MaNan SS: All of the Stars (Complete)

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

wow!!!!!
nice start
want to read more
cont soon

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Serendipity2015

@Serendipity2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Really liked the start... & am already hooked to this story 😊 please do update soon!!

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devika

@suv-kriyaansh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

aweosme 👏

cntinue sooonnn 😃

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

after i finished reading the chapter all i could say/thought was OH MY GOD!its so good!she is just the way i wanted her to be!oh man!its awesome!

manik came back :D and she kept hoping for a text/call from him ahhh ❤️

cabir my sweet cabir!always understanding.always knowing what's going on.and aww how sweetly he cheered her up.told her exactly what she wanted to hear.

manik is looking for her!haaye ❤️

i had a feeling manik would be there and he was!

i can't i can't wait for the next chapter!i can't!

thank you.love you. *heart eye and kiss emoji*

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Your writing is beautiful.

And I loved how Manik was sitting in her usual seat and staring at her. Awwweee.

And you need to update it as soon as possible.

This is going to be one of my favorites. Take care. :)

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Kapk

@Kapk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

So beautiful, you are truely a fine writer and your writing just can't be explained away. You describe adolecense, friendship and love with such a freshness and power! Your words catch me so much as a reader and without I even realise, I feel I am a part of the word that you have created!
I love this refreshing concept of this story - you deserve the acclamation, @Filter.coffee.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

You know what? I think I really love you *dies because happy!*

Your comments are love *wipes tear*

But, this is probably not how it seems it might be. It's a short story, so just three or four chapters max. I could've also written a One Shot, but it would have gone on endlessly and this just seemed more interesting! And I also wanted to give them some background.

Haha, Awww, Riddhiii...I love you too, but I love you writing more...A selfish and Hamesha wala love it is... lol

Reallly? Ok, so now you have some idea how much your words make me happy... 😳

I have learnt to be to be happy with whatever you give, to be happy because something is better than nothing..Even a jhalak of what you can, some day, give us keep all of us hoping...

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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Loved it

Liked the concept

Waiting for the next update

If you can plz pm me next time . ..

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

FC?me? 😛 what exactly did i do?😆 but whatever did made you happy and i m glad that you're happy

Yes, yes, you FC...You made her write an SS...Gave her some idea of how much we love and crave her words...I am happy and how...😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

I am literary sitting like this, with the same smile on my face... >>

He was Manik, someone in her world - and suddenly - he was Manik, her world.

She craved his laughter and longed for his smiles.

^^^ ❤️❤️

And the wait...She waited for his phone even though she believed he doesn't feel the same...Ahh, the supposed one sided feelings are painful...Even though in this case, its seems its not one sided...😆

Why I feel he did call her but it got lost in those 10 missed calls? 😳

Cabir is love, bas...Always so understanding but still his own Cabira self...🤗

Manik...He IS, looking for her..Been library twice...and The Manik Malhotra, who almost never goes to class, but he was there, for an optional subject class, for her...And she think her feelings are one sided...😆

Can't wait for the next update...You have no idea how soon I want it to be...😳

Edited by A.Hajnal - 10 years ago