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Chapter 28 A


"Nandini..!! Be quick honey..!! You want to miss the fireworks?" Manik shouted sitting in the lounge. Nandini had thrown Manik out of the room as she wanted to get ready.


"Nandini..!! You always got ready in my presence..!! Then why not today?" Manik had asked her frowningly.


"Uffooo Manik..!! Why you ask so many questions?" Nandini had replied him and she had shut the door on his face. Now it's been one and a half hour she was in the room and Manik was desperately waiting for her.


"Nandini..!! Aur kitna time lagy ga yaa?" Manik again shouted like a typical husband.


"2 minutes..!!"He heard Nandini's shout.


"From last one and a half hour you are saying two minutes...!!"Manik said irritatedly.


"Abhi paka two minutes..!!"He again heard her shout.


"Ufff baby..!! Aisa kya kar rahi ho tum that my entry is banned?" Manik asked doubtly.


"Manik shhh na..!!" Nandini again shouted and Manik felt like banging his head with the door.


Here in room Nandini was getting ready in some special outfit.She was wearing a red knee length frock with cute red pumps. And star drop earrings were placed on the mirror shelf ready to wear. Today she had tied her hair in a delicate bun with flower accessories neatly pinned on it.



She was almost ready but again unfortunately her dress zip got stuck.


"Come on not again mjhy Manik to surprise daina hai..!! Zip up..!! Aiyaapa..!!" Nandini murmured but it seems her aiyaapa wanted Manik to zip her up. She tried again and again but in vain. At last she decided to call Manik.


"Manik..!!" She peeped out of the door just putting her head out and Manik was busy in his mobile he look at her.


"Are you ready?" Manik asked coming towards her.


"Almost but I need your help...!!" Nandini said lowering her head.


"Anything Nandini..!!" Manik said smilingly.


"Wo my dress zip is stuck..!!" Nandini said and Manik smirked.


"Ok I'll fix it" Manik said and was about to enter the room when Nandini stopped him still hiding behind the door."What? Don't you need my help?" Manik asked surprisingly.


"I do but I have one condition..!!" Nandini said cutely.


"What condition?" Manik asked frowning his face.


"You have to close your eyes..!!" Nandini said and Manik's eyes widened.


"What the hell? Ya kya condition hai Nandini..!!" Manik said in a little high pitch.


"Don't get angry na Manik..!! Actually I wanted to surprise you..!! After zipping me you can open your eyes but not before that..!! Please please..!!" Nandini said innocently and Manik was awestruck on her innocence.


"Ok I promise..!!" Manik said and Nandini smiled.


"Then close your eyes..!!" Nandini said excitedly. Manik closed his eyes and Nandini lead him inside the room. She turned and now Manik was facing her back but eyes closed. Nandini lead his hands on her back. As soon as Manik's cold fingers touched her bare warm back she gasped unknowingly. And Manik in spite of closed eyes sensed that she was blushing. Manik with a little struggle zipped her dress.


"Done my princess..!!" Manik said and took few steps back. "Now may I open my eyes?" Manik asked impatiently.


"Yes..!! Open your eyes now..!!" Nandini said happily standing in front of him. Manik slowly opened his eyes and was froze at his place. Nandini was looking so beautiful for a second he forgot to breath.



First she was looking so stunning second her innocent face was taking his breath away. Moreover her dark red cherry flavor lip gloss was making her dainty lips ready to be kissed. She was looking at him in confusion because he didn't utter a word. Was she looking very bad that Manik didn't said a word? She thought.


"Manik..!!" Nandini waved her hand in front of him and Manik came out of his trance.


"Haan..!!" He said still lost in her.


"Manik..!! Why are you not saying anything?? Kya main bohat buri lag rahi hoon?" Nandini asked almost crying and Manik run towards her. He look in her deep magical eyes and without warning smacked his lips with hers. She was taken aback for a moment but when she felt his iron grip around her waist she responded by fisting her hands in his hair. Manik kissed her like there was no tomorrow. He sucked all the red cherry gloss and she moaned his name in his mouth. The kiss was so passionate and full of love that Nandini felt like crying in joy.After sometime Manik broke the kiss and some lone tears roll down of Nandini's cheeks. Manik smilingly wiped them off because he knew those tears were of joy. Nandini hugged him and started sobbing. Manik let her cry for sometime.


