Dark Manan ff ~Alone 'its a beginng(part 5 on 36 )

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
piyuuu @piyuuu

Nats m here...

this is my last post...

so you also do one...

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Nats m here...
this is my last post...
so you also do one...

Nats we did it...

that too together...

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Nats we did it...
that too together...

Nats.. sorry dear...

see i came here and posted too...

my last comment was here see.

yar plss...😭

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@zooni.shah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

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kyu kiya aisa? Heheheh it was a very nice update finally she got like peace somewhere am sure vo koi aur hai behind that accident of nandu PR kon? Heheh that's for me to know... Omg! Har update me hotness dalni Hi hoti hai tujhe... Amazing it was the way Manik consoled her and everything

And congratulations dazzler hone pr

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Nats update kar jaldi. .

Waiting eagerly. ..

Pls pls...

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: parthadmirer
Nats update kar jaldi. .
Waiting eagerly. ..
Pls pls...

okkk...but u hv to wait till 4🤣

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Nats.. sorry dear...
see i came here and posted too...
my last comment was here see.
yar plss...😭

yayieee piyuuu we did it

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

CHAP 5

MANALI

Next morniggg...I rolled out of my bed and stood up and strectch in the direction of the sun just shining its warm golden light over the moutain.the entire meadow was glowing under its morning warm and the dew was still plainly vissible on all the blades of grass nearby...

my trance was broken by manik's voice ...I looked at him ...u r awake ..he said and I hemmed...he said nothing and left to bathroom

we both did our breakfasr and then Manik got a call nd i was urgent and he went 4 some works and I left alone in the whole house...I knw m doing very wrong to him but I can't help...it was noon ...I was feeling bored ...

nandu was feeling very bored and she facing one corner to another ...that wen she heard some sound from hall area ...she came to hall nd saw a vas was broken into pieces into ground ...she saw window was open and thought might be cause if window and bent down to pick up ...she was picking the pieces wen she felt someone was standing behind her ..she turned to see but to her dismay no one was dere ...she again started doing her work but again she felt someone ...but again no one was dere ...she completed her work and cleaned the floor and was about to leave she heard some sound from a room. ...she thought who was at dis hour manikkkalso not in home ...she opened the door and went inside ...again dis tym no one was dere ..Moshe taught may be cause of her tiredness ...she was thinking so much ...she turned to leave ...but got shocked ...and shouted..."Ahhh"

In the evening...Manik parked his car outside the bunglow..Manik opened the door nd went inside it was dark inside...he panicked not cause he afraid of dark ..yes he afraid of dark but now his concern was nandu...he started shouting her name but no response...his mind was not working wat to do ...so he taught to go outside nd call someone 4 help...he was about to go wen suddenly light came nd shouted surprise...nd his shocked face turned into happy but he saw nandu beside them ...he felt his life came back nd he came to her nd asked jaan r u okk na ...nd nandu nodded..yehhh kya gf ko dekhte hi cousin ko bhul gaya ...seee aavanii ur so called devar cum bro...huhh i thought soemeone forget us but after seeing us he will be happy but no ...said Rohit with fake anger ..manik came back her sences nd said nothing lyk dis and Manikkk Malhotra was scared ..m socked said Rohit playfully..Rohit u Manik glared 😡okk okkk its enough..how r u manikkk asked aavani m fine sissy manik hugged her..tujhe kya invitatin dena parega with dis manik hugged him all were chatting nd enjoying but aavani noticed something is bothering to nandu so she asked her to help her in something nd took her frm dere to her room ..nd made her sit on the bed nd asked nandini wat happend...nandu became surprised nd replied wattt .nothing.nothing happend to me nd she lowered her eyes..nandu ...nandu looked at me nd she made her looked at her.nandu m like ur sister ..i knw u r upset cause of that ...she could not completd ..tears rolled up frm nandu's eyes..and aavani hugged her...

