MANAN-FF|Manan Being so Close(Part 2)

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Being so Close

Preface

Introduction of main character

Nandini murti:
nandini murti lives in manglore with his family...in her family amms,mom, dad and small brother rishabh...there are two more member chacha chachi,they will live in mumbai..they don't have any child.

Manik Malhotra:
Manik malhotra lives in Mumbai with his family his mom(Nyonika) dad and small sister...they all live together...manik sister is cancer patient...so they all going USA for her treatment.

Cabir:
Cabir is live with her mom... his father is dead.

Mukti:
mukti also lives with his family with her mom and dad...but see is not happy with them..because they don't like mukti b/c mukti is girl..and they want boy..but due to their image in socity..they live together.

Aliya:
aliya lives with his brother harshad... and they are very good friend of manik malhotra.

Dhruv:
Dhruve is maniks buddy... they both study together since 3rd class when dhruv shift mumbai with his mom...manik and dhruv are so closed friend that no one can broke their bonding...they are like brothers.

Part 1

it is morning...
today a very special day for nandini murthi.
because today she is going to studay in science clg
at USA..
yesterday her result announced and she got 93%
marks.so his father decided that his daughter wil go USA
and study in same collage in which he study.
everyone is excited.nandini's mom,dad and rishab are going to drop her in her collage...
her flight is today at 7 PM. so she is going market with amms
for shopping.
she brought cloths,books,and some stuff for eat.
after shopping they will come home.
it was already 2pm. and her mom packed her thing in her bag.
nandini is very tired.so she go in her room and sleep on the bed
she is remebering.that today is her last day in this room..
and thinking like this she is slept.

on the other side manik also preparing for going
USA for her sister treatment. with his,his mom dad also going their.
he already contact to the best doctor for her sister.
he is very tenced b/c he love her sister very much.
and this doctor is his last hope.because this is her last stage of cancer.
doctors of mumbai already said that they can't help her.
plz take her home and give rest till she live.
he is sit on the chair besides her sister.and looking her sister
which is sleeping.
his mom came in room and said manik go in the kitchen
eat somthing and take rest.
now she will take care of her daughter.
so manik left room.he directly go in his room and sleep on the bed.
he is very tired because last 3 days night he didn't slip well.
so he sleep very soon.

in evening...
it is 6pm...
nandini wak up at 5 of clock.she fresh n up and come downstair.
they all sitting together,and talking and drinking evening tea.
nandini and rishab checking the list of thing,that anything is left or not.
now everything is perfect.so they are ready for leave.
his father take out the car and put the things and begs in it.
nandini meet he amms,her amms are crying b/c nandini is going USA,
and she don't know when they again meet.
nandini said that she will come back soon.and she promise that they talk daily
in the evening.
after talking they sit in the car...mom and dad in front seat,and she and rishabh
ay back seat..dat start the car and they leave for airport...

on the other side manik also wake up soon at 4 pm.
ambulance come for his sister to take her at airport.
his mom dad sit in the ambulance with their daughter.
and manik take the stuff for requirement in way.put in the his car.
and he also leave for airport...

Edited by vik200493 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

manan being so close

Part 2

so how r u guys..where was we in last part?
ohh i got it...manik nandidi air port k liye nikal gaye hai... so wat now?

so nandidi reach at airport with her family.on the other side manik also reached at airport with his sister and mom,dad.
when nandidi reached at air port so she saw a shop where many small small kids are eating icecream.so she also feel that she is hungry. when they come out the car nandidi told to her father that she want icecream, because she don't no in USA she get icecream like indian icecream. vese to she is smart & know that in USA she get much better icecream but right now how she eat, so this is her plan for eat icecream. dad said that u go alone and take it, i go inside with others b/c it is almost time for flight.so nandidi told okey and she leave.

when nandini reach at shop she order 4 iceceam butter schoch cone,one for herself and 3 for her mom dad and rishabh. on the other side manik came in his car so he park his car in parking and take the things and go at airport b/c his family wait there.manik is in hurry so he was watching his watch.on the other side nandini is eating her icecream so she didn't care anybody. she only concentrated on icecream and icecream only.
manik nandidi came in opposite direction so they colide(bheed jana) with other,due to this maniks all things fell on the ground at everywhere and nandinis rest icecream will fall on the maniks face. he shouted what the hell man, dikhata nhi hai kya? dekh k to chalo ice cream kahi bhagi nhi ja rahi jo bhukhad ki tarah khaye ja rahi ho.samne koi aa raha hai ya nhi dikh hi nhi rha idiot girl.hearing this nandini also got engry and she also shouted aur tum, tum to duniya k sabse bade idiot ho jo kuch kar bhi nhi hai aur jan bhuj kar ladki ko dekh k usse bheed rahe ho,sharam nam ki koi chiz hai ki nhi tumme monster kahi ka.manik said u shut up,he is getting late so he thought if he will fight this time with girl then he will late and his sister is very serious,so he will collecting his things. nandidi also collect her icecream. when she saw the boy whom she colide he is in hurry due to this the things again and again fall from his hands,do she is also pick up his things and give him. when manik got his all things nandidi also gave him,then he said iski jarurat nhi hai i will manage.aage se dekh ke chalna kahi fir se na gir jao. he said and left.nandidi told himself he is such an monster ek thanku bhi nhi bola. and she also left.