"Manik..!! Thank you for making my life so beautiful..!! Thank you for making my every moment so special..!! You know what Manik?" Nandini without breaking the hug raised her head a little to look in his eyes.


"What meri jaan..!!" Manik asked lovingly.


"I felt myself the luckiest girl of the world having you as my lover..!! You know when you kiss me I felt myself in heaven..!! Your touch is bliss for me..!! I love you so much Manik..!!" Nandini was confessing innocently and Manik wanted to kiss her madly till his last breath.


"Ohh Nandini..!! I love you more jaan..!!" Manik said and again took her in a passionate kiss and Nandini was again lost in the love land of HER MANIK. After sometime they broke and Manik rested his forehead with Nandini's.


"Manik..!! Will you please help me wearing these earrings?" Nandini said side hugging him and Manik smiled.


"Of course it will be an honor..!!" Manik said smilingly and slipped the earrings in her ears kissed on each ear slowly making Nandini shiver on her place. After that Manik kept staring at her.



Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 28 B


"Manik why are you staring at me?" Nandini asked pulling his cheeks.


"Because you are looking beautiful..! Nandini I am thinking of cancel our plan..!!" Manik said leaning his back with mirror and now Nandini was applying a little more kajal in her eyes.


"Acha why?" Nandini asked smilingly merging the kajal.


"Because tmy nazar lag gai tou?" Manik said carefully and Nandini laughed.


"Manik..!! Tum bhi na..!! Ab itne bhi achi nahi lag rahi..!!" She said smilingly. Hearing this Manik pull her towards him she banged in his chest.


"Koi meray dil say pochy kay tum kitne achi lag rahi ho..!! I am afraid kay kahen tmhy meri he nazar na lag jye..!!" Manik said seductively and Nandini smiled. Manik took a little kajal on his finger and applied it behind Nandini's ear. After that he bent and kissed her there.


"Now you are secure..!!" Manik said touching her cheeks and she smiled.


"Ab chalain?" Nandini asked holding his arms and he nodded.

...


After about one hour they reached Disneyland it was for the first time they had came in night. Everything was extraordinary beautiful. MaNan walked inside and they saw there was some kind of celebrations.


"What's going on here?" Nandini asked looking here and there in confusion. Manik tapped her shoulder and her look on a neon light board.

"Happy 60th Anniversary to Disneyland California"

Was written on it.

"Wow..!! 60th anniversary..!!Cool na..!" Nandini said excitedly and Manik just hummed. Then they saw a Man dressed in Disneyland uniform came towards them.


"Good Evening couple..!!" He said and bowed in front of them a little. "Please come we have a special arrangement for couples..!!" He said and was about to walk when Nandini stopped him.


"But Sir we are here for fireworks..!!" Nandini said looking at Manik and he nodded.


"Senorita..!! Just come with me..!! You will surely enjoy the fireworks from there too..!!" Man said and both noddingly followed him.


He take them at a place. There were lots of tables with two chairs only specifically for couples. There were many other couples sitting sharing some cozy moments. There was a stage in front of them with big stairs.


There was some live performance going on the stage.MaNan smiled looking at each other and they both sat on a table.


"Everything is so dreamy na Manik..!!" Nandini said and placed her head on his shoulder. Manik put his arm around her.


"Tum khush ho na Nandini?" Manik said looking at the stage. He also didn't knew why he asked that stupid question but now he can't take his words back.


"Of course main khush hoon..!! What made you say that Mani?" Nandini asked a little surprised.


"Nothing just aisy he...!!" Manik said lost in thoughts. Nandini didn't asked further. Both were quiet cuddling in each other. Suddenly they saw all those cartoon characters coming towards them. Nandini waved them excitedly and Manik tried to hide his face unfortunately Nandini had tied her hair in a bun so Manik wasn't able to hide his face in his hair. All of them standing around them within no time.


