MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chalo she is realizing it as his absence is mattering her.
Aww take your time dear and don't stress yourself for updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jesse93

Chalo she is realizing it as his absence is mattering her.
Aww take your time dear and don't stress yourself for updates.




tthnk u 4 understaanin dr


bt stil i will try my best 2 uupdate sooner

i bccum vry tired 1nce i return home n



ve no paatience 2 wwrte


bt sttiill ii ll ttryyy...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: HTA111

Nice sweet wonderful update

Manik us trying hard to convince her but she dint want to understand anything now her brain cells not working properly but what was so important that he has to go and yet he hasn't returned back home and who came

Continue soon and thanks for pm



yeah i agree

mani must be havin some imp wrk


or elsse heee wld nnt hd lftt nandu

l continue sooonn

bye...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Samruddhi_Kadam

Nice update

but what is this yaar
l mean why u stopped?
now I have to eagerly waiting for nxt update
hope soon u will update
Thanks for PM
continue it
make a little long update






dats d game drr

iittss a supprisse


ll try 2 uuplload sooon

n yaa a loonger 1


kkkeeep comentin



bye

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kirankusum

What did nandini saw ..




hhahhaa😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆




nyc questn😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

belated birthday wishes to u dear...!!!

update was cute and sweet...
loving this caring manik a lot...hoping tht nandu will soon realize his value...and true love
u ended with cliff hanger...eagerly waiting to read ur next update
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
take care







thnk u soo vry much dr

i 2oo hpe d ssame

nandu shld rreealiseee


kip cmmmntin

bye

tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

AWESOME UPDATE

LOVE IT

PLEASE TUM NE INHAPE KYU END KIYA YEH TOH DIKHA DETI KI MANIK KO KYA HUA HAI; USSE KUCH HUA TOH NEHI NA?

CONTINUE SOON

THANKS FOR THE PM




haha

sry 4 endin it here

btt ll try 2 updte soon

thhnkk u 4 likin it

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update...
awww manik is so cute caring...
he knows nandini gets scared thats why he is uncomfortably sleeping on couch..😳
he was instructing nandini everything before leaving ...
but nandini did paid heed to him...
😭 he was hurt...
what was that which nandini shocked...
is he drunk? or beaten up badly??
so excited for next chapter...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Loved the update...

awww manik is so cute caring...
he knows nandini gets scared thats why he is uncomfortably sleeping on couch..😳
he was instructing nandini everything before leaving ...
but nandini did paid heed to him...
😭 he was hurt...
what was that which nandini shocked...
is he drunk? or beaten up badly??
so excited for next chapter...



u almost guessed it ri8 swthrt


bt lts see y so


keep commntin


enjoy


take care


bye...

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Posted: 10 years ago
😊

Chapter-11

Manik was bathed in blood..from head to toe..his forehead was badly injured making blood pour out from it..from back side of his head blood was oozing out continuosly..he was unable to walk so was supported by Cabir..Nandini could not understand anything what was happening..Cabir without answering anything simply carried Manik upstairs till his room..Nandini noticed Dr.Singhania following Cabir upstairs..Nandini too followed them into the room and stud beside Cabir..the doctor bandaged Manik and injected him making his unconscious..

"Mr.Malhotra has lost too much of blood and he is badly injured everywhere..he needs to take rest..please don't let him do any work..he is too weak now and any wrong step would lead to a fatal incident..i need not instruct much because this house has already a doctor infact the best doctor of the town..Nandini these medicines are just a formality you have to become his medicine till he gets well..you know what I mean..come I will explain you about the medicines and please let him rest lest you know the consequences" Nandini's heart was thumping aloud..it ached seeing Manik in such a condition..her heart was crying badly which reflected in the paleness of her face..in no time Cabir came downstairs..

"Cabir what's all this?? imean.. how?? " fumbled Nandini.."Harshad.."

"oh please Cabir stop accusing him..he is in jail and why would he do that??"

"Harshad had sent goons to attack Manik..and Manik when he knew Harshad had sent those goons he didn't even raise his arm towards them and let them beat him mercilessly..i was crossing that way when I found him standing still getting bitten badly..when I started beating them Manik the Manik Malhotra pleaded me not to beat the goons and do you know what he said Cabir please don't beat them Harshad has sent them..i want them to beat me till death so that at least after my death Nandini can trust me..accept me as her best friend again..Ca..bb..ii..rr ple..se let them do what..tever they want..at least after my death I can smile seeing Nandini forgiving me..i will happily die for her Cabir.." Cabir wiped Nandini's cheeks..Nandini was numb throughout when Cabir narrated the incident..but her eyes could no more suppress its feeling..her pearls started to shatter.."choti I have always treated you as my sister..i know you are in pain but your pain is nothing compared to the pain Manik is enduring..the situation is so perplexed that you are doubting your best friend for ruining your life..i don't know what destiny has planned for you but I think you should think once more..Manik is literally dying everyday Nandini"..he had taken a promise from me not to say anything to you..but I think you should know..the day you said him that you don't love him but Harshad he had turned a lifeless soul from that day Nandini..he just smiled to make you smile so that his love doesn't come between your friendship..he said he would lay down his life but not let anything ruin your friendship..you are his life Choti..being a cardiologist you heal with so many hearts every other second but you could not study the heart of your best friend choti..please tell me what medicine you prescribe for my friend whose heart has shattered into a million pieces..he blames himself he curses the situation for whatever happened but not you..you said that you hate him but you know what he hates himself even more than you do..today if I would not have reached there no doubt he would have died happily so that you could trust him..is that too much to ask??a bit trust that too for your own best friend..when you where in London he was a lost soul who has got no destination..he has preserved every memory Nandini..every memory of yours and him..yeah they are too many but he has all of them..after a couple of days you left he realized his love for you but wanted to surprise you on your arrival..but what he got a surprise in return"Cabir again wiped Nandini cheeks because her tears were in no mood to stop their flow

"Manik has cried so much that his tears dried but still he sheds those dry tears..you were the most mature among us Nandu..tu toh Manik ki ankahi baate tak samaj jaati thi bas uski aakho me jank kar..phir aab kya hua choti??tu samaj nahi rahi he ya jaan ke samajna nahi chahti??tu bahot jald realize karegi ki tu bhi Manik se utna hi pyar karti he bas uss ehsas ko pyar ka naam nehi dena chahti..tujhe yaad he ek baar when you had high fever and doctor said if your fever doesn't get down before sunrise then you would be attacked with brain malaria..everyone was tensed but Manik he was quite calm..because he knew his Nandu is a fighter because he had taken a promise from your aiyappa that every bad thing will have to pass through him to get till you..to touch you..you always defended that bloody jerk over you best friend how can you even think that Manik..Manik will take your love away from you??can even in his dreams also he can wish bad for you??

"choti zindagi ko badalne me waqt nahi lagta par kabhi kabhi waqt ko badalne me zindagi lag jati he.."he kissed her temple"take care..i will come tomorrow early in the morning..please be by his side..tonight atleast..he needs you"he left..


hey guys finally update...hope this s long enough..i ve worked a lot on this part..coz writting emotional conversatiionn is not my stuff..bt stiill i tried a lott...guys i wrte d parts in pc n sadly my keyboard stoppeed wooorrkin...it l tke tym 2 repair..n writin on-screen keyboard is 2ooo hard..it l tkke tym 4 nnxt updte...commnt lamba..


Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago

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