after breaking the hug,Nandini ...I knw wat happend in past that was not gud..it was ur and maniks 1st child..the pain of loosing ur someone was very painful..its took a lot of courage to back to be normal...but don't punish Manikkk..i l.looked at his eyes..hes so much in pain like ...u r not only suffering manikkkalso suffering wid u...plzz share ur pain with manik..don't be hard on urself..u need manik as well he also need u..just be wid him..all things will be alryt okkk aavani said all dis with concern...nandu just hmmed...she knw aavani was ryt and indeed manikk needed her and she was lost in her another world and forget about her life her manikkk...she need to talk with him ..suddenly Rohit nd Manik came ..and Rohit said agar tum logo ka bharat milap khatam hua to dinner karle ..all smiled ...they all settled to dinnig table ...trio was talking and refreshing dere childhood while eating ...but dere was a person who was sitting quietly and she nandini ...and observing manikkk ...ohhh aiyappa his smile is so pure ...wat I did to him was wrong ...I need to talk to him...

after dinner...okay love birds...m feeling sleepy so i m going to sleep with my lady love ..u both continue ur romance nd i will continue mine ..and winked at aavani😉 and aavani blushed..I kw u both want some private moment ..so we will not make kabab me haddi so enjoy with dis both left to dere room leaving flushed manan behind ...

In the bedroom... Manik was half lying on the bed and his head rested in the wall of the bed...he was watching TV ...and nandu was sitting on the bed beside him...she was thinking aavani's word and was thinking frm were to start...she was in turmoil state ...Manikkk looked at her and asked her cupping her face ..jaan r u okk??...u r looking disturbed...say something Jaan... nandini could not stop herself and just hugged him.. Manik could not believe wat just happend ...after sometym he composed himself nd broke the hug nd took nandu's hand in his own...she smiled in complete understanding. It means a lot to both that they could communicate so much to one another by saying so little..

The warm glow in dere heart heated up to bonfire-intensity..he nd she probably had a difficult road ahead,but he wasnt going to left anything dampen his appreciation of the moment..he had apparently hopelessly been dreaming these last few dark and uncertain days..

she picked up the remote next to him and turned off the tv.she looked away frm him as her expression suddenly became sad anxious nd serious

"whats wrong,Nandu,jaan say something??"

I hv been totally shitty gf to u dese days nd i m so so sorry.she lower lip quivered as a single tear fell frm her ryt eye down her cheek.

Nandu,Nandu stop ..no dont,u dont need to cry about it ..a few more tears appeared on nandu's eyes in response to her lack of any hard feelings 4 the prblms between them that led up to the nyt...

i love u so much..nandu's watery eyes showed am intensity...Manikk had never seen dis before..some tears also welled up in his eyes...but he some how control himself..to lightened her mood he said..

I love u 2..so plz dont hv a total meltdown on me here...manik put his ryt thumb nd two fore fingers on nandu's chin and looked at her black almond shaped eyes ..we'r okay,nd as far as I m concerned...we've never been more okay than we r ryt now...that was a bad phase which has passed...i knw its difficult to forget but we hv to ...lets not talk about dis now lets start with fresh ...u will help me na .manik asked with concerned written over his face...the tears finally stopped flowing frm her eye nd she nodded.manik smiled...Manik wipped away the tears frm her face nd hugged her tightly.. Both were laying on the bed ...feeling each others presence after so long..tough manikk said nothing but nandu knw he's not well..its about dere babt..but nandu made plan to lighten his mood..she will make him 4 him..after sometym ..Manikkk said nandu..hmmm Manik replied ..can u kiss me whole nyt asked nandu lovingly ...manik became shocked to see dis syt of her..before he could say anything she smashed his lips nd pulled him over her...they were kissing each other madly..sometyms they were biiting ,sometyms licking sometym kissing softly ..they were gasping 4 air but no one waa leaving..both were pouring the love..which was showing the love and crave 4 each other will give the CS of new characters in next😊 plz bear me 4 such a crap.

Edited by Natashaaaaa - 10 years ago