"So handsome..! Will you sing for us today again?" Cinderella asked excitedly and Manik look towards Nandini helplessly. He was really in no mood of doing such things. Nandini understood his condition and she got up from her seat. She whispered something in Mickey Mouse's ear and he nodded excitedly. Then he whispered the same thing in ears of others cartoons and all nodded towards Nandini.


"Let's go..!!" Nandini said and was about to walk with them when Manik held her hand.


"Where are you going? You promised me in the morning that you will not get away from my sight not even for a second then where are you going Nandini?" Manik said doubtly and Nandini freed her arm.


"Manik I remember..!! And I am not going away from your sight I'll be right there just have a surprise for you..!!" Saying that she run from there.


"Nandini aaram say..!! Careful..!!" He shouted for her. She turned and blow a kiss towards him he smiled. He was staring at her now she was talking to DJ who was setting up the music for the stage. All the cartoon were standing with her and she was giving them lecture. During her talk she can clearly feel the intense gaze of her demanding husband, she look at him and he smiled at her she blushed and again got busy with her plan.


Suddenly all the lights of the stage went out. Then Manik saw a spotlight creeping towards a red figure it didn't took him a second that it was HIS NANDINI.

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Chapter 28 C


"Good evening everyone..!!" She spoke in mic and Manik adjusted his elbows on the table and placed his face on his hands.


"I am Nandini..!! You all must be surprised that why I am wasting your time..!! But people today I want to tell you all a story of a prince and a princess...!! It wasn't the simple story like other fairy tales...!!" Nandini said and everyone started taking interest and appreciated her to continue. She smiled and look at Manik as if asking permission he nodded his head. And she started. "Ok..!! So when the prince and princess meet each other for the first time they fought..!! They were after each other's neck..! They hated each other..!! Then destiny tricked them in it's trap..! They both got married..!!" As soon as she told that they both got married whole place was filled with cheers and applause.


"Neither of them was happy with this marriage..!! They fought again and again. And then eventually unknowingly they fall in love..!! Life become beautiful..!! So the meaning of this that those who said that love always happens in first sight is wrong...!! It just happens..!! First sight is not necessary..!! And I want to confess my love to my Prince...!! I love you Manik..!! And I can't imagine my life without you..!" Nandini ended her story and again the whole place was full with cheers. Manik was sitting there awestruck on her cuteness. He murmured an "I love you more..!!" Suddenly the music changed and he heard Nandini singing.



Aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gayi yaara

(Nandini sang and stepped down off the stairs and walked towards Manik. Who was looking at her with all love)

Ho.. aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gayi yaara

(Nandini reached towards Manik and made him stand. Manik stood there with hands in his pant's pocket looking breathtakingly handsome in his red blazer with white pant and shirt)


Hoon pareshan si main
Ab ye kehne ke liye

(Nandini sang twirling around Manik who was just all the time smiling at her)


Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye)

(Nandini sang and put her arms around Manik's neck looking deeply in his eyes)

(Nandini finished her line and was about to walk back at the stage when Manik held her hand)

Aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gaya yaara
Hoon pareshan sa main
Ab ye kehne ke liye

(Manik sang and Nandini smiled. Both stepped on the stage many other couples follow them)


Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye..)

(Manik sang and pull Nandini in his arms for some dance. All the time smiling at her)


Dhadke aankhon mein dil mera
Jab qareeb aaun tere

(Manik sang and nodded his head. Nandini too nodded and possesively placed her hand on his heart)


Mm.. dekhoon main jab bhi aaina
Haan tu hi roobaroo rahe mere

(Nandini sang and with hands she made a mirror placing them on her face and then peeping behind them)


Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye

(Manik sang and twirled her pulling her towards him.)


Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
aa.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye)
Tu zaroori..

