MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 57

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chapter as usual...
loved the way nandini takes care of manik...
n keeps on bugging him so that he talks to her...
n then the way she kisses him...n then he questions her n she clears his doubt which i think was necessary for him to know that she is not doing all this because she wants to make it up but because she has feelings for him...loved the way she claimed her right on him...n bit him as his punishment...
loved nanidni's bonding with manik's parents n fab3...
n the majnu manik...though a little bit but still...
i wanted to ask a question...what do you mean by fab5...?? is it manik cabir dhruv maukti n aliya...or nandini is also a part of them...??
coz u wrote that fab3 hugged her...n cabir was also there coz he was the only one who went to pick them up...so whom all u referred as fab3...??
coz u dint mention any name...
n about the surprise...is it a new entry...??
or nandini's parents or there some old lost friend...??
thats what i am guessing...n if it is then plz put a positive character n not a negative...plz...
n update soon...u took so long to update this...n that to small...plz update soon...cant wait to see the surprise...n want to see some more of nandini's bonding with fab3 n manik's parents...from the past which you wrote a bit was awesome...cant wait...
n lastly for late reply...actually i was the first one to read ur update...n was about to like it also n even comment on it...but due to network problems couldnt...n then i went out...n when i came back got busy with some work or other...n then when i opened to post my comment which i wrote before going it dint get posted...so i wrote it all over again...thats why this late...
update soon...n this time plz a big one...n do clear about fab5 members...as u havent mention about them till now in the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful writing. I just love your story especially this manik he is something very precious. and what was that surprise. update sooon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesum update haye iur bold nandu...wats d surprise I hope no problem for...Thanx a lof fr ur syory it helps to keeo alive manan in our hearts wowww
Luv ur story waiting fr nxt update
God bless u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww awesome update n jus wow n superb...
Awww nandu being all bold loving dis but manik kya hai ladki ki tarah blush kar raha hai hahaha he s soo cute yaar jus wow... I can really imagine manik blushing red like a girl n hehe nandu teasing him full on... The best words of manan rather than I love you s I trust you n u repeating it alws jus wow n awesome... I hope manik dnt control himself n kiss her hehe naughty me I kw but yes I dnt want him control... But I kw it Vl take time but when times comes it would b blissful n awesome...
Awww love the bonding of nyo n virat n nandu jus wow... Fab3 also such a beautiful bonding...
Omg aab surprise kya hai can't wait to kw it update soon dear... Aab delay maat Karo pls yaar...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Manan's moments were cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing to see the bold nandi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy!!!! Nice going!! Keep it up! And plzz pm me...if possible! Thankyou!
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Posted: 9 years ago


Wow. ..awesome amazing chapters. ..

I missed some chapters. ...

But catch-up today. ..and they are awesome. ..

Nandni punished harshad ...

But now manik asked for time. ...and I think now nandni get it...

What he felt when she didn't trust and insults him...

But her way to ask for his. ..mafay...is awesome. ..

Looking forward to seeing what the surprise they bring for him. .

Thanks for sharing this awesome story.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 23-

"OH FISH!!ARISHA??"were the only words that popped out of his mouth..he quickly trodded towards the girl and took her into a bear hug..he parted from the hug held her at an arm's length,looked at her and again took her into a hug.."my god I cant believe you are here..two long years after two lonnnggg years I am seeing you"Manik almost squeezed her in the hug..

"oye jhuta bahane na bana.pata hai kitna miss kiya..shaaadi karli mere liye wait tak nahi kiya..tu mujhse baat hi mat kar"beamed Arisha..all were smiling seeing both of them complaining except one and that was Nandini..she was all confused..wait..??only confused??no..she was red..Gawwdd!!she was angry and this was noticed by Cabir who thought to interfere "aare Manik Arisha ko Chotti se toh mila" "oh yaah!!Aru she is Nandini my wife and Nandini she is Aru"grinned Manik.."baccho tum log aapna intro karlo hum chale rest karne.."said Virat and moved with Nyonika towards their room.."yeah we too need to rest..chalo guys"yawned Mukti and moved with DruLya..

