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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

wow awesome update dea...👍🏼

read all part in one go

continue soonn

if possible pm me nxt time

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: cutebesties
awsm update ...
'smurfy take revenge frm my side ' rolf
it was damn funny ...
enjoyed the update ...
it was just like the best update..i am not able to stop laughing ...hahaha it was truely funny n awsm update...
plz continue soon

thnk you n smurfy or manik ka face off aage b continue rhega coz i love smurfy thts y i add him in my story

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: cutypie04
wow awesome update dea...👍🏼
read all part in one go
continue soonn
if possible pm me nxt time

ya sure buddy me frm the next prt i will send you the pm

Edited by Aashna_chawla - 10 years ago

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: apps33
hahaahah...d last part was d best,,,hillarious...
i soo loved it...

n dat jelosy part too
it was just an amazing update
loved it
cont soon

thnk you dear n ya jealosy part is on the way i will try my best to make it perfect

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: ReneeAmora
Awesome!!
Hilarious!!
outstanding!!

like seriously the hanuman chalisa part was damn funny and crazy!
loved it alot

and laughed alot!
🤣

ya i thought aiyaapa bore ho gye honge nandu se to ek or god ko add kr dia it was funny idea

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: mishti5

Thanks for long update...
its awesome. Manik is feeling J
And nandini's dream ws so fun
Update the nxt part asap

no need to thnk me n ya jealousy track is on the way i wanted to show all the emotions in my story n i will update the next prt asap

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Wow...such a fantastic n long update

MAnik getting so much jealous of dhruv...!!

It's too funny...nandu's dream haha😆 call me maam...n manik alwys disturbs her n she wakes up frm her dreamland...thn murmuring hanuman chalisa...she got so much afraid of manik..apple phn ne bacha lia...soo good

Thn her son RANBIR...Manik assuming she is married,divorcee ohhh most hilarious part whn he got to knw tht ranbir is her dog😆😆Awsummm chp...lovedd it

Thnk uh for pm...update soon

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Roshni S

@Roshni8

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Hilarious update

I mean from start to the end it was fun

Firstly, Manik was jealous seeing the closeness between DhruNi

Manik Malhotra was in shock Would probably be an understatement of the CENTURY !🤣

And then "You shut up ok "manik n his heart both yelled on his mind his mind placed his finger on his mouth...😆

And then next day Nandini's dream sitting on the DEVIL'S chair

And when the Devil yelled at her (in reality) she started chanting Hanuman Chalisa which actually worked

And then later in the car, after hearing that Nandu has a son named Ranbir, he was shocked. He was sympathizing, and he even wanted to apologize to her. But all vanished in the air when he got to know that it was the dog who is named Ranbir/Smufy. And boof, he burst out with anger.😆

But his bad luck, coz of his so called PHOBIA, when Smurfy started barking at him, he climbed on the sofa

And Nandu, observing everything, wanted to have some fun, so with her eyes told Smurfy to take revenge from her side, which caused Manik to run away...

Amazing

But you've mentioned in the end that the story will take turn...

So Cont soon

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Roshni8
Hilarious update
I mean from start to the end it was fun

Firstly, Manik was jealous seeing the closeness between DhruNi
Manik Malhotrawas in shockWould probably be anunderstatement of theCENTURY !🤣

And then"You shut up ok "manik n his heart both yelled on his mind his mind placed his finger on his mouth...😆
And then next day Nandini's dream sitting on the DEVIL'S chair
And when the Devil yelled at her (in reality) she started chanting Hanuman Chalisa which actually worked
And then later in the car, after hearing that Nandu has a son named Ranbir, he was shocked. He was sympathizing, and he even wanted to apologize to her. But all vanished in the air when he got to know that it was the dog who is named Ranbir/Smufy. And boof, he burst out with anger.😆
But his bad luck, coz of his so called PHOBIA, when Smurfy started barking at him, he climbed on the sofa
And Nandu, observing everything, wanted to have some fun, so with her eyes told Smurfy to take revenge from her side, which caused Manik to run away...

Amazing
But you've mentioned in the end that the story will take turn...
So Cont soon

thnk you so much dear for this beautifull comment you bring a huge smile on my face it means alot to me n story will take turn after this i will try my bst to add some fun wid jealousy n i wanted to show all the emotions in my story so stay tune wid me

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal
Wow...such a fantastic n long update
MAnik getting so much jealous of dhruv...!!

It's too funny...nandu's dream haha😆call me maam...n manik alwys disturbs her n she wakes up frm her dreamland...thn murmuring hanuman chalisa...she got so much afraid of manik..apple phn ne bacha lia...soo good
Thn her son RANBIR...Manik assuming she is married,divorcee ohhh most hilarious part whn he got to knw tht ranbir is her dog😆😆Awsummm chp...lovedd it
Thnk uh for pm...update soon

thnk you dear for this beautifull comment n ya no need to thnk me for pm its my duty n ya abt the update i will update the next prt asap