(MaNan sang and like other couples they both swayed with the music)

Maangu na koi aasmaan do sitaron ka jahaan

(Manik sang looking towards the stars)


Banja tu mera humsafar na mujhe chahiye koi muqaam
Dil hi kaafi hai tera mere rehne ke liye

(Nandini sang cupping his cheeks. And slowly placed her head on his heart Manik engulfed her in his embrace)


Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
aa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne.. (zinda rehne..)
Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko
zinda rehne ke liye
Tu zaroori..

(MaNan sang and danced slowly following the beats)



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Chapter 28 D


As soon as the song finished all the people there hotted for them and MaNan smiled. Everyone walked towards them and encircled them. Everyone shaking hand with Manik praising his singing art. Nandini was just standing her head on Manik's chest.


"So..!! Princess..!! Your prince is so handsome..!! But the story you told is incomplete..!!" A girl said to Nandini and everyone look at her that what was incomplete in the story?


"Oh come on guys..!! A fairy tale in incomplete without a kiss..!!" She said excitedly. Everyone there started hoting for them again. Nandini shyly hide her face in Manik's chest and Manik smiled on her shyness.


"Oh come on prince kiss your princess..!!" Everyone started cheering for them. Manik gently lifted Nandini's chin with his finger and made Nandini look in his eyes.


"May I my princess?" Manik asked lovingly and Nandini smiled. Manik slowly leaned forward and took Nandini's lips in a passionate kiss. As soon as Manik's lips touched Nandini's there started the fireworks. All the people were cheering for couple as well as excited for the fireworks. Nandini's hold Manik's collar became tighter and Manik with one hand cupped Nandini's cheeks and other slid in Nandini's bun. Manik with one swift pull the clip off her hair and here she goes all her hair swayed with air falling on her back elegantly. First the kiss was slow but gradually it changed into a passionate one. They broke when they were out of breath. Nandini slowly rested her head on Manik's chest side hugging him looking at the magical fireworks.


"Manik..!! The fireworks..! Look at the castle..!! It's so beautiful hai na?" Nandini said excitedly.



"It is indeed..!!" Manik nodded.


"And the Mickey mouse sky wheel..!! So colorful..!!" Nandini again said and Manik nodded.



"Just like our colorful life right?" Manik asked and Nandini smilingly hugged him tighter.


"Yes..!!" She whispered.


"You look beautiful Nandini..!! With open hair..!!" Manik said and winked at her to which she blushed. They kept staring at the fireworks until they faded away. Nandini was feeling sleepy although they were standing Nandini snuggled in Manik's chest and closed her eyes.


"I am very lucky to have you Nandini..!!" Manik whispered and kissed her head. Nandini just hummed.


"Are you ok jaan?"Manik asked politely.


"Manik I am hungry aur mjy neno aa rahi hai..!!" Nandini said pouting her lips. Manik laughed and pecked her pout.


"Ok let's go back to hotel..!! Wahan we will eat your favorite pizza..!! Right?" Manik said and Nandini nodded. Manik was about to walk when Nandini held his hands then she stretched her arms and gestured him to pick her up. He smilingly shook his head and swiftly picked her up in his strong arms. Nandini clapped with excitement and kissed his cheeks.


"You are my superhero Manik..!!" She exclaimed and Manik just smiled.


They reached the hotel soon. Manik ordered the pizza on the reception with Nandini still in his arms. Nandini waved a good night to receptionist and she also waved her. Manik heard the receptionist's whisper "cute" and Manik smiled.

Manik walked towards their room and Nandini was shaking her legs like a kid. She was continuously humming "Tu zarori sa hai mujh ko zinda rehny kay liye..!"All the time playing with Manik's shirt button opening and closing it lovingly. She was doing it all unknowingly but she didn't knew that her antics were arousing her beast husband. Manik was controlling himself with very difficulty. He walked faster towards their room as soon as they reached their room Manik almost throw Nandini on the couch and came on top of her.


"Manik..!! What are you doing?" Nandini said surprisingly but next what Manik did with her was something very blissful. He smacked his lips with hers. She replied with equal favor.Without breaking the kiss Manik's one hand slid behind Nandini's back and Manik gently pull the zip the top of the dress loosened and Manik carefully slid the fabric down her shoulders.


