||MANAN FF||~~'A LIFE CHANGING 'BET'' Prologue updated pg1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE will be update probably by tomorrow itself...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ff name is interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SURELY I VL UPDATE AFTER WATCHING TODAY'S EPISODE...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Prologue"
"listen to me for once,let me explain...he is trying to convince her but she is not ready to ready to listen his any explanation

"oh really!!! after all that I heard wasn't that much enough for me that on the top of it you are following me just to make me believe you so that again you can make me fool just to finish your unfinished work??...I better should leave before your any other lie...she is saying with tears beaming through her already red shot eyes by continuos silently crying

but cut off by him again trying to explain himself...

"no no no please i beg you don't leave me like this...you can't leave me atleast for the sake of our friendship let me explain myself...its not that what you are understanding...he is saying grasping her wrist to stop her,her back is facing him...

on this statement she turned to face him with jerk freeing herself from his hold and folding her hand infront of herself...raising one of her perfect eyebrows...asking him with narrowed eyes...

"is that so??ok just answer my one question...but only truth no more lies...for the sake of our so called friendship...HAVE YOU BETTED WITH HIM RELATED WITH ME??"...

he again tried..."i can explain it to you its not that...

again cut off by her...

"just yes or no"...

he only nodded in affirmative unable to say any further cause of lump formed in his throat...

that's it for a second she skipped her heartbeat and her heart broke in millions pieces...she can't believe that the person who used every opportunity to win her trust her friendship had never existed...she built castles in the air...but someone has truly said that..."
Before you start building castles in the air, just think how much all this is likely to cost"...now left the last bit of her hope towards there relationship...

and she left from there after saying...


"thank you thank you for everything...you know what...your just a bet is going to change many lifes...and its going to become..A LIFE CHANGING BET...BYE FOREVER HOPE TO NOT MEET YOU AGAIN...

he's just froze at his spot watching her retreating figure...when finally she's gone from his sight he kneeled down trying to digest her last words...



finallyyy...my first ff ever started...plzzz express ur precious views...good or bad does't matters to me...only matters ur views




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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesume ...looking forward for next update ... 😛 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept...
Liked it..
Continue soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It takes a lot to walk away, I hope you potray a strong girl and not a weak one
Good start, I am curious whether you will continue from here on or if you will write in flashbacks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res honey updated soon m waiting okkk
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Nice Prolouge
Cont soon
Plz pm me if possible for the next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plzzz update soon looking forward for it

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