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vanivartika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

OMG ...
loud laughter ...
I just saw ur FF and
I am holding my stomach ..sslry
hilarious
hanuman chalisa not working ha ha ha

"Ya its my falut i should ask you your son is a human or a dog" manik said... in this my rolling with my stomach
Ek sath ek pagal free..:)

o god tooo funny

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal
Just Awsumm...Lovedd it
They both r attracted to each other...n manan dance ...awww great
Manik gets so much jealous of dhruv...
Superbbb...
Continue soon...eagerly waiting

thnk you so much dear n tonight i m going to update the next part n ya after this part story will agn take a turn a new emotion jst wait for it

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: mananforever
Manik is being too unreasonable ...poor nandu...i think post marriage also he is going to be so hellish...please save our nandu😭.. But you cracked it again ..brilliant update

yes this merriage its not like other merriage coz manik is the only villain of my story so after this merriage story will agn take a new turn jst wait for

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: vanivartika
OMG ...
loud laughter ...
I just saw ur FF and
I am holding my stomach ..sslry
hilarious
hanuman chalisa not working ha ha ha

"Ya its my falut i should ask you your son is a human or a dog" manik said... in this my rolling with my stomach
Ek sath ek pagal free..:)

o god tooo funny

thnk you dear i m glad u like it but my story its not based on fun coz i wanted to show all the emotions in my story so hope you lyk the next turn of story

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Ayisha Noureen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Silent readers r nt allowed? Toh comment kar hi leti hu.. Prologue se laga ki its gonna be a serious one.. But i luv this chatter box nandini.. Last two parts thoda serious tha but nandu is just awesome.. Read it in one go.. Cont soon

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n3gn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Plzz update the next part yaar plz and also pm me

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Shifted from IF read my work on https://acwriter.com

Edited by Aashna_chawla - 5 years ago

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Smileygirl23
Silent readers r nt allowed? Toh comment kar hi leti hu.. Prologue se laga ki its gonna be a serious one.. But i luv this chatter box nandini.. Last two parts thoda serious tha but nandu is just awesome.. Read it in one go.. Cont soon

thnk you so much for your comment its mean alot for me i m.glad u lyk my story n yes my story is wasnt funny but i wanted to each n every emotion in my story n i m trying my best next prt is updated enjoy it