then nandidi also reached at platform and manik also reached where his family is waiting. nandini's dad check in airport withhis family and they reached in the plan.maniks family also reached inside they see that their is only 2 seat in the cabin where his sister's bed palce in the plan. so manik said his mother that'mom aap andar plane me jake beth jao yaha mai aur dad hai diii k pass'. but his father said that u go inside and take rest main and your mother we will be here.tum vese bhi 2 3 din se bhot kam kr rahe ho thak gaye honge. manik also know that he is tired so he is go indide and take his seat. nandidi also sitting inside the plan. manik's and nandini's chair are in same row but in opposite direction.on maniks side on the window side a lady is sitting with his husband.they air looking new married couple.so manik take corner seat.he don't know that the girl whom he colide she is also inside the plan with him. on the second side nandini's brother said he want window side.vese to nandini want sit near window.but rishabh is her younger brother.so she didn't want hurt her brother.so she is also take the corner seat. so now manik and nandini they were sitting together in a row but opposite direction but very close to each other. only a way between them for passing peoples. and the great news is that they both don't know that they sit near each other.

now everyone sit in the plane on their seats.so air hostage is announce that the plane left from here in 5 min so everyone should be tide their seat belt. in plane nandini and rishabh sit frist time.so they don't know how to tide it.so his dad tide it.on the manik's side the new married couple also sit in the plane 1st time so they don't know how to tide belt.they both pick up their belt and seen at each other.manik saw them and he notice that they both don't tide their belts.so he feel somethings wrongs with these guys. so he called air hostage and tell them about it. then air hostage is come there and ask them y r not they tiding their belts. they both were don't know english. so they ask manik'ye kya bol rahi hai?'.manik said'ye bol rahi h tumne apni belt kyu nhi bandhi aur unki beld ki taraf ishara krta h jo unke hatho me thi'. they both said this is our frist time in plan so they don't know how to tide them. manik said ghar me gadi nhi hai kya? gadi ki seat belt to bandi hogi na to vese band lo. then the man said'unke pass koi gadi nhi hai bus bike hai'. manik said himself'gadi kharidne ko okat nhi hai aur plane me bethne aa gaye'.and then he said'lao main band deta hu. then he tide their belt and sit on his sit.manik is very tired so he is sleep in 1 min. now 2 min left in plane start.so once again announce that everyone is sit and tide their belt properly.

now palne is start, it start run slowlely slowlely. frist nandini feel good and excite b/c she is sit frist time in plane.and second excitement is that she is going in USA for study in science collage.so in excitement she forget that she is fear from hights. so when plane come slowlely in the air and nandini start filling weak and she closed her eyes .then plane will come at some hight then she is more weak and hold his brothers hand which is sit next to her.the season is rainy. it is night time so hostage said good night to everyone and switch off the lights.now there is full on dark inside the plane.now nandini also start speaking to her ayee app that they will save her.and that time the clouds also thunder(garjana) in high sound. hearing this cloud thunder sound she suddenly got feared very much and she hold maniks hand on her second hand which is in air b/c manik is in sleep and he don't know that his hand is fell in air. when nandini hold maniks hand manik is wake up and he see that their is complete dark inside the plane.and someone is holding his hand very titely...

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Posted: 10 years ago

aur pyar ho gya

Edited by vickysinghalwal - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice nd interesting concept... both chapters r amazing very nicely described, loved manan's cute fight nd waiting for next chapter cont soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Both chapters are amazing...
Continue soon..
Plz pm me if u can..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Posted: 10 years ago

There seems to be a gender confusion... Why is nandini a HE

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy
awsm updates
loved it
cont soon

thanku😊😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: Taqiasahil
Nice nd interesting concept... both chapters r amazing very nicely described, loved manan's cute fight nd waiting for next chapter cont soon.

thanku 😊

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