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The unidentified LOVE!

So umm hey guys! I am going to write a SS. It's going to be a PaNi fiction. And if in case it's deleted, I'll just change the names and post it again xD. And don't kill me please for starting a new story without completing the old ones. It won't be possible for me to update daily but I would try to update every 2-3 days. Buddy me for Pm's.

Chapter 1- The lost start!

"Hey guys I need a drop. Car kharab hai meri." Niti said gaining everyone's attention except Abhishek and Parth as they were talking about some scene.

"Krissan aur Veebha have already left. Ayaz aur main to thodi der bad ghar jayenge. You can stay till then." Charlie said while searching a good dubsmash sound to make a funny video.

"Sunn Niti tu pareshan hojayegi tere sath smurfy bhi hai. Parth drop krde ise." Ayaz said grinning and making Niti uncomfortable.

"Hain? Oh hello I can't. I have other important works. Ask Karan." Parth said while seeing the script.

Niti felt awkward. Nobody was willing to drop her. But actually, the truth was something else. Everyone wanted Parth to drop her.

"It's okay." Niti replied coldly and held Smurfy in her hands and went out.

"Kahan gyi akeli itni raat ko?" Parth murmured seeing her go.

"Kahin bhi jaye tujhe kya farak padta hai. Script padh apni." Ayaz came in front of him and said with a funny expression.

"Ayaz! Tu pagal hai. Mai kaise chodne ja skta hun? I have work. Karan must be free use bolo." Parth said faking anger.

"Fine! Mai chod ata hun. At least, I care for a girl unlike you. Raat ka 1 baj rha hai. Akela nahi jane de skta mai use. Bye." Ayaz said dramatically and pulled Charlie with him towards the exit gate.

Parth felt bad as he knew he faked about discussing scripts. He just wanted to stay away from her because he knew that he has fallen in love with her slowly by time. I mean who wouldn't fall in love with his/her co-actor after such romantic scenes? But he was sure that Niti won't reciprocate the feelings ever and he wasn't even ready to commit. He didn't want to get his hopes high and then become a devdas.

Ayaz came running and shouting breaking Parth's thoughts, "Oye Abhishek aur sunn tu Railway wale route se Niti ke ghar jaa aur Karan sunn tu aisa kar bus wali route follow kar. We need to find her. Mai aur Charlie uske ghar jate hain. Koi bhi khabar milte hi inform each other."

"Kya hua bhai? Kahan hai wo?" Parth asked being concerned.

"Tu rehnde." Ayaz said angrily.

"Hua kya hai? Bta to yaar. Chilla kyun rha hai?" Parth asked again.

"I don't know. Yahan pe nahi hai wo kahin aas paas. I tried to find her. Kch samaan bhi nahi hai yahn pe uska. Aur phone bhi nai mil rha. 1 baje hue hain. Tension nahi hoti? Chillaun nahi to kya karun?" Ayaz asked angrily.

"Yaar jaldi karo sab." Charlie was panicking.

"Sun Charlie, maine Krissan aur Veebha ko boldiya hai wo dono bhi sath mein hain. Chal jaldi." Ayaz and Charlie ran towards their car while Abhishek and Karan ran towards theirs. Parth stood there alone. He was confused as well as worried.

"Yaar ye kahan chali gayi ab!" He stated and started checking the nearby roads.

It was Mumbai, and Mumbai never sleeps. So there was still hustle bustle in the city and people were shocked by seeing this form of Parth in front of them. All sweating and running here and there to find his Niti! He was glad that people didn't know what he was finding. (Sadka Kiya Bg)

Niti, actually, was sitting in a park near their shooting place and gazing the stars with Smurfy in her hand. She was thinking about Parth. How he just refused to drop her seeing her condition. It was 1 am in the night and still he wasn't even worried for her. "I am glad I am not his friend. Kitna immature hai." Niti said and slept there only on the bench.

It was 4 in the morning and still nobody was able to find her. Ayaz called a conference call.

Ayaz: Yaar kch pta chala?
Charlie: Jaldi btao. We couldn't find her. Ghar pe bhi nahi thi aur aas paas bhi nai.
Abhishek: I don't know yaar mai locals mein dhoondta hun. You all stay in touch.
Karan: Yaar 72 buses check kar chuka hun gin kar. Nai mil rhi. Mai beaches wagrh dekhta hun!
Krissan: Karan leave. She ain't there. We have already checked.
Veebha: Guys I am tensed. Parth se pucho koi use pta chla kya?
Ayaz: So rha hoga wo to zarur.
Krissan: Wait let me add him here.
After a while Parth picked the call.
Parth: Hello... did anyone find her? (He was breathing heavily.)
Karan: Nahi yaar sab possible places pe dhoonda nai mil rhi.
Charlie: Police mein jayein kya?
Parth: No use. 2 din se phele wo kch nai karenge.
Abhishek: Shit ab kya karein?
Parth: Keep finding aur uska phone milate rho.
Krissan: Wait guys! I know a place where she can be.
Charlie: What place? Jaldi bta!
Krissan: Guys there' a park near our shoot. She must be there. C'mon let's go.

Everyone reached there in 20 minutes wo bhi bilkul ek sath. All were worried. Ayaz got a bit shocked seeing Parth's helpless and torn out face. He didn't expect that he would be willing to find her. They all went inside shouting her name and found her sleeping on a bench with Smurfy. (Manjha in the bg)

"GOD! Look how peacefully she's sleeping. And we were so tensed for her since 3 hours!" Krissan spoke and started caressing her hair lightly.

"Thank God she is safe." Ayaz let out a sigh and hugged Charlie who was standing exhausted beside him.

"We should drop her home now." Parth said and everyone laughed realizing what the real matter was.

"Parth tu jaa ladkiyon ko drop karde main ise apne ghar lejata hn." Karan said.

"No. I will drop her." Parth said determined.

"Okh bro. Chill." Karan said and gave him a light hug before disappearing with Veebha and Krissan.

"Ayaz aur Abhishek tum dono Charlie ko lejao. I will drop her. Safely." Parth assured them.

"Haan waise bhi ise to apni Nandu ko uthane ki practice bhi hai. He will manage guys." Ayaz mocked only to receive a glare from Parth.

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Guys just tell me should I start? I will continue this soon.

You will be getting Need to be loved' And this Story's updates more regularly than of Happy ending, not!' because I've more ideas for these two. I will try to update that story every Saturday. Sorry. I hope you understand. You can even suggest me if you want any type of change then I could try to change it as per your like too. Do comment please! :(((((((

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Incredible ! 👏
do continue soon
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Haha so sweet!! Ya do continue!! Loving it ! ;)
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How cute yaar... caring parth... Scared parth... Worried parth... N relieved parth... N cute little note sleeping... How sweet... Please continue it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow actually a manan fan and i take PaNi really lightely i love them bcz of thier work but never thought of them being a couple as i always keep a balance between real and reel life. But if u r paninians dont kill me for that its just my p.o.v. but i will surely read this just as a story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi,

As per latest FF rules (found here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4300193/fan-fiction-forum-rules-and-regulations), Real Person Fictions are no longer allowed.

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