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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

A year later.. this Manan..more happier..

I loved this..

U are too modest to say this was not good and all...

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MuratHayat

@MuratHayat

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

geet wil u just delete the last line..."'ll just walk out of here now, quietly..no one needs to get hurt

(this is a bit embarrassing!)"

do u even realize hw awesum of a writer..poet nd person u r...had i been in ur place i wud b flipping my hair self admiring round the clock😆.. u r so modest bt at times turn self critical .....nd haan geet i just love u..🤗

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Geet 🤗
This is awesome!! Loved it
Loved how you balanced their happy togetherness with the after effects of kidnapping. She was happy, she went back to leading her normal life but the lingering thread of the fear and helplessness caught up with her at times. Alya teasing Nandini was cute.

Thankiee moony!!🤗 sigh, ur UN gives me HP feels!!😆

It's that lingering feeling at the end of the day, isn't it? While there is a silver lining in every cloud, there's also that small amount of darkness at the end of every bright day isn't it?😳

I am so happy u liked it babe! <3

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mishaarshi
geet wil u just delete the last line..."'ll just walk out of here now, quietly..no one needs to get hurt
(this is a bit embarrassing!)"
do u even realize hw awesum of a writer..poet nd person u r...had i been in ur place i wud b flipping my hair self admiring round the clock😆.. u r so modest bt at times turn self critical .....nd haan geet i just love u..🤗

😆😆😆 that's exactly all that I am: friends attest to that! but it's only when it's to do with writing...otherwise I love myself, sacchi!!

It's just that we have some amazing writers here toh it's hard to think I'm awesome..plus it's my first OS on this forum na, isliye bas...

I love u too mishu🤗 ur too kind to say all those beautiful things about me!

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

@ipkrose: Thanks a LOT for ur views!! I wish I could but I don't have the time...at least not till sept..:(

@Gauri: modesty be my middle name, when it comes to writing! but u guys made me feel so good today! thanks a ton!

@meenu: Thank u so much for reading and commenting! I will definitely PM if I write more :)

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

oh geet its perfect.i just finished it and i have this smile on my face.

Loved that you included the ptsd part.cause these kinda things don't go away entirely.not in the real world at least.

manik still loves her that much aww she still finds solace in his arms only ❤️

loved cabir's thought on how nandini changed him.how manik is reliving his childhood through her!

aww the palmkiss geet let me hug you 🤗 its beautiful.you should more often.and please do

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
oh geet its perfect.i just finished it and i have this smile on my face.

Loved that you included the ptsd part.cause these kinda things don't go away entirely.not in the real world at least.

manik still loves her that much aww she still finds solace in his arms only ❤️

loved cabir's thought on how nandini changed him.how manik is reliving his childhood through her!

aww the palmkiss geet let me hug you 🤗 its beautiful.you should more often.and please do

my darling Rez!🤗

I am so happy ur smiling now!!

love u!!

and u know I shall try to 😃

jab bhi mood hua I'll send it to u!