mee!!
Nandani- annoyed) fine now don't touch mee either...
Manik- this is not fair( nandani look at him then look other syd) u can't punish mee lyk this.. !!!
Nandani- no response!!!
Manik- ok I agree I did mistake!! But how will I knw he was standing near door..
Nandani- no response..!!
Manik- im sorry nandani.. He again hold her hand.. Again.. Ok u punish me for my mistake..!!
Nandani- look at him from corner of eye but then ignore!!!
Manik hold his ears nd start doing sit ups
1. Im sorry nandani (sit up)
2. Im sorry nandani (sit up)
3.I'm sorry nandani (sit up)
50. Im sorry nandani (sit up)
(Nandani look at him)
80. Im sorry nandani (sit up)
(Nandani lips curved into smile she keep her finger on lips to cntrol her smile she was amused surprised at his behaviour)
100. Im sorry nandani (sit up)
Nandani- hold his shoulders) ok Manik enough bs karo ab ok..I can't stay angry on u for long tym...
Manik was tired.. he drop his in her lap nd keep his hands around her stomach..
Manik- thank you..
Nandani smile nd lovingly ruffle his hairs...
Manik kiss her palm nd lay on bed keeping his in her lap..intwined his finger in his keeping it near his heart..
Manik- I can't wait anymore when u'll shift to my home permanently..
Nandani- mr impaitent just have some patience for few more days.. After our marriage im officially coming to ur.. Home our home..
Manik- but I can't wait for a sec... I have an idea u shift to my home nd baad mai jisko humari jitni bhi shadi krwani hai krwate rhe!! What say (he lil move his head nd look at her face)
Nandani- start laughing loudly.. Good idea.. but still wait for some days(.. She pull his cheek nd kiss his forehead) nd u forget abt my wish list?? U only fulfilled one! What abt others??
Manik- ok tell mee next one..
Nandani- I want grand royal wedding lyk a princess!!!
Manik- but ur queen of my heart nd u want to marry lyk a princess.. Seriously!!
Nandani- eyed him) MAKNIKKK!!!
Manik-,ok ok I was pulling ur leg.. Sorry!! Wish guranted... Next one??
Nandani- I want to decorate my house our house!!
Manik- bs itni si baat.. ) he pulled out wallet from his pocket nd hand over credit cards to nandani.. This is all urs nd don't worry abt money.. Nd u had keys of our appartment do what ever u want to do with it..
Nandani- gave him back his credit cards) manik malhotra frst lets get back to Mumbai.. Then gave this to mee till then keep it back in ur wallet..
Manik- but why??
Nandani- mujhse yeah sb ni sambhala jata..
Manik- then how u'll manage our home??
Nandani- smirks) tum ho na..
Manik- hmmm
Nandani- ok now move let mee check on Atharv.
Manik- no!!
Nandani- manik let mee check then I'll come back.. plz.. She keep his head back on bed..nd leave from there!!

Precap- rakshabandhan

Author note- wow 101 chapter. I can't believe it I'm writing a story that to on manan. ..im so happy.. can't describe in words how close this story is to my heart..luv u al my readers.. Without ur supports guys.. I was.not been able to reach this far... :)


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