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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

This is the much needed update for Manik to realise his feelings...

U are as usual awesome...
Hahgah...forst comedy...when she was like ...i must be doing item song hahaha...i was laughing like hell
And den...her blaming game on aiyapaa...i loved it...
And den comes the award...hahah...kale khaaadu vala baba...:D
Matlb what sense of humour...

And nandu...y don't u let Manik complete his sentence :(
And I literally cried on nandinis condition..
U knw...what ever u write...i can feel that...
Ilu are fabulous...ur story so fascinating

Update soon
Continue jaldi se...i don't have patience please...

God bless uhh...
Keep smiling
Love and regards:)

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alisha_ash

@alisha_ash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

do u really think ki words can describe wht u hve written i m soo speechles just one thing is this is the present situation or past coz as nandu is pregnant na so pls do clear my q aur i hve to read it all again n i will love to do that so girl u r amazing fantastic fabb seriously i m at ;loss of words to say after reading dis chp n yaa pls update soon n pm me yarr i m dying to read the next chp again pls pls ...

i m ur PROUD FAN N U R AMAZING!!

NEVER END THIS STORY N PLS PM ME ...

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Aasha

@PrettyAaShuu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Manik got award from Nandu..!!! 😆
this scene was so much comedy..!!! 👍🏼

is Saxena ki tou esi ki tesi..!! 😡
i literally cried..!!but u written so well.!!!
and now Manik have unknowingly feeling for Nandani..!!
please show his care more..!!😉

Continue soon Ashi(can i call u by this name)..!!

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pnlove

@pnlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

its going pretty good

but desperately waiting for manan romance by you

you are a awesome writer

keep up the good work

and update early

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MeEm10

@MeEm10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Excillent update...it was very important for this story..
I loved it...& cant wait for next update...
Pls update soon yaar... 😃

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Finally u updated ... I'm soo happy. ...was waiting fr this update ...

Thank u sooo much fr ittt n we will never say u to leave IF or stop updating ... Never ever ... Coz u r sach a talented person n amazingly awesmmm writer ...

We can't loose this writer n her mind blowing storyy ...

Okay now coming to the update ... It was ... Omg I dnt know what to say ... It was outstanding ... Mind blowingly awesmmm ...

Seriously ... Manik's speech on stage ... N their murmuring to each other ...

Ur description abt their looks was sooo nice ... I liked it very muchhh ...

Thn tht saxsena ... He deserved to get hitted more by manik ... Such a filthy man ...

I really can't imagine wht Nandini would have gone through tht moment ... She was feeling so disgusted listening saxsena's wordss ... N he was accusing Manik deliberately in front of her ...

It's nt tht Manik is nt at fault ... He also has his share of mistakes ...

Bt Nandini's condition was really vry worst ... She was hurt n broken to the core ... N the main reason of all this was her husband only ... Manik ...

Now waiting to see what will happen next in their life ... After all this drama ...

Plz plz update jaldi jaldi ... I know u need time to think n write bt plz phr bhi thoda jaldi post karna ...

We all r waiting ...