"Chotti after you went na Manik was all devdas..kisise baat tak nahi karta tha..we all tried a lot but failed every time..and then came Arisha just as an angel..pata nahi kya jadu kiya Manik pe..uske baad se toh isike saath hi chipka rehta tha..hum toh jaise the hi nahi"ended Cabir with a sigh and Nandini's fingers curled into a fist..that's when she saw Arisha walking towards her..

"oh so tum ho Nandini..jiske waje se Manik ne mujhe dump kiya..chalega..Manik I thought your choice was better..you know she is all okay types..waise tujhe toh humesha lambi ladkiyan pasand thi..phir??bol dete you didn't mean it..pata hai how much I drank complan to match your height..but tu toh.."and before she could complete ManBir burst laughing"gawd tu nilkul nahi badli yaar..same bold Aru..my Aru"said Manik taking her in a side hug making Nandini clench her teeth.."Chotti pata hai yeh humesha se hi aise hi hai..all bold..chalo guys I need to leave mom ka check up hai..will meet you guys in the evening"

After waving goodbye to Cabir Manik and Arisha were busy in their talks forgetting Nandini completely..Arisha's head was on Manik's shoulder and she held him by his arms.."and Malhotra tujhe yaad hai in our prom after our hot and sizzling dance how everyone assumed us to be a couple..firstly hum ek dusre se chipke rehte the and upar se uss din humara dance..and remember Cabir ke birthday ke din while playing truth and dare you got a dare to kiss me but you idiot kissed me on my cheek saying it wasn't mentioned where to kiss..kitna acha moka tha you could have kissed me on my lips but" and bingo!that was it for Nandini..she heard everything that Arisha spoke but she could no more tolerate..she felt her blood moving backward in her veins with anger..

"stop it"barked Nandini making both of them hell scared.."Nandini what happened tum thik to ho na??are you alright??"asked Manik getting off the couch moving towards Nandini.."isse kya hogaya??"followed Arisha and stud beside him holding him by his shoulders.."Arisha leave him"said Nandini in a go.."what??"asked a confused Arisha.."woh he is hurt..i mean his shoulder still pains..remove your hand"

"ohh like that..be Malhotra agar tujhe pain ho rahi tha tune bataya kyun nahi??"asked Arisha crossing her arms against her chest "woh aise hi hai..sabka pain le leta hai but agar khud pain main ho to kisiko nahi batata..he suffers all alone"said Nandini all the time looking to Manik..

"ohho tum toh puri dharampatni wali baate kar rahi ho.."commented Arisha.. "kyun na karun mein to hun hi iski.."said Nandini which made Manik widen his eyes"umm..dharampatni..i mean mein thoh hun hi iski dharampatni"added Nandini quickly.."mein mummy and daddy ka breakfast room mein rak ke aati hun..when they will be up..they will have it.."said Nandini moving towards the kitchen

"hmm..fine..Aru com'on mere room mein chalte hein..then we will talk.."

After almost keeping everyone's breakfast in their room Nandini moved towards Manik's room with his breakfast tray..when she entered she saw that Arisha's hand were upon Manik and they were laughing like maniacs talking something.."umm Manik tumhara medicine ka time hogaya..after you have your breakfast tumhari dressing bhi karni hai..and umm..Arisha maine tumhari liye guest room ready kar liya hai..you must be tired..you can go and rest." "I will definitely rest but iska dressing hote hue dekh toh lun pehle..haaye Manik kitne din hogaye tujhe shirtless dekhe hue.."winked Arisha and Manik chuckled "nahi..nn..o.."shouted Nandini "no??why??"asked Arisha almost hiding her smile"wo..h ma..in..ne tumh..ara bru..nchh roo..om mein rakhwa diya hai..thanda ho jaiga..so you go"stammered Nandini"okk..if you insist"

Arisha got up to leave but stopped and bend herself more towards Manik's ear and rubbed her cheeks against his "teri wife toh jealous ho rahi hai..bahut pyar karti hai tujhse..dekh mujhe aise dekh rahi hai as if she will push me off the balcony right now..dont leave her..ever"whispered Arisha..she saw Nandini was all red with anger and jealousy..her teeth clenched, her hands curled into a fist and flaring nostrils..to paint her more she kissed Manik near his mole..an inch up and she would have exactly kissed on his mole..and she moved out of their room...after she left Manik got up to open his shirt when suddenly he felt a push and next moment he found himself pinned to the nearest wall..

