Manan FF: Hamnava part3A page 3

I am start a new manan ff. Its my first writing i don't kwon its good or too bad. Please comment.
Introduction

Nandini Murthy - Sweet girl Beauty with Brian's. She is south indian girl who lives in a fairytale life with her parents & dids. Manik Malhotra love of her life. Aruv bhaiya most important person of Nandini's life her best friend, guide, philosopher & dids fiance. After Aruv death Nandini's life is fully change.


NehaMoorthy-Nandini's dids. Sweet, beautiful girl who loves Aruv even after his death she only love him. She is business woman handle Aruv family business after Aruv death.

Aruv Iyer- Most important person of Nandini & Neha 's life. Most sweetest person Neha's fiance. Nandini & Neha's childhood friend. He was dead 3years back. This incident change everyone's life.

Arayman Iyer-Aruv' cousin brother who work with Neha in Iyer groups of Industry. He is also childhood friend of Nandini & Neha. He love Neha but never expresse it to anyone.


Abhimanyu Iyar-Another Iyer brother. Arayman 's bother & Aruv cousin. He is a happy go lucky person. Nandini & Neha's childhood friend.


Navya Navali-Nandini's college best Friend. A beautiful girl from patna.


Nitin Moorthy-Nandinis father. He is a wonderful person who treat his daughters as princesses. He is a doctor.

Vandana Moorthi- Nandini's mother anda doctor. She handle her personal & professional life beautifully.


Jai Iyer-Aruv's father owner of Iyer Groups of Industry & one of the trusty SPEACE Academy.

Meera Iyer-Aruv's mother. Sweetest person, she is a homemaker.

Vijay Iver -Brother of Jai Iyer one of Share holder Iyer groups of Industry. Father of Arayman & Abhimanyu.

Vina Iyer-Wife of Vijai Iyer. She is a famous Classical singer & owner of her classical music Academy.

Manik Malhotra- Lead singer of Fab5. Owner of Malhotra Groupss of Industry. Arrogant, Smart, Handsome & most eligible bachelor of the country. Heartthrob of every girl. But his love of life is his Nandini.


Cabir-One of fab 5 member. Funny person. Manik's best friend.

Mukti - fab 5 member .Manik's friend but like a sister.

Alya-Fab 5 member. Dhruve's girlfriend. Sweet girl, fashion is her life.

Dhruv- Manik's buddy. Fab 5 member. Alya's boyfriend.


Nyonika Malhotra-Evil mom just the like show.

Indexes
Introduction-page 1
Part-1-page1

Part-2A -page-2
Part-2B-pge-2

'ishq sachcha wahi
jisko milti nahi manzilein..
manzilein..'



This song is so much related to our Life.
Our means me & my dids.
Mere liye meri life always like a fairytale. Kabhi nehi socha tha ki mujhe bhi life ki karvi sachai se iss tara samna karna pare ga. But life is always surprise us coz life is unpredictable.
So jo main phele life ki har ek pal ko jitithi aaj srif life ko gujar rehi hu.

3 years se ek hi ghar pe main or my dids ek hi taraha ki gaam se gujar rehe hai.

Aap jise pyar karte hai uske duniya mai na hone ki takleef hota hai par jab aap kisi se pyaar karte ho or o duniya mai hote huye bhi dur ho uski gaam sab se jada hota hai. Issilye ek tara se ek ki tara ki gam hote huye bhi mai aapni dids se jealous hu kyu ki meri Neha dids ki pyaar Aruv bhaiya iss duniya mai na hote huye bhi unki har esaas mai unki sath hai di iss esaas se khush hai ki iss life ki baad o usne hamesha ke liye ek ho jayenge.
But mai kaise apni dil koo swaamjhau ki ek duniya mai hote huye bhi hum kabhi ek nehi ho payenge.
Meri pyaar ko kabhi uski manzilein nehi milegi.
Meri pyaar adhuri hi rehe jaigi. Meri pyaar Manik. The Manik Malhotra.

Part2A
Gaana bandh kar or mujhe dekh kasi lag rehi hu main. Nandini tu sun rehi hai.

Nan-Yes di you r looking gorgeous
.
Neha-I know choti coz its Aruv favorite color.

Nan- i know dids kalke liye sab preparation hoga hai ya phir mai kuch help karu.

Neh- No choti meri Aruv ka birthday hay so sab kuch har saal ke tarah main hi korungi tu kaal tik time pe Aruv ki ghar chali ayana main aaj hi jarehi hu you know na mom dads needs me.
Nan-ok dids.
Neha-chal main chalti hu mujhe Aruv ki ghar jana hai bye.

Nan pov
Ya dids i knows aap tino ke liye kalki din kaise hai. Aap tino ko ek dusre ki kitni zarurat hai. Aruv bhaiya ki mom dad or aap ek dusre ko samal loge.