"Nandini you are so irresistible..!!" Manik said huskily and bite her shoulder after that he licked and kissed that bite. Suddenly he stopped and look at Nandini she had her eyes closed breathing heavily due to his drug kisses.Her lips were trembling due to Manik's proximity. Her heart thumping in her chest wildly that Manik could easily heard her heartbeat. His heart filled with proud knowing the fact that he was the only man who had the honor to create havoc to the girl beneath him. He was the man who had honor the to have her in his arms.


"Nandini..!!"He whispered. "Look at me jaan..!!" Nandini lazily opened her eyes and look at him. Manik smiled and pecked her forehead. He again dived in the space between her neck and shoulder biting and after that soothing it with kissing and licking.



"Manik..!!" Nandini moaned helplessly she wriggled under him. Suddenly the door knocked bringing MaNan out of the trance. Manik got up from her and opened the door it was waiter who brought the pizza. Nandini to sat on the couch and Manik sit beside her.


"I love pizza..!!" Nandini exclaimed and started eating making cute faces. Manik was looking at her lovingly suddenly his eyes fell on her bare shoulders she didn't bothered to adjust her dress zip was still open. Red marks again shit..!! Manik you can't stress her again you know she will not say no to you..!! You have to do it by yourself..!!

"Manik..!! Pizza is so yummy..!!" Nandini again exclaimed and Manik came out of thoughts. He smiled at her and soon she was finished with the pizza. After finishing it she look at him as if she wanted him to start from there where they stopped before pizza. But he didn't did anything.


"Nandini..!! You go and change..! You need rest..!!" Manik said and walked inside the bedroom. Nandini was a little pissed off but she ignored and went to change. Manik didn't bothered to change he just pull off his blazer away and lay down on the bed and closed his eyes. After sometime he heard the click of the door Nandini had came after changing her dress she walked to the bed and lay beside him.


"Manik are you sleeping?" Nandini asked placing her head on his heart.


"No..!!" Manik said wrapping his arms around her. Nandini again waited for Manik to do something but Manik didn't moved an inch. Then she decided to take the lead. She slowly kissed his cheeks and pecked his lips. He opened his eyes and look at her. Her fingers crawled to his shirt button she opened the first one but Manik held her hand. She look at him confusingly and Manik shook his head in a no.


"Why Manik?"Nandini asked surprisingly.


"Because my jaan needs rest..!!" Manik said and pecked her forehead.


"But..!!" Nandini tried to object.


"Shhh..!! Bus chup..!! Sleep..!!"Manik said placed his palm on her eyes. She smiled how he cares about her..!!


"Good night Manik..!! I love you so much..!!" Nandini whispered and kissed his heart.


"Good night jaan..!! I love you more..!!" Manik too whispered and kissed her forehead. Soon both were fast asleep.

...

Update is here :) Sorry for the delay busy in eid shopping :) Fireworks are here :) How much you guys liked Nandini's surprise? Tell by your lovely comments :) And myny kehna choor diya tou you guys forgot to comment lmba hai na? So sad yaar :( Chalo khair the song Tu Zaroori is from Manara Chopra's movie Zid..! I love this song tell me you like it or not? Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones :)

Lots of love..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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The three parts were so beautiful just like a fairytale ..
And the last one was Hot yet very appreciable on Manik's part ..the way he cares is commendable :)
Good Job ;)
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Nice update thank u for the pm
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Fabulous
How's ur sopping
I just love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow di,
It was fantastic...👏 👏 👏
nandini's dress was breath taking...😊 😊 😊
zip scene was cute...😉 😉 😉
song was beautiful...😊 😊 😊
i love the cute antics of nandini...😆 😆 😆
MaNan romance was superb...☺️ ☺️ ☺️
and especially the way manik cares for nandini is really heart touching... 😊 😊 😊
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Loved de update...so cute...sply de surprise part...awesome...cont soon😊😊😊
Edited by anj521 - 10 years ago

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