"What are you doing Nandini??"asked a confused Manik with his hands still fixed onto the wall gripped tightly by Nandini.."exactly..isn't this the question jo tumhe usse puchna chahihe??Aru maine tumhe kitne time baad dekha"copied Nandini the way Manik said "Nandini she's a very good friend of mine and I met her after a long time"


"acha..friend na..toh friend banke rahe..is this the way she should talk to someone's husband that too infront of his wife??infront ho ya behind why did she talk like this??jab yesterday I kissed you good night tab toh bade nakhre dikha rahe the and now when she kissed you you didn't say anything..and upar se she wanted to see you shirtless..i would have chopped her right then.."flared Nandini

"Nandini..listen"started Manik but was interrupted by Nandini "you listen Mr.Malhotra only I have the right to see you shirtless.."she opened fully his half-opened shirt breaking a couple of buttons "only I have the right to feel your stubble against my cheeks"she said and rubbed her cheek against his.."only I have the right to let my lips linger on your earlobe"she gently bite his earlobe and immediately kissed it..

"and this mole"her voice almost broke as if she was about to cry "thish..is all mine"she started stroking her thumb across his mole "pata hai a little up and she would have kissed you directly on the mole..i can't share this mole with anyone..this is mine..you are mine..the all of you belongs to me..only me"she said all the time eying his mole..she inched nearer and gently pecked his mole..she put her arms around his neck and her fingers raked inside his hairs..she stood on Manik's feet and again pecked his mole..bhai ab banda kitna control karega..he too slid his arms around her waist and pulled her close nullifying the negligible distance..she pecked,licked,sucked,bite his mole n to the power infinity times to claim it all hers..she faced towards his lips to see him already eying her pair of lips..Manik pressed her waist making her gasp..he slowly bend his lips inching nearer..they almost touched each other's lip inhaling each others breathe..when Manik was just about to capture her lips Nandini mumbled on his lips "Manik..i ..lo..vv.."


and bas ho gayi rang mein bhang

"Maannikk"screamed Mukti barging in their room but they were still in their trance sticking to each other "oh shit..shit..shit maine kuch nahi dekha..i have closed my eyes..see..i haven't seen anything.."hearing Mukti's voice both separated blushing bulkly still panting hard..may be they realised what they were about to do

"woh Mukti aa..ii.sa ku..ch na..hi hh..aii"stammered Manik "ha..n Ma..nik is ri..gh..t no..th..ing li..ke th..at"followed Nandini "waise guys tum log kar kya rahe the?"and bang there was another bomb dropped by Mukti..the poor souls looked everywhere but each other..firstly they were blushing so much as if they had applied strawberry face pack on their faces and secondly this question from Mukti.."haan haan socho socho..now I am leaving but next time when I come keep your answers ready"she said and moved out of the door..she again peeped in "guys you can continue"winked Mukti and went towards her room leaving these two with their strawberry masks still on their faces..



guys i know i am super late n i apologize heartily for it..exactly my papa was hospitalized..it was not possible 4 me 2 write..n relatives r just pouring in..so i could not write well..i know this chappy was not gud..bt pls manage..

Edited by bidisha10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
O God...😆 ...yeh arisha ne to nandu ko jalake rakh kar dia...😉😆. Nandini ka sakal dekhne layak thi...so jealous...😳. Hope manik baba iska full fayda uthai...😆.
Love the update...
Enjoy the possessive part MORE...😃.
Cont soon.

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