Second chance-ss ch 6 updt. On pg 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Pure relation of friendship shown is remarkable!
After so long they could share anything with each other was very sweet :)
Good job!
Continue soon n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
friends r the persons we can share every thing
the way u pinned there friendship was too good
finally she said evert thing to manik
nice update conitnue soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awesome! Loved it. Cont. soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
u can do a lot better.. anyway nice it was
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Amazing update.
Very beautifully written.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
mujhe to purahi lag raha h k Manik ko Nandu se pyar tha..sorry..abhi v hai..
Dnt knw..par ye toh updates ke baad h pata chalega..
So wait karungi..

Update was awesome..
Manik is going to change Nandu again..
So write soon..
Take care..
Best of luck..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Superb...
Manik asking so many questions lol...
Bt their bond is smthng I admire...
Nandu finally shares her pain with him ...
Loved it...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
now that means manik loved nandini but he couldnt tell it to her wowww awsomeee
just loved it
awsomeee part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Second Chance-Review-Ch-1 and ch-2

In starting,Story was sooo fast.
nandini ki shaadi uske parents kr dete h bo divorce leleti h aur suddenly school join kr leti-Mujhe pata h ye main story nahi balki uske aur manik ke upar h par is story me thodi stort ki kami h.Aap ye dhikana chah rahe ho ki ek ladki ke parents ne uski marzi ke khilaaf uski shaadi kr di usse bo kaise bachti h aur apni new life ko shuru karti h aur uski zindagi me ek naya sadasya aata h.Par ye story reality se kai door h,But after all this is a story,Reality kaise nahi hain.Nandani ki shaadi hoti h,Uska husband and his husband's family gandi nikalti hain. Aur bo ek decision le leti h,Bo ekdum sahi decision h par achaanak divorce ho jaana reality se bahut door hain.
Voh school achanak join kar leti hain .
But In the Ch-2,Bahut Intencity thi,Bahut Emotion The,Par Manik ka Nandini se kya connection.
After Ch-2 My decision was completely changed.

Main Line-
Second Chance is very far from Reality,But It is full of Intensity.After all,This is a story.

Rating

4/5

I am not the critics.I gave that review as a user.
Ignore Mistakes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hi everyone.
I know m late again. But intention kabhi aisa nhi hota mera. M ill again n my tests are also going on so that's why this delay. Sorry

CHAPTER-3

**********REGRETS***********






He had regrets and she had regrets too. The mistakes you had done in your past are unchangeable things. What had happened in your past has already happened, it will not make any difference by just regretting your past deeds.



He still remembered the first meet of theirs in college. What a disaster it was?.. He was looking for someone and while searching for him, he unknowingly collided with her. Her books fell down. He kneeled down to collect her books from the floor. Without looking at the person, he just apologized and started to move from there. But she being she hold his hand and made him look at her. That was the. moment he saw her for the first time. She was looking simple yet beautiful in her jeans and sleeveless top. She wasn't looking in any mood of accepting that sorry. She starting giving lecture on his carelessness. This continues for whole ten minutes. He was literally yawning after listening to her, seeing this she got a new topic for her lecture. He had heard enough so he told her to stop. But her facial expression had already gave the indication that there is more to come. But her phone started ringing so she answered the call of hers. He sighed and thanked the God for that phone call. On the first day hadn't answered her because he had to find someone urgently

In Initial days of their college, we were like this only always fighting for every stupid reason like fighting for who started the first fight of ours. Slowly he came to knew that on the first day she was in the foul mood because of her parents actually because of her dad only. He wants her to at least chose the Perfect one for herself. But she wasn't ready yet, she had already told this thing to him now for million times. They talked politely with each other for the first time when they got paired for some competition as they knew to win that they must work like a team. This marked the start of their friendship phase. Gradually this bond becomes the strongest one. They enjoyed each other's company a lot. Whenever they both were together, it seemed like they are in some other parallel world where no one exists except both of them. They both had the same problem called parents in their lives. His parents don't have even a minute for their son. They claimed that they were doing this for his future only, but they don't give a damn to what he wanted. They wanted him to be a big businessman like them, but he wanted his life to be simple always. He was interested in his music only. Her parents being overprotective wanted her daughter to stay away from all guys. She already had much of it. She knew everyone is not same. They were just seeing the world with their old perspective. She knew that they love her a lot but still. Sometimes people with same problem become the best of friends because they know how much difficult is to go through that problem. Same was in the case of them.


He was remembering the old memories sitting all alone in the music room when someone from back suddenly tapped his shoulder.
"So what's your plan for the day? " he asked manik making himself comfortable on the seat in front of him.
"plan!! What kind of plan? " he asked surprisingly to him. He was a maths teacher and, of course, his friend.
"Haven't you heard the announcement? School is organizing the annual function. So isn't it obvious for the music teacher to show off his talent on stage? "
He realized that how much engrossed he was in his own world that he haven't had any idea of what's going in school.
" Ya is it. So who's the incharge of this function?"
"Mrs. Ahuja and Ms. Nandini. Talk to them about it. OK, I have to leave as I have class in next five minutes."
He left saying this.
Manik too has class in some minutes so he also left for his class.

Here in the staff room. She was sitting here alone as everyone was in their respective classes and she hadn't had any class. She still remembered how much happy she was with manik in college. For her, he was the only person who understands her so well. She had one more reasons to be happy other than her students and that was she had got that one person back in her life. When their college life was about to end, her parents selected a guy for her. She met him but only on one condition that she would get married only after she got a job for herself. All these things gave the immense happiness to her parents. After meeting the guy, her first thought was that she had got the perfect one for herself. But she forgot that no one is perfect. She told everything to manik on their last day. He enquired about the guy like the inspector enquiring about the murderer. He cared for her. He knew that this decision of hers was for her family.
"Hi! So what's up? " someone called her when she was lost in her memories.
" Manik.. Umm, nothing m just getting bored."
" If u were getting bored then you should have called me na"
"if I had called you then who would teach music to the student? Mrs. Ahuja or Me? "
"You know your jokes are becoming disaster day by day."
" Why are you here? "
"I want you to tell me what's your plan of the annual day for me. "
". Nothing much, just you have to prepare students and yourself for the performance as usual. OK no? "
"That will be amazing. OK bye, then I a have class so.. "
He left from there leaving her to again ride on the vehicle of memories.

She regretted that how she couldn't be able to see the concern, the worried face of him when he met him the first day. He had told her that something was wrong, but she hasn't given a single thought to that.
The bell rang which stopped the memory vehicle of hers. She collected her belongings from the table. While going towards her class, she met the students who wished her good morning. She noticed that the morning was actually good add it was raining outside. The surroundings were looking so beautiful. While seeing the beauty outside someone disturbed her by calling her name.
"Good morning, mam. " A girl wished her happily.
"Good morning, angel. So you also like this season? "
"Yes mam, this is my favorite. Mam, sir had told me to hand you this. "
"What's this? OK, you go to your class ok, " she goes from there. Nandini opens the folded paper. She smiled reading that.

I know, I know you must be staring the weather outside. I know you love rain a lot and I hate that a lot. But if it makes you this much happy then be ready for the drenching and walking session after the school ends with your friend.
Yours 'I hate rain friend'
Manik


So this is it.
Temme howz this through your comments ok.
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