Manan SS - ''Lovable idiot'' Updtd Pg3

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"Serendipity, do you believe in it? Random people, love at first sight?''
''Are you for real Mr.?''
''Manik, it's Manik''
''Who comes over to a stranger and talks shit like this?''
''Whoa, feisty girl i see..'', answer my question and i'll leave you alone''
''No, No. I don't believe in love at first sight, thats just impossible and ridiculous, and quite the load of crap romantic books have been trying to spin to give hope for young girls around''
''quite the cynic you are..anyways i believe in that ''Load of crap'' and you wouldn't believe what all i went through to just get a glimpse of your face after meeting you last week, so yeah, "I love you nandini'' and ''yeah, i don't wanna keep you from anything carry on and see you soon jaan'' he bid her bye blowing a kiss.
Sudden jerk of train halting brought Nandini back to reality.
"No kidding, shit, who does that?''
thought to herself..
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"So now atleast do you agree miss?''
''Agree to what?''
''Once is a mistake or some mere co-incidence and we can ignore..but Thrice in 1week and now gonna be together for a 2 months, still don't believe that we are fated?''
''I mean, how , like how?'', ''I seriously think you are stalking me. Comon man, not where i work, i love my job, don't screw this up for me!''
''See, what a co-incidence, even i love my job dear, we are mated for each other in heaven, what say?''
''Well, i say its getting late and i'm not gonna get any new partner to cover the photoshoots any sooner, so if you'll please''. she pleaded him.
"Wow.ofcourse, anywhere anyplace with you meri jaan..''
''Stop being cheesy, or else i'm gonna kick you in the nads''
''Okay okay, chill baba, i'm coming.''
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow superb concept
plz continue it
nd PM me..
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"And one more rule, no more of your love bakwaas! I'm never ever falling for guy like you and you, you don't love me, you just love this illusion of me, my sugarcoated package, spend the month with me, then i'll see how fast you can run away from me.''
''Do you understand?''
''Yes boss, work comes first then later romance.''
''W*F dude.''
''Chillax..no love just work.''
''Thats more like it''
''Anymore crazyass rules i gotta know?''
''Well, as of now, get outta my face and stop pestering me with lectures''
''Done deal''
''And stop talking like a retarded person!''
''That i can't help, because i'm retarded'', Lol..
"Shall we scout for photoshoots tonight, nightlife in city, what say?''
''Yeah, ofcourse, we have to, for a better results, we gotta hangout more often you know''
''What!''
''i mean for better results and response from creative editor, we hangout a lot'' he laughed to himself,deep down he liked this pissed off version of herself.
"lets take a move then''
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept 😊
update soon
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So who's this addon?'' Sheryl eyed him head to toe.
"Well, that addon will be working with me for a month, new recruit for photography''
''Oh, thats one hot piece of ...before she could complete, He came and asked for cup of water''
"Damn that was close'', said sheryl.
"Nice apartment you got here..You made a home outta nothing. So creative, he said looking around.'' while returning the cup.
"Well all credit goes to Nandini''.
"Yeah i can see where her taste comes from''
''So where are you from?'' Sheryl started her Q&A session.
"Cochin,Kerala you know..''
''Ooo..Keralathu kuttan i see''..
"Well, this hot piece of ... Does have a name you know!''
"Manik'', he raised his to formal handshake.
"You heard that''?!?
"Well, i heard that you called me an addon..ouch, bit offended you know.. But anyways..i don't mind as long as we are friends?'' So?
"Wow. Nice chap.. Yea..sure..friends.''
''Good grief. Not an hour ago you were approaching me and telling me 'i love you', now my friend and my roomate, wow, you really are what i expected, Player''
''whoa. Whoa. I just proclaimed friendship with Sheryl, not seduced her to have sex with me, waise why does it bother you that much?'', ''Jealous, is someone jealous???temme temme temme!!''
''Well for starters, i don't wanna come home to you too being naked and having sex in kitchen or somewhere that will be a ghory image to erase off my memory and secondly. Why the f**k would i be jealous, you are my subordinate, coworker..so know your place''
''We'll leave for the scout anyways.''
''Okay''
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DROP in comments if like the plotline..
Gracias.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey I really liked it
Cont soon
thanx a lot for the pm
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Day 1 :
"You've gotta bike?''
''No, but i do have a car..''
"Hopeless''
"I'll get my bike, you sit in the back and snap some kickass pictures and yeah. I want to have a rough idea of what's happening,OKAY?''
''Okay,mam''
Night indeed was different. Nightlife is when the workaholics try to go home after a tiring day at work, Less of chirping, less traffic, dim lights. Its a totally different view. To show in a newborn's perspective.
Every mall and shops..
Glittery,shiny discos..
Restaurants that dullup the existence of yours..
Even hobos..

Both were sitting in a quite bar attached to a restaurant..
When she was scrolling through the pictures he took, she was thinking, ''Guy does have talent, apart from that loud mouth of his'', Who would've thought.''
He waved a scotch glass in front of her, ''shall i order you a light beer?'' he asked in a sarcastic tone..
That was enough to trigger her bitch mode on,"What makes you think i can't hold in a drink?''
She gestured the bartender to come and asked for, ''Double Speyburn, on the rocks''.
"whoa, thats pretty solid drink for a woman.''
''Hear comes the chauvinistic approach even in drinking, such pigs you are'',she scowled at him.
"Okay, okay, chill jaan, just kidding, I call for a toast, a new found friendship and a career with you''..
...
Okay..this is my spot.
"'I'll take my car and leave..Adios meri jaan..cya soon at office tomorrow..''
''Yeah sure..Please do make a mopup of pics and bring in..to show the creative team, obviously''
''Obviously''..
Gudnight ma'am
gudnight manik..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gud
Interesting
Manik and Nandini are always a treat together. Lovable

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