Kal Aruv bhaiya ki birthday hai 3 saal se dids or Aruv bhaiya ki mom dad ek sath iss din ko celebrate korte hai. Dids unko mom dad bhulati hai r o bhi unko apni beti manti hai Aruv bhaiya ki jane ki baad se dids jada tar unki ghar pe rehti hai or unki business ko samlti hai unki beti banke.

Aruv bhaiya ki birthday meri or dids k liye humesha se special hoti hai. Aruv bhaiya bhachpan sei hume iss din pe surpise korte the specially dids ko.

Aaj se 4 saal pahle unki birthday pehi Aruv bhaiya dids ko marriage ke liye propose kiya tha or
6 saal pahle dids ko Aruv bhaiya ne Apni birthday pe sabke samne propose kiya tha unki bff se gf baneke liye.

Aruv bhaiya ki birthday meri liye bhi utni special hai coz Aruv bhaiya ne unki birthday pehi muhje apni pyaar se milaya tha Meri Manik se

Flashback (6year back)
Aruv bhaiya ki birthday har saal ki tara grand celebration hone bali thi main or dids very excited the.

Party time-
This year party todhi jada special thi coz Aruv bhaiya apni MBA finished karke unki dad ki business joined korne ki announcement iss party mai hone balie thi everyone is very happy. So party is strat with Aruv bhaiya ki dad Jai uncle Share his happiness to everyone unki business ki tension abse Aruv bhaiya ki so abse une koi tension nehi hai or Jai uncle congrats to my Neha dids coz o bhi apni MBA finished Aruv bhaiya k sath unki business join kar rehi hai all r happy & clapping for them.

Suddenly Aruv bhiya on stage & announced- 'its birthday bohot hui business ki bate now time some music so now enjoy the music from SPACE ki roking brand fab5 ki performance ki (Aruv bhaiya ki dad SPACE Academy ki ek trusty hai jo ek Music & Business college hai)

Now enjoy the performance

Part-2B
My phone is ringing & i am back from flaskback

Nan- hi navya kaisi ho?
Nav- Haa ye tik hai maine phone kiya to kaisi ho
varna to tum mujhe bhuli geyi ho aapni best friend
ko.
Nan - Nehi Navya esa nehi hai just todhra sa busy
hu you know na main. Vina chachi ki music academy
mai music teaching korre ti hu or dids ki help ke
liye Iyer group mai bhi time de rehi hu.
Nav - ok i know u r very busy person. Its ok to kaal
party mai milte hai but is bar asiya kya hai Jai
uncle itni special invitation diya.

Nan- Hmm kuch to special hai but i didn't know kaal
hi pata chale ga. Ok then kaal milte hai.
Nav- haa ok r re r re Cabir se baat koro o bhi oto
hai yaha.
Cabir-R re choti mujse bina baat kiye phone rakh
rehi hai. Maiine kya gunha ki jo madhubala se baat
ki or mujhse nehi.

Nan-Cabir phir se choti?

Cabir-ok sorry. Nandini abhi tik hai.

Nan- hmn, now tell me kaise ho sab tik hai last
concert kaisi thi?

Cabir-Sab perfect hai kaal milke sab baathe
karenge ok bye.

Nan - bye.

Tomorrow phir se special day pure 1 year baad phir
se uski eshaas milegi, kaal meri pyaar meri ash paas
rahega phir bhi hum dur rehenge. Pichle 2years
esai hum ash paas hote huye bhi nehi milte uski
eshaas, mai usko mahsus karti hu but phir bhi hum
nehi milte. Phir se meri favorite song ki line
humari life mai fit hojati hai.

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..

Nandini aaja dinner lagchuki hai jalti aaja mom
called me.
Now niche jana pare ga niche sab sad honge coz
kaal Aruv bhaiya ki brithday hai or sab ko happy hone
ki acting korne paregi dids or Jai & Meera uncle or aunty k liye.

The story line is good but your way of potraying and expressing is very bad. I mean your way of writing. Hindi is totally wrong. You should go for writing the update in totally english language. It can be better than this. Please dont take it in a negative way,take it positive . The story is so good. You just need to improve on your writing.

Originally posted by: bans8597

The story line is good but your way of potraying and expressing is very bad. I mean your way of writing. Hindi is totally wrong. You should go for writing the update in totally english language. It can be better than this. Please dont take it in a negative way,take it positive . The story is so good. You just need to improve on your writing.

Thank you so much for ur opinion. Its my first writing i really don't know how to giving word to my thoughts. I will try my label best for next update.

Originally posted by: mishti5

Nice update... Plz Continue soon

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

nice start

Cont soon

Thank you so much.